Fixed several language issues in some scripts.

5 files changed, 20 insertions, 20 deletions

diff --git a/npc/000-1/chest.txt b/npc/000-1/chest.txt
index 984c8a80..56aadd7c 100644
--- a/npc/000-1/chest.txt
+++ b/npc/000-1/chest.txt
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
 //    Hal9000
 //    Reid
 // Description:
-//    A treasure chest, with some... Treasures inside.
+//    A treasure chest, with... treasures inside!
 // Variable:

 //    x   ShipQuests_Darlin

 // Values: 

diff --git a/npc/000-1/darlin.txt b/npc/000-1/darlin.txt
index 93b2dea9..74ebe361 100644
--- a/npc/000-1/darlin.txt
+++ b/npc/000-1/darlin.txt
@@ -87,7 +87,7 @@ l_Menu:
     mesn;

     mesq l("OH, LOOK THERE!");

     next;

-    mesq l("HE IS AT THE BOTTOM OF THE SHIP, DOWN THE STAIRWAY AND YOU COULDN'T MISS HIM!!");

+    mesq l("HE IS AT THE BOTTOM OF THE SHIP, DOWN THE STAIRS. YOU CAN'T MISS HIM!");

     restorecam;

 

     close;

diff --git a/npc/000-2-0/julia.txt b/npc/000-2-0/julia.txt
index 4b5528c2..e7dcaa84 100644
--- a/npc/000-2-0/julia.txt
+++ b/npc/000-2-0/julia.txt
@@ -84,21 +84,21 @@ l_First:
     mesn "Narrator";
     mes col(l("There is a paper with some rules written on it."), 9);
     next;
-    mesq col(l("1. Do not bot, this means that you won't run any automated tasks (Also included keyboard tricks). Any away from keyboard activity is considered botting does not include standing still.)"), 9);
+    mesq col(l("1. Do not bot. This means are not allowed to run any automated or use keyboard tricks. Any away from keyboard activity will be considered as botting. This does not include standing still."), 9);
     next;
-    mesq col(l("2. Do not spam. (includes trade spam)"), 9);
+    mesq col(l("2. Do not spam. This also concerns trade spam."), 9);
     next;
-    mesq col(l("3. Do not multibox, this mean that you cannot have more than one active character logged in or any other active clients used for attacking in group."), 9);
+    mesq col(l("3. Do not multibox. This mean you cannot have more than one active character logged in at a time. You are not allowed to use more than one active client at a time to attack in groups."), 9);
     next;
-    mesq col(l("4. Don't trashtalk, beg or use rude language in your character name and in the chat, at the exception of roleplay purposes."), 9);
+    mesq col(l("4. Do not trashtalk, beg or use rude language in your character name or in the chat, at the exception of roleplay purposes."), 9);
     next;
-    mesq col(l("5. Don't speak any other language other than English in the public areas. You are free to speak any language you want in private chats and when alone with groups of friends."), 9);
+    mesq col(l("5. Do not speak any other language other than English in the public areas. You are free to speak any language you want in private chats, or when alone with friends."), 9);
     next;
-    mesq col(l("6. Follow the social convention listed on the RFC1855."), 9);
+    mesq col(l("6. Follow the social convention listed on the RFC1855 article."), 9);
     next;
 

     mesn;

-    mesq l("Oh, and it's not written there but don't give the password of your room to anybody, I'm the only one who has the other key and I won't ask for yours, so keep it secret and try not to use the same one in any other room in the future.");

+    mesq l("Oh, and I almost forgot! Do not give the password of your room to anybody! I am the only one who has the other key and I won't ask for yours so keep it secret and try not to use the same password for any other room in the future.");

     next;

     mesq l("If you want to read this page again, there is a copy up on the left wall.");

     next;

diff --git a/npc/000-2-0/note.txt b/npc/000-2-0/note.txt
index d0d117a3..94998ea9 100644
--- a/npc/000-2-0/note.txt
+++ b/npc/000-2-0/note.txt
@@ -10,23 +10,23 @@
     mesn "Narrator";
     mes col(l("There is a paper with some rules written on it."), 9);
     next;
-    mesq col(l("1. Do not bot, this means that you won't run any automated tasks (Also included keyboard tricks). Any away from keyboard activity is considered botting does not include standing still.)"), 9);
+    mesq col(l("1. Do not bot. This means are not allowed to run any automated or use keyboard tricks. Any away from keyboard activity will be considered as botting. This does not include standing still."), 9);
     next;
-    mesq col(l("2. Do not spam. (includes trade spam)"), 9);
+    mesq col(l("2. Do not spam. This also concerns trade spam."), 9);
     next;
-    mesq col(l("3. Do not multibox, this mean that you cannot have more than one active character logged in or any other active clients used for attacking in group."), 9);
+    mesq col(l("3. Do not multibox. This mean you cannot have more than one active character logged in at a time. You are not allowed to use more than one active client at a time to attack in groups."), 9);
     next;
-    mesq col(l("4. Don't trashtalk, beg or use rude language in your character name and in the chat, at the exception of roleplay purposes."), 9);
+    mesq col(l("4. Do not trashtalk, beg or use rude language in your character name or in the chat, at the exception of roleplay purposes."), 9);
     next;
-    mesq col(l("5. Don't speak any other language other than English in the public areas. You are free to speak any language you want in private chats and when alone with groups of friends."), 9);
+    mesq col(l("5. Do not speak any other language other than English in the public areas. You are free to speak any language you want in private chats, or when alone with friends."), 9);
     next;
-    mesq col(l("6. Follow the social convention listed on the RFC1855."), 9);

+    mesq col(l("6. Follow the social convention listed on the RFC1855 article."), 9);

     next;

-    mes col(l("Some other strings are added to this page."), 9);

+    mes col(l("Following these lines are some other writings on this paper."), 9);

     next;    

-    mesq col(l("Don't give the password of your room to anybody! Keep it secret and try not to use the same one in any other room in the future. - Julia"), 9);

+    mesq col(l("Do not give the password of your room to anybody! Keep it secret and try not to use the same one in any other room in the future. - Julia"), 9);

     next;

-    mesq col(l("Does somebody know a good place to look in Esperia? - M. Arpan"), 9);

+    mesq col(l("Does somebody know a good place to hang out in Esperia? - M. Arpan"), 9);

     next;

     mes col(l("Some more things are written down but it's not legible."), 9);

 

diff --git a/npc/000-2-1/peter.txt b/npc/000-2-1/peter.txt
index a849dd97..3f3cfcd7 100644
--- a/npc/000-2-1/peter.txt
+++ b/npc/000-2-1/peter.txt
@@ -323,11 +323,11 @@ L_Close:
     setq ShipQuests_Julia, 2;
 
     mesn;
-    mesq l("Hey, you should go see Julia to be registered on the ship board.");
+    mesq l("Hey, you should go see Julia to get registered on the ship.");
     next;
 
     mesn "Narrator";
-    mes col(l("Julia is on the upper level of the ship, use the arrow keys to walk to the stairs or click on the stairs at the top right of your screen."), 9);
+    mes col(l("Julia is on the upper level of the ship. Use the arrow keys to walk to the stairs or just click on the stairs with your mouse to walk to them."), 9);
 
     close;