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Diffstat (limited to 'npc/000-2-0')
-rw-r--r-- | npc/000-2-0/billybons.txt | 22 | ||||
-rw-r--r-- | npc/000-2-0/doors.txt | 6 |
2 files changed, 14 insertions, 14 deletions
diff --git a/npc/000-2-0/billybons.txt b/npc/000-2-0/billybons.txt index 4cd7e671..b7e0707a 100644 --- a/npc/000-2-0/billybons.txt +++ b/npc/000-2-0/billybons.txt @@ -9,8 +9,8 @@ mesn; if (rand(5)==2) goto l_Hips; - mesq l("You?? Here??"); - mesq l("How is *hick* possible??"); + mesq l("You? Here?"); + mesq l("How is *hick* it possible?"); next; mesn "Narrator"; @@ -27,30 +27,30 @@ menu l("Are you ok?"), l_Quit, - l("Alright, bye!"), -; + l("Alright... Bye."), -; mes ""; mesn; mesq lg("NO and *hick* NO, you and you and your... *burp* stupi*hick* guild!"); next; - mesq l("You tried to get rid of me, eeh?? But surprise! I'm still here...*hick* Or there...."); + mesq l("You tried to get rid of me, eeh?? But surprise! I'm still here... *hick* Or there..."); next; mesq l("But you won't *hick* me this time..."); next; menu - l("What are you talking about? Which guild?"), l_Quit, + l("What are you talking about? What guild?"), l_Quit, l("You are full of wine, my friend..."), -, l("You should go and get some sleep."), l_Quit; mes ""; mesn; - mesq l("If I saw *hick* who you wereee.... *hips* Would not have helped you! "); + mesq l("If I saw *hick* who you wereee... *hips* Would not have helped you! "); next; menu l("But who am I?"), -, - l("What am I suposed to say?"), l_Quit, + l("What am I supposed to say?"), l_Quit, l("You should go and get some sleep."), l_Secret; mes ""; @@ -62,9 +62,9 @@ l_Secret: mes ""; mesn; - mesq l("Hear me *hick* well, what ever, whatididever you will*hick*said ab...euh..out wha?! You saw there, the Guild of Esperia won't let it go to public."); + mesq l("Hear me *hick* well, what ever, whatididever you will *hick* said ab... uhm... out what?! You saw there, the Guild of Esperia won't let it get public."); next; - mesq l("Nobody will know about the existence of the Mercurians"); + mesq l("Nobody will know about the existence of the Mercurians."); next; mesq l("Nobody! *burp*"); next; @@ -80,11 +80,11 @@ l_Quit: mesn; mesq l("Yeah you're all like *hick* that in Esperia, but you won't get me! *burp*"); next; - mesq l("I'm not that numb eeh *hick* what did ever you disco*hips*veeered there, the warrior guild won't get me!"); + mesq l("I'm not that numb eeh *hick* what did ever you disco... *hips* ...vered there, the warrior guild won't get me!"); next; mesn "Narrator"; - mes col(l("The sailor is turning his back to you."), 9); + mes col(l("The sailor turns his back to you."), 9); close; diff --git a/npc/000-2-0/doors.txt b/npc/000-2-0/doors.txt index ef4d9019..c98a9c78 100644 --- a/npc/000-2-0/doors.txt +++ b/npc/000-2-0/doors.txt @@ -14,7 +14,7 @@ OnTouch: setcamnpc "Julia"; mesn "Julia"; - mesq l("Cap'tain has locked the door, you should go see him."); + mesq l("The captain has locked the door, you should go see him."); next; mesn "Narrator"; @@ -30,7 +30,7 @@ l_Warp: l_GotoNard: setcamnpc "Julia"; mesn "Julia"; - mesq l("Cap'tain is waiting for you! Hurry up."); + mesq l("The captain is waiting for you! Hurry up."); next; restorecam; @@ -38,7 +38,7 @@ l_GotoNard: l_End: mesn "Narrator"; - mes col(l("The door is closed."), 9); + mes col(l("The door is locked."), 9); close; } |