- Added up the locations but temporal names of Poring track npcs. Will be worked

  on over time. [erKURITA]
- Fitted the many lines into 1 or 2, and corrected some typos on most of 
  the npc\guides. Visual update to the guards, for short. [erKURITA]
- Added some info to the docs.[erKURITA]
- Added "case" npcs of lighthalzen, they're the first on npc/cities/? Mostly guards. [erKURITA]

git-svn-id: https://rathena.svn.sourceforge.net/svnroot/rathena/trunk@6025 54d463be-8e91-2dee-dedb-b68131a5f0ec

1 files changed, 34 insertions, 74 deletions

diff --git a/npc/guides/guides_izl.txt b/npc/guides/guides_izl.txt
index 26c526f17..76cb6502a 100644
--- a/npc/guides/guides_izl.txt
+++ b/npc/guides/guides_izl.txt
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
 //===== By: ================================================== 

 //= kobra_k88

 //===== Current Version: ===================================== 

-//= 1.3

+//= 1.4

 //===== Compatible With: ===================================== 

 //= eAthena 7.15 +

 //===== Description: ========================================= 

@@ -13,27 +13,21 @@
 //= 1.2 Optimized, updated common guide names [Lupus]

 //= 1.3 Updated the guide according to how it is on iRO, thanks [MasterOfMuppets]

 //=     to Muad_Dib

+//= 1.4 Fitted the many lines into 1 or 2, and corrected some typos [erKURITA]

 //============================================================

 

 izlude.gat,121,87,6	script	Guide	105,{

 	cutin "prt_soldier",2;

 	mes "[Izlude Guide]";

-	mes "Welcome to Izlude,";

-	mes "Prontera's satellite city.";

-	mes "If you need any guidance";

-	mes "around Izlude, feel free";

-	mes "to ask me at anytime.";

+	mes "Welcome to Izlude, Prontera's satellite city.";

+	mes "If you need any guidance around Izlude, feel free to ask me at anytime.";

 L_MENU:

 	next;

 	menu "City Guide",L_CITY,"Remove Marks from Mini-Map",L_REMOVE,"Notice",L_NOTICE,"Cancel",L_END;

 L_CITY:

 	mes "[Izlude Guide]";

-  	mes "Please select";

-  	mes "a location from";

-  	mes "the following menu.";

-  	mes "Would you like me";

- 	mes "to mark locations";

-  	mes "on your Mini-Map?";

+  	mes "Please select a location from the following menu.";

+  	mes "Would you like me to mark locations on your Mini-Map?";

   	next;

   	menu "Yes.",L_YES,"No.",L_NO;

 L_NO:

@@ -45,112 +39,78 @@ L_CONT:
 L_MENU_2:

 	menu "^FF0000Swordman Association^000000",L_SWORD,"Swordman Hall",L_HALL,"Arena",L_ARENA,"Izlude Marina",L_MARINA,"Weapon Shop",L_WEAPON,"Tool Shop",L_TOOL,"Cancel",-;

 	mes "[Izlude Guide]";

- 	mes "Pleas ask me to Remove";

- 	mes "Marks from Mini-Map if you";

- 	mes "no longer wish to have the";

- 	mes "location marks displayed";

- 	mes "on your Mini-Map.";

+ 	mes "Please ask me to remove marks from then Mini-Map if you no longer wish to have the location marks displayed on your Mini-Map.";

  	goto L_MENU;

 L_SWORD:

 	mes "[Izlude Guide]";

-	mes "The Swordman Association";

-	mes "is located on an island that is";

-	mes "in west Izlude. If you're thinking";

-	mes "of changing jobs to Swordman,";

-	mes "you should check it out.";

+	mes "The Swordman Association is located on an island that is in west Izlude.";

+	mes "If you're thinking of changing jobs to Swordman, you should check it out.";

 	viewpoint 1,52,140,1,0xFF0000;

 	next; 

 	goto L_WIPE;

 L_HALL:

 	mes "[Izlude Guide]";

-	mes "The Swordman Hall";

-	mes "is located on the eastern";

-	mes "island connected to Izlude.";

+	mes "The Swordman Hall is located on the eastern island connected to Izlude.";

 	viewpoint 1,214,130,2,0x00FF00;

 	next; 

 	goto L_WIPE;

 L_ARENA:

 	mes "[Izlude Guide]";

-	mes "Izlude's famous";

-	mes "Arena is located at the";

-	mes "northern end of Izlude.";

+	mes "Izlude's famous Arena is located at the northern end of Izlude.";

 	viewpoint 1,128,225,3,0x00FF00;

 	next; 

 	goto L_WIPE;

 L_MARINA:

 	mes "[Izlude Guide]";

-	mes "You can find the";

-	mes "Marina in the northeast";

-	mes "part of Izlude. There, you can";

-	mes "ride a ship wich will take you";

-	mes "to Alberta or Byalan Island.";

+	mes "You can find the Marina in the northeast part of Izlude.";

+	mes "There, you can ride a ship which will take you to Alberta or Byalan Island.";

 	viewpoint 1,200,180,4,0xFF0000;

 	next; 

 	goto L_WIPE;

 L_WEAPON:

 	mes "[Izlude Guide]";

-	mes "You can easily";

-	mes "find the Weapon Shop";

-	mes "in northwest Izlude.";

+	mes "You can easily find the Weapon Shop in northwest Izlude.";

 	viewpoint 1,111,149,5,0xFF00FF;

 	next; 

 	goto L_WIPE;

 L_TOOL:

 	mes "[Izlude Guide]";

-	mes "The Tool Shop shouldn't";

-	mes "be too hard to find in the";

-	mes "northeast part of Izlude.";

+	mes "The Tool Shop shouldn't be too hard to find in the northeast part of Izlude.";

 	viewpoint 1,148,148,6,0xFF00FF;

 	next; 

 	goto L_WIPE;

 L_WIPE:

- 		if(@COMPASS_CHECK == 1)goto L_MENU_2;

-		viewpoint 2,52,140,1,0xFF0000;

-		viewpoint 2,214,130,2,0x00FF00;

-		viewpoint 2,128,225,3,0x00FF00;

-		viewpoint 2,200,180,4,0xFF0000;

-		viewpoint 2,111,149,5,0xFF00FF;

-		viewpoint 2,148,148,6,0xFF00FF;

+ 	if(@COMPASS_CHECK == 1)goto L_MENU_2;

+	viewpoint 2,52,140,1,0xFF0000;

+	viewpoint 2,214,130,2,0x00FF00;

+	viewpoint 2,128,225,3,0x00FF00;

+	viewpoint 2,200,180,4,0xFF0000;

+	viewpoint 2,111,149,5,0xFF00FF;

+	viewpoint 2,148,148,6,0xFF00FF;

 	goto L_MENU_2;

 L_REMOVE:

-		viewpoint 2,52,140,1,0xFF0000;

-		viewpoint 2,214,130,2,0x00FF00;

-		viewpoint 2,128,225,3,0x00FF00;

-		viewpoint 2,200,180,4,0xFF0000;

-		viewpoint 2,111,149,5,0xFF00FF;

-		viewpoint 2,148,148,6,0xFF00FF;

+	viewpoint 2,52,140,1,0xFF0000;

+	viewpoint 2,214,130,2,0x00FF00;

+	viewpoint 2,128,225,3,0x00FF00;

+	viewpoint 2,200,180,4,0xFF0000;

+	viewpoint 2,111,149,5,0xFF00FF;

+	viewpoint 2,148,148,6,0xFF00FF;

   	goto L_MENU;

 L_NOTICE:

  	mes "[Izlude Guide]";

- 	mes "Advances in sorcery and";

- 	mes "technology have allowed";

- 	mes "us to update our information";

- 	mes "system, enabling up to mark";

-  	mes "locations on your Mini-Map";

-  	mes "for easier navigation.";

+ 	mes "Advances in sorcery and technology have allowed us to update our information system, enabling up to mark locations on your Mini-Map for easier navigation.";

   	next;

   	mes "[Izlude Guide]";

-  	mes "Your Mini-Map is located";

-  	mes "in the upper right corner";

-  	mes "of the screen. If you can't";

-  	mes "see it, press the Ctrl + Tab";

-  	mes "keys or click the 'Map' button";

-  	mes "in your Basic Information Window.";

+  	mes "Your Mini-Map is located in the upper right corner of the screen.";

+	mes "If you can't see it, press the Ctrl + Tab keys or click the 'Map' button in your Basic Information Window.";

   	next;

   	mes "[Izlude Guide]";

- 	mes "On your Mini-Map,";

-  	mes "click on the '+' and '-'";

- 	mes "symbols to zoom in and";

-  	mes "out of your Mini-Map. We"; 

- 	mes "hope you enjoy your travels";

- 	mes "here in the city of Izlude.";

+ 	mes "On your Mini-Map, click on the '+' and '-' symbols to zoom in and out of your Mini-Map.";

+	mes "We hope you enjoy your travels here in the city of Izlude.";

  	goto L_MENU;

 L_END:

  	mes "[Izlude Guide]";

- 	mes "Okay then, feel";

- 	mes "free to come to me";

-	mes "if you ever geel lost";

-	mes "around Izlude, alright?";

+ 	mes "Okay then, feel free to come to me if you ever geel lost around Izlude, alright?";

 	cutin "prt_soldier",255; 

  	close;

 }