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diff --git a/npc/027-2_Caretakers_House/crying_child.txt b/npc/027-2_Caretakers_House/crying_child.txt
index c9cc0e87..82a842b8 100644
--- a/npc/027-2_Caretakers_House/crying_child.txt
+++ b/npc/027-2_Caretakers_House/crying_child.txt
@@ -39,7 +39,7 @@ L_intro:
next;
mes "\"*Sniffle*\"";
next;
- mes "You bend your knees near the child, trying to gain his confidence and ask why he is crying. But looking close, you feel surprised to see that his skin color is an awful cadaveric grey...";
+ mes "You bend your knees near the child, trying to gain his confidence and ask why he is crying. But looking close, you are surprised to see that his skin color is an awful cadaveric grey...";
menu
"Calm down kid, what happened?",-,
"Leave the kid alone",L_close;
@@ -47,7 +47,7 @@ L_intro:
mes "\"Oh, what? Who are you "+@madamsir$+", what are you doing here?\"";
next;
menu
- "My name is "+strcharinfo(0)+", I heard you cry and decided to ask if you need help.",-;
+ "My name is "+strcharinfo(0)+". I heard you cry and decided to ask if you need help.",-;
mes "The child looks at you from head to toe and say: \"" +@madamsir$+ ", aren't you scared of me?\"";
next;
menu
@@ -86,7 +86,7 @@ L_intro:
L_return:
mes "[Aldred]";
- mes "\"Please, help me " +@madamsir$+ ". If you find the beetle I think things can be a little better between me and my parents\"";
+ mes "\"Please, help me " +@madamsir$+ ". If you find the beetle I think things can be a little better between me and my parents.\"";
close;
@@ -117,7 +117,7 @@ L_return2:
menu
"Don't worry, you don't need to give me anything...",-;
mes "[Aldred]";
- mes "\"Are you serious? That is why you are so great! But hey, I have an idea. What if you talk to my parents about this item? If it is not important or valuable, I don't think it would be a problem to let you keep it. And I really want to know If they are acting all weird because I lost it. Would you do this for me?\"";
+ mes "\"Are you serious? That is why you are so great! But hey, I have an idea. What if you talk to my parents about this item? If it is not important or valuable, I don't think it would be a problem to let you keep it. And I really want to know if they are acting all weird because I lost it. Would you do this for me?\"";
next;
menu
"Sounds interesting... But who are your parents?",-,