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diff --git a/npc/quests/iRO_Exp.txt b/npc/quests/iRO_Exp.txt
index 715d9c878..6c069e165 100644
--- a/npc/quests/iRO_Exp.txt
+++ b/npc/quests/iRO_Exp.txt
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
//===== By: ==================================================
//= Kisuka
//===== Current Version: =====================================
-//= 1.1
+//= 1.2
//===== Compatible With: =====================================
//= eAthena SVN
//===== Description: =========================================
@@ -18,6 +18,7 @@
//===== Additional Comments: =================================
//= 1.0 First version. [Kisuka]
//= 1.1 Moved Jeremy and Gregor to different maps. [L0ne_W0lf]
+//= 1.2 Fixed the engrish and typos.
//============================================================
// Yullo - 25 Porcupine Quill
@@ -100,8 +101,8 @@ moc_fild17,208,346,5 script Shone#iROExp 707,{
mes "skills.";
next;
mes "[Shone]";
- mes "Hey do you think you van help me? I";
- mes "am trying to collect ^00CE0025 Earthwarm^000000";
+ mes "Hey do you think you can help me? I";
+ mes "am trying to collect ^00CE0025 Earthworm^000000";
mes "^00CE00Peelings^000000. I will reward you if you";
mes "help.";
next;
@@ -112,7 +113,7 @@ moc_fild17,208,346,5 script Shone#iROExp 707,{
}
if (countitem(1055) < 25) {
mes "[Shone]";
- mes "I don't see any ^00CE00Earthworm Peerlings^000000.";
+ mes "I don't see any ^00CE00Earthworm Peelings^000000.";
mes "Are you trying to scam me?";
close;
}else{
@@ -123,9 +124,9 @@ moc_fild17,208,346,5 script Shone#iROExp 707,{
mes "Thank you for the 25 Earthworm";
mes "Peelings!";
mes "Here is that reward I promised you,";
- mes "I hope take this wisdom I have";
- mes "passed on to you and share it with";
- mes "others.";
+ mes "I hope you will take this wisdom I";
+ mes "have passed on to you and share it";
+ mes "with others.";
close;
}
}
@@ -191,16 +192,16 @@ gef_fild04,191,54,4 script Halgus#iROExp 123,{
}
else if((BaseLevel > 20)) {
mes "[Halgus]";
- mes "You are way to learned to be";
+ mes "You are way to strong to be";
mes "hunting these little things.";
next;
close;
}
mes "[Halgus]";
- mes "New here are you? Well look I like";
+ mes "New here are you? Well look, I like";
mes "helping new faces around here.";
mes "And lets be honest you are not the";
- mes "prettiest look face I have seen.";
+ mes "prettiest looking face I have seen.";
next;
mes "[Halgus]";
mes "None-the-less my daughter would";
@@ -314,9 +315,8 @@ mjolnir_01,293,20,3 script Nutters#iROExp 779,{
mes "Acorns.";
next;
mes "[Nutters]";
- mes "Can you help me find ^00CE0025 Acorns^000000.I";
- mes "will reward you with much if you";
- mes "can.";
+ mes "Can you help me find ^00CE0025 Acorns^000000.";
+ mes "I will reward you with much if you can.";
next;
if (select("I have 25 Acorns:Please come again?") == 2) {
mes "[Nutters]";
@@ -326,8 +326,7 @@ mjolnir_01,293,20,3 script Nutters#iROExp 779,{
if (countitem(1026) < 25) {
mes "[Nutters]";
mes "Where are my ^00CE00Acorns^000000? Hey, I'm not";
- mes "playing, you better not hold out on";
- mes "me.";
+ mes "playing, you better not hold out on me.";
close;
}else{
mes "[Nutters]";