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-rw-r--r--npc/Changelog.txt1
-rw-r--r--npc/cities/aldebaran.txt71
2 files changed, 37 insertions, 35 deletions
diff --git a/npc/Changelog.txt b/npc/Changelog.txt
index b06381a7a..3ee186b43 100644
--- a/npc/Changelog.txt
+++ b/npc/Changelog.txt
@@ -40,6 +40,7 @@ Date Added
======
06/29
* Fixed many typos on cities/alberta.txt and airports/airships.txt, with information from Crono/Hollengrhen [Evera]
+ - Fixed many typos on cities/aldebaran.txt [Evera]
* Stricted up penal servitude conditions [Lupus]
- Restricted Novices Castles entrance of TK/Highs to 80 BaseLevel
06/28
diff --git a/npc/cities/aldebaran.txt b/npc/cities/aldebaran.txt
index f3314168c..decb9bdb7 100644
--- a/npc/cities/aldebaran.txt
+++ b/npc/cities/aldebaran.txt
@@ -21,6 +21,7 @@
//= 1.6 Fixed bug (missing label), optimized all menus [Lupus]
//= 1.7 Fixed exploits [Lupus]
//= 1.8 Removed Duplicates [Silent]
+//= 1.9 Fixed a bunch of typos with information from Crono/Hollengrhen [Evera]
//============================================================
@@ -101,7 +102,7 @@ M_Menu:
mes "[Quatro]";
mes "People say his wife is ill. She constantly needs medicinal herbs that grow near town.";
- mes "Also he has a devoted son, who helps him out with his work.";
+ mes "Also, he has a devoted son who helps him out with his work.";
next;
mes "[Quatro]";
mes "I hope his son will be a good blacksmith in the future.";
@@ -148,13 +149,13 @@ M_Menu:
mes "You must travel through the Payon Forest if you wish to visit Alberta or Payon.";
next;
mes "[Isenberg]";
- mes "The Payon Forest is large and it's pathways are very intricate. It is easy to get lost and confused in it.";
+ mes "The Payon Forest is large and its pathways are very intricate. It is easy to get lost and confused in it.";
next;
mes "[Isenberg]";
mes "Unless you have good concentration and a strong will, you will find yourself giving up trying to pass through it.";
next;
mes "[Isenberg]";
- mes "The forest was named after Payon, the village of independence instead of Alberta, the harbor town.";
+ mes "The forest was named after Payon, the village of independence, instead of Alberta, the harbor town.";
next;
mes "[Isenberg]";
mes "Payon was built deep within the rugged forest with the intention of providing protection from outside influence.";
@@ -290,7 +291,7 @@ aldebaran.gat,93,80,4 script Daniel 48,{
menu "Gosh, that's too bad.",-,".....",M_1;
mes "[Daniel]";
- mes "*~Sigh~* Yeah it really is. You see my girl friend is the Armor Merchants youngest daughter.";
+ mes "*~Sigh~* Yeah it really is. You see my girl friend is the Armor Merchant's youngest daughter.";
mes "She told me once that the armor that's dropped by monsters is often times much better than the kind sold in shops.";
next;
mes "[Daniel]";
@@ -306,7 +307,7 @@ aldebaran.gat,93,80,4 script Daniel 48,{
// Munster -----------------------------------------------------------------
aldebaran.gat,113,70,2 script Munster 48,{
mes "[Munster]";
- mes "My family used to live in Geffen, the homeland of blacksmith. We moved to Al De Baran last winter.";
+ mes "My family used to live in Geffen, the homeland of blacksmiths. We moved to Al De Baran last winter.";
next;
mes "[Munster]";
mes "Back in Geffen my father was a famous blacksmith. Sometimes I helped my father with his work";
@@ -327,40 +328,40 @@ aldebaran.gat,113,70,2 script Munster 48,{
mes "Maybe it's because we just moved here, but for some reason people don't seem to know that my fathers workshop is now located in Al De Baran,";
next;
mes "[Munster]";
- mes "Any who, I hope people will come to re-acquaint themselves with my fathers superior craftsmanship.";
+ mes "Any who, I hope people will come to re-acquaint themselves with my father's superior craftsmanship.";
close;
}
// Phracon Guy --------------------------------------------------------------
-aldebaran.gat,117,181,4 script Pharacon Guy 48,{
+aldebaran.gat,117,181,4 script Phracon Guy 48,{
mes "[Phracon Guy]";
- mes "Lv 1 weapons require a metal called 'Pharacon' to be upgraded.";
+ mes "Lv 1 weapons require a metal called 'Phracon' to be upgraded.";
next;
- menu "About Pharacon",-,"Advice about Phracon",M_1,"End Conversation",M_End;
+ menu "About Phracon",-,"Advice about Phracon",M_1,"End Conversation",M_End;
- mes "[Pharacon Guy]";
+ mes "[Phracon Guy]";
mes "It's a very common metal found throughout Rune-Midgard and is used almost exclusively for weapon upgrading.";
next;
- mes "[Pharacon Guy]";
+ mes "[Phracon Guy]";
mes "Although it's not as strong as other metals, it remains popular among most people because of its abundance.";
next;
- mes "[Pharacon Guy]";
- mes "You can obtain Pharacon from monsters or you can purchase it from Forging Workshops located in towns.";
+ mes "[Phracon Guy]";
+ mes "You can obtain Phracon from monsters or you can purchase it from Forging Workshops located in towns.";
next;
- mes "[Pharacon Guy]";
- mes "If you don't need Pharacon for upgrading purposes then you can sell it for 100 zeny a piece to NPC's!";
+ mes "[Phracon Guy]";
+ mes "If you don't need Phracon for upgrading purposes then you can sell it for 100 zeny a piece to NPC's!";
close;
M_1:
- mes "[Pharacon Guy]";
- mes "I hear that a lot of monsters carry Pharacon. Why don't you go hunt them?";
- mes "You should be able to find a lot of Pharacon without much trouble.";
+ mes "[Phracon Guy]";
+ mes "I hear that a lot of monsters carry Phracon. Why don't you go hunt them?";
+ mes "You should be able to find a lot of Phracon without much trouble.";
next;
- mes "[Pharacon Guy]";
- mes "A couple of days ago, I went hunting with the Pub Master and got a Pharacon dropped from Bebe Savage.";
+ mes "[Phracon Guy]";
+ mes "A couple of days ago, I went hunting with the Pub Master and got a Phracon dropped from Bebe Savage.";
close;
M_End:
- mes "[Pharacon Guy]";
- mes "Good luck on finding some Pharacon -";
+ mes "[Phracon Guy]";
+ mes "Good luck on finding some Phracon -";
close;
}
@@ -408,11 +409,11 @@ M_Menu:
mes "Armor dropped by monsters however, will usually have a high number of slots on them. They aren't dropped too often though.";
next;
mes "[Alchemy Guy Chemirre]";
- mes "In order to use a card you must first unequipped the piece of equipment you want to insert the card into.";
+ mes "In order to use a card you must first unequip the piece of equipment you want to insert the card into.";
mes "Next find your card in your inventory window and double click it.";
next;
mes "[Alchemy Guy Chemirre]";
- mes "A window will pop up showing you what equipment the card can be inserted in. Choose the one you want, and your done.";
+ mes "A window will pop up showing you what equipment the card can be inserted in. Choose the one you want, and you're done.";
close;
M_End:
mes "[Alchemy Guy Chemirre]";
@@ -424,7 +425,7 @@ M_Menu:
// Anastasia --------------------------------------------------------------
aldebaran.gat,146,124,4 script Anastasia 101,{
mes "[Anastasia]";
- mes "Somewhere in Rune-Edgardo's there exists the ^3355FF' Assassin Guild '^000000.";
+ mes "Somewhere in Rune-Midgard exists the^3355FF' Assassin Guild '^000000.";
next;
mes "[Anastasia]";
mes "It's a place that trains people in the art of assassinating someone without leaving behind the slightest trace.";
@@ -500,7 +501,7 @@ aldebaran.gat,180,46,4 script Joo Jahk 88,{
menu "Continue.",-,"End conversation.",M_End;
mes "[Joo Jahk]";
- mes "I been traveling around Rune-Midgard.";
+ mes "I've been traveling around Rune-Midgard.";
next;
mes "[Joo Jahk]";
mes "On the way here, I heard about ^3355FFSpiritual Property Monsters^000000 from a really high level Magician";
@@ -587,15 +588,15 @@ aldeba_in.gat,156,179,4 script Master#02 61,{
menu "Oh~it turns me on!!!!",-,"No way..I am not a pervert.",M_1;
mes "[Master]";
- mes "Alright, here you go, your Favorite Ladies!!! Take a carefull look!";
+ mes "Alright, here you go, your Favorite Ladies!!! Take a careful look!";
next;
mes "[Master]";
mes " - Kafra Number (1) ^3355FF'Pavianne'^000000 !!";
mes "The Original Kafra, the classic blue haired beauty!...";
mes " - Kafra Number (2) ^9A01BA'Blossom'^000000 !!";
- mes "Her graceful ponytail takes men's breaths away! She's a favorite among young Boys!!";
+ mes "Her graceful ponytail takes men's breaths away! She's a favorite among young boys!!";
mes " - Kafra Number (3) ^0000FF'Jasmine'^000000 !!";
- mes "Long, straight, silky hair is what gives her her charm. She is the Silk from the East ~! From payon,....";
+ mes "Long, straight, silky hair is what gives her her charm. She is the Silk from the East ~! From Payon,....";
next;
mes "[Master]";
mes " - Kafra Number (4) ^FF8040'Roxie'^000000 !!";
@@ -611,7 +612,7 @@ aldeba_in.gat,156,179,4 script Master#02 61,{
menu "(1) Pavianne",-,"(2) Blossom",M_01,"(3) Jasmine",M_02,"(4) Roxie",M_03,"(5) Leilah",M_04,"(6) Curly Sue.",M_05;
mes "[Master]";
- mes "Oh~ So your reserved in nature, and therefore you are into a more traditional type of girl...";
+ mes "Oh~ So you're reserved in nature, and therefore you are into a more traditional type of girl...";
next;
mes "[Master]";
mes "Well, I have to tell you.....";
@@ -706,11 +707,11 @@ aldeba_in.gat,219,61,4 script Nice Looking Guy 109,{
mes "Forget about the doofus living next door.";
next;
mes "[Nice Looking Guy]";
- mes "To tell you the truth, 2 years earlier, he fell down from a tree in the Drill Field and since then his mind has been out of control.";
+ mes "To tell you the truth, 2 years ago, he fell down from a tree in the Drill Field and since then his mind has been out of control.";
mes "I heard he was trying to pick some fruits from that tree.";
next;
mes "[Nice Looking Guy]";
- mes "Anyways, he's constantly bugging me and I think I'm gonna be crazy because of him... Oh my goodness!";
+ mes "Anyway, he's constantly bugging me and I think I'm gonna be crazy because of him... Oh my goodness!";
close;
}
@@ -750,7 +751,7 @@ aldeba_in.gat,223,121,2 script Evil looking Guy 63,{
mes "Finally, a Mercenary is obligated to provide 100% customer assistance and support!!!";
next;
mes "[Evil Looking Guy]";
- mes "Oh and don't forget to change a Mercenary's' wet tissues as well!!";
+ mes "Oh and don't forget to change a Mercenary's wet tissues as well!!";
close;
M_1:
mes "[Evil Looking Guy]";
@@ -824,7 +825,7 @@ aldeba_in.gat,79,161,6 script Kafra#04 115,{
mes "Welcome, ^6666FF" + strcharinfo(0) + "^000000. This is where you can trade in your special reserve points for useful items and cool prizes.";
next;
mes "[Kafra]";
- mes "Each Kafra will allow to trade in reserve points of varying amounts. I can trade in reserve points starting from ^2222FF100 pts up to 3000 pts^000000.";
+ mes "Each Kafra will allow you to trade in reserve points of varying amounts. I can trade in reserve points starting from ^2222FF100 pts up to 3000 pts^000000.";
next;
mes "[Kafra]";
mes "The amount of special reserve points that you have is: ^FF0000"+RESRVPTS+"^000000 pts. Please make a choice based on your point total.";
@@ -1197,7 +1198,7 @@ aldeba_in.gat,81,166,4 script Kafra Pavianee 117,{
mes "No, but why is the sun not shining?";
next;
mes "[Kafra Pavianne]";
- mes "You will only know, when enjoyment cease the guide to illumination.";
+ mes "You will only know when your enjoyment obtains the path to illumination.";
cutin "kafra_01",255;
close;
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