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authorAli-G <gauvain.dauchy@free.fr>2011-06-16 11:30:36 +0200
committerAli-G <gauvain.dauchy@free.fr>2011-06-16 11:30:36 +0200
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Reviewed the whole quest's storyline. + Reorganised the mob db to make it clearer.
Diffstat (limited to 'npc/009-2')
-rw-r--r--npc/009-2/olana.txt54
1 files changed, 28 insertions, 26 deletions
diff --git a/npc/009-2/olana.txt b/npc/009-2/olana.txt
index 76381e7e..820fab7b 100644
--- a/npc/009-2/olana.txt
+++ b/npc/009-2/olana.txt
@@ -16,22 +16,23 @@
if (Rossy_Quest == 2) goto L_Daughter;
mes "[Olana]";
- mes "\"I come from Tulimshar and am here with my two daughters, Rossy and Julia, for vacation. I already have been to Hurnscald once and I feeled quite safe...\"";
+ mes "\"I come from Tulimshar to Hurnscald for vacation with my two young daughters, Rossy and Julia. I already have been to Hurnscald once and felt quite safe in ths area.\"";
next;
mes "\"I let my two lovely girls play in the woods near by but they still didn't came back!\"";
- mes "*Olana starts crying...*";
+ next;
+ mes "\"Please go and have a look in the forest near the swamps and come back to see me when you'll find them.\"";
close;
L_Daughter:
mes "[Olana]";
- mes "\"I come from Tulimshar and am here with my twin daughters, Rossy and Julia, for vacation. I already have been to Hurnscald once and I feeled quite safe...\"";
- next;
+ mes "\"I come from Tulimshar to Hurnscald for vacation with my two young daughters, Rossy and Julia. I already have been to Hurnscald once and felt quite safe in ths area.\"";
mes "\"I let my two lovely girls play in the woods near by but they still didn't came back!\"";
+ next;
mes "*Olana begins to sobb...*";
next;
menu
"Wait, I saw Rossy, she is fine.", L_Help,
- "Wait a bit, I'm sure they'll get back soon.", L_No;
+ "Wait a bit, I'm sure they'll both get back soon.", L_No;
L_No:
close;
@@ -42,7 +43,7 @@ L_Help:
next;
mes "\"Oh by the way, I would need your help myself too. My water supply ran out and I can't go down the stairs anymore, my knees hurt a lot.\"";
menu
- "Sure I can help you, how much do you need?", L_Set,
+ "Sure I can help you, how much water do you need?", L_Set,
"Sorry, I'm too busy.", L_No;
L_Set:
@@ -68,17 +69,17 @@ L_See:
L_Task:
mes "[Olana]";
- mes "\"Thank you very much. I have another task for you, would you like to help me again?\"";
+ mes "\"It seems I have another task for you, would you like to help me again?\"";
menu
- "Tell me about it.", L_Cont,
+ "Sure, tell me about it.", L_Cont,
"No, sorry, I'm busy.", L_No;
L_Cont:
mes "[Olana]";
- mes "\"Can you give this letter to my little daughter please? Her teacher asked me to do it, but I can't walk up to my daughter, my knees...\"";
+ mes "\"Can you give this letter to my little daughter please? Her teacher asked me to do it, but I can't walk, my knees...\"";
menu
"Of course I can. Hand me the letter, I'll give it to Rossy as soon as I see her.", L_Let,
- "No, sorry, I'm not interested in that sort of task. Hand it yourself.", L_No;
+ "No, sorry, I'm not interested in that sort of task. Hand it to her yourself.", L_No;
L_Let:
mes "[Olana]";
@@ -93,7 +94,7 @@ L_Bring:
L_BL:
mes "[Olana]";
- mes "\"Good, now she remembers it! Please, "+ strcharinfo(0) +", help Rossy, she will tell you what to do.\"";
+ mes "\"Good, now she remembers that she needs to craft a potion! Please, "+ strcharinfo(0) +", help Rossy, she will tell you what to do.\"";
close;
L_Done:
@@ -103,21 +104,22 @@ L_Done:
L_Rose:
mes "[Olana]";
- mes "\"I have another task for you, would you help me?\"";
+ mes "\"I would like congratulate my daughter, Rossy, would you help me?\"";
menu
- "Tell me what to do.", L_RL,
+ "Just tell me what to do.", L_RL,
"No, I'm busy, maybe later.", L_No;
L_RL:
mes "[Olana]";
set Rossy_Quest, 9;
- mes "\"Can you bring me 15 [Red Rose]s? I would like to give them to my daughter because she succesfully passed her magic exam!\"";
+ mes "\"Can you bring me 15 [Red Rose]s? I would like to give them to my daughter because she succesfully made her potion!\"";
menu
- "Ok, I will be back with these.", L_RG;
+ "Ok, I will be back with these.", L_RG,
+ "I'm allergic to roses, can't even touch them. Sorry.", L_No;
L_RG:
mes "[Olana]";
- mes "\"Please, bring me 15 [Red Rose]s.\"";
+ mes "\"Please, bring me 15 [Red Rose]s as soon as you can.\"";
close;
L_RC:
@@ -129,23 +131,23 @@ L_RC:
L_BringRose:
mes "[Olana]";
- mes "\"Now, please hand them to my brilliant daughter, Rossy.\"";
+ mes "\"Now please hand them to my brilliant daughter, Rossy.\"";
close;
L_Allergic:
mes "[Olana]";
set Rossy_Quest, 12;
- mes "\"Did she liked my present?\"";
+ mes "\"Did she like my present?\"";
menu
- "Well, you should know that your daughter is allergic to roses.", -;
+ "Sure she did...", L_No,
+ "Well, you should of known that your daughter is allergic to roses.", -;
mes "[Olana]";
- mes "\"How stupid I am! Here, take some of my money and buy [Red Tulip]s instead, about the same amount. The roses are for you sweety.\"";
+ mes "\"How stupid I am! Here, take some of my money and buy [Red Tulip]s instead, about the same amount. Keep the flowers.\"";
set zeny, zeny + 1500;
next;
- mes "[Olana]";
mes "\"I want Rossy to be happy and to forgive me for my stupidity.\"";
menu
- "Ok, I will.", -;
+ "I will give her the tulips when I'll see her.", -;
mes "[Olana]";
mes "\"And don't forget to tell her that I'm really sorry.\"";
close;
@@ -157,19 +159,19 @@ L_Give:
L_Best:
mes "[Olana]";
- mes "\""+ strcharinfo(0) +", thank you for your help!\"";
+ mes "\"Thank you for your help "+ strcharinfo(0) +"!\"";
close;
L_Julia:
mes "[Olana]";
- mes "\"Where is Julia? I want to know where she is! Go and find her please "+ strcharinfo(0) +".\"";
+ mes "\"Where is Julia? I want to know where she is! Go and find her please "+ strcharinfo(0) +"!\"";
close;
L_End:
mes "[Olana]";
- mes "\"Where is Julia? I want to know where she is! Go and find her please "+ strcharinfo(0) +".\"";
+ mes "\"Where is Julia? I want to know where she is! Go and find her please "+ strcharinfo(0) +"!\"";
menu
- "She'll be back soon, trust me, I saved her.", L_Found,
+ "She'll be back soon, trust me, I saved her from an evil spirit.", L_Found,
"I didn't saw her yet, sorry.", L_No;
L_Found: