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diff --git a/npc/re/cities/mora.txt b/npc/re/cities/mora.txt index 68e173548..0f019ad7e 100644 --- a/npc/re/cities/mora.txt +++ b/npc/re/cities/mora.txt @@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ //= 1.0 First version. [SuperHulk] //= 1.1 Translations to English. [Flaid] //= 1.1a Standardized. [Euphy] -//= 1.2 Added new NPCs [Flaid] +//= 1.2 Added new NPCs. [Flaid] //============================================================ mora,185,163,5 script Mora Citizen#1 516,{ @@ -139,31 +139,33 @@ mora,52,138,8 script Mora Citizen#2 516,{ mora,160,123,5 script Mora Citizen#3 517,{ mes "[Boudril]"; - mes "Hey,"; - mes "you seem to be so far from home!"; - mes "Mora is a remote town"; - mes "that's why we have our own currency here!"; + mes "Hey, you seem to be"; + mes "so far from home!"; + mes "Mora is a remote town."; + mes "That's why we have"; + mes "own currency here!"; next; mes "[Boudril]"; mes "Beyond that, our community"; mes "developed this craft."; - mes "Items found here,"; - mes "cannot be found anywhere else!"; + mes "Items found here cannot"; + mes "be found anywhere else!"; close; } mora,105,100,3 script Mora Citizen#4 518,{ mes "[Buisso]"; - mes "Hello my friend,"; - mes "what brings you to this place, so far from home?"; - mes "Are you looking for challange?"; + mes "Hello, my friend."; + mes "What brings you to this"; + mes "place, so far from home?"; + mes "Are you looking for a challange?"; mes "You won't be disappointed here!"; next; mes "[Buisso]"; - mes "We are surrounded by the Bifrost"; - mes "an area with monsters,"; - mes "powerful and deceitful..."; - mes "So cute but still dangerous."; + mes "We are surrounded by the"; + mes "Bifrost, an area with powerful"; + mes "and deceitful monsters..."; + mes "So cute, but still dangerous."; close; } @@ -175,10 +177,10 @@ mora,98,104,4 script Mora Citizen#5 516,{ mes "My dream was to be like you!"; next; mes "[Malavida]"; - mes "Travel around the world,"; + mes "Traveling around the world,"; mes "chasing monsters,"; - mes "hunt treasures all of the world..."; - mes "You have the chance... Use it!"; + mes "hunting treasure..."; + mes "You have the chance. Use it!"; close; } @@ -186,20 +188,22 @@ mora,102,107,6 script Mora Citizen#6 517,{ mes "[Skape]"; mes "Have you tasted our dish?"; mes "The beef toast!?"; - mes "What about this delicious beef"; - mes "that only exists in the Bifrost?"; + mes "This delicious beef only"; + mes "exists in the Bifrost!"; next; mes "[Skape]"; - mes "If you want to taste this dish"; - mes "visit our chef."; - mes "He makes the best Mora toast beef!"; + mes "If you want to taste this"; + mes "dish, visit our chef."; + mes "He makes the best"; + mes "Mora beef toast!"; close; } mora,101,107,4 script Mora Citizen#7 518,{ mes "[Wouadel Kami]"; mes "*Dances*"; - mes "I'm a choreographer, but nobody understands me."; + mes "I'm a choreographer, but"; + mes "nobody understands me."; mes "*doridori*"; mes "*bingbing*"; mes "*bangbang*"; @@ -209,8 +213,8 @@ mora,101,107,4 script Mora Citizen#7 518,{ mora,103,100,6 script Mora Citizen#8 518,{ mes "[Didier Lans]"; mes "Yooo gaba gaba!"; - mes "Hello my dear, you've heard"; - mes "about my teaching, isn't it that?"; + mes "Hello, my dear. You've heard"; + mes "about my teachings, have you?"; mes "Do not hit your friends!"; mes "*makes small steps backwards*"; next; @@ -219,61 +223,62 @@ mora,103,100,6 script Mora Citizen#8 518,{ mes "Eat your vegetables."; mes "*is the fool*"; mes "Be smart, be polite!"; - mes "Yooo Gaba Gaba!"; + mes "Yooo gaba gaba!"; close; } mora,184,169,3 script Mora Citizen#9 516,{ mes "[Moussa Wi]"; - mes "Bleh, I've been here"; - mes "for too long."; - mes "Live with this dogs..."; - mes "Nothing to do..."; - mes "Hmmm, how about you take care of them?"; + mes "Bleh, I've been"; + mes "here for too long."; + mes "Living with these dogs..."; + mes "Having nothing to do..."; + mes "Hmm, how about you"; + mes "take care of them?"; close; } mora,108,182,3 script Mora Citizen#10 516,{ mes "[Yosou Keh]"; - mes "Hello,"; - mes "I am Yosou Keh!"; - mes "I am a resident of Mora"; + mes "Hello!"; + mes "I am Yosou Keh,"; + mes "a resident of Mora."; mes "The Bifrost is populated"; - mes "by all these strong monsters..."; + mes "with many strong monsters..."; close; } mora,113,185,5 script Mora Citizen#11 516,{ mes "[Ninkasi]"; - mes "Hey dude."; - mes "How are you today dude?"; - mes "What can I do for you dude?"; + mes "Hey, dude."; + mes "How are you today, dude?"; + mes "What can I do for you, dude?"; next; - switch(select("Why do you call me dude?:Goodbye.")) { + switch(select("Why do you call me 'dude'?:Goodbye.")) { case 1: mes "[Ninkasi]"; mes "Why not?"; - mes "Calling others dude is my brand mark."; - mes "Be cool dude, relax yourself!"; - mes "Enjoy your life dude!"; - break; + mes "Calling others 'dude'"; + mes "is my brand mark."; + mes "Be cool, dude, relax!"; + mes "Enjoy your life, dude!"; + close; case 2: mes "[Ninkasi]"; mes "See you again, dude!"; - break; + close; } - close; } mora,43,127,4 script Mora Citizen#12 522,{ mes "[Glouti Vori]"; - mes "Hmmm, I love this beef toast!"; - mes "That's the only reason I am still here!"; - mes "There's nothing better than Mora beef toast!"; + mes "Mm, I love this beef toast!"; + mes "That's the only reason I'm"; + mes "still here! There's nothing"; + mes "better than Mora beef toast!"; close; } -//=================================== mora,35,119,7 script South World Dealer 513,{ mes "[South World Dealer]"; mes "..."; @@ -282,25 +287,35 @@ mora,35,119,7 script South World Dealer 513,{ mora,139,102,4 script Milvida 515,{ mes "[Milvida]"; - mes "Welcome to Mora~ In the center of the city you can find all shops and some enchanters."; + mes "Welcome to Mora~"; + mes "In the center of the city"; + mes "you can find all the shops"; + mes "and some enchanters."; next; mes "[Milvida]"; - mes "Northeast of the city is where you can find food here."; + mes "Northeast of the city is"; + mes "where the food is located."; close; } mora,55,124,2 script Cat Traveler 495,{ mes "[Cat Traveler]"; - mes "This city is like Malangdo on several aspects, don't you think?"; + mes "This city is like Malangdo"; + mes "in several aspects,"; + mes "don't you think?"; close; } -mora,131,165,4 script Bifrost resident#1 520,{ +mora,131,165,4 script Bifrost Resident#1 520,{ mes "[Bifrost resident]"; - mes "Welcome to the workshop of the west clan."; - mes "If you want your Loki Muffler enchanted, please contact my boss, he makes miracles!"; + mes "Welcome to the workshop"; + mes "of the west clan. If you"; + mes "want your Loki Muffler"; + mes "enchanted, please contact"; + mes "my boss. He makes miracles!"; next; mes "[Bifrost resident]"; - mes "P/S: On a side note, I think I am really cute... Don't you think?"; + mes "On a side note... I think I'm"; + mes "really cute, don't you agree?"; close; }
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