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diff --git a/npc/guides/guides_alde.txt b/npc/guides/guides_alde.txt
index d1b37cfce..f0e891a80 100644
--- a/npc/guides/guides_alde.txt
+++ b/npc/guides/guides_alde.txt
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
//===== By: ==================================================
//= kobra_k88
//===== Current Version: =====================================
-//= 1.3
+//= 1.4
//===== Compatible With: =====================================
//= eAthena 7.15 +
//===== Description: =========================================
@@ -13,22 +13,19 @@
//= 1.2 Optimized, updated common guide names [Lupus]
//= 1.3 Updated the guide according to how it is on iRO, thanks [MasterOfMuppets]
//= to Muad_Dib
+//= 1.4 Fitted the many lines into 1 or 2, and corrected some typos [erKURITA]
//============================================================
aldebaran.gat,139,63,4 script Soldier::Alde_Guide 105,{
cutin "prt_soldier",2;
mes "[Al De Baran Guard]";
- mes "I'm just an ordinary guard";
- mes "that you could find in any other";
- mes "city. I don't think I even have a";
- mes "name...";
+ mes "I'm just an ordinary guard that you could find in any other city.";
+ mes "I don't think I even have a name...";
next;
mes "[Al De Baran Guard]";
- mes "I am in charge of the Service";
- mes "Guides from the Al De Baran";
- mes "Garrison. Let me guide you";
- mes "through our town!";
+ mes "I am in charge of the Service Guides from the Al De Baran Garrison.";
+ mes "Let me guide you through our town!";
next;
menu "Get location Guide.",-,"End conversation.",L_End;
viewpoint 1,57,222,1,0xFF6633;
@@ -47,11 +44,8 @@ aldebaran.gat,139,63,4 script Soldier::Alde_Guide 105,{
close;
L_End:
mes "[Al De Baran Guard]";
- mes "We are sworn to protect Al De";
- mes "Baran! May the forces of evil";
- mes "always be crushed by the";
- mes "righteous fist of good!";
- cutin "prt_soldier",255;
+ mes "We are sworn to protect Al De Baran! May the forces of evil always be crushed by the righteous fist of good!";
+ cutin "prt_soldier",255;
close;
}