- Added up the locations but temporal names of Poring track npcs. Will be worked

  on over time. [erKURITA]
- Fitted the many lines into 1 or 2, and corrected some typos on most of 
  the npc\guides. Visual update to the guards, for short. [erKURITA]
- Added some info to the docs.[erKURITA]
- Added "case" npcs of lighthalzen, they're the first on npc/cities/? Mostly guards. [erKURITA]

git-svn-id: https://rathena.svn.sourceforge.net/svnroot/rathena/trunk@6025 54d463be-8e91-2dee-dedb-b68131a5f0ec

1 files changed, 14 insertions, 30 deletions

diff --git a/npc/guides/guides_umb.txt b/npc/guides/guides_umb.txt
index 7d35ec46b..71fc6d4d0 100644
--- a/npc/guides/guides_umb.txt
+++ b/npc/guides/guides_umb.txt
@@ -3,28 +3,22 @@
 //===== By: ================================================== 

 //= Dizzy, Translated by Celest

 //===== Current Version: ===================================== 

-//= 1.2

+//= 1.4

 //===== Compatible With: ===================================== 

 //= eAthena 1.0 +

 //===== Description: ========================================= 

-//=

+//= Umbala tour guide

 //===== Additional Comments: ================================= 

 //= 1.1 Fixed location command format [Lupus]

 //= 1.2 Optimized, updated common guide names [Lupus]

+//= 1.4 Fitted the many lines into 1 or 2, and corrected some typos [erKURITA]

 //============================================================ 

-

-

-// Umbala tour guide

-//===========================================================================

 umbala.gat,128,94,3	script	Ricard	702,{

 	mes "[Ricard]";

-	mes "This sure is an odd place,";

-	mes "perhaps due to the fact that it hasn't been developed,";

-	mes "the roads here can be very perilous.";

+	mes "This sure is an odd place, perhaps due to the fact that it hasn't been developed, and the roads here can be very perilous.";

 	next;

 	mes "[Ricard]";

-	mes "Good thing i've already been here ";

-	mes "for quite some time, so i know the details of the village quite well,";

+	mes "Good thing I've already been here for quite some time, so i know the details of the village quite well.";

 	mes "You may ask me for directions if you want.";

 	next;

 	menu "View buildings",-,"Clear indications",L_MENU_2,"Cancel",L_end1;

@@ -35,49 +29,39 @@ umbala.gat,128,94,3	script	Ricard	702,{
 	menu "Village Chieftain's house",-,"Village Shaman's house",L_room2,"Weapon shop",L_room3,"Equipment shop",L_room4,"Bungee Jumping Spot",L_room5,"Cancel",L_end2;

 

 		mes "[Ricard]";

-		mes "The chieftain lives ^FF0000here^000000,";

-		mes "only he understands the languages of outsiders,";

-		mes "perhaps you should see him first.";

+		mes "The chieftain lives ^FF0000here^000000, only he understands the languages of outsiders, perhaps you should see him first.";

 		viewpoint 1,68,251,1,0xFF0000;

 		close;

 

 	L_room2:

 		mes "[Ricard]";

-		mes "The shaman is known to possess mysterious powers,";

-		mes "his house would be right ^996600here^000000,";

-		mes "it is said that he can manipulate the elements of the Earth easily!";

+		mes "The shaman is known to possess mysterious powers, his house would be right ^996600here^000000, it is said that he can manipulate the elements of the Earth easily!";

 		viewpoint 1,218,187,2,0x996600;

 		close;

 

 	L_room3:

 		mes "[Ricard]";

-		mes "The weapon shop is ^009933over there^000000,";

-		mes "because of threats from the outside world,";

-		mes "they have been stocking up on";

-		mes "all kinds of weapons.";

+		mes "The weapon shop is ^009933over there^000000, because of threats from the outside world, they have been stocking up on all kinds of weapons.";

 		viewpoint 1,125,155,3,0x009933;

 		close;

 

 	L_room4:

 		mes "[Ricard]";

-		mes "^3333FFThat^000000 would be the equipment shop,";

-		mes "they sell all types of useful equipment";

-		mes "you should have a look there before continueing your travels.";

+		mes "^3333FFThat^000000 would be the equipment shop, they sell all types of useful equipment.";

+		mes "You should have a look there before continueing your travels.";

 		viewpoint 1,136,127,4,0x3333FF;

 		close;

 

 	L_room5:

 		mes "[Ricard]";

-		mes "In Umbala there is a 'Bungee Jumping Spot' not seen anywhere else in the world";

-		mes "as you can see ^66CC33over here^000000,";

-		mes "you can try it out if you're feeling brave enough.";

+		mes "In Umbala there is a 'Bungee Jumping Spot' not seen anywhere else in the world as you can see ^66CC33over here^000000,";

+		mes "You can try it out if you're feeling brave enough.";

 		viewpoint 1,138,198,5,0x66CC33;

 		close;

 

 	L_end2:

 		mes "[Ricard]";

-		mes "To remove all indications of the minimap";

-		mes "come back and talk to me again.";

+		mes "To remove all indications of the minimap come back and talk to me again.";

 		close;

 

 L_MENU_2:	

@@ -87,7 +71,7 @@ L_MENU_2:
 		viewpoint 2,136,127,4,0x3333FF;

 		viewpoint 2,138,198,5,0x66CC33;

 		mes "[Ricard]";

-		mes "I removed all the indications,";

+		mes "I have removed all the indications.";

 		mes "If you still need any directions, come back and talk to me again.";

 		close;