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--- a/npc/guides/guides_pay.txt
+++ b/npc/guides/guides_pay.txt
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
//===== By: ==================================================
//= kobra_k88
//===== Current Version: =====================================
-//= 1.3a
+//= 1.4
//===== Compatible With: =====================================
//= eAthena 0.5.2 +
//===== Description: =========================================
@@ -15,28 +15,22 @@
//= 1.3 Updated the guide according to how it is on iRO, thanks [MasterOfMuppets]
//= to Muad_Dib
//= 1.3a Fixed some problems with duplicated text, thanks to muad_dib [MasterOfMuppets]
+//= 1.4 Fitted the many lines into 1 or 2, and corrected some typos [erKURITA]
//============================================================
payon.gat,162,67,4 script Guide 708,{
cutin "pay_soldier",2;
mes "[Payon Guide]";
- mes "Welcome to the";
- mes "mountain city of Payon.";
- mes "if you're unfammiliar with this";
- mes "area, I can help you find what";
- mes "you're looking for around here.";
+ mes "Welcome to the mountain city of Payon.";
+ mes "If you're unfammiliar with this area, I can help you find what you're looking for around here.";
L_MENU:
next;
menu "City Guide",L_CITY,"Remove Marks from Mini-Map",L_REMOVE,"Notice",L_NOTICE,"Cancel",L_END;
L_CITY:
mes "[Payon Guide]";
- mes "Please select";
- mes "a location from";
- mes "the following menu.";
- mes "Would you like me";
- mes "to mark locations";
- mes "on your Mini-Map?";
+ mes "Please select a location from the following menu.";
+ mes "Would you like me to mark locations on your Mini-Map?";
next;
menu "Yes.",L_YES,"No.",L_NO;
L_NO:
@@ -48,143 +42,103 @@ L_CONT:
L_MENU_2:
menu "^FF0000Archer Guild^000000",L_ARCHER,"Weapon Shop",L_WEAPON,"Tool Shop",L_TOOL,"Pub",L_PUB,"Central Palace",L_PALACE,"The Empress",L_EMPRESS,"Palace Annex",L_ANNEX,"Royal Kitchen",L_KITCHEN,"Forge",L_FORGE,"Cancel",-;
mes "[Payon Guide]";
- mes "Pleas ask me to Remove";
- mes "Marks from Mini-Map if you";
- mes "no longer wish to have the";
- mes "location marks displayed";
- mes "on your Mini-Map.";
+ mes "Please ask me to remove marks from Mini-Map if you no longer wish to have the location marks displayed on your Mini-Map.";
goto L_MENU;
L_ARCHER:
mes "[Payon Guide]";
- mes "The Archer Guild handles";
- mes "Job Changes to the Archer";
- mes "Class. You'll need to enter";
- mes "the Archer Village wich is";
- mes "to the northeast of Payon.";
+ mes "The Archer Guild handles Job Changes to the Archer Class.";
+ mes "You'll need to enter the Archer Village wich is to the northeast of Payon.";
viewpoint 1,228,326,1,0xFF0000;
next;
goto L_WIPE;
L_WEAPON:
mes "[Payon Guide]";
- mes "The Weapon Shop";
- mes "can be found in the";
- mes "northwest corner of";
- mes "the city of Payon.";
+ mes "The Weapon Shop can be found in the northwest corner of the city of Payon.";
viewpoint 1,139,158,2,0xFF00FF;
next;
goto L_WIPE;
L_TOOL:
mes "[Payon Guide]";
- mes "The Tool Shop";
- mes "is located near";
- mes "the northwest";
- mes "corner of Payon.";
+ mes "The Tool Shop is located near the northwest corner of Payon.";
viewpoint 1,144,85,3,0xFF00FF;
next;
goto L_WIPE;
L_PUB:
mes "[Payon Guide]";
- mes "The Pub can be";
- mes "found in the northeast";
- mes "part of Payon. It's the";
- mes "best place to relax after";
- mes "a long day of hunting.";
+ mes "The Pub can be found in the northeast part of Payon.";
+ mes "It's the best place to relax after a long day of hunting.";
viewpoint 1,220,117,4,0xFF00FF;
next;
goto L_WIPE;
L_PALACE:
mes "[Payon Guide]";
- mes "The Central Palace";
- mes "is located to the north";
- mes "within the city of Payon.";
+ mes "The Central Palace is located to the north within the city of Payon.";
viewpoint 1,156,245,5,0x00FF00;
next;
goto L_WIPE;
L_EMPRESS:
mes "[Payon Guide]";
- mes "The Empress";
- mes "can be found to the";
- mes "northwest in Payon.";
+ mes "The Empress can be found to the northwest in Payon.";
viewpoint 1,107,327,6,0x00FF00;
next;
goto L_WIPE;
L_ANNEX:
mes "[Payon Guide]";
- mes "The Palace Annex";
- mes "can be found in the";
- mes "western part of Payon.";
+ mes "The Palace Annex can be found in the western part of Payon.";
viewpoint 1,127,204,7,0x00FF00;
next;
goto L_WIPE;
L_KITCHEN:
mes "[Payon Guide]";
- mes "The Royal Kitchen";
- mes "is located near the";
- mes "northern end of Payon.";
+ mes "The Royal Kitchen is located near the northern end of Payon.";
viewpoint 1,155,327,8,0x00FF00;
next;
goto L_WIPE;
L_FORGE:
mes "[Payon Guide]";
- mes "The Forge is";
- mes "situaded near";
- mes "the center of Payon.";
+ mes "The Forge is situaded near the center of Payon.";
viewpoint 1,142,172,9,0xFFFF00;
next;
goto L_WIPE;
L_WIPE:
- if(@COMPASS_CHECK == 1)goto L_MENU_2;
- viewpoint 2,228,326,1,0xFF0000;
- viewpoint 2,139,158,2,0xFF00FF;
- viewpoint 2,144,85,3,0xFF00FF;
- viewpoint 2,220,117,4,0xFF00FF;
- viewpoint 2,156,245,5,0x00FF00;
- viewpoint 2,107,327,6,0x00FF00;
- viewpoint 2,127,204,7,0x00FF00;
- viewpoint 2,155,327,8,0x00FF00;
- viewpoint 2,142,172,9,0xFFFF00;
+ if(@COMPASS_CHECK == 1)goto L_MENU_2;
+ viewpoint 2,228,326,1,0xFF0000;
+ viewpoint 2,139,158,2,0xFF00FF;
+ viewpoint 2,144,85,3,0xFF00FF;
+ viewpoint 2,220,117,4,0xFF00FF;
+ viewpoint 2,156,245,5,0x00FF00;
+ viewpoint 2,107,327,6,0x00FF00;
+ viewpoint 2,127,204,7,0x00FF00;
+ viewpoint 2,155,327,8,0x00FF00;
+ viewpoint 2,142,172,9,0xFFFF00;
goto L_MENU_2;
L_REMOVE:
- viewpoint 2,228,326,1,0xFF0000;
- viewpoint 2,139,158,2,0xFF00FF;
- viewpoint 2,144,85,3,0xFF00FF;
- viewpoint 2,220,117,4,0xFF00FF;
- viewpoint 2,156,245,5,0x00FF00;
- viewpoint 2,107,327,6,0x00FF00;
- viewpoint 2,127,204,7,0x00FF00;
- viewpoint 2,155,327,8,0x00FF00;
- viewpoint 2,142,172,9,0xFFFF00;
+ viewpoint 2,228,326,1,0xFF0000;
+ viewpoint 2,139,158,2,0xFF00FF;
+ viewpoint 2,144,85,3,0xFF00FF;
+ viewpoint 2,220,117,4,0xFF00FF;
+ viewpoint 2,156,245,5,0x00FF00;
+ viewpoint 2,107,327,6,0x00FF00;
+ viewpoint 2,127,204,7,0x00FF00;
+ viewpoint 2,155,327,8,0x00FF00;
+ viewpoint 2,142,172,9,0xFFFF00;
goto L_MENU;
+
L_NOTICE:
mes "[Payon Guide]";
- mes "Advances in sorcery and";
- mes "technology have allowed";
- mes "us to update our information";
- mes "system, enabling up to mark";
- mes "locations on your Mini-Map";
- mes "for easier navigation.";
+ mes "Advances in sorcery and technology have allowed us to update our information system, enabling up to mark locations on your Mini-Map for easier navigation.";
next;
mes "[Payon Guide]";
- mes "Your Mini-Map is located";
- mes "in the upper right corner";
- mes "of the screen. If you can't";
- mes "see it, press the Ctrl + Tab";
- mes "keys or click the 'Map' button";
- mes "in your Basic Information Window.";
+ mes "Your Mini-Map is located in the upper right corner of the screen.";
+ mes "If you can't see it, press the Ctrl + Tab keys or click the 'Map' button in your Basic Information Window.";
next;
mes "[Payon Guide]";
- mes "On your Mini-Map,";
- mes "click on the '+' and '-'";
- mes "symbols to zoom in and";
- mes "out of your Mini-Map. We";
- mes "hope you enjoy your travels";
- mes "here in the city of Payon.";
+ mes "On your Mini-Map, click on the '+' and '-' symbols to zoom in and out of your Mini-Map.";
+ mes "We hope you enjoy your travels here in the city of Payon.";
goto L_MENU;
L_END:
mes "[Payon Guide]";
- mes "Be safe in";
- mes "your travels,";
- mes "brave adventurer.";
+ mes "Be safe in your travels, brave adventurer.";
cutin "pay_soldier",255;
close;
}
@@ -192,22 +146,15 @@ L_END:
pay_arche.gat,85,30,2 script Guide 708,{
cutin "pay_soldier",2;
mes "[Payon Guide]";
- mes "Welcome to the";
- mes "mountain city of Payon.";
- mes "if you're unfammiliar with this";
- mes "area, I can help you find what";
- mes "you're looking for around here.";
+ mes "Welcome to the mountain city of Payon.";
+ mes "If you're unfammiliar with this area, I can help you find what you're looking for around here.";
L_MENU:
next;
menu "City Guide",L_CITY,"Remove Marks from Mini-Map",L_REMOVE,"Notice",L_NOTICE,"Cancel",L_END;
L_CITY:
mes "[Payon Guide]";
- mes "Please select";
- mes "a location from";
- mes "the following menu.";
- mes "Would you like me";
- mes "to mark locations";
- mes "on your Mini-Map?";
+ mes "Please select a location from the following menu.";
+ mes "Would you like me to mark locations on your Mini-Map?";
next;
menu "Yes.",L_YES,"No.",L_NO;
L_NO:
@@ -217,83 +164,55 @@ L_YES:
set @COMPASS_CHECK,1;
L_CONT:
L_MENU_2:
- menu "^FF0000Archer Guild^000000",L_ARCHER,"Tool Shop",L_TOOL,"Payon Dungeon",L_DUNGEON,"Cancel",-;
+ menu "^FF0000Archer Guild^000000",L_ARCHER,"Weapon Shop",L_WEAPON,"Tool Shop",L_TOOL,"Pub",L_PUB,"Central Palace",L_PALACE,"The Empress",L_EMPRESS,"Palace Annex",L_ANNEX,"Royal Kitchen",L_KITCHEN,"Forge",L_FORGE,"Cancel",-;
mes "[Payon Guide]";
- mes "Pleas ask me to Remove";
- mes "Marks from Mini-Map if you";
- mes "no longer wish to have the";
- mes "location marks displayed";
- mes "on your Mini-Map.";
+ mes "Please ask me to remove marks from Mini-Map if you no longer wish to have the location marks displayed on your Mini-Map.";
goto L_MENU;
L_ARCHER:
mes "[Payon Guide]";
- mes "The Archer Guild,";
- mes "found northeast in";
- mes "the Archer Village,";
- mes "handles Job Changes";
- mes "to the Archer Class.";
+ mes "The Archer Guild, found northeast in the Archer Village, handles Job Changes to the Archer Class.";
viewpoint 1,144,164,1,0xFF0000;
next;
goto L_WIPE;
L_TOOL:
mes "[Payon Guide]";
- mes "The Tool Shop";
- mes "is located near";
- mes "the northwest";
- mes "corner of Payon.";
+ mes "The Tool Shop is located near the northwest corner of Payon.";
viewpoint 1,71,156,2,0xFF00FF;
next;
goto L_WIPE;
L_DUNGEON:
mes "[Payon Guide]";
- mes "The entrance to";
- mes "the Payon Dungeon";
- mes "is located at the west";
- mes "end of the village.";
+ mes "The entrance to the Payon Dungeon is located at the west end of the village.";
viewpoint 1,34,132,3,0xFFFFFF;
next;
goto L_WIPE;
L_WIPE:
- if(@COMPASS_CHECK == 1)goto L_MENU_2;
- viewpoint 2,144,164,1,0xFF0000;
- viewpoint 2,71,156,2,0xFF00FF;
- viewpoint 2,34,132,3,0xFFFFFF;
+ if(@COMPASS_CHECK == 1)goto L_MENU_2;
+ viewpoint 2,144,164,1,0xFF0000;
+ viewpoint 2,71,156,2,0xFF00FF;
+ viewpoint 2,34,132,3,0xFFFFFF;
goto L_MENU_2;
L_REMOVE:
- viewpoint 2,144,164,1,0xFF0000;
- viewpoint 2,71,156,2,0xFF00FF;
- viewpoint 2,34,132,3,0xFFFFFF;
+ viewpoint 2,144,164,1,0xFF0000;
+ viewpoint 2,71,156,2,0xFF00FF;
+ viewpoint 2,34,132,3,0xFFFFFF;
goto L_MENU;
+
L_NOTICE:
mes "[Payon Guide]";
- mes "Advances in sorcery and";
- mes "technology have allowed";
- mes "us to update our information";
- mes "system, enabling up to mark";
- mes "locations on your Mini-Map";
- mes "for easier navigation.";
+ mes "Advances in sorcery and technology have allowed us to update our information system, enabling up to mark locations on your Mini-Map for easier navigation.";
next;
mes "[Payon Guide]";
- mes "Your Mini-Map is located";
- mes "in the upper right corner";
- mes "of the screen. If you can't";
- mes "see it, press the Ctrl + Tab";
- mes "keys or click the 'Map' button";
- mes "in your Basic Information Window.";
+ mes "Your Mini-Map is located in the upper right corner of the screen.";
+ mes "If you can't see it, press the Ctrl + Tab keys or click the 'Map' button in your Basic Information Window.";
next;
mes "[Payon Guide]";
- mes "On your Mini-Map,";
- mes "click on the '+' and '-'";
- mes "symbols to zoom in and";
- mes "out of your Mini-Map. We";
- mes "hope you enjoy your travels";
- mes "here in the city of Payon.";
+ mes "On your Mini-Map, click on the '+' and '-' symbols to zoom in and out of your Mini-Map.";
+ mes "We hope you enjoy your travels here in the city of Payon.";
goto L_MENU;
L_END:
mes "[Payon Guide]";
- mes "Be safe in";
- mes "your travels,";
- mes "brave adventurer.";
+ mes "Be safe in your travels, brave adventurer.";
cutin "pay_soldier",255;
close;
}
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