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| author | TheKandiman <thekandiman@gmail.com> | 2011-01-26 23:26:57 -0500 |
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| committer | TheKandiman <thekandiman@gmail.com> | 2011-01-26 23:26:57 -0500 |
| commit | 5fb61b03b577161e35df12fde4afc381a0edd0db (patch) | |
| tree | a56ddd6f1c3dbdf003177eeb964eedf5915af56e /npc/031-2_Angelas_House | |
| parent | 198bb07155e85afe82b5640d837f7cd651174cce (diff) | |
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Spelling and grammar updates in NPC dialog for maps 018 to 032
Diffstat (limited to 'npc/031-2_Angelas_House')
| -rw-r--r-- | npc/031-2_Angelas_House/angelaHouse.txt | 8 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | npc/031-2_Angelas_House/cindyHouse.txt | 4 |
2 files changed, 6 insertions, 6 deletions
diff --git a/npc/031-2_Angelas_House/angelaHouse.txt b/npc/031-2_Angelas_House/angelaHouse.txt index be1a86a1..488f600a 100644 --- a/npc/031-2_Angelas_House/angelaHouse.txt +++ b/npc/031-2_Angelas_House/angelaHouse.txt @@ -20,11 +20,11 @@ L_Reward: mes "[Angela]"; - mes "\"Hello " + strcharinfo(0) + ", thank you again. I'm so glad, Cindy is back home safe.\""; + mes "\"Hello " + strcharinfo(0) + ", thank you again. I'm so glad Cindy is back home safe.\""; next; - mes "\"As I told you, my husband is an adventurer. He is at one of his travels, so he couldn't rescue Cindy himself.\""; + mes "\"As I told you, my husband is an adventurer. He is on one of his travels, so he couldn't rescue Cindy himself.\""; next; - mes "\"I want to give you one of his treasures. Beside of all the junk he brings, there are some very valuable things.\""; + mes "\"I want to give you one of his treasures. Beside all the junk he brings, there are some very valuable things.\""; next; mes "\"This item is called the Rock Knife. When you wield it, you feel as robust as a rock.\""; @@ -41,7 +41,7 @@ L_Reward: next; mes "\"I am so glad Cindy is safe. But there is still another problem. The Yetis took away all the white and yellow present boxes we wanted to bring to Santa!\""; next; - mes "\"Usually, Yetis are very shy - I wonder why they do that. There is something strange going on.\""; + mes "\"Usually, Yetis are very shy - I wonder why they did that. There is something strange going on.\""; next; mes "\"May I ask you for help again? I'll give you a small reward for every 3 boxes of one color you bring me.\""; close; diff --git a/npc/031-2_Angelas_House/cindyHouse.txt b/npc/031-2_Angelas_House/cindyHouse.txt index 46546777..97aa2bb9 100644 --- a/npc/031-2_Angelas_House/cindyHouse.txt +++ b/npc/031-2_Angelas_House/cindyHouse.txt @@ -21,10 +21,10 @@ L_Happy_Random: set @candy, rand(50); if (@inventorylist_count < 100 && @candy == 42) goto L_Candy; - setarray @quote_Cindy$, "Thank you so much for rescueing me!", + setarray @quote_Cindy$, "Thank you so much for rescuing me!", "My mother made really tasty cookies yesterday. But I already ate them all...", "I want to go ice skating tomorrow. That will be fun!", - "I wonder, when Daddy will come home next time. He always brings exciting stuff!", + "I wonder when Daddy will come home next time. He always brings exciting stuff!", strcharinfo(0) + "! You're my hero!", "My mother is so upset about the Yetis - they are very very shy usually. You have to be lucky to see one. I wonder what's wrong with them.", "When I'm a little older, I want to travel like you and my father. I want to see every place on the world!", |