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author | Unverified <unverified@openmailbox.org> | 2016-03-03 11:35:00 -0500 |
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committer | Unverified <unverified@openmailbox.org> | 2016-03-03 11:36:29 -0500 |
commit | 1129c87645db521f2036b2062bea196c7021ff7e (patch) | |
tree | 6710327ad28c42bdf2e3c8b005f3acda1824d205 /npc/001-1/qpid.txt | |
parent | 2357fb77c4294b3241a45e72483dff327e37c75a (diff) | |
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Fixed a lot of grammar mistakes in the dialougue of NPCs,
reworded some of the dialogues for understanding.
Fixed punctuation.
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1 files changed, 9 insertions, 9 deletions
diff --git a/npc/001-1/qpid.txt b/npc/001-1/qpid.txt index afa5967e..6f3a2883 100644 --- a/npc/001-1/qpid.txt +++ b/npc/001-1/qpid.txt @@ -53,10 +53,10 @@ function riddle_enigma { speech 5, l("Ok fine, you have up to 3 tries, here is the riddle:"), - l("What is growing and shrinking in same time?"); + l("What is growing and shrinking at the same time?"); narrator 4, l("You need to type the answer of this riddle in the NPC window."), - l("The answer is a single word, without conjugaison."), + l("The answer is a single word, without conjugation."), l("You can also answer in your native language or in English."); do @@ -72,8 +72,8 @@ } speech 5, l("Oh..."), - l("You seem more cultivated than what you look like."), - l("Fine, take these potion, I will replenish in the next hours anyway."); + l("You seem more cultivated than you look."), + l("Fine, take these potions, I will replenish them in the next couple hours anyway."); break; } @@ -90,8 +90,8 @@ speech 5, l("You failed!"), l("Ivan is the one that you should look at now."), - l("He is on a small house in between the dock's warehouse and the dojo."), - l("Follow the river to the east-north and you will find it."), + l("He is on a small house between the dock's warehouse and the dojo."), + l("Follow the river to the north-east and you will find it."), l("And get out of here, I'm not a map!"); } else @@ -111,7 +111,7 @@ speech 5, l("She wants? What if I don't want?"), l("I'm not a pawn of the Legion, I don't have to obey you!"), - l("Oh and guess what, I'm soon out of potions anyway."); + l("Oh and guess what! I'm almost out of potions anyway."); switch (select (l("And where can I find these potions?"), l("You bored me, see you later."))) @@ -158,7 +158,7 @@ mesn; break; case 2: - speech 5, l("You are honnest, I like it."); + speech 5, l("You are honest, I like it."); break; } mesq l("Is that all you had to say?"); @@ -201,7 +201,7 @@ speech 5, l("It's a poem, about poems... Why are you asking that?"), l("Because I am an orc I can't read such things? That's rubbish."), - l("I borrowed it from the library, you should try to cultivate yourself more instead of insunuate such things to people you don't know!"); + l("I borrowed it from the library, you should try to cultivate yourself more instead of insinuate things about people you don't know!"); break; case 5: break; |