- Added up the locations but temporal names of Poring track npcs. Will be worked

  on over time. [erKURITA]
- Fitted the many lines into 1 or 2, and corrected some typos on most of 
  the npc\guides. Visual update to the guards, for short. [erKURITA]
- Added some info to the docs.[erKURITA]
- Added "case" npcs of lighthalzen, they're the first on npc/cities/? Mostly guards. [erKURITA]

git-svn-id: https://rathena.svn.sourceforge.net/svnroot/rathena/trunk@6025 54d463be-8e91-2dee-dedb-b68131a5f0ec

1 files changed, 18 insertions, 62 deletions

diff --git a/npc/guides/guides_alb.txt b/npc/guides/guides_alb.txt
index 703277552..69a791287 100644
--- a/npc/guides/guides_alb.txt
+++ b/npc/guides/guides_alb.txt
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
 //===== By: ================================================== 

 //= kobra_k88

 //===== Current Version: ===================================== 

-//= 1.3

+//= 1.4

 //===== Compatible With: ===================================== 

 //= eAthena  0.5.2 +

 //===== Description: ========================================= 

@@ -14,29 +14,22 @@
 //= 1.2 Optimized, updated common guide names [Lupus]

 //= 1.3 Updated the guide according to how it is on iRO, thanks [MasterOfMuppets]

 //=     to Muad_Dib

+//= 1.4 Fitted the many lines into 1 or 2, and corrected some typos [erKURITA]

 //============================================================ 

 

 //North

 alberta.gat,23,238,4	script	Guide::Alb_Guide	105,{

 	cutin "prt_soldier",2;

 	mes "[Alberta Guide]";

-	mes "Welcome to Alberta,";

-	mes "the Port City. Feel free";

-	mes "to ask me if you're having";

-	mes "trouble finding anything in";

-	mes "town, or if you just need";

-	mes "guidance around the city.";

+	mes "Welcome to Alberta, the Port City.";

+	mes "Feel free to ask me if you're having trouble finding anything in town, or if you just need guidance around the city.";

 L_MENU:

 	next;

 	menu "City Guide",L_CITY,"Remove Marks from Mini-Map",L_REMOVE,"Notice",L_NOTICE,"Cancel",L_END;

 L_CITY:

 	mes "[Alberta Guide]";

-  	mes "Please select";

-  	mes "a location from";

-  	mes "the following menu.";

-  	mes "Would you like me";

- 	mes "to mark locations";

-  	mes "on your Mini-Map?";

+  	mes "Please select a location from the following menu.";

+  	mes "Would you like me to mark locations on your Mini-Map?";

   	next;

   	menu "Yes.",L_YES,"No.",L_NO;

 L_NO:

@@ -48,56 +41,35 @@ L_CONT:
 L_MENU_2:

 	menu "^FF0000Merchant Guild^000000",L_MERCHANT,"Weapon Shop",L_WEAPON,"Tool Shop",L_TOOL,"Inn",L_INN,"Forge",L_FORGE,"Cancel",-;

 	mes "[Alberta Guide]";

- 	mes "Please ask me to Remove";

- 	mes "Marks from Mini-Map if you";

- 	mes "no longer wish to have the";

- 	mes "location marks displayed";

- 	mes "on your Mini-Map.";

+ 	mes "Please ask me to Remove marks from Mini-Map if you no longer wish to have the location marks displayed on your Mini-Map.";

  	goto L_MENU;

 L_MERCHANT:

 	mes "[Alberta Guide]";

-	mes "The Merchant Guild,";

-	mes "handles Job Changes";

-	mes "to the Merchant Class,";

-	mes "and is located in the";

-	mes "southwest corner";

-	mes "of Alberta.";

+	mes "The Merchant Guild, handles Job Changes to the Merchant Class, and is located in the southwest corner of Alberta.";

 	viewpoint 1,33,41,1,0xFF0000;

 	next; 

 	goto L_WIPE;

 L_WEAPON:

 	mes "[Alberta Guide]";

-	mes "The Weapon Shop";

-	mes "can be found in the";

-	mes "southern end of Alberta.";

+	mes "The Weapon Shop can be found in the southern end of Alberta.";

 	viewpoint 1,117,37,2,0xFF00FF;

 	next; 

 	goto L_WIPE;

 L_TOOL:

 	mes "[Alberta Guide]";

-	mes "The Tool Shop";

-	mes "is kind of close";

-	mes "to the center of";

-	mes "Alberta. It shouldn't";

-	mes "be too hard to find.";

+	mes "The Tool Shop is kind of close to the center of Alberta. It shouldn't be too hard to find.";

 	viewpoint 1,98,154,3,0xFF00FF;

 	next; 

 	goto L_WIPE;

 L_INN:

 	mes "[Alberta Guide]";

-	mes "There's and Inn";

-	mes "at the northern";

-	mes "end of Alberta";

-	mes "where you can rest.";

+	mes "There's and Inn at the northern end of Alberta where you can rest.";

 	viewpoint 1,65,233,4,0xFF00FF;

 	next; 

 	goto L_WIPE;

 L_FORGE:

 	mes "[Alberta Guide]";

-	mes "The Forge in Alberta";

-	mes "is in the same building";

-	mes "as the Merchant Guild.";

-	mes "it's to the southwest.";

+	mes "The Forge in Alberta is in the same building as the Merchant Guild. It's to the southwest.";

 	viewpoint 1,33,41,5,0xFF00FF;

 	next; 

 	goto L_WIPE;

@@ -118,35 +90,19 @@ L_REMOVE:
   	goto L_MENU;

 L_NOTICE:

  	mes "[Alberta Guide]";

- 	mes "Advances in sorcery and";

- 	mes "technology have allowed";

- 	mes "us to update our information";

- 	mes "system, enabling up to mark";

-  	mes "locations on your Mini-Map";

-  	mes "for easier navigation.";

+ 	mes "Advances in sorcery and technology have allowed us to update our information system, enabling up to mark locations on your Mini-Map for easier navigation.";

   	next;

   	mes "[Alberta Guide]";

-  	mes "Your Mini-Map is located";

-  	mes "in the upper right corner";

-  	mes "of the screen. If you can't";

-  	mes "see it, press the Ctrl + Tab";

-  	mes "keys or click the 'Map' button";

-  	mes "in your Basic Information Window.";

+  	mes "Your Mini-Map is located in the upper right corner of the screen.";

+	mes "If you can't see it, press the Ctrl + Tab keys or click the 'Map' button in your Basic Information Window.";

   	next;

   	mes "[Alberta Guide]";

- 	mes "On your Mini-Map,";

-  	mes "click on the '+' and '-'";

- 	mes "symbols to zoom in and";

-  	mes "out of your Mini-Map. We"; 

- 	mes "hope you enjoy your travels";

- 	mes "here in the city of Alberta.";

+ 	mes "On your Mini-Map, click on the '+' and '-' symbols to zoom in and out of your Mini-Map.";

+	mes "We hope you enjoy your travels here in the city of Alberta.";

  	goto L_MENU;

 L_END:

  	mes "[Alberta Guide]";

- 	mes "Be safe when you";

- 	mes "travel and don't hesitate";

-	mes "to ask me if you have any";

-	mes "questions about Alberta.";

+ 	mes "Be safe when you travel and don't hesitate to ask me if you have any questions about Alberta.";

 	cutin "prt_soldier",255; 

  	close;

 }