Fixed typos and reworded some sentences in the barber, edouard and fishing scripts.

3 files changed, 13 insertions, 13 deletions

diff --git a/npc/001-2-41/edouard.txt b/npc/001-2-41/edouard.txt
index aba5367c..0631306c 100644
--- a/npc/001-2-41/edouard.txt
+++ b/npc/001-2-41/edouard.txt
@@ -94,11 +94,11 @@ OnInit:
             mesn;
         }
         speech 12,
-            l("I am new in this town, just like you are."),
+            l("I am new in this town, just like you."),
             l("I came here, looking for a better life."),
-            l("And so far, the Merchant Guild helped me to find this appartment so I don't complain!"),
+            l("And so far, the Merchant Guild helped me find this appartment so I can't complain!"),
             l("Anyway."),
-            l("I'm a barber, you see. I can change your hair style or color to your liking.");
+            l("I'm a barber, you see. I can change your hairstyle or hair color to your current taste.");
 
         Edouard_StoryTold = 1;
 
@@ -106,7 +106,7 @@ OnInit:
     }
 
 OnWrongPlace:
-    npctalkonce ("Sit on the chair I will come in a second!");
+    npctalkonce ("Sit on the chair, I will come in a second!");
     close;
 
 OnNotSit:
diff --git a/npc/functions/barber.txt b/npc/functions/barber.txt
index 44789f7c..1023430c 100644
--- a/npc/functions/barber.txt
+++ b/npc/functions/barber.txt
@@ -46,7 +46,7 @@ function	script	BarberChangeStyle	{
     
         .@idx = select(l("As you want!"),.@menustr$);
                     
-        if (.@idx == .@i + 1) return; // last choice for quit dialog
+        if (.@idx == .@i + 1) return; // last choice to quit dialog
 
         switch (@menu)
         {
@@ -61,7 +61,7 @@ function	script	BarberChangeStyle	{
                 BarberSayStyle 1;
                 break;
             default:
-                // and here "- 1" because the first choice is take by the random.
+                // and here "- 1" because the first choice is taken by the random
                 setlook LOOK_HAIR, (@menu - 1);
                 setlook LOOK_HAIR_COLOR, getlook (LOOK_HAIR_COLOR);
                 break;
diff --git a/npc/functions/fishing.txt b/npc/functions/fishing.txt
index 4910c29d..2f019847 100644
--- a/npc/functions/fishing.txt
+++ b/npc/functions/fishing.txt
@@ -11,11 +11,11 @@
 //         LEFT    Fish bite bait
 //
 // player log on .dir is DOWN, start by choose bait menu
-// player choose bait, script addtimer in npc .dir is UP
-// if player pull before signal npc, bait is lose, set .bait to DOWN goto choose bait
-// if player pull after pull delay max, bait is lose, set .bait to DOWN goto choose bait
+// player chooses bait, script addtimer in npc .dir is UP
+// if player pulls before signal npc, bait is lost, set .bait to DOWN goto choose bait
+// if player pulls after pull delay max, bait is lost, set .bait to DOWN goto choose bait
 // npc signal .dir is LEFT
-// player pull between npc signal and pull delay max, got the fish, set .dir to DOWN goto choose bait
+// player pulls between npc signal and pulls delay max, got the fish, set .dir to DOWN goto choose bait
 
 function	script	fishingspot	{
 
@@ -46,7 +46,7 @@ function	script	fishing	{
     if (countitem(FishingRod) < 1)
     {
         narrator
-            l("You don't have a @@.", getitemlink(FishingRod));
+            l("You don't have any @@.", getitemlink(FishingRod));
         return -1;
     }
 
@@ -133,7 +133,7 @@ OnChooseBait:
         for (.@i = 1; .@i < getarraysize(.@bait_ids); .@i++)
             .@bait_names$ = .@bait_names$ + ", " + getitemlink(.@bait_ids[.@i]);
         narrator
-            l("You don't have any food suitable for bait."),
+            l("You don't have any food to use as bait."),
             l("You need at least one of these: ") + .@bait_names$;
             return -2;
     }
@@ -158,7 +158,7 @@ OnChooseBait:
     }
     @occupy = true;
 
-    // The player occupy this spot, his bait is ready, he just have to wait the signal.
+    // The player uses this spot, his bait is ready, he just has to wait for the signal.
     closedialog;
 
     setnpcdir getarg(0), UP;