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author | Maarten Vanraes <maarten.vanraes@gmail.com> | 2012-01-11 01:55:38 +0100 |
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committer | Maarten Vanraes <maarten.vanraes@gmail.com> | 2012-01-11 01:55:38 +0100 |
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Rectify english scripting text
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diff --git a/npc/000-2-3/nard.txt b/npc/000-2-3/nard.txt index 1d3ad3a7..1964e3cd 100644 --- a/npc/000-2-3/nard.txt +++ b/npc/000-2-3/nard.txt @@ -7,47 +7,47 @@ 000-2-3.gat,25,26,0,0 script Nard 306,{ mesn; - mesq l("Hello, I present myself, I'm Captain Nard, it's me who is in lead of this ship."); + mesq l("Hello, Let me just present myself, I'm Captain Nard, it's me who's leader of this ship."); next; mesn; - mesq lg("It's nice to see that you woke up and that you are ok, Elmo came here to say me this good news!"); + mesq lg("It's nice to see that you woke up and that you are ok, Elmo came here to tell me this good news!"); next; mesn "Elmo"; - mesq l("Oh... Euh, yes I did, or, well, good day at you!"); + mesq l("Oh... Err, yes I did, or, well, good day to you!"); next; mesn; - mesq l("Hehehe, he is a bit nervous excuse him, it's not everyday that we got a new member on the crew!"); + mesq l("Hehehe, he is a bit nervous, please excuse him, it's not everyday that we got a new member in the crew!"); next; - mesq l("So, how do you feel? I see that Julia did a great work! You look in good health now."); + mesq l("So, how do you feel? I see that Julia did a marvelous job! You look in good health now."); next; l_Menu: menu l("I feel ok."), l_Ok, l("Who is this Julia?"), l_Julia, - l("I'm sick, I go back to bed."), -; + l("I'm sick, I'm going back to bed."), -; mesn; - mesq l("It's a good idea, go take some rest and see you tomorow!"); + mesq l("That's a good idea, go rest a bit and I'll see you tomorow!"); close; l_Julia: mesn; - mesq l("You look really amnesic indeed."); + mesq l("You really are quite amnesic."); next; - mesq l("She is the nurse and the shipkeeper of this ship, and also an excellent cooker!"); + mesq l("She is the nurse and the shipkeeper of this ship, and also an excellent cook!"); next; - mesq l("But more than everything, she is the one which took care of you when you were in this coma."); + mesq l("But more than everything, she is the one which took care of you when you were in coma."); close; l_Ok: mesn; - mesq l("Good to know, from what reporter me Darlin, we will soon accost on a little island, before to arrive in Artis."); + mesq l("Good to know. From what Darlin reported to me, we'll soon come accross a little island, before we arrive in Artis."); next; - mesq l("It will be a good moment for you to do some exercice, as the ship is not very vast for that."); + mesq l("It'll be a good moment for you to do some exercice, as the ship is not very vast for that."); close; } |