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Diffstat (limited to 'npc/000-2-0/julia.txt')
| -rw-r--r-- | npc/000-2-0/julia.txt | 14 |
1 files changed, 7 insertions, 7 deletions
diff --git a/npc/000-2-0/julia.txt b/npc/000-2-0/julia.txt index 3ff1e035..8dc64eba 100644 --- a/npc/000-2-0/julia.txt +++ b/npc/000-2-0/julia.txt @@ -34,9 +34,9 @@ mesn; mesq l("Hi, nice to see you!"); next; - mesq l("I'm called Julia, it's me who took care of you during some days, when we found you back on the sea, I'm very happy to see that you seem okay now!"); + mesq l("I'm called Julia, it's me who took care of you some days ago, when we found you back on the sea, I'm very happy to see that you seem okay now!"); next; - mesq l("Could I ask you which is your native language? A sailor said me russian, an other one said me french... I'm a bit lost. I will register you on the ship board list just after that."); + mesq l("Could I ask you what your native language is? A sailor told me you're russian, but another one told me you're french... I'm a bit lost. I will register you on the ship boarding list just after that."); set @s$, ""; goto l_ChooseLang; @@ -56,7 +56,7 @@ if (@lang < 0 || @lang > 7) close; setlang @lang; mesn; - mesq l("Ok, Done. I'm sure that you got some question for me, feel free to ask them!"); + mesq l("Ok, Done. I'm sure that you've got some questions for me, feel free to ask them!"); goto l_Menu; close; @@ -88,17 +88,17 @@ l_What: mesn; - mesq l("We thought that you could help us understand this, all we know is that we found you back on the sea, adrifting one your raft."); + mesq l("We thought that you could help us understand this, all we know is that we found you back in the sea, adrift on your raft."); next; - mesq l("You were in a bad mood and you can be happy that we found you before the sea took you."); + mesq l("You were in a bad mood and you should be happy that we found you before the sea took you."); next; - mesq l("Also, there was this inscription on your raft, the one of the warrior guild of Esperia, the largest and biggest guild of the whole new world, does it make you remember something?"); + mesq l("Also, there was this inscription on your raft, one of the warrior guild of Esperia, the largest and biggest guild of the whole new world, does that make you remember something?"); next; goto l_EsperiaMenu; l_EsperiaMenu: menu - l("Sorry but I can't tell you anything about it."), l_NoChanges, + l("Sorry but I can't tell you anything about that."), l_NoChanges, l("Nothing, sorry."), l_NoChanges; l_Close: |