1 files changed, 25 insertions, 22 deletions

diff --git a/doc/sample/npc_live_dialogues.txt b/doc/sample/npc_live_dialogues.txt
index a82c14e89..6ba1c7ee2 100644
--- a/doc/sample/npc_live_dialogues.txt
+++ b/doc/sample/npc_live_dialogues.txt
@@ -1,51 +1,54 @@
-//by Lupus.
-// *** Usage of Global_Functions.txt (you can translate Global_Functions.txt function messages)
-// Here's a polite wolf NPC ^_- Luppy
-// learn how to make your NPC more alive.
-// PS don't use it as a normal NPC in your server. It's exploitable 8)
+//===== rAthena Script =======================================
+//= Sample: Live Dialogue
+//===== By: ==================================================
+//= Lupus
+//===== Current Version: =====================================
+//= 20070320
+//===== Description: ========================================= 
+//= An example of an NPC with live dialogue.
+//= Note: This relies on Global_Functions.txt to run.
+//============================================================
 
 prontera,167,177,5	script	Luppy	1107,{
-        mes "[Luppy]";
+	mes "[Luppy]";
 
-	//say random greeting from Global_Functions.txt
+	// Say a random greeting from Global_Functions.txt
 	mes callfunc("F_Hi");
 
-	//say a compliment according to player's gender
-	//1st string is for FEMALE, 2nd for MALE
+	// Say a compliment according to player's gender
+	// 1st string is for FEMALE, 2nd for MALE
 	mes callfunc("F_Sex","What a beautiful lady!","What a handsome man!");
 
-	//add some random greeting and goodbye into the menu
+	// Add some random greeting and goodbye into the menu
 	menu callfunc("F_Hi"),-, callfunc("F_Bye"),M_BYE;
 
-        mes "[Luppy]";
-	//give a random prize from set list of items
+	mes "[Luppy]";
+	// Give a random prize from set list of items
 	if(@gotstuff){
-		//again, say stuff according to player's gender
+		// Again, say stuff according to player's gender
 		mes "I like "+callfunc("F_Sex","smiling ladies!","bloody pirates!");
 
-		//show one of 3 emotion from the list (we added ,1 to show emotion over PLAYER's head)
+		// Show one of 3 emotion from the list (we added ,1 to show emotion over PLAYER's head)
 		emotion callfunc("F_RandMes",3,e_scissors,e_kis,e_pat),1;
 		close;
 	}
 
-	//we set a temp var to give present just once. Player can get more by RE-entering the server
+	// We set a temp var to give present just once. Player can get more by relogging.
 	set @gotstuff,1;
 
-	//get item Id from the list of presents: Apple, Mastela Fruit, Yggdrasil Seed or Orange Juice
+	// Get item ID from the list of presents: Apple, Mastela Fruit, Yggdrasil Seed or Orange Juice
 	set @itemIDfromList, callfunc("F_RandMes",4,512,522,608,620);
 
-	//again, say stuff according to player's gender
+	// Again, say stuff according to player's gender
 	mes "Hey, "+callfunc("F_Sex","sister!","brother!")+" I have "+getitemname(@itemIDfromList)+" for you!";
 
-	//get the item from the list
+	// Get the item from the list
 	getitem @itemIDfromList,1;
 	close;
 
 M_BYE:
 	mes "[Luppy]";
-	//add some random goodbye from Global_Functions.txt
+	// Add some random goodbye from Global_Functions.txt
 	mes callfunc("F_Bye");
 	close;
-}
-
-//Please, be more creative. Or else this li'l wolfy would eat you up!
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+}
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