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| author | Unverified <unverified@openmailbox.org> | 2016-03-06 14:35:17 -0500 |
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| committer | Unverified <unverified@openmailbox.org> | 2016-03-06 14:35:17 -0500 |
| commit | f7724f3d5b2cddb69dfd605b46d625528c5f6071 (patch) | |
| tree | 897cb423f864a0ddc6794840a51f7e95368b6504 /npc/001-2-2/moon.txt | |
| parent | bfdad615a0d290a9207e76c631ac217d57c274b0 (diff) | |
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Fixed a lot of grammar mistakes and changed some dialogue for clarity.
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1 files changed, 2 insertions, 2 deletions
diff --git a/npc/001-2-2/moon.txt b/npc/001-2-2/moon.txt index e073d990..42fb137a 100644 --- a/npc/001-2-2/moon.txt +++ b/npc/001-2-2/moon.txt @@ -86,7 +86,7 @@ if (.@q < 2) { mesn "Narrator"; - mes col(l("You see a young elven girl, with a grimace of pain on her face."), 9); + mes col(l("You see a young elven girl, with a strong sense of pain in her face."), 9); next; } else @@ -110,7 +110,7 @@ L_Story: next; mesq l("I didn't notice that a Pikpik was in my way, and when I stepped on it, my foot was full of spikes."); next; - mesq l("Luckily the beach is nearby, and somehow I could come home."); + mesq l("Luckily the beach is nearby, and somehow I made my way home."); next; mesq l("Please bring me some @@ so I can pull out these spikes from my foot.", getitemlink("CrocClaw")); next; |