Add correction from Pihro on dan script.

1 files changed, 11 insertions, 11 deletions

diff --git a/npc/000-2-1/dan.txt b/npc/000-2-1/dan.txt
index c1abca6b..000079e6 100644
--- a/npc/000-2-1/dan.txt
+++ b/npc/000-2-1/dan.txt
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
 // Description:
 //    Two kind of dialogues are stepped on this script,
 //    Dan will randomly apply a random conversation and
-//    an other one much directed to one of the futur quest of Artis.
+//    an other one much directed to one of the future quest of Artis.
 
 000-2-1.gat, 22,31,0,1	script	Dan	101,{
 
@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@
     set @q, rand(2);
     if (@q == 0) goto l_QuestStory;
 
-    mesq l("You see these pious around? It seems that we are around an island, we should take a look at the upper level.");
+    mesq l("You see these pious around? It seems that we are close to an island, we should take a look at the upper level.");
 
     close;
 
@@ -20,30 +20,30 @@ l_QuestStory:
     mesq l("It's so hard to find the motivation...");
 
     menu
-        l("Why so?"), -,
-        l("Yes so... I will leave you alone."), l_Close;
+        l("Why?"), -,
+        l("I guess so... I will leave you alone."), l_Close;
 
     mes "";
     mesn;
     mesq l("Oh, it's you.");
     next;
-    mesq l("So you finaly woke up? We all thought that you were in something like... You know, these long comas.");
+    mesq l("So you finally woke up? We all thought that you were in something like... You know, one of those long comas.");
     next;
 
     menu
-        l("I'm still in comas, but my ghost is haunting you!"), l_Close,
-        l("It was much something like a long nap."), -;
+        l("I'm still in a coma, but my ghost is haunting you!"), l_Close,
+        l("It was something like a long nap."), -;
 
     mes "";
     mesn;
-    mesq l("It's good, good... I got a friend which is still in a comas, but I can't be with her without working...");
+    mesq l("It's good, good... I have a friend who is still in a coma, but I can't be with her without working...");
     next;
     mesq l("The fear to see her sleeping on this quiet and lonely bed is becoming more and more unbearable, I think that I won't get the bravery to see her this time...");
     next;
 
     menu
         l("Who is she?"), l_She,
-        l("Do you want that I go see her at your place?"), l_Quest;
+        l("Do you want me to go see her in your place?"), l_Quest;
         l("I don't know what to say...")
 
     mes "";
@@ -56,7 +56,7 @@ l_QuestStory:
 l_She:
     mes "";
     mesn;
-    mesq l("She is a good friend of me... We wanted to marry some weeks before her accident but...");
+    mesq l("She is a good friend of mine... We wanted to marry a few weeks before her accident but...");
     next;
 
     goto l_Close2;
@@ -75,7 +75,7 @@ l_Close2:
 
 l_Close:
     mesn "Narrator";
-    mes col(l("Dan keeps silent by your last sentence."), 9);
+    mes col(l("Dan keeps silent since your last question."), 9);
 
     close;