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1 files changed, 71 insertions, 56 deletions
diff --git a/npc/re/cities/mora.txt b/npc/re/cities/mora.txt
index 68e173548..0f019ad7e 100644
--- a/npc/re/cities/mora.txt
+++ b/npc/re/cities/mora.txt
@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@
//= 1.0 First version. [SuperHulk]
//= 1.1 Translations to English. [Flaid]
//= 1.1a Standardized. [Euphy]
-//= 1.2 Added new NPCs [Flaid]
+//= 1.2 Added new NPCs. [Flaid]
//============================================================
mora,185,163,5 script Mora Citizen#1 516,{
@@ -139,31 +139,33 @@ mora,52,138,8 script Mora Citizen#2 516,{
mora,160,123,5 script Mora Citizen#3 517,{
mes "[Boudril]";
- mes "Hey,";
- mes "you seem to be so far from home!";
- mes "Mora is a remote town";
- mes "that's why we have our own currency here!";
+ mes "Hey, you seem to be";
+ mes "so far from home!";
+ mes "Mora is a remote town.";
+ mes "That's why we have";
+ mes "own currency here!";
next;
mes "[Boudril]";
mes "Beyond that, our community";
mes "developed this craft.";
- mes "Items found here,";
- mes "cannot be found anywhere else!";
+ mes "Items found here cannot";
+ mes "be found anywhere else!";
close;
}
mora,105,100,3 script Mora Citizen#4 518,{
mes "[Buisso]";
- mes "Hello my friend,";
- mes "what brings you to this place, so far from home?";
- mes "Are you looking for challange?";
+ mes "Hello, my friend.";
+ mes "What brings you to this";
+ mes "place, so far from home?";
+ mes "Are you looking for a challange?";
mes "You won't be disappointed here!";
next;
mes "[Buisso]";
- mes "We are surrounded by the Bifrost";
- mes "an area with monsters,";
- mes "powerful and deceitful...";
- mes "So cute but still dangerous.";
+ mes "We are surrounded by the";
+ mes "Bifrost, an area with powerful";
+ mes "and deceitful monsters...";
+ mes "So cute, but still dangerous.";
close;
}
@@ -175,10 +177,10 @@ mora,98,104,4 script Mora Citizen#5 516,{
mes "My dream was to be like you!";
next;
mes "[Malavida]";
- mes "Travel around the world,";
+ mes "Traveling around the world,";
mes "chasing monsters,";
- mes "hunt treasures all of the world...";
- mes "You have the chance... Use it!";
+ mes "hunting treasure...";
+ mes "You have the chance. Use it!";
close;
}
@@ -186,20 +188,22 @@ mora,102,107,6 script Mora Citizen#6 517,{
mes "[Skape]";
mes "Have you tasted our dish?";
mes "The beef toast!?";
- mes "What about this delicious beef";
- mes "that only exists in the Bifrost?";
+ mes "This delicious beef only";
+ mes "exists in the Bifrost!";
next;
mes "[Skape]";
- mes "If you want to taste this dish";
- mes "visit our chef.";
- mes "He makes the best Mora toast beef!";
+ mes "If you want to taste this";
+ mes "dish, visit our chef.";
+ mes "He makes the best";
+ mes "Mora beef toast!";
close;
}
mora,101,107,4 script Mora Citizen#7 518,{
mes "[Wouadel Kami]";
mes "*Dances*";
- mes "I'm a choreographer, but nobody understands me.";
+ mes "I'm a choreographer, but";
+ mes "nobody understands me.";
mes "*doridori*";
mes "*bingbing*";
mes "*bangbang*";
@@ -209,8 +213,8 @@ mora,101,107,4 script Mora Citizen#7 518,{
mora,103,100,6 script Mora Citizen#8 518,{
mes "[Didier Lans]";
mes "Yooo gaba gaba!";
- mes "Hello my dear, you've heard";
- mes "about my teaching, isn't it that?";
+ mes "Hello, my dear. You've heard";
+ mes "about my teachings, have you?";
mes "Do not hit your friends!";
mes "*makes small steps backwards*";
next;
@@ -219,61 +223,62 @@ mora,103,100,6 script Mora Citizen#8 518,{
mes "Eat your vegetables.";
mes "*is the fool*";
mes "Be smart, be polite!";
- mes "Yooo Gaba Gaba!";
+ mes "Yooo gaba gaba!";
close;
}
mora,184,169,3 script Mora Citizen#9 516,{
mes "[Moussa Wi]";
- mes "Bleh, I've been here";
- mes "for too long.";
- mes "Live with this dogs...";
- mes "Nothing to do...";
- mes "Hmmm, how about you take care of them?";
+ mes "Bleh, I've been";
+ mes "here for too long.";
+ mes "Living with these dogs...";
+ mes "Having nothing to do...";
+ mes "Hmm, how about you";
+ mes "take care of them?";
close;
}
mora,108,182,3 script Mora Citizen#10 516,{
mes "[Yosou Keh]";
- mes "Hello,";
- mes "I am Yosou Keh!";
- mes "I am a resident of Mora";
+ mes "Hello!";
+ mes "I am Yosou Keh,";
+ mes "a resident of Mora.";
mes "The Bifrost is populated";
- mes "by all these strong monsters...";
+ mes "with many strong monsters...";
close;
}
mora,113,185,5 script Mora Citizen#11 516,{
mes "[Ninkasi]";
- mes "Hey dude.";
- mes "How are you today dude?";
- mes "What can I do for you dude?";
+ mes "Hey, dude.";
+ mes "How are you today, dude?";
+ mes "What can I do for you, dude?";
next;
- switch(select("Why do you call me dude?:Goodbye.")) {
+ switch(select("Why do you call me 'dude'?:Goodbye.")) {
case 1:
mes "[Ninkasi]";
mes "Why not?";
- mes "Calling others dude is my brand mark.";
- mes "Be cool dude, relax yourself!";
- mes "Enjoy your life dude!";
- break;
+ mes "Calling others 'dude'";
+ mes "is my brand mark.";
+ mes "Be cool, dude, relax!";
+ mes "Enjoy your life, dude!";
+ close;
case 2:
mes "[Ninkasi]";
mes "See you again, dude!";
- break;
+ close;
}
- close;
}
mora,43,127,4 script Mora Citizen#12 522,{
mes "[Glouti Vori]";
- mes "Hmmm, I love this beef toast!";
- mes "That's the only reason I am still here!";
- mes "There's nothing better than Mora beef toast!";
+ mes "Mm, I love this beef toast!";
+ mes "That's the only reason I'm";
+ mes "still here! There's nothing";
+ mes "better than Mora beef toast!";
close;
}
-//===================================
mora,35,119,7 script South World Dealer 513,{
mes "[South World Dealer]";
mes "...";
@@ -282,25 +287,35 @@ mora,35,119,7 script South World Dealer 513,{
mora,139,102,4 script Milvida 515,{
mes "[Milvida]";
- mes "Welcome to Mora~ In the center of the city you can find all shops and some enchanters.";
+ mes "Welcome to Mora~";
+ mes "In the center of the city";
+ mes "you can find all the shops";
+ mes "and some enchanters.";
next;
mes "[Milvida]";
- mes "Northeast of the city is where you can find food here.";
+ mes "Northeast of the city is";
+ mes "where the food is located.";
close;
}
mora,55,124,2 script Cat Traveler 495,{
mes "[Cat Traveler]";
- mes "This city is like Malangdo on several aspects, don't you think?";
+ mes "This city is like Malangdo";
+ mes "in several aspects,";
+ mes "don't you think?";
close;
}
-mora,131,165,4 script Bifrost resident#1 520,{
+mora,131,165,4 script Bifrost Resident#1 520,{
mes "[Bifrost resident]";
- mes "Welcome to the workshop of the west clan.";
- mes "If you want your Loki Muffler enchanted, please contact my boss, he makes miracles!";
+ mes "Welcome to the workshop";
+ mes "of the west clan. If you";
+ mes "want your Loki Muffler";
+ mes "enchanted, please contact";
+ mes "my boss. He makes miracles!";
next;
mes "[Bifrost resident]";
- mes "P/S: On a side note, I think I am really cute... Don't you think?";
+ mes "On a side note... I think I'm";
+ mes "really cute, don't you agree?";
close;
} \ No newline at end of file