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author | Alige <aligetmw@hotmail.fr> | 2014-02-11 11:13:07 +0400 |
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committer | Alige <aligetmw@hotmail.fr> | 2014-02-11 11:36:04 +0400 |
commit | b4de3f0dc752e4c526a57c7dd0be79ea23e55771 (patch) | |
tree | 27ca5b627664d8dbecc6813de0a11cf80d306308 /npc/items/oldbook.txt | |
parent | 69459ff452df5fc971166e4fe53ab52254761fee (diff) | |
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English fixes done Qwerty Dragon.
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diff --git a/npc/items/oldbook.txt b/npc/items/oldbook.txt index 6d79f254..484b1e60 100644 --- a/npc/items/oldbook.txt +++ b/npc/items/oldbook.txt @@ -1,6 +1,7 @@ // Evol scripts. // Authors: // Alige +// Qwerty Dragon // Reid // Description: // Reading the Old Book. @@ -28,13 +29,13 @@ L_Read: next; mes l("However, drought came with summers while winters became colder than ever."); next; - mes l("Therefore, starvation stroke on the people of Aemil."); + mes l("Therefore, starvation stalked the people of Aemil."); next; - mes l("Rules began to rise in order to have a peaceful society. This did not work well for long."); + mes l("Authorities began to control in order to have a peaceful society. This did not work well for long."); next; mes l("People started to steal from each other to survive. As cities grew, needs did too. Wars for fertile lands then rose."); next; - mes l("New technologies helped the slaughter instead of establishing peace. At some point, two different rivals were formed."); + mes l("New technologies assisted the slaughter instead of establishing peace. At some point, two different rivals were formed."); next; mes l("Their leaders then came to the conclusion that an alliance was the only way they could survive."); next; @@ -42,7 +43,7 @@ L_Read: next; mes l("Each of the groups was ordered to sail in a different direction to find a new, suitable land where to live."); next; - mes l("As they sailed on Oceania, great waters of Aemil, one of the groups found a land."); + mes l("As they sailed on Oceania, great waters of Aemil, one of the alliances found a land."); next; mes l("Even though they did not hear anything about the other groups, they decided to start a new life on this land, full of harmful animals."); next; @@ -54,7 +55,7 @@ L_Read: next; mesn "Narrator"; - mes col(l("The end of the story got erased, probably because of the sea water. Some pages are still missing thus you don't know the author's name."), 9); + mes col(l("The end of the story got erased, probably because of the sea water. Some pages are still missing. Thus much is left obscure, including even the author's name."), 9); close; } |