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diff --git a/world/map/npc/002-2/kylian.txt b/world/map/npc/002-2/kylian.txt
index b1dadac2..c546370d 100644
--- a/world/map/npc/002-2/kylian.txt
+++ b/world/map/npc/002-2/kylian.txt
@@ -26,11 +26,11 @@
// state 8: Kylian was in the casino and gives a desert hat as reward
// state 9: Shop approved, go talk Kylian's shopkeeper if you are looking for work.
// state 10: Meet Shop keeper
-// state 11: Start Time Trial
+// state 11: Start Time Trial
// state 12: Return
// state 13: Start Daily Timed
// state 14: Return
-// state 15: Completed
+// state 15: Completed
// Kylian_Timer is used to denote start time.
// temporary variables used to check if the player logged out or left the building in the meanwhile
@@ -39,7 +39,7 @@
// @KylianNTSightSeeing
// @KylianNTCasino
--|script|#businessmanNTconfig|-1
+-|script|#businessmanNTconfig|32767
{
end;
@@ -82,8 +82,6 @@ OnInit:
set @fun_money, 50;
set @fun_exp, 20;
- // This NPC previously used the variable TMW_Quest
- callfunc "ClearVarTMW_Quest";
set @fieri, ((QUEST_SouthTulimshar & NIBBLE_6_MASK) >> NIBBLE_6_SHIFT);
if (@state == 15) goto L_Done;
@@ -102,62 +100,65 @@ OnInit:
if (@state >= 1) goto L_Suitcase;
mes "[Kylian]";
- mes "\"Ah, are you the room service? I've some requests.\"";
+ mes "\"Ah! Are you the room service? I've some requests.\"";
menu
- "Sure, what can I do for you?",L_Luggage,
- "No, I'm not!",L_Next;
+ "Sure... What can I do for you?",L_Luggage,
+ "No I'm not!",L_Next;
L_Next:
mes "[Kylian]";
mes "\"Too bad. Would you be interested in earning some quick money with some errands regardless?\"";
menu
- "I'm a great adventurer! I don't do errands.",L_Close,
- "No, I'm busy.",L_Close,
- "Mh, ok.",L_Luggage;
+ "I'm a great adventurer! I don't do petty errands.",L_Close,
+ "No. I'm busy.",L_Close,
+ "Well... OK.",L_Luggage;
L_Luggage:
mes "[Kylian]";
- mes "\"I need someone to get my luggage from the docks. Show this paper to the sailor who's watching the luggage.\"";
- mes "He gives you his ticket which you store in your pocket, separated from your inventory.";
+ mes "\"I need you to get my luggage from the docks. Just show this paper to the sailor who's watching the luggage.\"";
+ mes "He gives you his ticket, which you promptly store in a safe pocket outside of your inventory.";
set @state, 1;
callfunc "SetKylianQuest";
goto L_Close;
L_Suitcase: // @state >= 1, but below 3
mes "[Kylian]";
- mes "\"Did you already get my luggage from the docks?\"";
+ mes "\"Did you get my luggage from the docks?\"";
if (@state != 2)
goto L_Close;
menu
"Here it is.",L_Continue,
- "I'm on my way, don't worry.",L_Close;
+ "Don't worry; I'm on my way.",L_Close;
L_Continue:
if (countitem("LeatherSuitcase") < 1)
goto L_NoItem;
delitem "LeatherSuitcase", 1;
set Zeny, Zeny + @suitcase_money;
+ getitem "Acorn", @acorn_amount;
getexp @suitcase_exp, 0;
set @state, 3;
callfunc "SetKylianQuest";
+ next;
mes "[Kylian]";
- mes "\"Ah, very good. I really need to have a look at some of my papers in there.\"";
+ mes "\"Ah! Very good. I have some urgent paperwork that I've been needing to attend to.\"";
mes "He gives you some money.";
next;
mes "[Kylian]";
- mes "\"Oh, and I have some acorns left, I had them with me as travelling fare. You can have them, they're tasty.";
- mes "In case you don't like them, you could also bring them to the Tulimshar bakery. I heard they use them to make some special flour.\"";
- getitem "Acorn", @acorn_amount;
+ mes "\"Before you go, I also happen to have some acorns left over from my trip.\"";
+ mes "\"You can have them if you wish; they're rather tasty.\"";
+ mes "If, however, you don't like them, you could take them to the Tulimshar bakery. I heard they use them to make a special kind of flour.\"";
next;
goto L_ShopLicense;
L_ShopLicense: // @state == 3
mes "[Kylian]";
- mes "\"I'm a salesman and came to Tulimshar because I'm thinking about establishing a shop here. While I'm going through my papers, could you find out who I have to talk to about opening a shop in this city?\"";
+ mes "\"I'm a salesman and came to Tulimshar because I'm thinking about establishing a shop here.\"";
+ mes "\"While I'm going through my papers, could you find out whom I have to talk to about opening up a shop in this city?\"";
if (!(QUEST_NorthTulimshar & $@knowYanisNT))
goto L_Close;
menu
- "You need to talk to Yanis in the government building.",L_GovBuild,
+ "You need to go and talk to Yanis in the government building.",L_GovBuild,
"I'll see what I can do.",L_Close;
L_GovBuild:
@@ -167,24 +168,24 @@ L_GovBuild:
callfunc "SetKylianQuest";
set @KylianNTLicense, 1;
mes "[Kylian]";
- mes "\"Ah, excellent. That's very helpful. Could you tell me how to get to that building?\"";
- mes "You explain the way to the building.";
+ mes "\"Ah... excellent! That's very helpful. Could you tell me how to get to that building?\"";
+ mes "You give him directions to the building.";
next;
goto L_LicenseDone;
L_LicenseDone: // the player didn't log out yet after telling about Yanis
mes "[Kylian]";
- mes "\"I need to prepare my papers now. I might have some more questions later.\"";
+ mes "\"I need to prepare my papers now. I might have some more questions later on though.\"";
goto L_Close;
L_SightSeeing: // @state == 4 and logged out sometime between getting to that state and now
mes "[Kylian]";
- mes "\"You just came here the right moment. I have finished my business affairs. I think I should use my time here to also get a bit of cultural knowledge about the area. Can you tell me if there are any historical places to visit?\"";
+ mes "\"You came here at just the right moment! I have finished my business affairs, and I think I should use my time here to learn a bit about the culture in the area. Can you tell me if there are any historical places or landmarks to visit?\"";
if (!(QUEST_NorthTulimshar & $@knowWeellosNT))
goto L_Close;
menu
- "There is a very old historic building not far from here.",L_HistBuild,
- "I don't know, but will have a look around.",L_Close;
+ "There's a very old building not far from here.",L_HistBuild,
+ "I don't know, but I'll have a look around.",L_Close;
L_HistBuild:
set Zeny, Zeny + @sightseeing_money;
@@ -199,12 +200,12 @@ L_HistBuild:
L_Food: // @state == 5
mes "[Kylian]";
- mes "\"While I'm out, I could also get something to eat. Maybe some typical dish for this region. Do you have a good suggestion for that?\"";
+ mes "\"While I'm out, I could also get something to eat. Do you have any suggestions for local cuisine?\"";
if (@fieri < 4) // didn't yet help Fieri make Tonori Delight
goto L_Close;
menu
- "Fieri at the castle makes great Tonori Delight.",L_SoupBer,
- "No idea, I'll try to find out.",L_Close;
+ "A man named Fieri makes a tasty Tonori Delight over at the castle.",L_SoupBer,
+ "No idea. I'll try to find out.",L_Close;
L_SoupBer:
set Zeny, Zeny + @food_money;
@@ -216,14 +217,14 @@ L_SoupBer:
L_SightSeeingDone:
mes "[Kylian]";
- mes "\"I'm going to see the historic building you told me about and try this local food at the castle. Thank you for the suggestions.\"";
+ mes "\"I'm going to see the historic building you told me about and try the local food at the castle. Thank you for the suggestions.\"";
goto L_Close;
L_Casino: // @state == 6 and logged out sometime between getting to that state and now
mes "[Kylian]";
- mes "\"Hello. I just came back from my sight-seeing tour. And this Tonori Delight really was delicious. I wonder what it's made of...\"";
+ mes "\"Hello. I just came back from my sight-seeing tour, and this Tonori Delight really was delicious. I wonder what it's made of...\"";
next;
- mes "\"However, I was wondering if you know about a good place to spend the evening? Some place to have fun?\"";
+ mes "\"However, I was wondering if you know about some evening attractions. Maybe somewhere to have fun?\"";
if (!(QUEST_NorthTulimshar & $@knowCasinoNT))
goto L_Close;
menu
@@ -236,19 +237,19 @@ L_CasinoFound:
set @state, 7;
callfunc "SetKylianQuest";
mes "[Kylian]";
- mes "\"Oh, there's a casino in this city? That's a wonderful thing. Where can I find it?\"";
+ mes "\"Oh! There's a casino in this city? That's wonderful! Where can I find it?\"";
mes "You explain how to get to the casino.";
next;
goto L_Clothes;
L_Clothes: // @state == 7
mes "[Kylian]";
- mes "\"I should get proper clothing before I go to the casino tonight. Do you know a reputable shop where clothing of high quality is sold?\"";
+ mes "\"I should acquire proper clothing before I go to the casino tonight. Do you know a reputable shop where high-quality clothing is sold?\"";
if (!(QUEST_NorthTulimshar & $@knowLatoyNT))
goto L_Close;
menu
- "Latoy's shop. On the west side of Tulimshar.",L_HarborDistrict,
- "Mh, I don't know.",L_Close;
+ "Latoy's shop. It's on the west side of Tulimshar.",L_HarborDistrict,
+ "Hmmm... I don't know.",L_Close;
L_HarborDistrict:
set Zeny, Zeny + @clothes_money;
@@ -256,23 +257,25 @@ L_HarborDistrict:
set @state, 8;
callfunc "SetKylianQuest";
set @KylianNTCasino, 1;
- mes "You explain about Latoy and the high quality shop.";
+ mes "You explain about Latoy and the quality of his shop.";
+ next;
mes "[Kylian]";
mes "\"This seems to be exactly what I need. Thanks a lot.\"";
goto L_Close;
L_CasinoDone:
mes "[Kylian]";
- mes "\"I'm looking forward to going to the casino tonight. See me tomorrow.\"";
+ mes "\"I'm looking forward to going to the casino tonight. See me tomorrow, and I might have more requests.\"";
goto L_Close;
L_DesertHat: // @state == 8
mes "Kylian looks a bit tired.";
+ next;
mes "[Kylian]";
mes "\"That was an interesting night. Thanks for your suggestion to visit the casino.\"";
next;
getinventorylist;
- mes "\"You helped me a lot, so I bought a souvenir for you while I was shopping.\"";
+ mes "\"You helped me out a lot, so I bought a souvenir for you while I was out shopping.\"";
if ((checkweight("DesertHat", 1) == 0) || (@inventorylist_count == 100))
goto L_Inventory;
getitem "DesertHat", 1;
@@ -284,33 +287,33 @@ L_DesertHat: // @state == 8
L_Shop:
mes "[Kylian]";
mes "\"The Council of Wizards approved my shop license!\"";
- mes "\"I purchased a store just acorss the way from the hotel exit.\"";
+ mes "\"I purchased a store just across the way from the inn.\"";
next;
- mes "\"If you are looking for work, go see the shop keeper I have working for me.\"";
- mes "\"Mention your name and he will know I sent you.\"";
+ mes "\"If you are looking for work, go see the shop keeper I have working for me there.\"";
+ mes "\"Mention your name, and he will know I sent you.\"";
set @state, 10;
callfunc "SetKylianQuest";
goto L_Close;
L_OfferedJob:
mes "[Kylian]";
- mes "\"I spoke with the shopkeeper, They said you haven't stopped in yet.\"";
+ mes "\"I spoke with the shopkeeper, and he said you haven't stopped in yet.\"";
next;
- mes "\"I wish you would consider working for KPS.\"";
+ mes "\"I wish you would consider working for me.\"";
next;
- mes "\"KPS needs a well-traveled go getter like you.\"";
+ mes "\"KPS needs a determined, experienced adventurer like you.\"";
goto L_Close;
L_Helping:
mes "[Kylian]";
- mes "\"I've heard you decided to come work for me. That is great news.\"";
- mes "\"Keep up the good work and I might have something a little extra for you.\"";
+ mes "\"I've heard you decided to come work for me. That's great news!\"";
+ mes "\"Keep up the good work, and I might have something a little extra for you.\"";
goto L_Close;
L_Done:
mes "[Kylian]";
- mes "\"Thanks a bunch, buisness is booming!\"";
- mes "\"For your hard work take this.\"";
+ mes "\"Thanks a bunch, business is booming!\"";
+ mes "\"Please, take this for all your hard work.\"";
next;
set Zeny, Zeny + $@delivery_money;
getexp ($@delivery_exp_mod * BaseLevel), 0;
@@ -325,12 +328,12 @@ L_Done:
L_Inventory:
mes "[Kylian]";
- mes "\"Oh, you're carrying a lot of things. Come back when you have more room.\"";
+ mes "\"Oh my. You're carrying quite a lot. Come back when you have more room.\"";
goto L_Close;
L_NoItem:
mes "[Kylian]";
- mes "\"I don't see it! Are you trying to tease me? This is not funny!\"";
+ mes "\"I don't see it! Are you trying to tease me? This isn't funny!\"";
goto L_Close;
L_Close:
@@ -361,7 +364,6 @@ function|script|SetKylianQuest
function|script|KylianDebug
{
set @state, ((QUEST_NorthTulimshar & NIBBLE_5_MASK) >> NIBBLE_5_SHIFT);
- callfunc "ClearVarTMW_Quest";
set @fieri, ((QUEST_SouthTulimshar & NIBBLE_0_MASK) >> NIBBLE_0_SHIFT);
set @run, ((QUEST_NorthTulimshar & TWOBIT_8_MASK) >> TWOBIT_8_SHIFT);
set @run_cnt, ((QUEST_NorthTulimshar & TWOBIT_9_MASK) >> TWOBIT_9_SHIFT);
@@ -372,8 +374,8 @@ L_Menu:
menu
"Show Quest State", L_ShowState,
"Set Quest State", L_SetState,
- "Reset Timer to now", L_WorkTimer,
- "Reset Timer + 24 hours", L_MoreWorkTimer,
+ "Reset Timer to Now", L_WorkTimer,
+ "Reset Timer + 24 Hours", L_MoreWorkTimer,
"Close.", L_Close;
L_ShowState:
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