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Diffstat (limited to 'npc/000-2-3/elmo.txt')
| -rw-r--r-- | npc/000-2-3/elmo.txt | 9 |
1 files changed, 5 insertions, 4 deletions
diff --git a/npc/000-2-3/elmo.txt b/npc/000-2-3/elmo.txt index d2817b02..ec8017a9 100644 --- a/npc/000-2-3/elmo.txt +++ b/npc/000-2-3/elmo.txt @@ -1,5 +1,6 @@ // Evol scripts. -// Author: +// Authors: +// Qwerty Dragon // Reid // Description: // Elmo's second dialog. @@ -9,7 +10,7 @@ if (@q == 1) goto L_GotMoney; mesn; - mesq l("Hey you, sorry for leaving your room so quickly, I needed to... Speak with the captain about... The reserve. You know, now that we have a new mouth to feed, we need to check what we have."); + mesq l("Hey you, sorry for leaving your room so quickly. I needed to speak with the captain about the food reserves. You know, now that we have a new mouth to feed, we need to check what we have."); next; mesq l("So, how is it going? Did you meet any other crew members yet?"); next; @@ -53,9 +54,9 @@ L_GotMoney: mesn; mesq l("Be patient a little while longer, in the next few days we will arrive at the port of Artis..."); next; - mesq l("If you feel bored or like turning in circles, you may want to talk with the other sailors around here to get some tasks."); + mesq l("If you feel bored or like running around in circles, you may want to talk with the other sailors around here to get some tasks to do."); next; - mesq l("From what I know, Gugli, my brother, needs the help of as many people as possible to collect all of the new things found on the island."); + mesq l("From what I here, Gugli, my brother, needs the help of as many people as possible; to collect loads of neat things, that can be found on the island."); next; mesq l("Other than that, I don't know much about what else is going on, so directly asking the Cap'tain about it could be a good idea."); |