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| author | TheKandiman <thekandiman@gmail.com> | 2011-01-25 01:03:14 -0500 |
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| committer | TheKandiman <thekandiman@gmail.com> | 2011-01-25 01:03:14 -0500 |
| commit | 588cb548bb017b411a35b3a05376ca7131f24495 (patch) | |
| tree | 67ebcc2df798cdcdb9c8c2c20317f8922e00dd5b /npc/009-2_Hurnscald/kfahr.txt | |
| parent | 9d9144c5d48ff6af1965e2635b85d7eb8407b75f (diff) | |
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Spelling and grammar corrections in Tulim and Hurn NPCs...dialog only.
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diff --git a/npc/009-2_Hurnscald/kfahr.txt b/npc/009-2_Hurnscald/kfahr.txt index 3806c10e..88438b40 100644 --- a/npc/009-2_Hurnscald/kfahr.txt +++ b/npc/009-2_Hurnscald/kfahr.txt @@ -217,7 +217,7 @@ L_tale_desert_worm: mes "[Kfahr the Warrior]"; mes "Kfahr leans forward."; - mes "\"So this humongous beast came roaring towards us, a big back hole where the mouth is, spiky fins sticking out to the side, all ready to swallow us all! My sword felt like a toothpick against that monster!\""; + mes "\"So this humongous beast came roaring towards us, a big back hole where the mouth is, spikey fins sticking out to the side, all ready to swallow us all! My sword felt like a toothpick against that monster!\""; next; mes "[Kfahr the Warrior]"; @@ -515,7 +515,7 @@ L_tale_desert_temple: L_tale_tablet: mes "[Kfahr the Warrior]"; - mes "\"Well, we couldn't read it. We later sold it for a good price, to a young travelling archeologist, Doctor Nohlidge or something like that. She said that the engravings described sacrifical practices of an ancient snake cult...\""; + mes "\"Well, we couldn't read it. We later sold it for a good price, to a young travelling archeologist; Doctor Nohlidge or something like that. She said that the engravings described sacrifical practices of an ancient snake cult...\""; mes "He shrugs."; next; goto L_main_menu; @@ -611,7 +611,7 @@ L_tale_hero_tulimshar: next; mes "[Kfahr the Warrior]"; - mes "\"Then it took a deep breath-- and I realised that that was probably `it' for me; Stinkewyrms can breathe fire like real dragons, and I didn't have the time to run back to the water.\""; + mes "\"Then it took a deep breath-- and I realised that that was probably 'it' for me; Stinkewyrms can breathe fire like real dragons, and I didn't have the time to run back to the water.\""; next; mes "[Kfahr the Warrior]"; @@ -623,7 +623,7 @@ L_tale_hero_tulimshar: next; mes "[Kfahr the Warrior]"; - mes "\"So it stared at me, wide agape-- the perfect opening!\""; + mes "\"So it stared at me, mouth wide agape-- the perfect opening!\""; next; mes "[Kfahr the Warrior]"; @@ -913,7 +913,7 @@ L_snakeskins_missing: L_SnakeSkins_TooMany: mes "[Kfahr the Warrior]"; - mes "\"YOu don't have room for this. Come back when you do.\""; + mes "\"You don't have room for this. Come back when you do.\""; close; L_give_beer: |