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1 files changed, 9 insertions, 10 deletions

diff --git a/npc/002-1_Sandstorm/nickos.txt b/npc/002-1_Sandstorm/nickos.txt
index d3e65106..62072908 100644
--- a/npc/002-1_Sandstorm/nickos.txt
+++ b/npc/002-1_Sandstorm/nickos.txt
@@ -19,7 +19,7 @@
 L_Nickos_Orders:
 	set TMW_Quest, 18;
 	mes "[Nickos]";
-	mes "\"I have to hold my post longer?  Argh!  I was looking forward to my break.  Oh well, thanks for letting me know\"";
+	mes "\"I have to hold my post longer?  Argh!  I was looking forward to my break.  Oh well, thanks for letting me know.\"";
 	close;
 
 L_Nickos_Orders_Received:
@@ -29,21 +29,20 @@ L_Nickos_Orders_Received:
 
 L_Nickos_Mine:
 	mes "[Nickos]";
-	mes "\"I haven't heard from the miners in a while, but I've got to keep to my post unless there is due reason to investigate.  Normally the miners take care of themselves without any problem.  Could you check on them?\"";
+	mes "\"I haven't heard from the miners in a while, but I've got to keep to my post unless there is due reason to investigate.  Normally the miners take care of themselves without any problem.  Could you check on them for me, though?\"";
 	menu
-		"Yes", L_Nickos_Mine_Open,
-		"No", L_Nickos_Disappoint;
+		"Yes.", L_Nickos_Mine_Open,
+		"No.", L_Nickos_Disappoint;
 	close;
 
 L_Nickos_Disappoint:
-	mes "[Nickos]";
-	mes "\"I am disappointed.\"";
+	mes "Nickos looks disappointed.";
 	close;
 
 L_Nickos_Mine_Open:
 	set TMW_Quest, 20;
 	mes "[Nickos]";
-	mes "\" Excellent!  You now have my permission to enter the mine.  Your assistance helps ease my worries.\"";
+	mes "\"Excellent!  You now have my permission to enter the mine.  Your assistance helps ease my worries.\"";
 	close;
 
 L_Nickos_Waits:
@@ -55,7 +54,7 @@ L_Nickos_Check_Happy:
 	set TMW_Quest, 23;
 	set zeny, zeny + 500;
 	mes "[Nickos]";
-	mes "\"Oh, everything is okay?  That's great.  I think they are pretty busy and could use some help.  Feel free to give them a hand.  Here's some gold for your troubles.\"";
+	mes "\"Oh, everything is okay?  That's great!  I think they are pretty busy and could use some help.  Feel free to give them a hand.  Here's some gold for your troubles.\"";
 	close;
 
 L_Nickos_Guards:
@@ -68,7 +67,7 @@ L_Nickos_Guards:
 L_Nickos_AS_Start:
 	set TMW_Quest, 31;
 	mes "[Nickos]";
-	mes "\"Oh, the angry scorpions are becoming a problem?  We could thin down their numbers a bit.  Of course, I'll need something to show your work.  Bring me 10 angry scorpion stingers and I'll know their numbers are down.  You will be rewarded for your efforts.\"";
+	mes "\"Oh, the angry scorpions are becoming a problem?  We could thin down their numbers a bit.  I can make it worth your time, but of course, I'll need something to show your work.  Bring me 10 angry scorpion stingers to demonstrate your effectiveness, and you will be rewarded for your efforts.\"";
 	close;
 
 L_Nickos_AS_Done:
@@ -96,7 +95,7 @@ L_Nickos_TooMany:
 
 L_Nickos_UGQ:
 	mes "[Nickos]";
-	mes "\"You might be ready to take on the underground palace.  If you are interested, talk to the miners about unlocking the barrier, they got the key to open it.\"";
+	mes "\"You might be ready to take on the underground palace.  If you are interested, talk to the miners about unlocking the barrier, they've got the key to open it.\"";
 	close;
 
 }