Fixed few dialogues in scripts and npc functions.

5 files changed, 18 insertions, 18 deletions

diff --git a/npc/000-1/mickael.txt b/npc/000-1/mickael.txt
index cb3ca332..f9ebea04 100644
--- a/npc/000-1/mickael.txt
+++ b/npc/000-1/mickael.txt
@@ -11,20 +11,20 @@
     next;

     mesq l("I hope that you don't mind that we used your raft to build this ramp.");

     next;

-    mesq l("We usually don't stop in such places, but Capt'ain let us stay here while he writes the location of this new island on his map!");

+    mesq l("We usually don't stop in such places, but the capt'ain let us stay here while he writes the location of this new island on his map!");

     next;

     mesq l("So we are looking for some new merchandise that we could trade at our next destination.");

     next;

-    mesq l("It's yours as well, right?");
+    mesq l("That's where you go as well, right?");
     next;

 

     menu

         l("That's right."), -,

-        l("Which one?"), l_Artis;

+        l("Where?"), l_Artis;

 

     mes "";

     mesn;

-    mesq l("If you are looking for us there, mostly all of us will be at Pedro's restaurant and in the INN for Silvio's case...");

+    mesq l("If you are looking for us there, mostly all of us will be at Pedro's restaurant and in the Inn for Silvio's case.");

 

     close;

 

@@ -33,7 +33,7 @@ l_Artis:
     mesn;

     mesq l("Artis of course!");

     next;

-    mesq l("It's where every merchant ship ends their travelling, and we won't be the exception!");

+    mesq l("It's where every merchant ship ends their travel and we won't be an exception.");

 

     close;

 

diff --git a/npc/000-2-3/box.txt b/npc/000-2-3/box.txt
index 33694b0b..1e0e984f 100644
--- a/npc/000-2-3/box.txt
+++ b/npc/000-2-3/box.txt
@@ -26,8 +26,8 @@
     next;
 
     menu
-        l("Take a Bandana"), -,
-        l("Nothing"), l_Close;
+        l("Take a Bandana."), -,
+        l("Nothing."), l_Close;
 
     if (@q == 1) goto l_NotYet;
     if (@q == 2) goto l_Give;
@@ -41,7 +41,7 @@
     mesn "Nard";
     mesq l("You like these hats, right?");
     next;
-    mesq l("How about I ask you to help the crew? It would mean that you're one of us, and that you will be able to get one of these hats.");
+    mesq l("How about I ask you to help the crew? It would mean that you're one of us and that you will be able to get one of these hats.");
     next;
     mesq l("We need as many hands as possible to explore the island out there, and to get some new food.");
     next;
@@ -56,7 +56,7 @@
 
     mes "";
     mesn "Nard";
-    mesq l("Fine!");
+    mesq l("Great!");
     next;
     mesq l("Go outside and talk with Gugli, he will tell you what we need.");
 
@@ -78,7 +78,7 @@ l_Give:
     mesq l("Congrats!");
     next;
     mesn "Nard";
-    mesq l("You are now part of the crew! Thanks again for your help.");
+    mesq l("You are now part of the crew. Thanks again for your help.");
 
     seta2 ShipQuests, ShipQuests_Nardbox, 3;
     getitem "Bandana", 1;
@@ -89,7 +89,7 @@ l_Give:
 l_Already:
     mes "";
     mesn "Nard";
-    mesq l("You already took a Bandana, put this one back please."); 
+    mesq l("You already took a Bandana, please put this one back in the box."); 
     close;
 
 }
\ No newline at end of file
diff --git a/npc/000-2-3/elmo.txt b/npc/000-2-3/elmo.txt
index 5c27d717..4a4231e8 100644
--- a/npc/000-2-3/elmo.txt
+++ b/npc/000-2-3/elmo.txt
@@ -10,9 +10,9 @@
     if (@q == 1) goto l_GotMoney;
 
     mesn;
-    mesq l("Hey you, sorry for leaving your room so quickly, I needed to... speak with the Captain about... The reserve.. eh, you know, now that we got a new mouth in the crew we need to check it!");
+    mesq l("Hey you, sorry for leaving your room so quickly, I needed to... speak with the captain about... The reserve. You know, now that we got a new mouth to feed, we need to check what we have.");
     next;
-    mesq l("So, how's it going? Did you meet any other crew members yet?");
+    mesq l("So, how is it going? Did you meet any other crew members yet?");
     next;
 
     menu
diff --git a/npc/functions/clientversion.txt b/npc/functions/clientversion.txt
index 828a0fd2..77003928 100644
--- a/npc/functions/clientversion.txt
+++ b/npc/functions/clientversion.txt
@@ -8,10 +8,10 @@ function	script	CheckClientVersion	{
     if (getclientversion("") > 3) return;
     mes "Warning:";
     mes "Warning:";
-    mes "Warning: you using old client.";
+    mes "Warning: You are using an old client.";
     next;
     mes "Not all features will work.";
     next;
-    mes "Please install client from http://www.evolonline.org/";
+    mes "Please install the new client from http://www.evolonline.org/";
     next;
 }
diff --git a/npc/functions/savepoint.txt b/npc/functions/savepoint.txt
index c1f2fc3f..2c1ab4f6 100644
--- a/npc/functions/savepoint.txt
+++ b/npc/functions/savepoint.txt
@@ -7,9 +7,9 @@
 function	script	SavePoint	{
 
     mesn "Narrator";
-    mes col(l("There's a nice place to stay beside you."), 9);
+    mes col(l("There is a nice place to stay beside you."), 9);
     next;
-    mes col(l("What do you wish to do?"), 9);
+    mes col(l("What do you want to do?"), 9);
     next;
 
     menu
@@ -26,7 +26,7 @@ function	script	SavePoint	{
     next;
     mes col("...", 9);
     next;
-    mes col(l("Your position is saved."), 9);
+    mes col(l("Your position has been saved."), 9);
     next;
 
     savepoint @map$, @x, @y;