- Added up the locations but temporal names of Poring track npcs. Will be worked

  on over time. [erKURITA]
- Fitted the many lines into 1 or 2, and corrected some typos on most of 
  the npc\guides. Visual update to the guards, for short. [erKURITA]
- Added some info to the docs.[erKURITA]
- Added "case" npcs of lighthalzen, they're the first on npc/cities/? Mostly guards. [erKURITA]

git-svn-id: https://rathena.svn.sourceforge.net/svnroot/rathena/trunk@6025 54d463be-8e91-2dee-dedb-b68131a5f0ec

1 files changed, 67 insertions, 148 deletions

diff --git a/npc/guides/guides_pay.txt b/npc/guides/guides_pay.txt
index 7a2141734..053b93cfd 100644
--- a/npc/guides/guides_pay.txt
+++ b/npc/guides/guides_pay.txt
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
 //===== By: ================================================== 

 //= kobra_k88

 //===== Current Version: ===================================== 

-//= 1.3a

+//= 1.4

 //===== Compatible With: ===================================== 

 //= eAthena  0.5.2 +

 //===== Description: ========================================= 

@@ -15,28 +15,22 @@
 //= 1.3 Updated the guide according to how it is on iRO, thanks [MasterOfMuppets]

 //=     to Muad_Dib

 //= 1.3a Fixed some problems with duplicated text, thanks to muad_dib [MasterOfMuppets]

+//= 1.4 Fitted the many lines into 1 or 2, and corrected some typos [erKURITA]

 //============================================================

 

 

 payon.gat,162,67,4	script	Guide	708,{

 	cutin "pay_soldier",2;

 	mes "[Payon Guide]";

-	mes "Welcome to the";

-	mes "mountain city of Payon.";

-	mes "if you're unfammiliar with this";

-	mes "area, I can help you find what";

-	mes "you're looking for around here.";

+	mes "Welcome to the mountain city of Payon.";

+	mes "If you're unfammiliar with this area, I can help you find what you're looking for around here.";

 L_MENU:

 	next;

 	menu "City Guide",L_CITY,"Remove Marks from Mini-Map",L_REMOVE,"Notice",L_NOTICE,"Cancel",L_END;

 L_CITY:

 	mes "[Payon Guide]";

-  	mes "Please select";

-  	mes "a location from";

-  	mes "the following menu.";

-  	mes "Would you like me";

- 	mes "to mark locations";

-  	mes "on your Mini-Map?";

+  	mes "Please select a location from the following menu.";

+  	mes "Would you like me to mark locations on your Mini-Map?";

   	next;

   	menu "Yes.",L_YES,"No.",L_NO;

 L_NO:

@@ -48,143 +42,103 @@ L_CONT:
 L_MENU_2:

 	menu "^FF0000Archer Guild^000000",L_ARCHER,"Weapon Shop",L_WEAPON,"Tool Shop",L_TOOL,"Pub",L_PUB,"Central Palace",L_PALACE,"The Empress",L_EMPRESS,"Palace Annex",L_ANNEX,"Royal Kitchen",L_KITCHEN,"Forge",L_FORGE,"Cancel",-;

 	mes "[Payon Guide]";

- 	mes "Pleas ask me to Remove";

- 	mes "Marks from Mini-Map if you";

- 	mes "no longer wish to have the";

- 	mes "location marks displayed";

- 	mes "on your Mini-Map.";

+ 	mes "Please ask me to remove marks from Mini-Map if you no longer wish to have the location marks displayed on your Mini-Map.";

  	goto L_MENU;

 L_ARCHER:

 	mes "[Payon Guide]";

-	mes "The Archer Guild handles";

-	mes "Job Changes to the Archer";

-	mes "Class. You'll need to enter";

-	mes "the Archer Village wich is";

-	mes "to the northeast of Payon.";

+	mes "The Archer Guild handles Job Changes to the Archer Class.";

+	mes "You'll need to enter the Archer Village wich is to the northeast of Payon.";

 	viewpoint 1,228,326,1,0xFF0000;

 	next; 

 	goto L_WIPE;

 L_WEAPON:

 	mes "[Payon Guide]";

-	mes "The Weapon Shop";

-	mes "can be found in the";

-	mes "northwest corner of";

-	mes "the city of Payon.";

+	mes "The Weapon Shop can be found in the northwest corner of the city of Payon.";

 	viewpoint 1,139,158,2,0xFF00FF;

 	next; 

 	goto L_WIPE;

 L_TOOL:

 	mes "[Payon Guide]";

-	mes "The Tool Shop";

-	mes "is located near";

-	mes "the northwest";

-	mes "corner of Payon.";

+	mes "The Tool Shop is located near the northwest corner of Payon.";

 	viewpoint 1,144,85,3,0xFF00FF;

 	next; 

 	goto L_WIPE;

 L_PUB:

 	mes "[Payon Guide]";

-	mes "The Pub can be";

-	mes "found in the northeast";

-	mes "part of Payon. It's the";

-	mes "best place to relax after";

-	mes "a long day of hunting.";

+	mes "The Pub can be found in the northeast part of Payon.";

+	mes "It's the best place to relax after a long day of hunting.";

 	viewpoint 1,220,117,4,0xFF00FF;

 	next; 

 	goto L_WIPE;

 L_PALACE:

 	mes "[Payon Guide]";

-	mes "The Central Palace";

-	mes "is located to the north";

-	mes "within the city of Payon.";

+	mes "The Central Palace is located to the north within the city of Payon.";

 	viewpoint 1,156,245,5,0x00FF00;

 	next;

 	goto L_WIPE;

 L_EMPRESS:

 	mes "[Payon Guide]";

-	mes "The Empress";

-	mes "can be found to the";

-	mes "northwest in Payon.";

+	mes "The Empress can be found to the northwest in Payon.";

 	viewpoint 1,107,327,6,0x00FF00;

 	next;

 	goto L_WIPE;

 L_ANNEX:

 	mes "[Payon Guide]";

-	mes "The Palace Annex";

-	mes "can be found in the";

-	mes "western part of Payon.";

+	mes "The Palace Annex can be found in the western part of Payon.";

 	viewpoint 1,127,204,7,0x00FF00;

 	next;

 	goto L_WIPE;

 L_KITCHEN:

 	mes "[Payon Guide]";

-	mes "The Royal Kitchen";

-	mes "is located near the";

-	mes "northern end of Payon.";

+	mes "The Royal Kitchen is located near the northern end of Payon.";

 	viewpoint 1,155,327,8,0x00FF00;

 	next;

 	goto L_WIPE;

 L_FORGE:

 	mes "[Payon Guide]";

-	mes "The Forge is";

-	mes "situaded near";

-	mes "the center of Payon.";

+	mes "The Forge is situaded near the center of Payon.";

 	viewpoint 1,142,172,9,0xFFFF00;

 	next;

 	goto L_WIPE;	

 L_WIPE:

- 		if(@COMPASS_CHECK == 1)goto L_MENU_2;

-		viewpoint 2,228,326,1,0xFF0000;

-		viewpoint 2,139,158,2,0xFF00FF;

-		viewpoint 2,144,85,3,0xFF00FF;

-		viewpoint 2,220,117,4,0xFF00FF;

-		viewpoint 2,156,245,5,0x00FF00;

-		viewpoint 2,107,327,6,0x00FF00;

-		viewpoint 2,127,204,7,0x00FF00;

-		viewpoint 2,155,327,8,0x00FF00;

-		viewpoint 2,142,172,9,0xFFFF00;

+ 	if(@COMPASS_CHECK == 1)goto L_MENU_2;

+	viewpoint 2,228,326,1,0xFF0000;

+	viewpoint 2,139,158,2,0xFF00FF;

+	viewpoint 2,144,85,3,0xFF00FF;

+	viewpoint 2,220,117,4,0xFF00FF;

+	viewpoint 2,156,245,5,0x00FF00;

+	viewpoint 2,107,327,6,0x00FF00;

+	viewpoint 2,127,204,7,0x00FF00;

+	viewpoint 2,155,327,8,0x00FF00;

+	viewpoint 2,142,172,9,0xFFFF00;

 	goto L_MENU_2;

 L_REMOVE:

-		viewpoint 2,228,326,1,0xFF0000;

-		viewpoint 2,139,158,2,0xFF00FF;

-		viewpoint 2,144,85,3,0xFF00FF;

-		viewpoint 2,220,117,4,0xFF00FF;

-		viewpoint 2,156,245,5,0x00FF00;

-		viewpoint 2,107,327,6,0x00FF00;

-		viewpoint 2,127,204,7,0x00FF00;

-		viewpoint 2,155,327,8,0x00FF00;

-		viewpoint 2,142,172,9,0xFFFF00;

+	viewpoint 2,228,326,1,0xFF0000;

+	viewpoint 2,139,158,2,0xFF00FF;

+	viewpoint 2,144,85,3,0xFF00FF;

+	viewpoint 2,220,117,4,0xFF00FF;

+	viewpoint 2,156,245,5,0x00FF00;

+	viewpoint 2,107,327,6,0x00FF00;

+	viewpoint 2,127,204,7,0x00FF00;

+	viewpoint 2,155,327,8,0x00FF00;

+	viewpoint 2,142,172,9,0xFFFF00;

   	goto L_MENU;

+

 L_NOTICE:

  	mes "[Payon Guide]";

- 	mes "Advances in sorcery and";

- 	mes "technology have allowed";

- 	mes "us to update our information";

- 	mes "system, enabling up to mark";

-  	mes "locations on your Mini-Map";

-  	mes "for easier navigation.";

+ 	mes "Advances in sorcery and technology have allowed us to update our information system, enabling up to mark locations on your Mini-Map for easier navigation.";

   	next;

   	mes "[Payon Guide]";

-  	mes "Your Mini-Map is located";

-  	mes "in the upper right corner";

-  	mes "of the screen. If you can't";

-  	mes "see it, press the Ctrl + Tab";

-  	mes "keys or click the 'Map' button";

-  	mes "in your Basic Information Window.";

+  	mes "Your Mini-Map is located in the upper right corner of the screen.";

+	mes "If you can't see it, press the Ctrl + Tab keys or click the 'Map' button in your Basic Information Window.";

   	next;

   	mes "[Payon Guide]";

- 	mes "On your Mini-Map,";

-  	mes "click on the '+' and '-'";

- 	mes "symbols to zoom in and";

-  	mes "out of your Mini-Map. We"; 

- 	mes "hope you enjoy your travels";

- 	mes "here in the city of Payon.";

+ 	mes "On your Mini-Map, click on the '+' and '-' symbols to zoom in and out of your Mini-Map.";

+	mes "We hope you enjoy your travels here in the city of Payon.";

  	goto L_MENU;

 L_END:

  	mes "[Payon Guide]";

- 	mes "Be safe in";

- 	mes "your travels,";

-	mes "brave adventurer.";

+ 	mes "Be safe in your travels, brave adventurer.";

 		cutin "pay_soldier",255; 

  	close;

 }

@@ -192,22 +146,15 @@ L_END:
 pay_arche.gat,85,30,2	script	Guide	708,{

 	cutin "pay_soldier",2;

 	mes "[Payon Guide]";

-	mes "Welcome to the";

-	mes "mountain city of Payon.";

-	mes "if you're unfammiliar with this";

-	mes "area, I can help you find what";

-	mes "you're looking for around here.";

+	mes "Welcome to the mountain city of Payon.";

+	mes "If you're unfammiliar with this area, I can help you find what you're looking for around here.";

 L_MENU:

 	next;

 	menu "City Guide",L_CITY,"Remove Marks from Mini-Map",L_REMOVE,"Notice",L_NOTICE,"Cancel",L_END;

 L_CITY:

 	mes "[Payon Guide]";

-  	mes "Please select";

-  	mes "a location from";

-  	mes "the following menu.";

-  	mes "Would you like me";

- 	mes "to mark locations";

-  	mes "on your Mini-Map?";

+  	mes "Please select a location from the following menu.";

+  	mes "Would you like me to mark locations on your Mini-Map?";

   	next;

   	menu "Yes.",L_YES,"No.",L_NO;

 L_NO:

@@ -217,83 +164,55 @@ L_YES:
   	set @COMPASS_CHECK,1;

 L_CONT:

 L_MENU_2:

-	menu "^FF0000Archer Guild^000000",L_ARCHER,"Tool Shop",L_TOOL,"Payon Dungeon",L_DUNGEON,"Cancel",-;

+	menu "^FF0000Archer Guild^000000",L_ARCHER,"Weapon Shop",L_WEAPON,"Tool Shop",L_TOOL,"Pub",L_PUB,"Central Palace",L_PALACE,"The Empress",L_EMPRESS,"Palace Annex",L_ANNEX,"Royal Kitchen",L_KITCHEN,"Forge",L_FORGE,"Cancel",-;

 	mes "[Payon Guide]";

- 	mes "Pleas ask me to Remove";

- 	mes "Marks from Mini-Map if you";

- 	mes "no longer wish to have the";

- 	mes "location marks displayed";

- 	mes "on your Mini-Map.";

+ 	mes "Please ask me to remove marks from Mini-Map if you no longer wish to have the location marks displayed on your Mini-Map.";

  	goto L_MENU;

 L_ARCHER:

 	mes "[Payon Guide]";

-	mes "The Archer Guild,";

-	mes "found northeast in";

-	mes "the Archer Village,";

-	mes "handles Job Changes";

-	mes "to the Archer Class.";

+	mes "The Archer Guild, found northeast in the Archer Village, handles Job Changes to the Archer Class.";

 	viewpoint 1,144,164,1,0xFF0000;

 	next; 

 	goto L_WIPE;

 L_TOOL:

 	mes "[Payon Guide]";

-	mes "The Tool Shop";

-	mes "is located near";

-	mes "the northwest";

-	mes "corner of Payon.";

+	mes "The Tool Shop is located near the northwest corner of Payon.";

 	viewpoint 1,71,156,2,0xFF00FF;

 	next; 

 	goto L_WIPE;

 L_DUNGEON:

 	mes "[Payon Guide]";

-	mes "The entrance to";

-	mes "the Payon Dungeon";

-	mes "is located at the west";

-	mes "end of the village.";

+	mes "The entrance to the Payon Dungeon is located at the west end of the village.";

 	viewpoint 1,34,132,3,0xFFFFFF;

 	next; 

 	goto L_WIPE;

 L_WIPE:

- 		if(@COMPASS_CHECK == 1)goto L_MENU_2;

-		viewpoint 2,144,164,1,0xFF0000;

-		viewpoint 2,71,156,2,0xFF00FF;

-		viewpoint 2,34,132,3,0xFFFFFF;

+ 	if(@COMPASS_CHECK == 1)goto L_MENU_2;

+	viewpoint 2,144,164,1,0xFF0000;

+	viewpoint 2,71,156,2,0xFF00FF;

+	viewpoint 2,34,132,3,0xFFFFFF;

 	goto L_MENU_2;

 L_REMOVE:

-		viewpoint 2,144,164,1,0xFF0000;

-		viewpoint 2,71,156,2,0xFF00FF;

-		viewpoint 2,34,132,3,0xFFFFFF;

+	viewpoint 2,144,164,1,0xFF0000;

+	viewpoint 2,71,156,2,0xFF00FF;

+	viewpoint 2,34,132,3,0xFFFFFF;

   	goto L_MENU;

+

 L_NOTICE:

  	mes "[Payon Guide]";

- 	mes "Advances in sorcery and";

- 	mes "technology have allowed";

- 	mes "us to update our information";

- 	mes "system, enabling up to mark";

-  	mes "locations on your Mini-Map";

-  	mes "for easier navigation.";

+ 	mes "Advances in sorcery and technology have allowed us to update our information system, enabling up to mark locations on your Mini-Map for easier navigation.";

   	next;

   	mes "[Payon Guide]";

-  	mes "Your Mini-Map is located";

-  	mes "in the upper right corner";

-  	mes "of the screen. If you can't";

-  	mes "see it, press the Ctrl + Tab";

-  	mes "keys or click the 'Map' button";

-  	mes "in your Basic Information Window.";

+  	mes "Your Mini-Map is located in the upper right corner of the screen.";

+	mes "If you can't see it, press the Ctrl + Tab keys or click the 'Map' button in your Basic Information Window.";

   	next;

   	mes "[Payon Guide]";

- 	mes "On your Mini-Map,";

-  	mes "click on the '+' and '-'";

- 	mes "symbols to zoom in and";

-  	mes "out of your Mini-Map. We"; 

- 	mes "hope you enjoy your travels";

- 	mes "here in the city of Payon.";

+ 	mes "On your Mini-Map, click on the '+' and '-' symbols to zoom in and out of your Mini-Map.";

+	mes "We hope you enjoy your travels here in the city of Payon.";

  	goto L_MENU;

 L_END:

  	mes "[Payon Guide]";

- 	mes "Be safe in";

- 	mes "your travels,";

-	mes "brave adventurer.";

+ 	mes "Be safe in your travels, brave adventurer.";

 	cutin "pay_soldier",255; 

  	close;

 }