Major language fix in scripts.

7 files changed, 22 insertions, 22 deletions

diff --git a/npc/000-1/astapolos.txt b/npc/000-1/astapolos.txt
index 179f74f4..fdaf7830 100644
--- a/npc/000-1/astapolos.txt
+++ b/npc/000-1/astapolos.txt
@@ -53,7 +53,7 @@ l_HowAreYou:
 l_Who:

     mes "";

     mesn;

-    mesq l("My name is Astapolos, Q'Muller and I joined Nard's crew a few years ago when it was just a little merchant ship.");

+    mesq l("My name is Astapolos. Q'Muller and I joined Nard's crew a few years ago when it was just a little merchant ship.");

     next;

     mesq l("At this time, we were selling crab food on our old mushroom island.");

     next;

diff --git a/npc/000-1/darlin.txt b/npc/000-1/darlin.txt
index 31da8219..5f43ca58 100644
--- a/npc/000-1/darlin.txt
+++ b/npc/000-1/darlin.txt
@@ -20,7 +20,7 @@
 OnStart:

     mesq l("HEY! HEY YOU!"); 

     next;

-    mesq l("CAN YOU HEAR ME?");

+    mesq l("CAN YOU HEAR ME?!");

     next;

 

     menu

@@ -33,7 +33,7 @@ OnStart:
     next;

     mesq l("I WAS HERE WHEN THEY RESCUED YOU!");

     next;

-    mesq l("DO YOU FEEL BETTER?");

+    mesq l("DO YOU FEEL BETTER?!");

     next;

 

     menu

@@ -49,7 +49,7 @@ OnStart:
     mesn;

     mesq l("I AM DOING FINE!");

     next;

-    mesq l("SO, WHAT IS YOUR NAME?");

+    mesq l("SO, WHAT'S YOUR NAME?!");

     next;

 

     menu

@@ -58,7 +58,7 @@ OnStart:
 

     mes "";

     mesn;

-    mesq l("WHAT DID YOU SAY?");

+    mesq l("WHAT DID YOU SAY?!");

     next;

     mesq l("I DO NOT UNDERSTAND!");

     next;

@@ -72,7 +72,7 @@ OnStart:
     mesn;

     mesq strcharinfo(0) + "? " + l("THAT'S A NICE NAME!");

     next;

-    mesq l("SO WHAT'S UP? WHAT ARE YOU DOING?");

+    mesq l("SO WHAT'S UP?! WHAT ARE YOU DOING?!");

     next;

 

 l_Menu:

@@ -98,9 +98,9 @@ l_GoDown:
     mesn;

     mesq l("I WOULD LOVE TO!");

     next;

-    mesq l("BUT I CAN'T, I NEED TO KEEP AN EYE ON THE SEA, TO WARN THE CREW IF THERE HAPPEN TO BE SOME PIRATES AROUND!");

+    mesq l("BUT I CAN'T, I NEED TO KEEP AN EYE ON THE SEA, TO WARN THE CREW IF THERE HAPPENS TO BE SOME PIRATES AROUND!");

     next;

-    mesq l("I ALSO WATCH FOR DANGEROUS ANIMALS...");

+    mesq l("I ALSO AVOID THE DANGEROUS ANIMALS!");

     next;

 

     menu

@@ -115,7 +115,7 @@ l_GoDown:
 

     mesq l("Oh no, but I've noticed a weird light on the other edge of this island, I wonder what it can be...");

     next;

-    mesq l("MAYBE YOU CAN LOOK AT THIS?");

+    mesq l("MAYBE YOU CAN LOOK AT THIS!?");

     next;

 

     menu

@@ -140,7 +140,7 @@ l_Quit:
 OnQuestGiven:
     mesq l("HEY @@!", strcharinfo(0));

     next;

-    mesq l("DID YOU FIND OUT WHAT THE LIGHT WAS?");

+    mesq l("DID YOU FIND OUT WHAT THE LIGHT WAS?!");

     next;

 

     menu

@@ -175,7 +175,7 @@ l_Chest:
     goto l_Menu;

 

 l_DangerAround:

-    mesq l("NOTHING ELSE OTHER THAN SHARKS AND AN ODD LIGHT.");

+    mesq l("NOTHING ELSE OTHER THAN SHARKS AND AN ODD LIGHT!");

  

     close;

 
diff --git a/npc/000-1/fexil.txt b/npc/000-1/fexil.txt
index 9826e5f0..a0e93923 100644
--- a/npc/000-1/fexil.txt
+++ b/npc/000-1/fexil.txt
@@ -24,7 +24,7 @@
     mesn;
     mesq l("Oh... Well, I just started to trade... Thus my technique may not be the best.");
     next;
-    mesq l("Anyway, if you ever feel interested, just click on my bag.");
+    mesq l("Anyway, if you ever feel interested, just check my bag.");
 
     close;
 
diff --git a/npc/000-1/gugli.txt b/npc/000-1/gugli.txt
index e9a8961c..49ec62aa 100644
--- a/npc/000-1/gugli.txt
+++ b/npc/000-1/gugli.txt
@@ -36,11 +36,11 @@ OnTalk:
     next;
     mesq l("An unexpected help is always welcome!");
     next;
-    mesq l("As you may know, we are long distance travellers and our whole crew needs to store enough food to survive. You don't know how dangerous the sea life can be.");
+    mesq l("As you may know, we are long distance travelers and our whole crew needs to store enough food to survive. You don't know how dangerous the sea life can be.");
     next;
 
     menu
-        l("Actually I have an in-depth knowledge of this type of life."), -;
+        l("Actually, I have an in-depth knowledge of this type of life."), -;
 
     mes "";
     mesn;
@@ -50,7 +50,7 @@ OnTalk:
     next;
     mesq l("We usually dock around these small pieces of land because they provide us some of the best food of all the archipelago.");
     next;
-    mesq l("So, at the moment, our crew is busy collecting croconuts, plushrooms and aquadas.");
+    mesq l("So, at the moment, our crew is busy collecting @@s, @@s and @@s."), getitemlink("Croconut"), getitemlink("Plushroom"), getitemlink("Aquada"));
     next;
 
     menu
@@ -162,10 +162,10 @@ l_TaskCompleted:
     close;
 
 l_AllComplete:
-    mesq l("Elmo reported me what Nard said, congrats!");
+    mesq l("Elmo told me what Nard said, congrats!");
     next;
-    mesq g(l("You're one of us now, that's good, I was sure that you were a kind lady when I first seen you!"),
-           l("You're one of us now, that's good, I was sure that you were a good man when I first seen you!"));
+    mesq g(l("You're one of us now, that's great! I was sure that you were a kind lady when I first saw you!"),
+           l("You're one of us now, that's great! I was sure that you were a good man when I first saw you!"));
 
     goto l_Menu;
 
diff --git a/npc/000-1/jalad.txt b/npc/000-1/jalad.txt
index 98038525..c80b0a12 100644
--- a/npc/000-1/jalad.txt
+++ b/npc/000-1/jalad.txt
@@ -60,7 +60,7 @@ OnPlushroom:
     next;

     mesq l("It's a kind of mushroom. We call it like that because of it's taste, just like a marshmallow. It also has this name because of it's appearance. It looks like a plush!.");

     next;

-    mesq l("There're some groups of these @@'s all around this island. Just pick some and have a try.", getitemlink("Plushroom"));

+    mesq l("There are some groups of these @@'s all around this island. Just pick some and have a try.", getitemlink("Plushroom"));

 

     close;

 
diff --git a/npc/000-1/muller.txt b/npc/000-1/muller.txt
index 0889feea..b985b9fd 100644
--- a/npc/000-1/muller.txt
+++ b/npc/000-1/muller.txt
@@ -55,9 +55,9 @@ OnPlushroom:
     mesn;

     mesq l("A @@? There're plenty on this island!", getitemlink("Plushroom"));

     next;

-    mesq l("It's a kind of mushroom. We call it like that because of it's taste, just like a marshmallow. It also has this name because of it's appearance. It looks like a plush!.");

+    mesq l("It's a kind of mushroom. We call it like that because of it's taste, just like a marshmallow. It also has this name because of it's appearance, it looks like a plush!.");

     next;

-    mesq l("There're some groups of these @@'s all around this island. Just pick some and have a try.", getitemlink("Plushroom"));

+    mesq l("There are few groups of these @@'s all around this island. Just pick some and have a try.", getitemlink("Plushroom"));

 

     close;

 
diff --git a/npc/000-1/silvio.txt b/npc/000-1/silvio.txt
index 67701b71..f93c1089 100644
--- a/npc/000-1/silvio.txt
+++ b/npc/000-1/silvio.txt
@@ -132,7 +132,7 @@ l_ForeverAlone:
 l_Quit:
     mes "";
     mesn;
-    mesq l("Give me a kiss before you tell me goodbye!");
+    mesq l("Give me a kiss before you say goodbye!");
 
     close;