- Some minor improvements in the instance Scripts.

- Some minor improvements in the Eden Group NPC's.
- Fixed typo in Wanderer Pet Food NPC. bugreport:5823

git-svn-id: https://rathena.svn.sourceforge.net/svnroot/rathena/trunk@16151 54d463be-8e91-2dee-dedb-b68131a5f0ec

1 files changed, 435 insertions, 546 deletions

diff --git a/npc/quests/eden/71-85.txt b/npc/quests/eden/71-85.txt
index d44e4882e..f3661a357 100644
--- a/npc/quests/eden/71-85.txt
+++ b/npc/quests/eden/71-85.txt
@@ -1,272 +1,247 @@
-//===== rAthena Script ======================================= 
-// Eden Group Quests - Experience quests [71-85]
-//===== By: ================================================== 
+//===== rAthena Script =======================================
+// Eden Group Quests - Mission [71 - 85]
+//===== By: ==================================================
 //= L0ne_W0lf
-//===== Current Version: ===================================== 
-//= 1.0
-//===== Compatible With: ===================================== 
+//===== Current Version: =====================================
+//= 1.1
+//===== Compatible With: =====================================
 //= rAthena SVN
-//===== Description: ========================================= 
-//= [AEGIS Conversion]
-//===== Additional Comments: ================================= 
+//===== Description: =========================================
+//= Repetable Quests for Players between Baselevel 70 - 86 .
+//===== Additional Comments: =================================
 //= 1.0 First Version.
+//= 1.1 Some little optimization here and there. [Masao]
 //============================================================
 
-moc_para01,44,38,3	script	Request [71 - 85]	857,{
+moc_para01,44,38,3	script	Mission [71 - 85]	857,{
 	if (countitem(6219) < 1) {
-		mes "-It seems to be a special-.";
-		mes "-board that only a person-";
-		mes "-who has an Eden Group-";
-		mes "-Mark can read.-";
+		mes "- Only members of the -";
+		mes "- Eden Group can read -";
+		mes "- this bulletin board. -";
 		close;
 	}
-	mes "-There are many kinds of-";
-	mes "-hunting requests written-";
+	mes "- Many hunting missions -";
+	mes "- are on the bulletin board. -";
 	next;
 	if ((BaseLevel > 70) && (BaseLevel < 86)) {
-		switch(select("Sphinx dungeon district:Glast Heim district:Juno district:Clock Tower district:Island districts")) {
+		switch (select("Sphinx Dungeon:Glast Heim:Juno Area:Clock Tower:Localized Islands")) {
 		case 1:
-			mes "-Sphinx dungeon district-";
-			mes "-I am Meidi who lives in-";
-			mes "-Morocc. I want to hunt-";
-			mes "-monsters in Sphinx-";
-			mes "- dungeon. I will wait in-";
-			mes "-front of the west gate.-";
+			mes "- Sphinx Dungeon -";
+			mes "- I am Meidi who lives -";
+			mes "- in Morocc. I want to hunt -";
+			mes "- monsters in the Sphinx -";
+			mes "- Dungeon. I will wait for -";
+			mes "- you in front of the -";
+			mes "- western gate. -";
 			next;
-			switch(select("Take a mission.:Ignore the mission.")) {
+			switch (select("Accept mission.:Decline mission.")) {
 			case 1:
-				if ((slv_quest == 2) || (slv_quest == 3) || (slv_quest == 4) || (slv_quest == 5) || (slv_quest == 6)) {
-					mes "-You are already doing-";
-					mes "-another mission.-";
-					mes "-It's really confusing to do-";
-					mes "-many missions at once.-";
-					mes "-Finish those first.-";
+				if (slv_quest == 2 || slv_quest == 3 || slv_quest == 4 || slv_quest == 5 || slv_quest == 6) {
+					mes "- You are already on -";
+					mes "- another mission. -";
+					mes "- You can't do multiple -";
+					mes "- missions. Finish your -";
+					mes "- current mission first. -";
 					close;
 				}
-				set .@slv_chk1,checkquest(10102);
-				if (.@slv_chk1 == -1) {
+				if (checkquest(10102) == 0) {
 					setquest 10102;
 					set slv_quest,1;
-					mes "-Good. Now to find Meidi-";
-					mes "-at Morroc's western gate-";
+					mes "- Good. Now go find Meidi -";
+					mes "- at the western gate -";
+					mes "- in Morroc. -";
 					close;
 				}
-				else {
-					mes "-You are already on-";
-					mes "-another mission or have-";
-					mes "-recently completed one-";
-					mes "-so you can't take on-";
-					mes "-anymore right now.-";
-					close;
-				}
-				break;
+				mes "- You are already on -";
+				mes "- or have recently -";
+				mes "- completed a mission. -";
+				mes "- You can't do anymore -";
+				mes "- missions right now. -";
+				close;
 			case 2:
-				mes "-I don't want to do-";
-				mes "-this right now-";
+				mes "- I don't want to do -";
+				mes "- a mission right now. -";
 				close;
 			}
-			break;
 		case 2:
-			mes "-Glast Heim district-";
-			mes "-I am Ancellia. -";
-			mes "-I need help to hunt-";
-			mes "-monsters in Glastheim-";
-			mes "-please help me-";
+			mes "- Glast Heim -";
+			mes "- I am Ancellia. -";
+			mes "- I need some help -";
+			mes "- hunting monsters -";
+			mes "- in Glast Heim.-";
+			mes "- Please help me. -";
 			next;
-			switch(select("Take a mission.:Ignore the mission.")) {
+			switch (select("Accept mission.:Decline mission.")) {
 			case 1:
-				if ((slv_quest == 1) || (slv_quest == 3) || (slv_quest == 4) || (slv_quest == 5) || (slv_quest == 6)) {
-					mes "-You are already doing-";
-					mes "-another mission.-";
-					mes "-It's really confusing to do-";
-					mes "-many missions at once.-";
-					mes "-Finish those first.-";
+				if (slv_quest == 1 || slv_quest == 3 || slv_quest == 4 || slv_quest == 5 || slv_quest == 6) {
+					mes "- You are already on -";
+					mes "- another mission. -";
+					mes "- You can't do multiple -";
+					mes "- missions. Finish your -";
+					mes "- current mission first. -";
 					close;
 				}
-				set .@slv_chk1,checkquest(10103);
-				if (.@slv_chk1 == -1) {
+				if (checkquest(10103) == 0) {
 					setquest 10103;
 					set slv_quest,2;
-					mes "-I better find Ancellia-";
-					close;
-				}
-				else {
-					mes "-You are already on-";
-					mes "-another mission or have-";
-					mes "-recently completed one-";
-					mes "-so you can't take on-";
-					mes "-anymore right now.-";
+					mes "- Look for Ancellia. -";
+					mes "- in Geffen. -";
 					close;
 				}
-				break;
+				mes "- You are already on -";
+				mes "- or have recently -";
+				mes "- completed a mission. -";
+				mes "- You can't do anymore -";
+				mes "- missions right now. -";
+				close;
 			case 2:
-				mes "-I don't want to do-";
-				mes "-this right now-";
+				mes "- I don't want to do -";
+				mes "- a mission right now. -";
 				close;
 			}
-			break;
 		case 3:
-			mes "-Juno district-";
-			mes "-I want to go to Juno,-";
-			mes "-but monsters on the way-";
-			mes "-are too strong for me.-";
-			mes "-Visit me in Aldebaran-";
-			mes "-My name is Jeanbai-";
+			mes "- Juno Area -";
+			mes "- I want to go to Juno, -";
+			mes "- but the monsters on -";
+			mes "- the way there are too -";
+			mes "- strong for me. Come -";
+			mes "- visit me in Al De Baran. -";
+			mes "- My name is Jeanbai. -";
 			next;
-			switch(select("Take a mission.:Ignore the mission.")) {
+			switch (select("Accept mission.:Decline mission.")) {
 			case 1:
-				if ((slv_quest == 1) || (slv_quest == 2) || (slv_quest == 4) || (slv_quest == 5) || (slv_quest == 6)) {
-					mes "-You are already doing-";
-					mes "-another mission.-";
-					mes "-It's really confusing to do-";
-					mes "-many missions at once.-";
-					mes "-Finish those first.-";
+				if (slv_quest == 1 || slv_quest == 2 || slv_quest == 4 || slv_quest == 5 || slv_quest == 6) {
+					mes "- You are already on -";
+					mes "- another mission. -";
+					mes "- You can't do multiple -";
+					mes "- missions. Finish your -";
+					mes "- current mission first. -";
 					close;
 				}
-				set .@slv_chk1,checkquest(10104);
-				if (.@slv_chk1 == -1) {
+				if (checkquest(10104) == 0) {
 					setquest 10104;
 					set slv_quest,3;
-					mes "I better find Jeanbai-";
-					mes "-in Al De Baran.-";
-					close;
-				}
-				else {
-					mes "-You are already on-";
-					mes "-another mission or have-";
-					mes "-recently completed one-";
-					mes "-so you can't take on-";
-					mes "-anymore right now.-";
+					mes "- Look for Jeanbai -";
+					mes "- in Al De Baran. -";
 					close;
 				}
-				break;
+				mes "- You are already on -";
+				mes "- or have recently -";
+				mes "- completed a mission. -";
+				mes "- You can't do anymore -";
+				mes "- missions right now. -";
+				close;
 			case 2:
-				mes "-I don't want to do-";
-				mes "-this right now-";
+				mes "- I don't want to do -";
+				mes "- a mission right now. -";
 				close;
 			}
-			break;
 		case 4:
-			mes "-Clock Tower district-";
-			mes "-Watch is the best thing!-";
-			mes "-I'm asking to hunt some-";
-			mes "-monsters in clock tower.-";
-			mes "-Lizingshetter-";
+			mes "- Clock Tower -";
+			mes "- A Clock is the best thing! -";
+			mes "- I'm asking you to hunt -";
+			mes "- some monster inside of.-";
+			mes "- the Clock Tower, -";
+			mes "- Risingeter. -";
 			next;
-			switch(select("Take a mission.:Ignore the mission.")) {
+			switch (select("Accept mission.:Decline mission.")) {
 			case 1:
-				if ((slv_quest == 1) || (slv_quest == 2) || (slv_quest == 3) || (slv_quest == 5) || (slv_quest == 6)) {
-					mes "-You are already doing-";
-					mes "-another mission.-";
-					mes "-It's really confusing to do-";
-					mes "-many missions at once.-";
-					mes "-Finish those first.-";
+				if (slv_quest == 1 || slv_quest == 2 || slv_quest == 4 || slv_quest == 5 || slv_quest == 6) {
+					mes "- You are already on -";
+					mes "- another mission. -";
+					mes "- You can't do multiple -";
+					mes "- missions. Finish your -";
+					mes "- current mission first. -";
 					close;
 				}
-				set .@slv_chk1,checkquest(10105);
-				if (.@slv_chk1 == -1) {
+				if (checkquest(10105) == 0) {
 					setquest 10105;
 					set slv_quest,4;
-					mes "-Time to find Lizingshetter-";
-					mes "-in front of Clock Tower-";
-					close;
-				}
-				else {
-					mes "-You are already on-";
-					mes "-another mission or have-";
-					mes "-recently completed one-";
-					mes "-so you can't take on-";
-					mes "-anymore right now.-";
+					mes "- Look for Risingeter -";
+					mes "- in front of the -";
+					mes "- Clock Tower. -";
 					close;
 				}
-				break;
+				mes "- You are already on -";
+				mes "- or have recently -";
+				mes "- completed a mission. -";
+				mes "- You can't do anymore -";
+				mes "- missions right now. -";
+				close;
 			case 2:
-				mes "-I don't want to do-";
-				mes "-this right now-";
+				mes "- I don't want to do -";
+				mes "- a mission right now. -";
 				close;
 			}
-			break;
 		case 5:
-			mes "-Island districts-";
-			mes "-I need a person who-";
-			mes "-who can hunt mosters-";
-			mes "-From Funfi in Alberta-";
+			mes "- Localized Islands -";
+			mes "- I need someone who -";
+			mes "- can hunt monsters -";
+			mes "- for Funfi in Alberta. -";
 			next;
-			switch(select("Take a mission.:Ignore the mission.")) {
+			switch (select("Accept mission.:Decline mission.")) {
 			case 1:
-				if ((slv_quest == 1) || (slv_quest == 2) || (slv_quest == 3) || (slv_quest == 4) || (slv_quest == 6)) {
-					mes "-You are already doing-";
-					mes "-another mission.-";
-					mes "-It's really confusing to do-";
-					mes "-many missions at once.-";
-					mes "-Finish those first.-";
+				if (slv_quest == 1 || slv_quest == 2 || slv_quest == 3 || slv_quest == 4 || slv_quest == 6) {
+					mes "- You are already on -";
+					mes "- another mission. -";
+					mes "- You can't do multiple -";
+					mes "- missions. Finish your -";
+					mes "- current mission first. -";
 					close;
 				}
-				set .@slv_chk1,checkquest(10106);
-				if (.@slv_chk1 == -1) {
+				if (checkquest(10106) == 0) {
 					setquest 10106;
 					set slv_quest,5;
-					mes "-I better find Funfi-";
-					mes "-in Alberta-";
+					mes "- Loof for Funfi -";
+					mes "- in Alberta. -";
 					close;
 				}
-				else {
-					mes "-You are already on-";
-					mes "-another mission or have-";
-					mes "-recently completed one-";
-					mes "-so you can't take on-";
-					mes "-anymore right now.-";
-					close;
-				}
-				break;
+				mes "- You are already on -";
+				mes "- or have recently -";
+				mes "- completed a mission. -";
+				mes "- You can't do anymore -";
+				mes "- missions right now. -";
+				close;
 			case 2:
-				mes "-I don't want to do-";
-				mes "-this right now-";
+				mes "- I don't want to do -";
+				mes "- a mission right now. -";
 				close;
 			}
-			break;
 		}
-		close;
-	}
-	else {
-		mes "-This board can only be-";
-		mes "-read by those who are-";
-		mes "-of the correct level-";
-		mes "-there might be another-";
-		mes "-board somewhere for-";
-		mes "-my level.-";
-		close;
 	}
+	mes "- Only members of the -";
+	mes "- right level can read -";
+	mes "- this bulletin board. -";
+	mes "- Try to find a board -";
+	mes "- that suits your level. -";
+	close;
 }
 
-morocc,35,174,5	script	Meidi#para	729,{
-	set .@chk_sping1,checkquest(10107);
-	set .@chk_sping2,checkquest(10108);
-	set .@chk_sping3,checkquest(10109);
-	if ((.@chk_sping1 == 2) && (.@chk_sping2 == 2) && (.@chk_sping3 == 2) && (slv_quest == 6)) {
+morocc,35,174,5	script	Meidi	729,{
+
+	if ((checkquest(10107) == 2) && (checkquest(10108) == 2) && (checkquest(10109) == 2) && (slv_quest == 6)) {
 		set slv_quest,0;
 		mes "[Meidi]";
-		mes "You have completed the monster hunting mission.";
-		mes "I don't have anymore missions to give you.";
+		mes "You have completed the hunting missions.";
+		mes "I don't have anymore missions for you.";
 		mes "Thanks, you did a great job!";
 		close;
 	}
-	if ((.@chk_sping1 == 0) || (.@chk_sping2 == 0) || (.@chk_sping3 == 0) || (.@chk_sping1 == 1) || (.@chk_sping2 == 1) || (.@chk_sping3 == 1)) {
+	if (checkquest(10107) == 1 || checkquest(10108) == 1 || checkquest(10109) == 1) {
 		mes "[Meidi]";
 		mes "Wow! How did you come back so fast?";
 		mes "What monster did you hunt?";
 		next;
-		switch(select("Requiem:Marduk:Pasana")) {
+		switch (select("Requiem:Marduk:Pasana")) {
 		case 1:
-			set .@chk_req,checkquest(10107,HUNTING);
-			if (.@chk_req == 2) {
+			if (checkquest(10107,HUNTING) == 2) {
 				mes "[Meidi]";
-				mes "You hunted all 10 Requiem.";
+				mes "You've hunted all 10 Requim.";
 				mes "Thank you very much.";
 				next;
 				mes "[Meidi]";
 				mes "I know it isn't much but here's a small gift.";
-				mes "I hope that it helps you at least a little bit.";
+				mes "I hope that it will be helpfull to you.";
 				next;
 				completequest 10107;
 				getexp 48000,0;
@@ -275,24 +250,20 @@ morocc,35,174,5	script	Meidi#para	729,{
 				mes "Good luck.";
 				close;
 			}
-			else {
-				mes "[Meidi]";
-				mes "Umm? You didn't hunt";
-				mes "all 10 Requiem yet...";
-				mes "Will you check again?";
-				close;
-			}
-			break;
+			mes "[Meidi]";
+			mes "You didn't hunt 10 Requim yet,";
+			mes "You should make sure that you hunt all of them.";
+			mes "Can you check again?";
+			close;
 		case 2:
-			set .@chk_mar,checkquest(10108,HUNTING);
-			if (.@chk_mar == 2) {
+			if (checkquest(10108,HUNTING) == 2) {
 				mes "[Meidi]";
-				mes "You hunted all 10 Marduk.";
+				mes "You've hunted all 10 Marduk.";
 				mes "Thank you very much.";
 				next;
 				mes "[Meidi]";
 				mes "I know it isn't much but here's a small gift.";
-				mes "I hope that it helps you at least a little bit.";
+				mes "I hope that it will be helpfull to you.";
 				next;
 				completequest 10108;
 				getexp 48000,0;
@@ -301,25 +272,21 @@ morocc,35,174,5	script	Meidi#para	729,{
 				mes "Good luck.";
 				close;
 			}
-			else {
-				mes "[Meidi]";
-				mes "You didn't hunt 10 Marduk yet.";
-				mes "You should make sure that you hunt all of them.";
-				mes "Will you check again?";
-				close;
-			}
-			break;
+			mes "[Meidi]";
+			mes "You didn't hunt 10 Marduk yet,";
+			mes "You should make sure that you hunt all of them.";
+			mes "Can you check again?";
+			close;
 		case 3:
-			set .@chk_pas,checkquest(10109,HUNTING);
-			if (.@chk_pas == 2) {
+			if (checkquest(10109,HUNTING) == 2) {
 				mes "[Meidi]";
-				mes "Wow, you hunted 10 Pasana.";
+				mes "Wow, you've hunted 10 Pasana.";
 				mes "Cool.";
 				mes "Thank you very much.";
 				next;
 				mes "[Meidi]";
 				mes "I know it isn't much but here's a small gift.";
-				mes "I hope that it helps you at least a little bit.";
+				mes "I hope that it will be helpfull to you.";
 				next;
 				completequest 10109;
 				getexp 48000,0;
@@ -328,57 +295,54 @@ morocc,35,174,5	script	Meidi#para	729,{
 				mes "Good luck.";
 				close;
 			}
-			else {
-				mes "[Meidi]";
-				mes "You didn't hunt 10 Pasana yet.";
-				mes "Will you check it again if you hunted all of them?";
-				close;
-			}
-			break;
+			mes "[Meidi]";
+			mes "You didn't hunt 10 Pasana yet,";
+			mes "You should make sure that you hunt all of them.";
+			mes "Can you check again?";
+			close;
 		}
-		close;
 	}
 	if (slv_quest == 6) {
 		mes "[Meidi]";
-		mes "Sphynx dungeon... many adventurers have come back with injuries.";
-		mes "That place is dangerous.";
-		mes "Somebody should go in there and make it safe for everyone.";
-		mes "Hopefully, soon!";
+		mes "Sphinx Dungeon... many adventurers came back with great injuries.";
+		mes "That place is very dangerous.";
+		mes "Someone should go inside an make it safer for everyone.";
+		mes "Hopefully, very soon!";
 		close;
 	}
 	mes "[Meidi]";
-	mes "Sphynx dungeon... many adventurers have come back with injuries.";
-	mes "That place is dangerous.";
-	mes "Somebody should go in there and make it safe for everyone.";
-	mes "Hopefully, soon!";
+	mes "Sphinx Dungeon... many adventurers came back with great injuries.";
+	mes "That place is very dangerous.";
+	mes "Someone should go inside an make it safer for everyone.";
+	mes "Hopefully, very soon!";
 	next;
 	if (slv_quest == 1) {
 		mes "[Meidi]";
-		mes "Oh! Are you from Eden Group?";
-		mes "Are you here for my request?";
+		mes "Oh! Are you from the Eden Group?";
+		mes "Are you here for my mission?";
 		mes "You came right on time.";
-		mes "I was worried that no one would answer the request I posted up.";
+		mes "I was worried that noone would accept the mission that I posted.";
 		next;
 		mes "[Meidi]";
-		mes "So I need help hunting three";
-		mes "monsters in sphynx dungeon.";
-		mes "get it? Its too dangerous for me so that's why I posted that request.";
+		mes "So, I need help hunting 3 monsters";
+		mes "inside of the Sphinx Dungeon.";
+		mes "Got it? Its too dangerous for me so that's why I posted the mission.";
 		next;
 		mes "[Meidi]";
-		mes "Requiem, Marduk, Pasana...";
-		mes "I heard they are dangerous monsters.";
-		mes "Could you hunt those 10 of each of those monsters?";
-		mes "10 each sounds good enough, right?";
+		mes "Requiem, Marduk and Pasana...";
+		mes "I heard they are very dangerous monsters.";
+		mes "Can you hunt 10 of those monsters?";
+		mes "10 of each sounds good enough, right?";
 		next;
 		mes "[Meidi]";
-		mes "If you succeed, I can give you a small reward for your help.";
+		mes "If you succeed, I will give you a small reward for your help.";
 		next;
-		switch(select("Accept request:Ignore the request")) {
+		switch (select("Accept mission.:Decline mission.")) {
 		case 1:
 			mes "[Meidi]";
 			mes "Oh. Thank you so much.";
-			mes "How I can pay back your effort?";
-			mes "Bless you~";
+			mes "How can I pay you backf or your effort?";
+			mes "May Freya bless you~";
 			next;
 			completequest 10102;
 			setquest 10107;
@@ -386,178 +350,157 @@ morocc,35,174,5	script	Meidi#para	729,{
 			setquest 10109;
 			set slv_quest,6;
 			mes "[Meidi]";
-			mes "Requiem, Marduk, Pasana.";
-			mes "Don't forget and goodluck.";
+			mes "Requiem, Marduk and Pasana.";
+			mes "Don't forget and good luck.";
 			close;
 		case 2:
 			set slv_quest,0;
 			erasequest 10102;
 			mes "[Meidi]";
-			mes "I see. There isn't another way.";
-			mes "I will send a message to Eden Group.";
+			mes "I see. There is no other way.";
+			mes "I will send a message to the Eden Group.";
 			mes "Don't worry and nevermind.";
 			close;
 		}
 	}
-	close;
+	end;
 }
 
-geffen,146,132,3	script	Ancellia#para	906,{
-	set .@chk_glh1,checkquest(10110);
-	set .@chk_glh2,checkquest(10111);
-	set .@chk_glh3,checkquest(10112);
-	set .@chk_glh4,checkquest(10113);
-	if ((.@chk_glh1 == 2) && (.@chk_glh2 == 2) && (.@chk_glh3 == 2) && (.@chk_glh4 == 2) && (slv_quest == 6)) {
+geffen,146,132,3	script	Ancellia	906,{
+	if ((checkquest(10110 == 2)) && (checkquest(10111) == 2) && (checkquest(10112) == 2) && (checkquest(10113) == 2) && (slv_quest == 6)) {
 		set slv_quest,0;
 		mes "[Ancellia]";
-		mes "Wow. You finished all of";
-		mes "my missions. Great!";
-		mes "You are a great supporter.";
-		mes "I will inform the Eden Group of your help.";
+		mes "Wow. You've finished all";
+		mes "of my missions. Great!";
+		mes "You are of great help.";
+		mes "I will inform the Eden Group of your assistance.";
 		mes "You can go back, don't worry.";
 		close;
 	}
-	if ((.@chk_glh1 == 0) || (.@chk_glh2 == 0) || (.@chk_glh3 == 0) || (.@chk_glh4 == 0) || (.@chk_glh1 == 1) || (.@chk_glh2 == 1) || (.@chk_glh3 == 1) || (.@chk_glh4 == 1)) {
+	if (checkquest(10110) == 1 || checkquest(10111) == 1 || checkquest(10112) == 1 || checkquest(10113) == 1) {
 		mes "[Ancellia]";
-		mes "You seem to have hunted all the monsters.";
-		mes "What monsters did you hunt?";
-		mes "Can you remember the name?";
+		mes "You seem to have hunted all of the monsters.";
+		mes "What monster have you hunted?";
+		mes "Do you remember its name?";
 		next;
-		switch(select("Dark Frame:Evil Druid:Wraith:Raydric Archer")) {
+		switch (select("Dark Frame:Evil Druid:Wraith:Raydric Archer")) {
 		case 1:
-			set .@chk_dar,checkquest(10110,HUNTING);
-			if (.@chk_dar == 2) {
+			if (checkquest(10110,HUNTING) == 2) {
 				mes "[Ancellia]";
-				mes "Eliminate 10 Dark Frame.";
+				mes "Ah, you've hunted 10 Dark Frames.";
 				mes "That was pretty difficult!";
 				mes "Thank you very much.";
 				next;
 				completequest 10110;
 				getexp 48000,0;
 				mes "[Ancellia]";
-				mes "Perhaps you can eliminate others also.";
+				mes "Perhaps you can hunt the rest as well.";
 				mes "I will wait for you here.";
 				close;
 			}
-			else {
-				mes "[Ancellia]";
-				mes "Hmm... maybe you were confused.";
-				mes "You didn't hunt all 10 Dark Frames.";
-				mes "Will you check again?";
-				close;
-			}
-			break;
+			mes "[Ancellia]";
+			mes "Hmm... maybe you were confused.";
+			mes "You didn't hunt all 10 Dark Frames.";
+			mes "Can you check again?";
+			close;
 		case 2:
-			set .@chk_eve,checkquest(10111,HUNTING);
-			if (.@chk_eve == 2) {
+			if (checkquest(10111,HUNTING) == 2) {
 				mes "[Ancellia]";
-				mes "Eliminate 10 Evil Druids.";
+				mes "Ah, you've hunted 10 Evil Druids.";
 				mes "That was pretty difficult!";
 				mes "Thank you very much.";
 				next;
 				completequest 10111;
 				getexp 48000,0;
 				mes "[Ancellia]";
-				mes "Perhaps you can eliminate others also.";
+				mes "Perhaps you can hunt the rest as well.";
 				mes "I will wait for you here.";
 				close;
 			}
-			else {
-				mes "[Ancellia]";
-				mes "Hmm... maybe you were confused.";
-				mes "Eliminate 10 Evil Druids.";
-				mes "Will you check again?";
-				close;
-			}
-			break;
+			mes "[Ancellia]";
+			mes "Hmm... maybe you were confused.";
+			mes "You didn't hunt all 10 Evil Druids.";
+			mes "Can you check again?";
+			close;
 		case 3:
-			set .@chk_wra,checkquest(10112,HUNTING);
-			if (.@chk_wra == 2) {
+			if (checkquest(10112,HUNTING) == 2) {
 				mes "[Ancellia]";
-				mes "Eliminate 10 Wraith.";
+				mes "Ah, you've hunted 10 Wraith.";
 				mes "That was pretty difficult!";
 				mes "Thank you very much.";
 				next;
 				completequest 10112;
 				getexp 48000,0;
 				mes "[Ancellia]";
-				mes "Perhaps you can eliminate others also.";
+				mes "Perhaps you can hunt the rest as well.";
 				mes "I will wait for you here.";
 				close;
 			}
-			else {
-				mes "[Ancellia]";
-				mes "Hmm... maybe you were confused.";
-				mes "Eliminate 10 Wraith";
-				mes "Will you check again?";
-				close;
-			}
-			break;
+			mes "[Ancellia]";
+			mes "Hmm... maybe you were confused.";
+			mes "You didn't hunt all 10 Wraith.";
+			mes "Can you check again?";
+			close;
 		case 4:
-			set .@chk_red,checkquest(10113,HUNTING);
-			if (.@chk_red == 2) {
+			if (checkquest(10113,HUNTING) == 2) {
 				mes "[Ancellia]";
-				mes "Eliminate 10 Raydric Archers.";
+				mes "Ah, you've hunted 10 Raydric Archers.";
 				mes "That was pretty difficult!";
 				mes "Thank you very much.";
 				next;
 				completequest 10113;
 				getexp 48000,0;
 				mes "[Ancellia]";
-				mes "Perhaps you can eliminate others also.";
+				mes "Perhaps you can hunt the rest as well.";
 				mes "I will wait for you here.";
 				close;
 			}
-			else {
-				mes "[Ancellia]";
-				mes "Hmm... maybe you were confused.";
-				mes "Eliminate 10 Raydric Archers.";
-				mes "Will you check again?";
-				close;
-			}
-			break;
+			mes "[Ancellia]";
+			mes "Hmm... maybe you were confused.";
+			mes "You didn't hunt all 10 Raydric Archers.";
+			mes "Can you check again?";
+			close;
 		}
 	}
 	if (slv_quest == 6) {
-		// Custom/Copy/Paste
 		mes "[Ancellia]";
 		mes "Go to Glast Heim and kill";
 		mes "Dark Frames, Evil Druids,";
-		mes "Wraith, Raydric Archers.";
+		mes "Wraith and Raydric Archers.";
 		mes "10 of each should do just fine.";
 		close;
 	}
 	mes "[Ancellia]";
-	mes "Glast Heim is far away.";
-	mes "And I hear that the castle was cursed by the ancient king of Prontera.";
-	mes "There is a similar story.";
+	mes "Glast Heim is very far away.";
+	mes "I heared that the castle was cursed by the ancient King of Prontera.";
+	mes "There is a another story.";
 	next;
 	mes "[Ancellia]";
-	mes "One day they came out of the castle and attacked a village it was terrible.";
+	mes "One day the came out of the castle and attacked a nearby village, it was terrible.";
 	mes "That's why I can't stop worrying.";
 	next;
 	if (slv_quest == 2) {
 		mes "[Ancellia]";
-		mes "Oh, you got my request";
+		mes "Oh, you got my mission";
 		mes "from the Eden Group. Great~!";
 		mes "Thank you very much.";
 		next;
 		mes "[Ancellia]";
 		mes "I already explained.";
 		mes "So I expect you understand.";
-		mes "I will hurry to finish.";
-		mes "Dark Frame, Evil Druid,";
-		mes "Wraith, Raydric Archer.";
+		mes "You need to hurry hunting";
+		mes "Dark Frames, Evil Druids,";
+		mes "Wraith and Raydric Archesr.";
 		next;
 		mes "[Ancellia]";
 		mes "You should hunt them all.";
 		mes "These are dangerous monsters so please take care of yourself.";
 		next;
-		switch(select("Accept request:Ignore the request")) {
+		switch (select("Accept mission.:Decline mission.")) {
 		case 1:
 			mes "[Ancellia]";
 			mes "Thanks a lot.";
-			mes "Be careful when you hunt these monsters. Goodluck.";
+			mes "Be careful when you hunt these monsters. Good luck.";
 			next;
 			completequest 10103;
 			setquest 10110;
@@ -567,7 +510,7 @@ geffen,146,132,3	script	Ancellia#para	906,{
 			set slv_quest,6;
 			mes "[Ancellia]";
 			mes "Remember, Dark Frames,";
-			mes "Evil Druids, Wraiths,";
+			mes "Evil Druids, Wraiths";
 			mes "and Raydric Archers.";
 			close;
 		case 2:
@@ -579,160 +522,139 @@ geffen,146,132,3	script	Ancellia#para	906,{
 			close;
 		}
 	}
-	close;
+	end;
 }
 
-aldebaran,144,230,3	script	Jeanbai#para	900,{
-	set .@chk_yun1,checkquest(10114);
-	set .@chk_yun2,checkquest(10115);
-	set .@chk_yun3,checkquest(10116);
-	set .@chk_yun4,checkquest(10117);
-	if ((.@chk_yun1 == 2) && (.@chk_yun2 == 2) && (.@chk_yun3 == 2) && (.@chk_yun4 == 2) && (slv_quest == 6)) {
+aldebaran,144,230,3	script	Jeanbai	900,{
+	if ((checkquest(10114) == 2) && (checkquest(10115) == 2) && (checkquest(10116) == 2) && (checkquest(10117) == 2) && (slv_quest == 6)) {
 		set slv_quest,0;
 		mes "[Jeanbai]";
-		mes "You've eliminated all of the monsters.";
+		mes "You've hunted all of the monsters.";
 		mes "I will inform the Eden Group.";
 		mes "Thank you.";
 		close;
 	}
-	if ((.@chk_yun1 == 0) || (.@chk_yun2 == 0) || (.@chk_yun3 == 0) || (.@chk_yun4 == 0) || (.@chk_yun1 == 1) || (.@chk_yun2 == 1) || (.@chk_yun3 == 1) || (.@chk_yun4 == 1)) {
+	if (checkquest(10114) == 1 || checkquest(10115) == 1 || checkquest(10116) == 1 || checkquest(10117) == 1) {
 		mes "[Jeanbai]";
 		mes "Huh? So... fast...";
 		mes "You amaze me!";
-		mes "So what monsters did you hunt?";
+		mes "So what monster did you hunt?";
 		next;
-		switch(select("Grand Peco:Sleeper:Goat:Harpy")) {
+		switch (select("Grand Peco:Sleeper:Goat:Harpy")) {
 		case 1:
-			set .@chk_gra,checkquest(10114,HUNTING);
-			if (.@chk_gra == 2) {
+			if (checkquest(10114,HUNTING) == 2) {
 				mes "[Jeanbai]";
-				mes "20 Grand Pecos. Perfect!";
+				mes "You've hunted 20 Grand Pecos. Perfect!";
 				mes "Thanks a lot.";
 				next;
 				completequest 10114;
 				getexp 48000,0;
 				mes "[Jeanbai]";
 				mes "Please hunt the others as soon as possible.";
-				mes "I believe in you!";
-				close;
-			}
-			else {
-				mes "[Jeanbai]";
-				mes "What? Maybe you were confused.";
-				mes "20 Grand pecos. You should hunt them all but you didn't finish all of them.";
-				mes "Think again carefully.";
+				mes "I have faith in you!";
 				close;
 			}
-			break;
+			mes "[Jeanbai]";
+			mes "What? Maybe you were confused.";
+			mes "You haven't hunted all 20 Grand Pecos.";
+			mes "Please check again.";
+			close;
 		case 2:
-			set .@chk_sle,checkquest(10115,HUNTING);
-			if (.@chk_sle == 2) {
+			if (checkquest(10115,HUNTING) == 2) {
 				mes "[Jeanbai]";
-				mes "20 Sleepers!";
+				mes "You've hunted 20 Sleepers!";
 				mes "Thanks a lot.";
 				next;
 				completequest 10115;
 				getexp 48000,0;
 				mes "[Jeanbai]";
-				mes "Please hunt the others too.";
-				mes "I believe in you!";
-				close;
-			}
-			else {
-				mes "[Jeanbai]";
-				mes "What? Maybe you were confused.";
-				mes "Hunt 20 Sleepers.";
-				mes "Maybe you need to count again.";
+				mes "Please hunt the others as soon as possible.";
+				mes "I have faith in you!";
 				close;
 			}
-			break;
+			mes "[Jeanbai]";
+			mes "What? Maybe you were confused.";
+			mes "You haven't hunted all 20 Sleepers.";
+			mes "Please check again.";
+			close;
 		case 3:
-			set .@chk_goa,checkquest(10116,HUNTING);
-			if (.@chk_goa == 2) {
+			if (checkquest(10116,HUNTING) == 2) {
 				mes "[Jeanbai]";
-				mes "20 Goats. Perfect!";
-				mes "I checked the amount and it was exact.";
+				mes "You've hunted 20 Goats. Perfect!";
+				mes "I checked the amounts and you're right.";
 				mes "Thanks a lot.";
 				next;
 				completequest 10116;
 				getexp 48000,0;
 				mes "[Jeanbai]";
 				mes "Please hunt the others as soon as possible.";
-				mes "I believe in you!";
-				close;
-			}
-			else {
-				mes "[Jeanbai]";
-				mes "What? Maybe you were confused.";
-				mes "20 Goats hunt them all.";
-				mes "Think again carefully.";
+				mes "I have faith in you!";
 				close;
 			}
-			break;
+			mes "[Jeanbai]";
+			mes "What? Maybe you were confused.";
+			mes "You haven't hunted all 20 Goats.";
+			mes "Please check again.";
+			close;
 		case 4:
-			set .@chk_har,checkquest(10117,HUNTING);
-			if (.@chk_har == 2) {
+			if (checkquest(10117,HUNTING) == 2) {
 				mes "[Jeanbai]";
-				mes "20 Harpies. Perfect!!";
+				mes "You've hunted 20 Harpies. Perfect!";
 				mes "Thanks a lot.";
 				next;
 				completequest 10117;
 				getexp 48000,0;
 				mes "[Jeanbai]";
 				mes "Please hunt the others as soon as possible.";
-				mes "I believe in you!";
+				mes "I have faith in you!";
 				close;
 			}
-			else {
-				mes "[Jeanbai]";
-				mes "What? Maybe you were confused.";
-				mes "20 Harpy. Hunt them all.";
-				mes "Think again carefully.";
-				close;
-			}
-			break;
+			mes "[Jeanbai]";
+			mes "What? Maybe you were confused.";
+			mes "You haven't hunted all 20 Harpies.";
+			mes "Please check again.";
+			close;
 		}
 	}
 	if (slv_quest == 6) {
-		// Custom/Copy/Paste
 		mes "[Jeanbai]";
-		mes "Grand Peco, Sleeper, Goat,";
-		mes "and Harpy. Hunt 20 of each.";
-		mes "After you've hunted them all, come back to me.";
-		mes "I hope finish as soon as you can.";
+		mes "Grand Pecos, Sleepers, Goats";
+		mes "and Harpies. Hunt 20 of each.";
+		mes "When you're finished hunting, come back to me.";
+		mes "I hope you finish as soon as you can.";
 		close;
 	}
 	mes "[Jeanbai]";
 	mes "I am traveler Jeanbai.";
-	mes "As I said I'm a traveler not a adventurer so, I am poor at fighting.";
+	mes "As I said I'm a traveler not a adventurer so, I am not good at fighting.";
 	mes "That's why I can't travel all over the world.";
 	next;
 	mes "[Jeanbai]";
-	mes "Monsters are increasing in number so people like me have a hard time traveling.";
-	mes "I wish I could travel without having to worry.";
+	mes "Monsters are increasing in numbers so travelers like me have a hard time getting around.";
+	mes "I wish I could travel around without having to worry about that.";
 	next;
 	if (slv_quest == 3) {
 		mes "[Jeanbai]";
 		mes "Oh, did you get my mission from the Eden Group?";
-		mes "Great~! We don't have enough time.";
+		mes "Great~! We don't have a lot of time.";
 		mes "Let me explain.";
 		next;
 		mes "[Jeanbai]";
-		mes "The monsters in Juno,";
-		mes "Grand Peco, Sleeper, Goat,";
-		mes "and Harpy. Hunt 20 of each.";
-		mes "I've been hesitating to visit Juno because of all of the monsters there.";
+		mes "The monsters around Juno,";
+		mes "Grand Pecos, Sleepers, Goats";
+		mes "and Harpies. Please hunt 20 of them.";
+		mes "I've been hesitating to visit Juno because of those monsters around there.";
 		next;
 		mes "[Jeanbai]";
-		mes "Can you take this mission?";
-		mes "I expect you are the proper person to take this up.";
+		mes "Will you accept this mission?";
+		mes "I hope you are the right person for the job.";
 		mes "So what do you say?";
 		next;
-		switch(select("Accept request:Ignore the request")) {
+		switch (select("Accept mission.:Decline mission.")) {
 		case 1:
 			mes "[Jeanbai]";
 			mes "Great!";
-			mes "You won't regert it.";
+			mes "You won't regret it.";
 			next;
 			completequest 10104;
 			setquest 10114;
@@ -741,8 +663,8 @@ aldebaran,144,230,3	script	Jeanbai#para	900,{
 			setquest 10117;
 			set slv_quest,6;
 			mes "[Jeanbai]";
-			mes "After you've hunted them all, come back to me.";
-			mes "I hope finish as soon as you can.";
+			mes "When you're finished hunting, come back to me.";
+			mes "I hope you finish as soon as you can.";
 			close;
 		case 2:
 			set slv_quest,0;
@@ -750,212 +672,184 @@ aldebaran,144,230,3	script	Jeanbai#para	900,{
 			mes "[Jeanbai]";
 			mes "Too bad. I'm disappointed.";
 			mes "I should inform the Eden Group again.";
-			mes "I see nevermind.";
+			mes "I see, nevermind.";
 			close;
 		}
 	}
-	close;
+	end;
 }
 
-aldebaran,105,116,3	script	Lizingshetter#para	869,{
-	set .@chk_clo1,checkquest(10118);
-	set .@chk_clo2,checkquest(10119);
-	set .@chk_clo3,checkquest(10120);
-	if ((.@chk_clo1 == 2) && (.@chk_clo2 == 2) && (.@chk_clo3 == 2) && (slv_quest == 6)) {
+aldebaran,105,116,3	script	Risingeter	869,{
+	if ((checkquest(10118) == 2) && (checkquest(10119) == 2) && (checkquest(10120 == 2)) && (slv_quest == 6)) {
 		set slv_quest,0;
-		mes "[Lizingshetter]";
-		mes "You did all of missions.";
-		mes "Amazing~!";
-		mes "I will inform the Eden Group.";
-		mes "Thanks again!";
+		mes "[Risingeter]";
+		mes "You've completed all of my missions.";
+		mes "Amazing~! I will inform the Eden Group.";
+		mes "of your assistance. Thanks again!";
 		close;
 	}
-	if ((.@chk_clo1 == 0) || (.@chk_clo2 == 0) || (.@chk_clo3 == 0) || (.@chk_clo1 == 1) || (.@chk_clo2 == 1) || (.@chk_clo3 == 1)) {
-		mes "[Lizingshetter]";
+	if (checkquest(10118) == 1 || checkquest(10119) == 1 || checkquest(10120) == 1) {
+		mes "[Risingeter]";
 		mes "Wow. Are you done?";
 		mes "So fast~?! Unbelievable~";
 		mes "You were the right person for this mission.";
 		mes "Which monster did you hunt?";
 		next;
-		switch(select("Clock:Punk:Rideword")) {
+		switch (select("Clock:Punk:Rideword")) {
 		case 1:
-			set .@chk_clk,checkquest(10118,HUNTING);
-			if (.@chk_clk == 2) {
-				mes "[Lizingshetter]";
-				mes "Good! You hunted 15 Clocks.";
-				mes "Exactly! Ah, now";
-				mes "I can clearly hear the clock sound...";
-				mes "tic toc tic toc.";
+			if (checkquest(10118,HUNTING) == 2) {
+				mes "[Risingeter]";
+				mes "Good! You've hunted 15 Clocks.";
+				mes "Ah, now I can hear the clock sound clearly...";
+				mes "Tic!! toc!! tic!! toc!!...";
 				next;
 				completequest 10118;
 				getexp 48000,0;
-				mes "[Lizingshetter]";
+				mes "[Risingeter]";
 				mes "Thanks a lot!";
-				mes "I hope you can hunt others as well.";
+				mes "I hope you can hunt the rest as well.";
 				mes "Go as soon as you can!";
 				close;
 			}
-			else {
-				mes "[Lizingshetter]";
-				mes "Uh? Something is weird.";
-				mes "15 Clocks, right?";
-				mes "You better recount how many you've hunted.";
-				close;
-			}
-			break;
+			mes "[Risingeter]";
+			mes "Uh? Something is wrong.";
+			mes "15 Clocks, right?";
+			mes "You better check how many you've hunted.";
+			close;
 		case 2:
-			set .@chk_pun,checkquest(10119,HUNTING);
-			if (.@chk_pun == 2) {
-				mes "[Lizingshetter]";
-				mes "Good! You hunted 15 Punks.";
-				mes "Exactly! Ah, now";
-				mes "I can clearly hear the clock sound...";
-				mes "tic toc tic toc.";
+			if (checkquest(10119,HUNTING) == 2) {
+				mes "[Risingeter]";
+				mes "Good! You've hunted 15 Punks.";
+				mes "Ah, now I can hear the clock sound clearly...";
+				mes "Tic!! toc!! tic!! toc!!...";
 				next;
 				completequest 10119;
 				getexp 48000,0;
-				mes "[Lizingshetter]";
+				mes "[Risingeter]";
 				mes "Thanks a lot!";
-				mes "I hope you can hunt others as well.";
-				close;
-			}
-			else {
-				mes "[Lizingshetter]";
-				mes "Uh? Something is weird.";
-				mes "15 Punks, right?";
-				mes "You better recount how many you've hunted.";
+				mes "I hope you can hunt the rest as well.";
+				mes "Go as soon as you can!";
 				close;
 			}
-			break;
+			mes "[Risingeter]";
+			mes "Uh? Something is wrong.";
+			mes "15 Punks, right?";
+			mes "You better check how many you've hunted.";
+			close;
 		case 3:
-			set .@chk_rid,checkquest(10120,HUNTING);
-			if (.@chk_rid == 2) {
-				mes "[Lizingshetter]";
-				mes "Good! You hunted 15 Ridewords.";
-				mes "Exactly! Ah, now";
-				mes "I can clearly hear the clock sound...";
-				mes "tic!! toc!! tic!! toc!!...";
+			if (checkquest(10120,HUNTING) == 2) {
+				mes "[Risingeter]";
+				mes "Good! You've hunted 15 Ridewords.";
+				mes "Ah, now I can hear the clock sound clearly...";
+				mes "Tic!! toc!! tic!! toc!!...";
 				next;
 				completequest 10120;
 				getexp 48000,0;
-				mes "[Lizingshetter]";
+				mes "[Risingeter]";
 				mes "Thanks a lot!";
-				mes "I hope you can hunt others as well.";
-				close;
-			}
-			else {
-				mes "[Lizingshetter]";
-				mes "Uh? Something is weird.";
-				mes "15 Ridewords, right?";
-				mes "You better recount how many you've hunted.";
+				mes "I hope you can hunt the rest as well.";
+				mes "Go as soon as you can!";
 				close;
 			}
-			break;
+			mes "[Risingeter]";
+			mes "Uh? Something is wrong.";
+			mes "15 Ridewords, right?";
+			mes "You better check how many you've hunted.";
+			close;
 		}
 	}
 	if (slv_quest == 6) {
-		// Custom/Copy/Paste
-		mes "[Lizingshetter]";
-		mes "hunt 15 of each of these monsters: Clocks, Punks, and Rideword.";
+		mes "[Risingeter]";
+		mes "Hunt 15 Clocks, Punks, and Ridewords.";
 		mes "Please hurry.";
 		close;
 	}
-	mes "[Lizingshetter]";
+	mes "[Risingeter]";
 	mes "I like clocks so much.";
 	mes "They move with regular rhythm";
 	mes "making tic toc sounds.";
 	mes "Ahah!! Hail to the clocks!";
 	next;
-	mes "[Lizingshetter]";
-	mes "That's why I like clock tower so much.";
-	mes "It's really a great sound.";
+	mes "[Risingeter]";
+	mes "That's why I like the Clock Tower so much.";
+	mes "It makes a really nice sound.";
 	mes "I like it so much!";
 	next;
 	if (slv_quest == 4) {
-		mes "[Lizingshetter]";
+		mes "[Risingeter]";
 		mes "Uh? Have you come to help me solve my trouble.";
-		mes "You already know i like clocks right?";
-		mes "That's why I need you to help me hunt these monsters.";
+		mes "You already know I like clocks right?";
+		mes "That's why I need your help to hunt these monsters.";
 		next;
-		mes "[Lizingshetter]";
-		mes "There are too many monsters in clock tower.";
-		mes "Their presence is breaking the clock tower.";
+		mes "[Risingeter]";
+		mes "There are too many monsters inside the Clock Tower.";
+		mes "Their presence is destroying the Clock Tower.";
 		next;
-		mes "[Lizingshetter]";
+		mes "[Risingeter]";
 		mes "Anyway. Can you help me?";
-		mes "before it breaks,";
-		mes "hunt 15 of each of these monsters: Clocks, Punks, and Rideword.";
+		mes "Please hunt 15 Clocks, Punks and Ridewords before it breaks down.";
 		next;
-		switch(select("Accept request:Ignore the request")) {
+		switch (select("Accept mission.:Decline mission.")) {
 		case 1:
 			completequest 10105;
 			setquest 10118;
 			setquest 10119;
 			setquest 10120;
 			set slv_quest,6;
-			mes "[Lizingshetter]";
+			mes "[Risingeter]";
 			mes "Ok! I expect you will do the right thing.";
-			mes "Clock, Punk, and Rideword hunt 15 of each.";
+			mes "Hunt 15 Clocks, Punks and Ridewords.";
 			close;
 		case 2:
 			set slv_quest,0;
 			erasequest 10105;
-			mes "[Lizingshetter]";
-			mes "You can't understand my heart.";
+			mes "[Risingeter]";
+			mes "You don't understand my love for clocks";
 			mes "I will find another brave adventurer.";
 			mes "I will inform the Eden Group.";
 			close;
 		}
 	}
-	close;
+	end;
 }
 
-
-alberta,215,111,5	script	Funfi#para	828,{
-	set .@chk_roc1,checkquest(10121);
-	set .@chk_roc2,checkquest(10122);
-	set .@chk_roc3,checkquest(10123);
-	if ((.@chk_roc1 == 2) && (.@chk_roc2 == 2) && (.@chk_roc3 == 2) && (slv_quest == 6)) {
+alberta,215,111,5	script	Funfi	828,{
+	if ((checkquest(10121) == 2) && (checkquest(10122) == 2) && (checkquest(10123) == 2) && (slv_quest == 6)) {
 		set slv_quest,0;
 		mes "[Funfi]";
-		mes "Um! Thank you so much for your effort!";
-		mes "I will tell the Eden Group about you that was really great, don't worry!";
+		mes "Um! Thank you so much for all your efforts!";
+		mes "I will inform, the Eden Group about your assistance, don't worry!";
 		mes "Hahahaha...";
 		close;
 	}
-	if ((.@chk_roc1 == 0) || (.@chk_roc2 == 0) || (.@chk_roc3 == 0) | (.@chk_roc1 == 1) || (.@chk_roc2 == 1) || (.@chk_roc3 == 1)) {
+	if (checkquest(10121) == 1 || checkquest(10122) == 1 || checkquest(10123) == 1) {
 		mes "[Funfi]";
-		mes "Unbeilivable~! So fast~!";
+		mes "Unbelievable~! So fast~!";
 		mes "Which monster did you hunt?";
 		next;
-		switch(select("Uzhas:Miyabi Doll:Mi Gao")) {
+		switch (select("Kikimora:Miyabi Doll:Mi Gao")) {
 		case 1:
-			set .@chk_uzh,checkquest(10121,HUNTING);
-			if (.@chk_uzh == 2) {
+			if (checkquest(10121,HUNTING) == 2) {
 				mes "[Funfi]";
-				mes "Ok! 15 Uzhas!";
-				mes "Completed! Perfect!";
+				mes "Ok! You've hunted 15 Kikimora!";
+				mes "You're the best!";
 				next;
 				completequest 10121;
 				getexp 48000,0;
 				mes "[Funfi]";
 				mes "Please hunt the others as well.";
-				mes "I trust you!";
+				mes "I have faith in you!";
 				close;
 			}
-			else {
-				mes "[Funfi]";
-				mes "Oh~ No no~!!";
-				mes "Be careful and hunt 15 Uzhas!";
-				close;
-			}
-			break;
+			mes "[Funfi]";
+			mes "Oh~ No no~!!";
+			mes "Listen carefully! Hunt 15 Kikimora.";
+			close;
 		case 2:
-			set .@chk_miy,checkquest(10122,HUNTING);
-			if (.@chk_miy == 2) {
+			if (checkquest(10122,HUNTING) == 2) {
 				mes "[Funfi]";
-				mes "Ok! 15 Miyabi Dolls!";
-				mes "Perfect!";
+				mes "Ok! You've hunted 15 Miyabi Dolls!";
+				mes "You're the best!";
 				next;
 				completequest 10122;
 				getexp 48000,0;
@@ -964,19 +858,15 @@ alberta,215,111,5	script	Funfi#para	828,{
 				mes "I trust you!";
 				close;
 			}
-			else {
-				mes "[Funfi]";
-				mes "Oh~ No no~!!";
-				mes "Listen carefully! 15 Miyabi Dolls.";
-				close;
-			}
-			break;
+			mes "[Funfi]";
+			mes "Oh~ No no~!!";
+			mes "Listen carefully! Hunt 15 Miyabi Dolls.";
+			close;
 		case 3:
-			set .@chk_sik,checkquest(10123,HUNTING);
-			if (.@chk_sik == 2) {
+			if (checkquest(10123,HUNTING) == 2) {
 				mes "[Funfi]";
-				mes "Ok! 15 Mi Gaos!";
-				mes "Perfect!";
+				mes "Ok! You've hunted 15 Mi Gaos!";
+				mes "You're the best!";
 				next;
 				completequest 10123;
 				getexp 48000,0;
@@ -985,48 +875,43 @@ alberta,215,111,5	script	Funfi#para	828,{
 				mes "I trust you!";
 				close;
 			}
-			else {
-				mes "[Funfi]";
-				mes "Oh~ No no~!!";
-				mes "Listen carefully! 15 Mi Gaos!";
-				close;
-			}
-			break;
+			mes "[Funfi]";
+			mes "Oh~ No no~!!";
+			mes "Listen carefully! Hunt 15 Mi Gaos.";
+			close;
 		}
 	}
 	if (slv_quest == 6) {
-		// Custom/Copy/Paste
 		mes "[Funfi]";
-		mes "Moscovia's witch, Uzhas,";
-		mes "Amatsu's Miyabi Dolls,";
-		mes "Louyang's Mi Gaos.";
-		mes "These three monsters,";
-		mes "please kill 15 of each.";
+		mes "Moscovia's Kikimore,";
+		mes "Miyabi Dolls from Amatsu";
+		mes "and Mi Gaos from Louyang.";
+		mes "Please hunt 15 of each of those monsters.";
 		close;
 	}
 	mes "[Funfi]";
-	mes "I am a man who wants to experience adventure. But for some reason I can't...";
+	mes "I am a man who wants to experience adventures. But for some reason I can't...";
 	next;
 	mes "[Funfi]";
-	mes "There are lots of funny things in the world... Wooo!";
+	mes "There are a lot of funny things in the world... Wooo!";
 	next;
 	if (slv_quest == 5) {
 		mes "[Funfi]";
 		mes "Anyway are you from the Eden Group?";
-		mes "You are right? Cool! I've been waiting for you~!";
+		mes "You are? Cool! I've been waiting for you~!";
 		next;
 		mes "[Funfi]";
 		mes "No questions! Just do it now!";
-		mes "Uzhas in Moscovia,";
-		mes "Miyabi Doll in Amatsu,";
-		mes "Mi Gaos in louyang!";
-		mes "Hunt 15 each those monsters!";
+		mes "Hunt Kikimora in Moscovia,";
+		mes "Miyabi Dolls in Amatsu";
+		mes "and Mi Gaos in Louyang!";
+		mes "Hunt 15 each of those monsters!";
 		next;
 		mes "[Funfi]";
 		mes "Please~!! haha.";
 		mes "Hurry up!";
 		next;
-		switch(select("Accept request:Ignore the request")) {
+		switch (select("Accept mission.:Decline mission.")) {
 		case 1:
 			completequest 10106;
 			setquest 10121;
@@ -1036,16 +921,20 @@ alberta,215,111,5	script	Funfi#para	828,{
 			getitem 7167,10; //Mystery_Iron_Bit
 			mes "[Funfi]";
 			mes "Ok! Good! Hurry up.";
+			mes "Hunt the monsters on each of those 3 islands.";
+			next;
+			mes "[Funfi]";
+			mes "I will give you some materials for use in Moscovia.";
 			mes "Go as soon as you can!";
 			close;
 		case 2:
 			set slv_quest,0;
 			erasequest 10106;
 			mes "[Funfi]";
-			mes "What? Don't you want to work?! Gosh!";
-			mes "I will tell everything to the Eden Group!";
+			mes "What? You don't want to work?! Gosh!";
+			mes "I will inform the Eden Group of this!";
 			close;
 		}
 	}
-	close;
-}
+	end;
+}
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