- Fixed typo on rogue_skills.txt (bugreport:4768)

- Fixed issue on icecream.txt (bugreport:4752)
- Added missing prize on comodo_gambling.txt (bugreport:4748)
- Rescripted the iRO event scripts.
- Updated the Read Me.
- Added 2009 Novice Training Grounds.

git-svn-id: https://rathena.svn.sourceforge.net/svnroot/rathena/trunk@14711 54d463be-8e91-2dee-dedb-b68131a5f0ec

5 files changed, 494 insertions, 1001 deletions

diff --git a/npc/events/MemorialDay_2008.txt b/npc/events/MemorialDay_2008.txt
index cbecbdae8..9e67216a7 100644
--- a/npc/events/MemorialDay_2008.txt
+++ b/npc/events/MemorialDay_2008.txt
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
 //===== By: ==================================================
 //= Kisuka
 //===== Current Version: =====================================
-//= 1.1
+//= 1.2
 //===== Compatible With: =====================================
 //= eAthena SVN
 //===== Description: =========================================
@@ -11,6 +11,7 @@
 //===== Additional Comments: =================================
 //= 1.0 First version. [Kisuka]
 //= 1.1 Many Many Fixes. [Kisuka]
+//= 1.2 Some changes. [Kisuka]
 //============================================================
 
 // ================== Lauds ======================
@@ -37,16 +38,11 @@ prontera,182,214,4	script	Lauds#Memorial	58,{
 		mes "My what?";
 		next;
 		mes "[Mad Sago Lauds]";
-		mes "How are you supposed to go on your trip";
-		mes "without your towel!?";
+		mes "How are you supposed to go on your trip without your towel!?";
 		next;
 		mes "[Mad Sago Lauds]";
-		mes "If you think this is just another";
-		mes "holiday,";
-		mes "I'm not going to waste my breath.";
-		mes "But if you like to pay a tribute to";
-		mes "great soldiers,";
-		mes "I will help you ready yourself";
+		mes "If you think this is just another holiday, I'm not going to waste my breath.";
+		mes "But if you like to pay a tribute to great soldiers, I will help you ready yourself.";
 		next;
 		if (select("I guess so...:Are you crazy or something?") == 2) {
 			mes "[Mad Sago Lauds]";
@@ -62,11 +58,8 @@ prontera,182,214,4	script	Lauds#Memorial	58,{
 		mes "Then listen to me carefully.";
 		next;
 		mes "[Mad Sago Lauds]";
-		mes "Now before you can pay tribute to";
-		mes "the fallen soldiers";
-		mes "you must be properly equipped";
-		mes "Without your towel you will be";
-		mes "lost!";
+		mes "Now before you can pay tribute to the fallen soldiers you must be properly equipped.";
+		mes "Without your towel you will be lost!";
 		mes "If you bring me the materials, I can make you a towel.";
 		next;
 		mes "[Mad Sago Lauds]";
@@ -79,25 +72,19 @@ prontera,182,214,4	script	Lauds#Memorial	58,{
 	else if(Memorial08 == 1) {
 		if (countitem(1059) < 30 || countitem(914) < 20) {
 			mes "[Mad Sago Lauds]";
-			mes "What are these? They aren't";
-			mes "enough?!";
-			mes "*Sigh* Do I really have to tell you";
-			mes "again?!";
+			mes "What are these? They aren't enough?!";
+			mes "*Sigh* Do I really have to tell you again?!";
 			mes "Bring me ^FF000030 Fabric and 20 Fluffs^000000.";
 			close;
 		}else{
-			mes "***Mad Sago Lauds appears to be";
-			mes "muttering to himself***";
+			mes "***Mad Sago Lauds appears to be muttering to himself***";
 			next;
 			mes "[Mad Sago Lauds]";
-			mes "So, did you bring the towel";
-			mes "materials?";
+			mes "So, did you bring the towel materials?";
 			next;
 			mes "[Mad Sago Lauds]";
-			mes "Excellent; you've brought them";
-			mes "all.";
-			mes "Then I shall make you a Towel of";
-			mes "Memory as I promised.";
+			mes "Excellent; you've brought them all.";
+			mes "Then I shall make you a Towel of Memory as I promised.";
 			mes "Give me a moment.";
 			next;
 			mes "[Mad Sago Lauds]";
@@ -113,40 +100,30 @@ prontera,182,214,4	script	Lauds#Memorial	58,{
 	
 	else if(Memorial08 == 2) {
 		mes "[Mad Sago Lauds]";
-		mes "Ah, you have fluffy new towel now";
-		mes "I even put your name on it";
+		mes "Ah, you have fluffy new towel now I even put your name on it";
 		next;
 		mes "[Mad Sago Lauds]";
-		mes "Say, how do you like to go";
-		mes "on a journey to pay a tribute to";
-		mes "Memorial Day?";
+		mes "Say, how do you like to go on a journey to pay a tribute to Memorial Day?";
 		next;
 		if (select("Sure.:No, I'm Busy.") == 2) {
 			mes "[Mad Sago Lauds]";
-			mes "Don't come crying to me";
-			mes "if someone decides to";
-			mes "build a highway through";
-			mes "your home!";
+			mes "Don't come crying to me if someone decides to build a highway through your home!";
 			close;
 		}
 		mes "[Mad Sago Lauds]";
-		mes "Good. By the way, do you even know";
-		mes "what the towel is for?";
+		mes "Good. By the way, do you even know what the towel is for?";
 		next;
 		mes "[Mad Sago Lauds]";
-		mes "It seems you're just carrying it";
-		mes "without understanding its meaning.";
-		mes "What a shame! You should go speak";
-		mes "to ^FF0000Grast in Prontera^000000.";
+		mes "It seems you're just carrying it without understanding its meaning.";
+		mes "What a shame! You should go speak to ^FF0000Grast in Prontera^000000.";
 		set Memorial08,3;
 		close;
 	}
 
 	else if(Memorial08 == 3) {
 		mes "[Mad Sago Lauds]";
-		mes "What are you still doing here? I";
-		mes "told you to go speak to Grast in";
-		mes "Prontera!";
+		mes "What are you still doing here?";
+		mes "I told you to go speak to Grast in Prontera!";
 		close;
 	}
 
@@ -163,20 +140,16 @@ prontera,182,214,4	script	Lauds#Memorial	58,{
 		mes "HAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! cough cough";
 		next;
 		mes "[Mad Sago Lauds]";
-		mes "Please give them to me. Thank you";
-		mes "for your hard work, by the way.";
+		mes "Please give them to me. Thank you for your hard work, by the way.";
 		mes "Say, have you learned anything from the journey?";
-		mes "Now is to go visit the plaque at 12";
-		mes "o'clock direction in Prontera.";
+		mes "Now is to go visit the plaque at 12 o'clock direction in Prontera.";
 		next;
 		mes "[Mad Sago Lauds]";
-		mes "What do you mean you were just";
-		mes "there?";
+		mes "What do you mean you were just there?";
 		next;
 		mes "[Mad Sago Lauds]";
-		mes "What? Why are you giving me your";
-		mes "garbage!";
-		mes "Those items are not useful to me at all";
+		mes "What? Why are you giving me your garbage!";
+		mes "Those items are not useful to me at all.";
 		mes "You should be going to the plaque!";
 		set Memorial08,8;
 		close;
@@ -185,8 +158,7 @@ prontera,182,214,4	script	Lauds#Memorial	58,{
 	else if(Memorial08 == 8) {
 		mes "[Mad Sago Lauds]";
 		mes "Stop trying to give me your garbage!";
-		mes "Go to the plaque at 12 o'clock";
-		mes "direction in Prontera for your journey!";
+		mes "Go to the plaque at 12 o'clock direction in Prontera for your journey!";
 		close;
 	}
 	
@@ -201,17 +173,12 @@ prontera,182,214,4	script	Lauds#Memorial	58,{
 		else if(.@RandomMsg == 2) {
 			mes "[Mad Sago Lauds]";
 			mes "Life... is like a grapefruit.";
-			mes "It's orange and squishy, and has a";
-			mes "few pips in it,";
-			mes "and some folks have half a one for";
-			mes "breakfast.";
+			mes "It's orange and squishy, and has a few pips in it, and some folks have half a one for breakfast.";
 			close;
 		}
 		else if(.@RandomMsg == 3) {
 			mes "[Mad Sago Lauds]";
-			mes "There was a point to this story,";
-			mes "but it has temporarily escaped the";
-			mes "chronicler's mind.";
+			mes "There was a point to this story, but it has temporarily escaped the chronicler's mind.";
 			close;
 		}
 		else if(.@RandomMsg == 4) {
@@ -221,9 +188,7 @@ prontera,182,214,4	script	Lauds#Memorial	58,{
 		}
 		else if(.@RandomMsg == 5) {
 			mes "[Mad Sago Lauds]";
-			mes "It is a mistake to think you can";
-			mes "solve any major problems just with";
-			mes "potatoes.";
+			mes "It is a mistake to think you can solve any major problems just with potatoes.";
 			close;
 		}
 	}
@@ -254,14 +219,11 @@ prontera,153,286,4	script	Memorial Plaque#Memorial	857,{
 	}
 	
 	L_CleanPlaque:
-		mes "- You see a message from the cleaned plaque.";
+		mes "- You see a message from the cleaned plaque.-";
 		next;
-		mes "-Although no sculptured marble";
-		mes "should rise to their memory,-";
-		mes "-nor engraved stone bear record of";
-		mes "their deeds,-";
-		mes "-yet will their remembrance be as";
-		mes "lasting as the land they honored.-";
+		mes "-Although no sculptured marble should rise to their memory,-";
+		mes "-nor engraved stone bear record of their deeds,-";
+		mes "-yet will their remembrance be as lasting as the land they honored.-";
 		mes "-Daniel Webster-";
 		if(Memorial08 == 9) {
 			getexp 93750,43750;
@@ -269,10 +231,8 @@ prontera,153,286,4	script	Memorial Plaque#Memorial	857,{
 		next;
 		mes "-There's another message.-";
 		next;
-		mes "-I may not have gone where I";
-		mes "intended to go,-";
-		mes "-but I think I have ended up where";
-		mes "I needed to be.-";
+		mes "-I may not have gone where I intended to go,-";
+		mes "-but I think I have ended up where I needed to be.-";
 		mes "- Douglas Adams.-";
 		if(Memorial08 == 9) { 
 			getexp 93750,43750;
@@ -280,12 +240,9 @@ prontera,153,286,4	script	Memorial Plaque#Memorial	857,{
 		next;
 		mes "-This is the last message.-";
 		next;
-		mes "-True heroism is remarkably sober,";
-		mes "very undramatic.-";
-		mes "-It is not the urge to surpass all";
-		mes "others at whatever cost,-";
-		mes "- but the urge to serve others at";
-		mes "whatever cost. -";
+		mes "-True heroism is remarkably sober, very undramatic.-";
+		mes "-It is not the urge to surpass all others at whatever cost,-";
+		mes "- but the urge to serve others at whatever cost. -";
 		mes "- Arthur Ashe -";
 		if(Memorial08 == 9) { 
 			getexp 93750,43750;
@@ -300,33 +257,24 @@ prontera,153,286,4	script	Memorial Plaque#Memorial	857,{
 prontera,150,270,4	script	Grast#Memorial	900,{
 	if(Memorial08 < 3) {
 		mes "[Grast]";
-		mes "Memorial Day is a sad and yet";
-		mes "glorious day.";
-		mes "I wonder how many people remember";
-		mes "them...";
+		mes "Memorial Day is a sad and yet glorious day.";
+		mes "I wonder how many people remember them...";
 		close;
 	}
 	
 	else if(Memorial08 == 3) {
 		mes "[Grast]";
 		mes "Oh, isn't that a Towel of Memory?";
-		mes "I'm so glad to meet someone who";
-		mes "understands the meaning of Memorial Day.";
+		mes "I'm so glad to meet someone who understands the meaning of Memorial Day.";
 		next;
 		mes "[Grast]";
-		mes "It is very important to know what";
-		mes "we're celebrating today, don't you think?";
+		mes "It is very important to know what we're celebrating today, don't you think?";
 		next;
 		mes "[Grast]";
-		mes "If you like to go on a journey to";
-		mes "pay a tribute to Memorial Day,";
-		mes "you should bring me some materials";
-		mes "I ask.";
+		mes "If you like to go on a journey to pay a tribute to Memorial Day, you should bring me some materials I ask.";
 		next;
 		mes "[Grast]";
-		mes "Please bring me ^FF0000one of each Red";
-		mes "Potion, Green Potion, Awakening";
-		mes "Potion, and Butterfly Wing^000000.";
+		mes "Please bring me ^FF0000one of each Red Potion, Green Potion, Awakening Potion, and Butterfly Wing^000000.";
 		mes "I'll be waiting for your return.";
 		set Memorial08,4;
 		close;
@@ -335,20 +283,14 @@ prontera,150,270,4	script	Grast#Memorial	900,{
 	else if(Memorial08 == 4) {
 		if (countitem(501) < 1 || countitem(506) < 1 || countitem(656) < 1 || countitem(602) < 1) {
 			mes "[Grast]";
-			mes "Oops, you haven't brought all";
-			mes "materials.";
+			mes "Oops, you haven't brought all materials.";
 			mes "Please make sure you need to bring me";
-			mes " ^FF0000one of each Red Potion, Green";
-			mes "Potion, Awakening Potion, and";
-			mes "Butteryfly Wing^000000.";
+			mes "^FF0000one of each Red Potion, Green Potion, Awakening Potion, and Butteryfly Wing^000000.";
 			next;
 			mes "[Grast]";
-			mes "You'll have to bring me more";
-			mes "materials afterwards.";
-			mes "If you feel too burdened to gather";
-			mes "them all,";
-			mes "I can provide you all the";
-			mes "materials.";
+			mes "You'll have to bring me more materials afterwards.";
+			mes "If you feel too burdened to gather them all,";
+			mes "I can provide you all the materials.";
 			next;
 			if (select("I'll gather the rest.:Give me the materials.") == 2) {
 				goto L_GiveUp;
@@ -362,9 +304,7 @@ prontera,150,270,4	script	Grast#Memorial	900,{
 			mes "Hmm, you will need some more things still...";
 			next;
 			mes "[Grast]";
-			mes "Please bring me ^FF0000one of each Trap,";
-			mes "Yggdrasil Leaf, Blue Gemstone,";
-			mes "Crystal Mirror, Meat, and Carrot.^000000";
+			mes "Please bring me ^FF0000one of each Trap, Yggdrasil Leaf, Blue Gemstone, Crystal Mirror, Meat, and Carrot.^000000";
 			mes "I'll be waiting for your return.";
 			set Memorial08,5;
 			close;
@@ -376,15 +316,11 @@ prontera,150,270,4	script	Grast#Memorial	900,{
 			mes "[Grast]";
 			mes "Oops, you haven't brought all materials.";
 			mes "Please make sure you'll have to bring me";
-			mes " ^FF0000one of each Trap, Yggdrasil Leaf,";
-			mes "Blue Gemstone, Crystal Mirror,";
-			mes "Meat, and Carrot^000000.";
+			mes "^FF0000one of each Trap, Yggdrasil Leaf, Blue Gemstone, Crystal Mirror, Meat, and Carrot^000000.";
 			next;
 			mes "[Grast]";
-			mes "You'll have to bring me more";
-			mes "materials afterwards.";
-			mes "If you feel too burdened to gather them all,";
-			mes "I can provide you all the materials.";
+			mes "You'll have to bring me more materials afterwards.";
+			mes "If you feel too burdened to gather them all, I can provide you all the materials.";
 			next;
 			if (select("I'll gather the rest.:Give me the materials.") == 2) {
 				goto L_GiveUp;
@@ -396,9 +332,7 @@ prontera,150,270,4	script	Grast#Memorial	900,{
 			mes "Hmm, I think you need just a little bit more.";
 			next;
 			mes "[Grast]";
-			mes "Please bring me ^FF0000one of each Pet";
-			mes "Incubator, Firecracker, Poring";
-			mes "Doll, and Bouquet^000000.";
+			mes "Please bring me ^FF0000one of each Pet Incubator, Firecracker, Poring Doll, and Bouquet^000000.";
 			set Memorial08,6;
 			close;
 		}
@@ -409,17 +343,14 @@ prontera,150,270,4	script	Grast#Memorial	900,{
 			mes "[Grast]";
 			mes "Oops, you haven't brought all materials.";
 			mes "Please make sure you need to bring me";
-			mes " ^FF0000one of each Pet Incubator,";
-			mes "Firecracker, Poring Doll and Bouquet";
+			mes "^FF0000one of each Pet Incubator, Firecracker, Poring Doll and Bouquet";
 			next;
 			mes "[Grast]";
 			mes "They are the last batch of materials.";
-			mes "If you feel too burdened to gather them all,";
-			mes "I can provide you all the materials.";
+			mes "If you feel too burdened to gather them all, I can provide you all the materials.";
 			next;
 			mes "[Grast]";
-			mes "If I provide you all materials, however,";
-			mes "I won't have to thank you for your service.";
+			mes "If I provide you all materials, however, I won't have to thank you for your service.";
 			mes "It's your call, " + strcharinfo(0) + ".";
 			next;
 			if (select("I'll gather the rest.:Give me the materials.") == 2) {
@@ -429,19 +360,15 @@ prontera,150,270,4	script	Grast#Memorial	900,{
 		}else{
 			mes "[Grast]";
 			mes "Have you brought the materials I asked?";
-			mes "Ah, thank you for your hard work;";
-			mes "you've brought all of them.";
+			mes "Ah, thank you for your hard work you've brought all of them.";
 			next;
 			mes "[Grast]";
-			mes "I hope you'll learn a valuable";
-			mes "lesson while gathering these materials.";
+			mes "I hope you'll learn a valuable lesson while gathering these materials.";
 			mes "I like to give you a small gift for your service.";
 			next;
 			mes "[Grast]";
-			mes "You see, I have two different gifts";
-			mes "in my each hand.";
-			mes "A best thing would be giving you";
-			mes "both of them, but...";
+			mes "You see, I have two different gifts in my each hand.";
+			mes "A best thing would be giving you both of them, but...";
 			mes "How do you like to test your luck, " + strcharinfo(0) + "?";
 			next;
 			mes "[Grast]";
@@ -451,8 +378,7 @@ prontera,150,270,4	script	Grast#Memorial	900,{
 				mes "[Grast]";
 				mes "You've selected my right hand.";
 				mes "Here's the gift for you.";
-				mes "Now, please bring all these";
-				mes "materials to Lauds.";
+				mes "Now, please bring all these materials to Lauds.";
 				set Memorial08, 7;
 				getitem 617,1;
 				close;
@@ -460,8 +386,7 @@ prontera,150,270,4	script	Grast#Memorial	900,{
 			mes "[Grast]";
 			mes "You've selected my left hand.";
 			mes "Here's the gift for you.";
-			mes "Now, please bring all these";
-			mes "materials to Lauds.";
+			mes "Now, please bring all these materials to Lauds.";
 			set Memorial08, 7;
 			getitem 12109,1;
 			close;
@@ -471,43 +396,32 @@ prontera,150,270,4	script	Grast#Memorial	900,{
 	else if(Memorial08 == 7) {
 		mes "[Grast]";
 		mes "Have you met Lauds?";
-		mes "I hope you'll remember your freedom";
-		mes "and happiness";
-		mes "are built on thousands of lives";
-		mes "sacrificed in war.";
+		mes "I hope you'll remember your freedom and happiness are built on thousands of lives sacrificed in war.";
 		close;
 	}
 
 	else if(Memorial08 >= 8) {
 		mes "[Grast]";
-		mes "A towel is about the most massively";
-		mes "useful thing an adventurer can have.";
+		mes "A towel is about the most massively useful thing an adventurer can have.";
 		close;
 	}
 
 	L_GiveUp:
 		mes "[Grast]";
-		mes "Oh, I see. I guess you're quite";
-		mes "busy nowadays, huh?";
-		mes "No problem; I'll give you all the";
-		mes "supplies...";
+		mes "Oh, I see. I guess you're quite busy nowadays, huh?";
+		mes "No problem; I'll give you all the supplies...";
 		next;
 		mes "[Grast]";
 		mes "There you go.";
-		mes "I crushed all the items together";
-		mes "into a more compact form for you";
-		mes "You can thank me later for that";
-		mes "extra service.";
+		mes "I crushed all the items together into a more compact form for you.";
+		mes "You can thank me later for that extra service.";
 		mes "Please bring them to Lauds.";
 		set Memorial08,7;
 		getitem 7126,1;
 		next;
 		mes "[Grast]";
-		mes "By the way, he had an unfortunate";
-		mes "accident, and has kind of lost his";
-		mes "mind.";
-		mes "Please don't be alarmed even if he";
-		mes "starts babbling.";
+		mes "By the way, he had an unfortunate accident, and has kind of lost his mind.";
+		mes "Please don't be alarmed even if he starts babbling.";
 		close;
 	
 	L_Continue:
diff --git a/npc/events/StPatrick_2008.txt b/npc/events/StPatrick_2008.txt
index eeaa49dd9..8fac11831 100644
--- a/npc/events/StPatrick_2008.txt
+++ b/npc/events/StPatrick_2008.txt
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
 //===== By: ==================================================
 //= Kisuka
 //===== Current Version: =====================================
-//= 1.4
+//= 1.5
 //===== Compatible With: =====================================
 //= eAthena SVN
 //===== Description: =========================================
@@ -29,6 +29,7 @@
 //=	Corrected EXP rewards, and some typos.
 //= 1.3 Corrected random in item function. [L0ne_W0lf]
 //= 1.4 Replaced effect numerics with constants. [Samuray22]
+//= 1.5 Revamped the script. [Kisuka]
 //============================================================
 
 prt_fild05,170,286,4	script	Anxious Leprechaun#8pday	954,{
@@ -37,159 +38,105 @@ prt_fild05,170,286,4	script	Anxious Leprechaun#8pday	954,{
 		mes "Hmm...";
 		mes "Tis a fine day it be.";
 		mes "If you have a moment to spare.";
-		mes "Come here to me now,";
-		mes "come here and I'll tell ya something.";
+		mes "Come here to me now, come here and I'll tell ya something.";
 		next;
 		select("Go ahead.");
 		mes "[O'Riley the Leprechaun]";
-		mes "These past years I've";
-		mes "come to see the world";
-		mes "and each time the snakes";
-		mes "have stolen me treasure.";
+		mes "These past years I've come to see the world and each time the snakes have stolen me treasure.";
 		next;
 		select("Oh?");
 		mes "[O'Riley the Leprechaun]";
-		mes "Ye fine folks of this land";
-		mes "have been so gracious";
-		mes "to recover me treasure again and again.";
+		mes "Ye fine folks of this land have been so gracious to recover me treasure again and again.";
 		next;
 		mes "[O'Riley the Leprechaun]";
-		mes "I've learned me lesson";
-		mes "and will never forget how those";
-		mes "vile snakes have wronged me.";
+		mes "I've learned me lesson and will never forget how those vile snakes have wronged me.";
 		next;
 		select("What did you do?");
 		mes "[O'Riley the Leprechaun]";
-		mes "I made a safe place to hide me";
-		mes "treasure.";
-		mes "Hidden in a secret place the treasure";
-		mes "would be safe until I returned";
-		mes "to the world the following year.";
+		mes "I made a safe place to hide me treasure.";
+		mes "Hidden in a secret place the treasure would be safe until I returned to the world the following year.";
 		next;
 		mes "[O'Riley the Leprechaun]";
-		mes "This year, I have made me journey";
-		mes "to see the outside world once again.";
-		mes "I traveled to me cache of gold";
-		mes "I found it to be safe and";
-		mes "undisturbed.";
+		mes "This year, I have made me journey to see the outside world once again.";
+		mes "I traveled to me cache of gold I found it to be safe and undisturbed.";
 		next;
 		mes "[O'Riley the Leprechaun]";
-		mes "I thought to meself,";
-		mes "I am very clever to hide the";
-		mes "treasure from the snakes.";
+		mes "I thought to meself, I am very clever to hide the treasure from the snakes.";
 		mes "Oh, but I was a fool still.";
 		next;
 		select("What happened?");
 		mes "[O'Riley the Leprechaun]";
 		mes "My hiding place was too clever.";
-		mes "I pulled and I heaved and pushed,";
-		mes "but the hiding place would not";
-		mes "budge.";
-		mes "So once again, I am without";
-		mes "treasure this year.";
+		mes "I pulled and I heaved and pushed, but the hiding place would not budge.";
+		mes "So once again, I am without treasure this year.";
 		next;
 		mes "[O'Riley the Leprechaun]";
-		mes "I have not even begun brewing";
-		mes "me famous green ale on account of";
-		mes "this mess.";
-		mes "I will ask ye, will ya help get me";
-		mes "treasure back?";
+		mes "I have not even begun brewing me famous green ale on account of this mess.";
+		mes "I will ask ye, will ya help get me treasure back?";
 		next;
 		if (select("Sure, I can help you.:I'm too busy.") == 2) {
 			mes "[O'Riley the Leprechaun]";
 			mes "Aye, I understand.";
-			mes "Thank you for listening to me";
-			mes "tale.";
+			mes "Thank you for listening to me tale.";
 			close;
 		}
 		mes "[O'Riley the Leprechaun]";
 		mes "To find my treasure it be true.";
-		mes "To my treasure I give my secret to";
-		mes "you.";
+		mes "To my treasure I give my secret to you.";
 		next;
 		mes "[O'Riley the Leprechaun]";
-		mes "So, listen well and make no";
-		mes "omissions.";
-		mes "Make the journey to the city of";
-		mes "magicians.";
-		mes "Over the bridge and across the";
-		mes "water";
-		mes "Climb the mountain until north ye";
-		mes "can travel no farther.";
+		mes "So, listen well and make no omissions.";
+		mes "Make the journey to the city of magicians.";
+		mes "Over the bridge and across the water";
+		mes "Climb the mountain until north ye can travel no farther.";
 		next;
 		mes "[O'Riley the Leprechaun]";
-		mes "Passed the stone steps set into the";
-		mes "air.";
-		mes "Hidden in the mountain side,";
-		mes "me treasure is there.";
+		mes "Passed the stone steps set into the air.";
+		mes "Hidden in the mountain side, me treasure is there.";
 		next;
 		mes "[O'Riley the Leprechaun]";
-		mes "Ye must find a way to break it";
-		mes "open.";
-		mes "Ye will need a mighty explosion";
-		mes "to free the cache to be sure.";
+		mes "Ye must find a way to break it open.";
+		mes "Ye will need a mighty explosion to free the cache to be sure.";
 		next;
 		mes "[O'Riley the Leprechaun]";
 		mes "Ye might try some Firecrackers.";
-		mes "Course, Ye would need a great";
-		mes "number of them,";
-		mes "Ye would need at least ^FF0000200";
-		mes "Firecreackers^000000";
+		mes "Course, Ye would need a great number of them, Ye would need at least ^FF0000200 Firecreackers^000000";
 		set StPatrick2008,1;
 		close;
 	}
 	else if (StPatrick2008 == 1) {
 		mes "[O'Riley the Leprechaun]";
 		mes "Tis a fine day it be.";
-		mes "Have you found me treasure yet,";
-		mes "have you?";
-		mes "Me hiding spot is a might hard to";
-		mes "crack.";
+		mes "Have you found me treasure yet, have you?";
+		mes "Me hiding spot is a might hard to crack.";
 		next;
 		mes "[O'Riley the Leprechaun]";
 		mes "Ye might try some Firecrackers.";
-		mes "Course, Ye would need a great";
-		mes "number of them,";
-		mes "Ye would need at least ^FF0000200";
-		mes "Firecreackers^000000";
+		mes "Course, Ye would need a great number of them, Ye would need at least ^FF0000200 Firecreackers^000000";
 		next;
 		mes "[O'Riley the Leprechaun]";
-		mes "I be understanding if you can't get";
-		mes "to it";
-		mes "to be sure to be sure.";
+		mes "I be understanding if you can't get to it to be sure to be sure.";
 		close;
 	}
 	else if (StPatrick2008 == 2) {
 		mes "[O'Riley the Leprechaun]";
 		mes "Oh, welcome back!";
-		mes "Thank you for returning me";
-		mes "treasure!";
+		mes "Thank you for returning me treasure!";
 		mes "Me gratitude knows no bounds!";
 		next;
 		mes "[O'Riley the Leprechaun]";
 		mes "I am so happy,";
-		mes "I'll be starting up me brew right";
-		mes "away";
+		mes "I'll be starting up me brew right away";
 		next;
 		mes "[O'Riley the Leprechaun]";
-		mes "It seems that the snakes have";
-		mes "returned this year";
-		mes "and are here to steal my treasure";
-		mes "again.";
+		mes "It seems that the snakes have returned this year and are here to steal my treasure again.";
 		next;
 		mes "[O'Riley the Leprechaun]";
-		mes "The snakes carry the coins";
-		mes "of my kinsmen and must be";
-		mes "punished.";
-		mes "But ye have had a long journey, for";
-		mes "which I am";
-		mes "very grateful.";
+		mes "The snakes carry the coins of my kinsmen and must be punished.";
+		mes "But ye have had a long journey, for which I am very grateful.";
 		next;
 		mes "[O'Riley the Leprechaun]";
-		mes "When ye have had a moment to rest";
-		mes "ye legs,";
-		mes "come talk to me again and we may";
-		mes "speak again";
+		mes "When ye have had a moment to rest ye legs, come talk to me again and we may speak again";
 		close2;
 		set StPatrick2008,3;
     		getexp 200000,70000;
@@ -202,39 +149,23 @@ prt_fild05,170,286,4	script	Anxious Leprechaun#8pday	954,{
 		next;
 		mes "[O'Riley the Leprechaun]";
 		mes "Thank you for coming by again.";
-		mes "The snakes carry the coins of my";
-		mes "kindsmen";
-		mes "and must be punished.";
+		mes "The snakes carry the coins of my kindsmen and must be punished.";
 		next;
 		mes "[O'Riley the Leprechaun]";
-		mes "I would be so generous to give you";
-		mes "some of my famous brew";
-		mes "if you would bring me the";
-		mes "ill-gotten gains carried";
-		mes "by those vile snakes";
+		mes "I would be so generous to give you some of my famous brew if you would bring me the ill-gotten gains carried by those vile snakes";
 		next;
-		mes "And if you find one of the";
-		mes "treasures of my kin";
-		mes "please bring me those coins";
-		mes "so that the snakes don't get them.";
+		mes "And if you find one of the treasures of my kin please bring me those coins so that the snakes don't get them.";
 		set StPatrick2008,4;
 		close;
 	}
 	else if (StPatrick2008 == 4) {
 		mes "[O'Riley the Leprechaun]";
-		mes "The snakes carry too many of me";
-		mes "kinsmen's coin";
-		mes "I be passing out pints of me brew";
-		mes "as reward for their return.";
+		mes "The snakes carry too many of me kinsmen's coin I be passing out pints of me brew as reward for their return.";
 		next;
 		mes "[O'Riley the Leprechaun]";
-		mes "I'll reward ye with one jug of ale";
-		mes "for ^0000FF1 Golden Coins^000000, ^0000FF5 Silver Coins^000000,";
-		mes "or ^0000FF10 Bronze Coins^000000.";
-		mes "It be a fair bounty for the";
-		mes "ill-gotten coins.";
-		mes "So, what kind of coin have ye";
-		mes "brought?";
+		mes "I'll reward ye with one jug of ale for ^0000FF1 Golden Coins^000000, ^0000FF5 Silver Coins^000000, or ^0000FF10 Bronze Coins^000000.";
+		mes "It be a fair bounty for the ill-gotten coins.";
+		mes "So, what kind of coin have ye brought?";
 		next;
 		switch(select("Bronze Coins:Silver Coins:Gold Coins:Quit.")) {
 		case 1:
@@ -263,9 +194,7 @@ prt_fild05,170,286,4	script	Anxious Leprechaun#8pday	954,{
 			close;
 		case 4:
 			mes "[O'Riley the Leprechaun]";
-			mes "I'll reward ye with one jug of ale";
-			mes "for ^0000FF1 Golden Coins^000000, ^0000FF5 Silver Coins^000000,";
-			mes "or ^0000FF10 Bronze Coins^000000.";
+			mes "I'll reward ye with one jug of ale for ^0000FF1 Golden Coins^000000, ^0000FF5 Silver Coins^000000, or ^0000FF10 Bronze Coins^000000.";
 			close;
 		}
 	}
@@ -276,37 +205,30 @@ mjolnir_01,272,363,4	script	Rocks#08StPattysDay	-1,1,1,{
 
 OnTouch:
 	if (StPatrick2008 < 1) {
-		mes "- You've found a pile of rocks";
-		mes "covered with soil. -";
+		mes "- You've found a pile of rocks covered with soil. -";
 		close;
 	}
 	if (StPatrick2008 == 1) {
-		mes "- You've found a pile of rocks";
-		mes "covered with soil. -";
+		mes "- You've found a pile of rocks covered with soil. -";
 		next;
 		if (countitem(12018) < 200) {
 			mes "The rocks won't budge.";
-			mes "Maybe O'Riley knows a way to move";
-			mes "the rocks.";
+			mes "Maybe O'Riley knows a way to move the rocks.";
 			close;
 		}
 		else {
 			if (select("Use Firecrackers.:Ignore") == 2) {
 				close;
 			}
-			mes "You buried 200 Firecrackers";
-			mes "under the pile of rocks.";
+			mes "You buried 200 Firecrackers under the pile of rocks.";
 			mes "You light the fuse.";
 			next;
 			mes "*BOOM!*";
 			specialeffect2 EF_LORD;
 			next;
-			mes "After A cloud of dust and smoke has";
-			mes "dissipated,";
-			mes "You've found a box between the";
-			mes "rocks and soil.";
-			mes "This box must contain O'Riley's";
-			mes "valuables.";
+			mes "After A cloud of dust and smoke has dissipated,";
+			mes "You've found a box between the rocks and soil.";
+			mes "This box must contain O'Riley's valuables.";
 			mes "Let's bring the box to O'Riley.";
 			close2;
 			set StPatrick2008,2;
diff --git a/npc/events/christmas_2008.txt b/npc/events/christmas_2008.txt
index 99b783a22..a696de501 100644
--- a/npc/events/christmas_2008.txt
+++ b/npc/events/christmas_2008.txt
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
 //===== By: ==================================================
 //= Kisuka
 //===== Current Version: =====================================
-//= 1.0
+//= 1.1
 //===== Compatible With: =====================================
 //= eAthena SVN
 //===== Description: =========================================
@@ -15,33 +15,31 @@
 //= Must enable X-mas08 mobs in mob_db2.
 //===== Additional Comments: =================================
 //= 1.0 First version. [Kisuka]
+//= 1.1 Fixed some issues, revamped the whole script. [Kisuka]
 //============================================================
 
-// ============== Carolling - Music Box ================
+// ============== Caroller - Music Box ================
 // =====================================================
-prontera,226,306,4	script	Carolling#iROxmas08	79,{
+prontera,226,306,4	script	Caroller#iROxmas08	79,{
 	if (iROxmas08carol < 1 || iROxmas08carol == 3) {
 		if (iROxmas08carol == 3) {
-			mes "[Carolling]";
-			mes "Jingle Bells! Jingle Bells! Jingle";
-			mes "all the way!";
-			mes "O' what fun it is to ride in a";
-			mes "one-horse open sleeeigh, Hey!";
+			mes "[Caroller]";
+			mes "Jingle Bells! Jingle Bells! Jingle all the way!";
+			mes "O' what fun it is to ride in a one-horse open sleeeigh, Hey!";
 			next;
-			mes "[Carolling]";
+			mes "[Caroller]";
 			mes "Merry Christmas!";
-			mes "Hey! You! What comes to mind when";
-			mes "you think about Christmas?";
+			mes "Hey! You! What comes to mind when you think about Christmas?";
 			next;
 		}else{
-			mes "[Carolling]";
+			mes "[Caroller]";
 			mes "Jingle Bells! Jingle Bells! Jingle all the way!";
 			next;
-			specialeffect 75;
-			mes "[Carolling]";
+			specialeffect EF_GLORIA;
+			mes "[Caroller]";
 			mes "O' what fun it is to ride in a one-horse open sleigh!";
 			next;
-			mes "[Carolling]";
+			mes "[Caroller]";
 			mes "Merry Christmas!";
 			if (Sex) {
 				mes "Hey, boy! What comes to mind when";
@@ -54,291 +52,229 @@ prontera,226,306,4	script	Carolling#iROxmas08	79,{
 		switch(select("Santa Claus:Gift Boxes:Carols:Santa Costumes:Fake Santa Antonio")) {
 
 			case 1:
-				mes "[Carolling]";
+				mes "[Caroller]";
 				mes "Santa Claus!";
 				mes "You're so innocent!!";
 				mes "Ah!";
 				next;
-				mes "[Carolling]";
+				mes "[Caroller]";
 				mes "Here's a secret!";
-				mes "There's a rumor that Santa Claus";
-				mes "lives in a certain village all";
-				mes "throughout the year.";
+				mes "There's a rumor that Santa Claus lives in a certain village all throughout the year.";
 				next;
-				mes "[Carolling]";
+				mes "[Caroller]";
 				mes "But now!!!";
 				mes "In this Christmas season!!";
-				mes "You guys can meet Santa on either";
-				mes "of the five possible villages";
-				mes "throughout Rune-Midgerts!";
+				mes "You guys can meet Santa on either of the five possible villages throughout Rune-Midgerts!";
 				next;
-				mes "[Carolling]";
-				mes "If you win over Santa, you can get";
-				mes "a gift. Would you go for it?";
+				mes "[Caroller]";
+				mes "If you win over Santa, you can get a gift. Would you go for it?";
 				next;
 				emotion 18;
-				mes "[Carolling]";
-				mes "Carolling's hot news! Ha!";
+				mes "[Caroller]";
+				mes "Caroller's hot news! Ha!";
 				mes "Isn't that big news?";
 				close;
 
 			case 2:
-				mes "[Carolling]";
+				mes "[Caroller]";
 				mes "Gift boxes?! All right!";
-				mes "Isn't it thrilling to open gifts";
-				mes "over your head!!";
+				mes "Isn't it thrilling to open gifts over your head!!";
 				next;
-				mes "[Carolling]";
+				mes "[Caroller]";
 				mes "Anyway, did you know...";
-				mes "Some villain, a fake Santa robbed";
-				mes "some gifts from the good Santa!";
+				mes "Some villain, a fake Santa robbed some gifts from the good Santa!";
 				next;
-				mes "[Carolling]";
-				mes "Furthermore, he has put bad magic";
-				mes "on the gifts so that they become";
-				mes "monsters!";
+				mes "[Caroller]";
+				mes "Furthermore, he has put bad magic on the gifts so that they become monsters!";
 				next;
 				emotion 18;
-				mes "[Carolling]";
-				mes "Carolling's hot news! Ha!";
+				mes "[Caroller]";
+				mes "Caroller's hot news! Ha!";
 				mes "Isn't it amazing?";
 				close;
 
 			case 3:
 				if (iROxmas08carol == 3) {
-					mes "[Carolling]";
+					mes "[Caroller]";
 					mes "Ah, a music box is useful.";
 					next;
-					mes "[Carolling]";
-					mes "Though we can't all play it around";
-					mes "the village as we planned, it's";
-					mes "cool that you carry it.";
+					mes "[Caroller]";
+					mes "Though we can't all play it around the village as we planned, it's cool that you carry it.";
 					next;
-					mes "[Carolling]";
-					mes "We want to enjoy carols all";
-					mes "together... I hope to get Crystal";
-					mes "Pieces!";
+					mes "[Caroller]";
+					mes "We want to enjoy carols all together... I hope to get Crystal Pieces!";
 					next;
-					mes "[Carolling]";
-					mes "If you can get ^0000FFSinging Crystal";
-					mes "Pieces^000000, give them to me please?";
+					mes "[Caroller]";
+					mes "If you can get ^0000FFSinging Crystal Pieces^000000, give them to me please?";
 					next;
 					select("Why not? Sure, I can give you some.");
 					if (countitem(6092) < 6) {
-						mes "[Carolling]";
+						mes "[Caroller]";
 						mes "Yes, please.";
 						next;
-						mes "[Carolling]";
-						mes "If you can get ^0000FFSinging Crystal";
-						mes "Pieces^000000, give them to me please?";
+						mes "[Caroller]";
+						mes "If you can get ^0000FFSinging Crystal Pieces^000000, give them to me please?";
 						close;
 					}else{
-						mes "[Carolling]";
+						mes "[Caroller]";
 						mes "Wow, you have them.";
 						next;
-						mes "[Carolling]";
-						mes "I can bake you a cake,";
-						mes "and I can carve your name on the";
-						mes "cake, if you want!";
+						mes "[Caroller]";
+						mes "I can bake you a cake, and I can carve your name on the cake, if you want!";
 						next;
 						if (select("No, thanks.:Please name it for me.") == 2) {
-							mes "[Carolling]";
+							mes "[Caroller]";
 							mes "Thank for your help!";
 							next;
-							mes "[Carolling]";
-							mes "Many people live in the giant";
-							mes "world!";
-							mes "So many people hope to hear";
-							mes "carolling, yet I always lack";
-							mes "Crystal pieces.";
+							mes "[Caroller]";
+							mes "Many people live in the giant world!";
+							mes "So many people hope to hear Caroller, yet I always lack Crystal pieces.";
 							next;
-							mes "[Carolling]";
+							mes "[Caroller]";
 							mes "If you can get ^0000FFSinging Crystal Pieces^000000, give them to me please?";
 							next;
 							emotion 18;
 							delitem 6092,6;
 							getnameditem 12354,"+strcharinfo(0)+";
-							mes "[Carolling]";
-							mes "Let's care about others around you";
-							mes "on this Christmas season!";
+							mes "[Caroller]";
+							mes "Let's care about others around you on this Christmas season!";
 							close;
 						}else{
-							mes "[Carolling]";
+							mes "[Caroller]";
 							mes "Oh!";
 							mes "Shyness!";
 							next;
-							mes "[Carolling]";
-							mes "Anyway, thanks a lot for your";
-							mes "help.";
+							mes "[Caroller]";
+							mes "Anyway, thanks a lot for your help.";
 							next;
-							mes "[Carolling]";
-							mes "Many people live in the giant";
-							mes "world!";
-							mes "So many people hope to hear";
-							mes "carolling, yet I always lack";
-							mes "Crystal pieces.";
+							mes "[Caroller]";
+							mes "Many people live in the giant world!";
+							mes "So many people hope to hear Caroller, yet I always lack Crystal pieces.";
 							next;
-							mes "[Carolling]";
+							mes "[Caroller]";
 							mes "If you can get ^0000FFSinging Crystal Pieces^000000, give them to me please?";
 							next;
 							emotion 18;
 							delitem 6092,6;
 							getitem 12354,1;
-							mes "[Carolling]";
-							mes "Let's care about others around you";
-							mes "on this Christmas season!";
+							mes "[Caroller]";
+							mes "Let's care about others around you on this Christmas season!";
 							close;
 						}
 					}
 				}
-					mes "[Carolling]";
+					mes "[Caroller]";
 					mes "You know about Christmas!";
 					mes "Talking about Christmas...";
 					mes "...it's carols!!!";
 					mes "I've been waiting for this for when";
 					mes "Christmas comes around!";
 					next;
-					mes "[Carolling]";
-					mes "But there's been no caroling here";
-					mes "and there like before, so we can't";
-					mes "feel the Christmas spirit.";
+					mes "[Caroller]";
+					mes "But there's been no caroling here and there like before, so we can't feel the Christmas spirit.";
 					next;
-					mes "[Carolling]";
-					mes "So, I installed a Singing Crystal";
-					mes "in Prontera...";
+					mes "[Caroller]";
+					mes "So, I installed a Singing Crystal in Prontera...";
 					next;
-					mes "[Carolling]";
-					mes "but that jerk Antonio broke the";
-					mes "crystal!";
+					mes "[Caroller]";
+					mes "but that jerk Antonio broke the crystal!";
 					next;
-					mes "[Carolling]";
-					mes "The gift boxes have been changing";
-					mes "into monsters since Antonio placed";
-					mes "some magic on them, so the monsters";
-					mes "ate up the crystal fragments!";
+					mes "[Caroller]";
+					mes "The gift boxes have been changing into monsters since Antonio placed some magic on them, so the monsters ate up the crystal fragments!";
 					next;
-					mes "[Carolling]";
-					mes "I am so devastated, since the";
-					mes "Singing Crystal has been the hope";
-					mes "of many children around the villages.";
+					mes "[Caroller]";
+					mes "I am so devastated, since the Singing Crystal has been the hope of many children around the villages.";
 					next;
 					if (select("There's no other way to carol?:You can hear carols in Lutie.") == 2) {
-						mes "[Carolling]";
-						mes "And just stay there, every";
-						mes "Christmas, for your whole life?";
+						mes "[Caroller]";
+						mes "And just stay there, every Christmas, for your whole life?";
 						next;
 						mes "["+strcharinfo(0)+"]";
 						mes "What? What do you mean?";
 						next;
-						mes "[Carolling]";
+						mes "[Caroller]";
 						mes "Oh, nevermind.";
 						mes "Ah...";
 						close;
 					}
-					mes "[Carolling]";
-					mes "Maybe, it's quite hard to make a";
-					mes "jukebox for the villages, but a";
-					mes "music box might be possible.";
+					mes "[Caroller]";
+					mes "Maybe, it's quite hard to make a jukebox for the villages, but a music box might be possible.";
 					next;
-					mes "[Carolling]";
-					mes "We need the ^0000FFSinging Crystal Pieces^000000";
-					mes "that the monsters ate up.";
+					mes "[Caroller]";
+					mes "We need the ^0000FFSinging Crystal Pieces^000000 that the monsters ate up.";
 					next;
-					mes "[Carolling]";
-					mes "Please bring me ^0000FF6 Singing Crystal";
-					mes "Pieces^000000, and you will be rewarded";
-					mes "with presents!";
+					mes "[Caroller]";
+					mes "Please bring me ^0000FF6 Singing Crystal Pieces^000000, and you will be rewarded with presents!";
 					next;
-					mes "[Carolling]";
+					mes "[Caroller]";
 					mes "Sounds cool, huh!!";
 					next;
 					select("........................");
-					mes "[Carolling]";
-					mes "...Why are you staring at me like";
-					mes "that?";
+					mes "[Caroller]";
+					mes "...Why are you staring at me like that?";
 					next;
-					mes "[Carolling]";
-					mes "You're thinking that we are always";
-					mes "getting our plans spoiled, aren't";
-					mes "you?";
+					mes "[Caroller]";
+					mes "You're thinking that we are always getting our plans spoiled, aren't you?";
 					next;
-					mes "[Carolling]";
-					mes "I know that we are not good at";
-					mes "controlling stuff, but our rewards";
-					mes "are good, right?";
+					mes "[Caroller]";
+					mes "I know that we are not good at controlling stuff, but our rewards are good, right?";
 					next;
 					select("........................");
-					mes "[Carolling]";
+					mes "[Caroller]";
 					mes "Hey, we treat you good...";
 					next;
 					select("........................");
-					mes "[Carolling]";
+					mes "[Caroller]";
 					mes "You are so cruel to me!";
 					mes "Bad! Bad!";
 					next;
-					mes "[Carolling]";
-					mes "Please, for our children's";
-					mes "hope!!!?";
-					mes "Please bring me 6 Singing Crystal";
-					mes "Pieces from ^0000FFViolent Gift Boxes^000000!";
+					mes "[Caroller]";
+					mes "Please, for our children's hope!!!?";
+					mes "Please bring me 6 Singing Crystal Pieces from ^0000FFViolent Gift Boxes^000000!";
 					next;
 					emotion 33;
-					mes "[Carolling]";
-					mes "They're definitely as";
-					mes "harsh as their name.";
+					mes "[Caroller]";
+					mes "They're definitely as harsh as their name.";
 					mes "Go on please!";
 					set iROxmas08carol,1;
 					close;
 
 			case 4:
-				mes "[Carolling]";
+				mes "[Caroller]";
 				mes "Santa costumes!!";
-				mes "You know, the santa costumes that";
-				mes "the monsters are wearing now aren't";
-				mes "genuine!";
+				mes "You know, the santa costumes that the monsters are wearing now aren't genuine!";
 				next;
-				mes "[Carolling]";
-				mes "The rumor 'round here is, Lutie's";
-				mes "designer made these costumes.";
+				mes "[Caroller]";
+				mes "The rumor 'round here is, Lutie's designer made these costumes.";
 				next;
-				mes "[Carolling]";
-				mes "Every year, adventurers challenge";
-				mes "to attack Antonio the fake Santa,";
-				mes "but there's no way to catch up to";
-				mes "him due to his hat and costume!";
+				mes "[Caroller]";
+				mes "Every year, adventurers challenge to attack Antonio the fake Santa, but there's no way to catch up to him due to his hat and costume!";
 				next;
-				mes "[Carolling]";
-				mes "Are there some spcial abilities";
-				mes "within them?";
-				mes "There's still the designer in the";
-				mes "Christmas village... How about";
-				mes "asking her to make that costume?";
+				mes "[Caroller]";
+				mes "Are there some spcial abilities within them?";
+				mes "There's still the designer in the Christmas village... How about asking her to make that costume?";
 				next;
 				emotion 18;
-				mes "[Carolling]";
-				mes "Carolling's hot news! Ha!";
+				mes "[Caroller]";
+				mes "Caroller's hot news! Ha!";
 				mes "It's hot, huh?";
 				close;
 
 
 			case 5:
-				mes "[Carolling]";
+				mes "[Caroller]";
 				mes "A-N-T-O-N-I-O!!!";
-				mes "As I heard, this Antonio is quite";
-				mes "different from before.";
+				mes "As I heard, this Antonio is quite different from before.";
 				next;
-				mes "[Carolling]";
-				mes "He seems to be quite resolved with";
-				mes "himself since he ran away from";
-				mes "people before.";
+				mes "[Caroller]";
+				mes "He seems to be quite resolved with himself since he ran away from people before.";
 				next;
-				mes "[Carolling]";
-				mes "And he isn't alone anymore... is";
-				mes "what I heard...";
+				mes "[Caroller]";
+				mes "And he isn't alone anymore... is what I heard...";
 				next;
 				emotion 18;
-				mes "[Carolling]";
-				mes "Carolling's hot news! Ha!";
+				mes "[Caroller]";
+				mes "Caroller's hot news! Ha!";
 				mes "Hotness, right?";
 				close;
 		}
@@ -346,80 +282,64 @@ prontera,226,306,4	script	Carolling#iROxmas08	79,{
 	
 	if (iROxmas08carol == 1) {
 		if (countitem(6092) < 6) {
-			mes "[Carolling]";
-			mes "Maybe, it's quite hard to make a";
-			mes "jukebox for the villages, but a";
-			mes "music box might be possible.";
+			mes "[Caroller]";
+			mes "Maybe, it's quite hard to make a jukebox for the villages, but a music box might be possible.";
 			next;
-			mes "[Carolling]";
-			mes "We need the ^0000FFSinging Crystal Pieces^000000";
-			mes "that the monsters ate up.";
+			mes "[Caroller]";
+			mes "We need the ^0000FFSinging Crystal Pieces^000000 that the monsters ate up.";
 			next;
-			mes "[Carolling]";
+			mes "[Caroller]";
 			mes "Please bring me ^0000FF6 Singing Crystal Pieces^000000, and you will be rewarded with presents!";
 			next;
-			mes "[Carolling]";
-			mes "For all of the children of this";
-			mes "world!!!";
-			mes "Please bring me ^0000FFSinging Crystal";
-			mes "Pieces^000000 from ^0000FFViolent Gift Boxes^000000!";
+			mes "[Caroller]";
+			mes "For all of the children of this world!!!";
+			mes "Please bring me ^0000FFSinging Crystal Pieces^000000 from ^0000FFViolent Gift Boxes^000000!";
 			next;
 			emotion 33;
-			mes "[Carolling]";
+			mes "[Caroller]";
 			mes "Be careful!";
-			mes "They're definitely as";
-			mes "harsh as their name.";
+			mes "They're definitely as harsh as their name.";
 			mes "Take care!!!";
 			close;
 		}else{
-			specialeffect 75;
-			mes "[Carolling]";
+			specialeffect EF_GLORIA;
+			mes "[Caroller]";
 			mes "Don't cry, don't cry!";
-			mes "Santa won't give you a";
-			mes "gift if you're crying.";
+			mes "Santa won't give you a gift if you're crying.";
 			next;
-			mes "[Carolling]";
+			mes "[Caroller]";
 			select("I got them!");
-			mes "[Carolling]";
+			mes "[Caroller]";
 			mes "Wow, you got them!";
 			mes "They are so cruel, aren't they?";
 			mes "I'm happy to see you again.";
 			next;
-			mes "[Carolling]";
+			mes "[Caroller]";
 			mes "Let's count together!";
 			mes "... ...";
 			mes "Six!!";
 			next;
-			mes "[Carolling]";
-			mes "All right! We can start to make our";
-			mes "music box with crystal fragments.";
+			mes "[Caroller]";
+			mes "All right! We can start to make our music box with crystal fragments.";
 			next;
-			mes "[Carolling]";
-			mes "We would amplify the sounds of the";
-			mes "crystal fragments to sound through";
-			mes "the music box.";
+			mes "[Caroller]";
+			mes "We would amplify the sounds of the crystal fragments to sound through the music box.";
 			next;
-			mes "[Carolling]";
-			mes "You know, a music box that sounds";
-			mes "like a jukebox!";
+			mes "[Caroller]";
+			mes "You know, a music box that sounds like a jukebox!";
 			next;
-			mes "[Carolling]";
-			mes "It's handy. You can carry it, as";
-			mes "well as listen to sweet carols";
-			mes "anywhere. Doesn't that sound";
-			mes "cool!?";
+			mes "[Caroller]";
+			mes "It's handy. You can carry it, as well as listen to sweet carols anywhere.";
+			mes "Doesn't that sound cool!?";
 			next;
-			mes "[Carolling]";
-			mes "So, we need more of some";
-			mes "materials.";
-			mes "^0000FF10 Wooden Block, 1 Hammer Of";
-			mes "Blacksmith, 1 Jubilee, 10 Sticky";
-			mes "Mucus, 3-karat Diamond^000000!";
+			mes "[Caroller]";
+			mes "So, we need more of some materials.";
+			mes "^0000FF10 Trunk, 1 Hammer Of Blacksmith, 1 Jubilee, 10 Sticky Mucus, 3carat Diamond^000000!";
 			next;
 			delitem 6092,6;
 			emotion 33;
 			set iROxmas08carol,2;
-			mes "[Carolling]";
+			mes "[Caroller]";
 			mes "Those are all needed.";
 			mes "Isn't that easy?";
 			close;
@@ -428,86 +348,72 @@ prontera,226,306,4	script	Carolling#iROxmas08	79,{
 	
 	if (iROxmas08carol == 2) {
 		if (countitem(1019) < 10 || countitem(1005) < 1 || countitem(7312) < 1 || countitem(938) < 10 || countitem(732) < 1) {
-			mes "[Carolling]";
-			mes "We can make a music box";
-			mes "with Singing Crystal Pieces.";
-			mes "It's handy, you can hear carols";
-			mes "anywhere. Sounds cool?";
+			mes "[Caroller]";
+			mes "We can make a music box with Singing Crystal Pieces.";
+			mes "It's handy, you can hear carols anywhere. Sounds cool?";
 			next;
-			mes "[Carolling]";
+			mes "[Caroller]";
 			mes "So, we need more of some materials.";
-			mes "^0000FF10 Wooden Block, 1 Hammer Of";
-			mes "Blacksmith, 1 Jubilee, 10 Sticky";
-			mes "Mucus, 3-karat Diamond^000000!";
+			mes "^0000FF10 Trunk, 1 Hammer Of Blacksmith, 1 Jubilee, 10 Sticky Mucus, 3carat Diamond^000000!";
 			next;
 			emotion 33;
-			mes "[Carolling]";
+			mes "[Caroller]";
 			mes "That's all we need.";
 			mes "Isn't that easy?";
 			close;
 		}else{
-			specialeffect 75;
-			mes "[Carolling]";
+			specialeffect EF_GLORIA;
+			mes "[Caroller]";
 			mes "Jingle bells, jingle bells,";
 			mes "jingle all the way!";
 			mes "O what fun it is to ride, in a";
 			mes "one... horse... o-pen... sleigh!!!";
 			next;
-			mes "[Carolling]";
+			mes "[Caroller]";
 			mes "Wow!";
 			mes "You came back!";
-			mes "Did you bring all the";
-			mes "materials?";
+			mes "Did you bring all the materials?";
 			next;
-			mes "[Carolling]";
+			mes "[Caroller]";
 			mes "Good!";
-			mes "No need to hesitate! Let's get";
-			mes "started to make our music box.";
+			mes "No need to hesitate! Let's get started to make our music box.";
 			next;
-			mes "[Carolling]";
-			specialeffect 101;
-			mes "Blacksmith hammers on wooden";
-			mes "block... and we shape the frame.";
+			mes "[Caroller]";
+			specialeffect EF_REPAIRWEAPON;
+			mes "Blacksmith hammers on trunk... and we shape the frame.";
 			next;
-			mes "[Carolling]";
+			mes "[Caroller]";
 			//(effect - stones from ground?)
-			mes "Please use the Singing Crystal";
-			mes "Pieces for a column, the Diamond as";
-			mes "a prop, and the Sticky Mucus as";
-			mes "glue.";
+			mes "Please use the Singing Crystal Pieces for a column, the Diamond as a prop, and the Sticky Mucus as glue.";
 			next;
-			mes "[Carolling]";
-			specialeffect 1;
+			mes "[Caroller]";
+			specialeffect EF_HIT2;
 			mes "And now...";
 			mes "we decorate with a Jubilee...";
 			next;
-			mes "[Carolling]";
-			specialeffect 88;
+			mes "[Caroller]";
+			specialeffect EF_SUFFRAGIUM;
 			mes "The last step...!";
 			mes "Breating life into it!";
 			next;
-			mes "[Carolling]";
+			mes "[Caroller]";
 			mes "It's done now!!!";
 			next;
-			mes "[Carolling]";
+			mes "[Caroller]";
 			mes "It's so cool! Isn't it cute!!?!";
 			next;
-			mes "[Carolling]";
-			mes "You did as I requested, so I will";
-			mes "give you gifts, as promised.";
+			mes "[Caroller]";
+			mes "You did as I requested, so I will give you gifts, as promised.";
 			next;
-			mes "[Carolling]";
+			mes "[Caroller]";
 			mes "One, is this music box.";
-			mes "Please play this music box all over";
-			mes "the villages!";
+			mes "Please play this music box all over the villages!";
 			next;
-			mes "[Carolling]";
-			mes "Another present is a Christmas cake";
-			mes "especially shaped like your name!";
-			mes "I made this cake shaped like your";
-			mes "name!";
+			mes "[Caroller]";
+			mes "Another present is a Christmas cake especially shaped like your name!";
+			mes "I made this cake shaped like your name!";
 			next;
-			mes "[Carolling]";
+			mes "[Caroller]";
 			mes "Don't worry, it tastes good.";
 			next;
 			emotion 33;
@@ -519,7 +425,7 @@ prontera,226,306,4	script	Carolling#iROxmas08	79,{
 			delitem 938,10;
 			delitem 732,1;
 			set iROxmas08carol,3;
-			mes "[Carolling]";
+			mes "[Caroller]";
 			mes "Thanks a lot.";
 			mes "Merry Christmas!";
 			mes "Have a good holiday season!";
@@ -532,22 +438,18 @@ prontera,226,306,4	script	Carolling#iROxmas08	79,{
 // =====================================================
 -	script	Santa Claus#iROxmas08::08santa	718,{
 	mes "[Santa Claus]";
-	mes "Wow! Were you naughty or nice this";
-	mes "year?";
-	mes "All right, what comes to your mind";
-	mes "when you think about Christmas?";
+	mes "Wow! Were you naughty or nice this year?";
+	mes "All right, what comes to your mind when you think about Christmas?";
 	next;
 	switch(select("Carolling:Santa Claus:Gift Boxes:Santa Costume:Not much really...")) {
 	
 	case 1:
 		mes "[Santa Claus]";
 		mes "Carolling! That's good!";
-		mes "A sweet carol always makes";
-		mes "Christmas more happy!!!";
+		mes "A sweet carol always makes Christmas more happy!!!";
 		next;
 		mes "[Santa Claus]";
-		mes "Yes indeed Carolling spreads Joy";
-		mes "throughout the world?";
+		mes "Yes indeed Carolling spreads Joy throughout the world?";
 		close;
 
 	case 2:
@@ -559,75 +461,53 @@ prontera,226,306,4	script	Carolling#iROxmas08	79,{
 		}
 		next;
 		mes "[Santa Claus]";
-		mes "But you should be wary of a fake";
-		mes "Santa romaing around.";
-		mes "Have you heard of Antonio, who";
-		mes "invades villages every Christmas?";
+		mes "But you should be wary of a fake Santa romaing around.";
+		mes "Have you heard of Antonio, who invades villages every Christmas?";
 		next;
 		mes "[Santa Claus]";
-		mes "He has stolen my gifts, as well as";
-		mes "attacked adventurers around Toy and";
-		mes "Lutie field.";
+		mes "He has stolen my gifts, as well as attacked adventurers around Toy and Lutie field.";
 		next;
 		mes "[Santa Claus]";
-		mes "A bad Santa ruins us good Santa's";
-		mes "reputations!";
-		mes "The World Santa Organization is";
-		mes "considering this a grave";
-		mes "situation.";
+		mes "A bad Santa ruins us good Santa's reputations!";
+		mes "The World Santa Organization is considering this a grave situation.";
 		close;
 	
 	case 3:
 		mes "[Santa Claus]";
 		mes "A gift box! That sounds good!";
-		mes "It's so exciting to open gift boxes";
-		mes "when you wake up on Christmas";
-		mes "morning!!!";
+		mes "It's so exciting to open gift boxes when you wake up on Christmas morning!!!";
 		next;
 		mes "[Santa Claus]";
-		mes "But we have very little gifts now,";
-		mes "since Santa Antonio has stolen my";
-		mes "gift bag.";
+		mes "But we have very little gifts now, since Santa Antonio has stolen my gift bag.";
 		next;
 		mes "[Santa Claus]";
-		mes "Many adventurers try to catch up";
-		mes "to him, but he is not easy to catch.";
+		mes "Many adventurers try to catch up to him, but he is not easy to catch.";
 		next;
 		mes "[Santa Claus]";
-		mes "Anyway let those adventurers try to";
-		mes "catch him, I have a small game for";
-		mes "you.";
+		mes "Anyway let those adventurers try to catch him, I have a small game for you.";
 		next;
 		mes "[Santa Claus]";
-		mes "I will give you a small gift if you";
-		mes "beat me!";
+		mes "I will give you a small gift if you beat me!";
 		next;
 		mes "[Santa Claus]";
-		mes "Do you want to play a game with";
-		mes "me?";
+		mes "Do you want to play a game with me?";
 		next;
 		if (select("No, thanks.:Yes, I would.") == 1) {
 			mes "[Santa Claus]";
-			mes "Aww, don't be afraid. If you've";
-			mes "been a little naughty this year I";
-			mes "won't stuff your stockings with";
-			mes "coal.";
+			mes "Aww, don't be afraid.";
+			mes "If you've been a little naughty this year I won't stuff your stockings with coal.";
 			next;
 			mes "[Santa Claus]";
-			mes "I will stay here throughout the";
-			mes "Christmas season, just visit me";
-			mes "when you change your mind.";
+			mes "I will stay here throughout the Christmas season, just visit me when you change your mind.";
 			close;
 		}
 		if (gettimetick(2) < SantaCardTime) {
 			mes "[Santa Claus]";
-			mes "Um... You've played the game";
-			mes "recently haven't you?";
+			mes "Um... You've played the game recently haven't you?";
 			next;
 			mes "[Santa Claus]";
 			mes "You can try the game once a hour.";
-			mes "Please visit me after the one hour";
-			mes "has passed.";
+			mes "Please visit me after the one hour has passed.";
 			close;
 		}
 		set .@SantaCardTurn,0;
@@ -636,40 +516,35 @@ prontera,226,306,4	script	Carolling#iROxmas08	79,{
 		mes "Wow! You're so cool!";
 		next;
 		mes "[Santa Claus]";
-		mes "Let me explain how to play this";
-		mes "game.";
+		mes "Let me explain how to play this game.";
 		next;
 		mes "[Santa Claus]";
-		mes "It's quite simple. I will pick one";
-		mes "of three cards: Poring Card,";
-		mes "Ghostring Card, and Angeling Card.";
-		mes "Guess which card I pick and";
-		mes "you're a winner!";
+		mes "It's quite simple.";
+		mes "I will pick one of three cards: Poring Card, Ghostring Card, and Angeling Card.";
+		mes "Guess which card I pick and you're a winner!";
 		next;
 		mes "[Santa Claus]";
-		mes "If you guess right 3 times out of";
-		mes "5, I will give you a gift.";
+		mes "If you guess right 3 times out of 5, I will give you a gift.";
 		mes "Let's get started!";
 		next;
 		while(.@SantaCardTurn != 5) {
 			emotion 56;
 			mes "[Santa Claus]";
-			mes "First let me shuffle up these";
-			mes "cards... Ok!!!";
+			mes "First let me shuffle up these cards... Ok!!!";
 			next;
-			specialeffect 0;
+			specialeffect EF_HIT1;
 			mes "[Santa Claus]";
 			mes "One!";
 			next;
-			specialeffect 1;
+			specialeffect EF_HIT2;
 			mes "[Santa Claus]";
 			mes "Two!";
 			next;
-			specialeffect 2;
+			specialeffect EF_HIT3;
 			mes "[Santa Claus]";
 			mes "Three!";
 			next;
-			specialeffect 18;
+			specialeffect EF_STEAL;
 			mes "[Santa Claus]";
 			mes "I'm picking up only one!";
 			next;
@@ -725,8 +600,7 @@ prontera,226,306,4	script	Carolling#iROxmas08	79,{
 				cutin "",255;
 				mes "[Santa Claus]";
 				mes "You're lucky.";
-				mes "Can you guess the right card the";
-				mes "next time around?";
+				mes "Can you guess the right card the next time around?";
 				next;
 			}else{
 				emotion 0;
@@ -739,8 +613,8 @@ prontera,226,306,4	script	Carolling#iROxmas08	79,{
 		}
 		if (.@SantaCardWins < 3) {
 			mes "["+strcharinfo(0)+"]";
-			mes "This is just luck. Let me try";
-			mes "again!!";
+			mes "This is just luck.";
+			mes "Let me try again!!";
 			next;
 			mes "[Santa Claus]";
 			mes "Whenever you want.";
@@ -750,9 +624,8 @@ prontera,226,306,4	script	Carolling#iROxmas08	79,{
 			mes "You're so good!";
 			next;
 			mes "[Santa Claus]";
-			mes "Now this gift is for you. Put your";
-			mes "hand into the bag and pick only";
-			mes "one.";
+			mes "Now this gift is for you.";
+			mes "Put your hand into the bag and pick only one.";
 			set .@SantaCardPrize, rand(1,12);
 			next;
 			if (.@SantaCardPrize == 1) {
@@ -793,24 +666,19 @@ prontera,226,306,4	script	Carolling#iROxmas08	79,{
 			}
 			set SantaCardTime,gettimetick(2)+3600;
 			mes "[Santa Claus]";
-			mes "Good job! Thanks for playing the";
-			mes "card game with me! Merry";
-			mes "Christmas!";
+			mes "Good job! Thanks for playing the card game with me!";
+			mes "Merry Christmas!";
 			close;
 		}
 
 	case 4:
 		mes "[Santa Claus]";
-		mes "Do you mean that ever so";
-		mes "fashionable costume for Santa's and";
-		mes "youngsters!?!";
-		mes "Light-weight, fashionable, and";
-		mes "keeps you warm!";
+		mes "Do you mean that ever so fashionable costume for Santa's and youngsters!?!";
+		mes "Light-weight, fashionable, and keeps you warm!";
 		next;
 		mes "[Santa Claus]";
-		mes "There used to be designer who";
-		mes "visited my house to make my Santa";
-		mes "costumes. Do you have any ideas?";
+		mes "There used to be designer who visited my house to make my Santa costumes.";
+		mes "Do you have any ideas?";
 		close;
 	
 	case 5:
@@ -835,10 +703,8 @@ prontera,226,306,4	script	Carolling#iROxmas08	79,{
 		mes "...";
 		next;
 		mes "[Santa Claus]";
-		mes "You should open your heart to the";
-		mes "spirit of Christmas!";
-		mes "Once you do, I know you'll be able";
-		mes "to think of something.";
+		mes "You should open your heart to the spirit of Christmas!";
+		mes "Once you do, I know you'll be able to think of something.";
 		close;
 	}
 }
@@ -854,32 +720,25 @@ morocc,158,104,4	duplicate(08santa)	Santa Claus#0805	718
 // =====================================================
 xmas_in,89,92,4	script	Louise Kim#iROxmas08	714,{
 	mes "[Louise Kim]";
-	mes "I always thought about how boring";
-	mes "Santa Claus is wearing a too boring";
-	mes "costume. Too boring!";
+	mes "I always thought about how boring Santa Claus is wearing a too boring costume.";
+	mes "Too boring!";
 	next;
 	mes "[Louise Kim]";
-	mes "I could make a glamorous style for";
-	mes "him!";
+	mes "I could make a glamorous style for him!";
 	next;
 	mes "[Louise Kim]";
-	mes "I once made a costume for";
-	mes "the notorious figure Antonio!";
-	mes "The reason catching up to him";
-	mes "is so hard, is that his clothes";
-	mes "have been given strong power!";
+	mes "I once made a costume for the notorious figure Antonio!";
+	mes "The reason catching up to him is so hard, is that his clothes have been given strong power!";
 	mes "I blessed them with good luck!";
 	next;
 	emotion 3;
 	mes "[Louise Kim]";
 	mes "Preta Porter!!";
-	mes "Which is quite luxurious";
-	mes "but sold at good price ~";
+	mes "Which is quite luxurious but sold at good price ~";
 	next;
 	mes "[Louise Kim]";
-	mes "Hey loosers! You can share my sense";
-	mes "of fashion and wear my look if you";
-	mes "run a light mission for me.";
+	mes "Hey loosers!";
+	mes "You can share my sense of fashion and wear my look if you run a light mission for me.";
 	next;
 	mes "[Louise Kim]";
 	mes "Are you interested?";
@@ -887,15 +746,12 @@ xmas_in,89,92,4	script	Louise Kim#iROxmas08	714,{
 	if (select("Nope.:Yes, please.") == 1) {
 		mes "[Louise Kim]";
 		mes "Ah!";
-		mes "You're silly! You lost your big";
-		mes "chance!";
+		mes "You're silly! You lost your big chance!";
 		next;
 		emotion 18;
 		mes "[Louise Kim]";
-		mes "Come to me later if you";
-		mes "want to get the mission.";
-		mes "I, Louise Kim, am generous";
-		mes "enough to accept you next time.";
+		mes "Come to me later if you want to get the mission.";
+		mes "I, Louise Kim, am generous enough to accept you next time.";
 		close;
 	}
 	mes "[Louise Kim]";
@@ -904,13 +760,10 @@ xmas_in,89,92,4	script	Louise Kim#iROxmas08	714,{
 	mes "[Louise Kim]";
 	mes "Don't worry about this mission.";
 	mes "It's not that difficult.";
-	mes "I'm only in need of some";
-	mes "materials. Things that are";
-	mes "beyond my ability...";
+	mes "I'm only in need of some materials. Things that are beyond my ability...";
 	next;
 	mes "[Louise Kim]";
-	mes "Anyway, can you bring me some";
-	mes "stuff?";
+	mes "Anyway, can you bring me some stuff?";
 	next;
 	if (select("Why not? What do you need?:Sorry, no time.") == 2) {
 		emotion 18;
@@ -922,25 +775,18 @@ xmas_in,89,92,4	script	Louise Kim#iROxmas08	714,{
 	}
 	mes "[Louise Kim]";
 	mes "All right, you're cool!!";
-	mes "You need to bring me: ^0000FFCotton Shirt,";
-	mes "3 Red Potion, Holy Water, 4 Wrapping";
-	mes "Paper, Wrapping Lace^000000..";
+	mes "You need to bring me: ^0000FFCotton Shirt, 3 Red Potion, Holy Water, 4 Wrapping Paper, Wrapping Lace^000000.";
 	next;
 	mes "[Louise Kim]";
-	mes "If you bring me all that stuff, I";
-	mes "can make you a glamorous Santa";
-	mes "costume.";
+	mes "If you bring me all that stuff, I can make you a glamorous Santa costume.";
 	next;
 	if (countitem(2301) < 1 || countitem(501) < 3 || countitem(523) < 1 || countitem(7175) < 4 || countitem(7174) < 1) {		
 			mes "[Louise Kim]";
-			mes "If you were to bring me all the";
-			mes "stuff, I would make you a wonderful";
-			mes "costume, for free...";
+			mes "If you were to bring me all the stuff, I would make you a wonderful costume, for free...";
 			next;
 			emotion 3;
 			mes "[Louise Kim]";
-			mes "Please see me again if you are";
-			mes "interested.";
+			mes "Please see me again if you are interested.";
 			close;
 	}else{
 		select("Here you are.");
@@ -948,20 +794,18 @@ xmas_in,89,92,4	script	Louise Kim#iROxmas08	714,{
 		mes "[Louise Kim]";
 		mes "Oh! Good!";
 		mes "Let's not delay.";
-		mes "I will show you my limitless";
-		mes "ability.";
+		mes "I will show you my limitless ability.";
 		next;
 		mes "-She pours everything in a pot-";
 		mes "-even the shirt goes in!-";
 		mes "-She takes it out with skill-";
 		mes "-and many blessings she sings.-";
 		next;
-		specialeffect 42;
+		specialeffect EF_BLESSING;
 		emotion 2;
 		mes "[Louise Kim]";
 		mes "By artist, Louise Kim!";
-		mes "All over the world will be blessed";
-		mes "tonight!";
+		mes "All over the world will be blessed tonight!";
 		next;
 		mes "-Pour red potion in another pot-";
 		mes "-then stir all of its parts.-";
@@ -971,20 +815,19 @@ xmas_in,89,92,4	script	Louise Kim#iROxmas08	714,{
 		mes "-String by string-";
 		mes "-Count your blessings and sing!-";
 		next;
-		specialeffect 75;
+		specialeffect EF_GLORIA;
 		emotion 2;
 		mes "[Louise Kim]";
 		mes "By artist, Louise Kim!";
-		mes "All over the world will be blessed";
-		mes "tonight!";
+		mes "All over the world will be blessed tonight!";
 		next;
 		mes "-She is knitting clothes-";
 		mes "-with a hooked needle-";
 		mes "-with her great skill.-";
-		mes "Spread your blessings,-";
-		mes "cheer and goodwill!-";
+		mes "-Spread your blessings,-";
+		mes "-cheer and goodwill!-";
 		next;
-		specialeffect 91;
+		specialeffect EF_BENEDICTIO;
 		emotion 3;
 		mes "[Louise Kim]";
 		mes "This is miraculous!";
@@ -995,14 +838,11 @@ xmas_in,89,92,4	script	Louise Kim#iROxmas08	714,{
 		mes "All right! Isn't it wonderful?";
 		mes "You can call it what you wish.";
 		mes "My fashion is radiant.";
-		mes "I ain't envious of Designer";
-		mes "Pierre.";
+		mes "I ain't envious of Designer Pierre.";
 		next;
 		emotion 18;
 		mes "[Louise Kim]";
-		mes "I am supposed to get paid well,";
-		mes "however I will just let it";
-		mes "be free, since this is Christmas!";
+		mes "I am supposed to get paid well, however I will just let it be free, since this is Christmas!";
 		next;
 		delitem 2301,1;
 		delitem 501,3;
@@ -1011,9 +851,7 @@ xmas_in,89,92,4	script	Louise Kim#iROxmas08	714,{
 		delitem 7174,1;
 		getitem 12132,1;
 		mes "[Louise Kim]";
-		mes "Go brag about these wonderful";
-		mes "clothes. There wouldn't be";
-		mes "any without me, Louise Kim.";
+		mes "Go brag about these wonderful clothes. There wouldn't be any without me, Louise Kim.";
 		close;
 	}
 }
diff --git a/npc/events/halloween_2008.txt b/npc/events/halloween_2008.txt
index 33f54b411..9f467ae09 100644
--- a/npc/events/halloween_2008.txt
+++ b/npc/events/halloween_2008.txt
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
 //===== By: ==================================================
 //= Kisuka
 //===== Current Version: =====================================
-//= 1.0
+//= 1.1
 //===== Compatible With: =====================================
 //= eAthena SVN
 //===== Description: =========================================
@@ -14,6 +14,7 @@
 //= You must enable the event monsters in mob_db2.
 //===== Additional Comments: =================================
 //= 1.0 First version. [Kisuka]
+//= 1.1 Some small changes. [Kisuka]
 //============================================================
 
 payon,162,176,4	script	Halloween Magician#iRO08	704,{
@@ -21,15 +22,12 @@ payon,162,176,4	script	Halloween Magician#iRO08	704,{
 	if(Hallow08 < 1) {
 			mes "[Halloween Magician]";
 			mes "Kkkkkkkkk!";
-			mes "I have a special event this";
-			mes "Halloween that tests your luck and";
-			mes "agility.";
+			mes "I have a special event this Halloween that tests your luck and agility.";
 			mes "Are you interested?";
 			next;
 			mes "[Halloween Magician]";
 			mes "Come on! Don't be a wuss!";
-			mes "If you collect enough tickets";
-			mes "you can get good prizes!";
+			mes "If you collect enough tickets you can get good prizes!";
 			mes "So what do you say?";
 			next;
 			goto MainMenu;
@@ -60,56 +58,40 @@ payon,162,176,4	script	Halloween Magician#iRO08	704,{
 		set Hallow08Kill,0;
 		mes "[Halloween Magician]";
 		mes "As I promised";
-		mes "You can get Halloween tickets";
-		mes "for cool items.";
+		mes "You can get Halloween tickets for cool items.";
 		close;
 	}
 
 	if(Hallow08 > 0) {
 		mes "[Halloween Magician]";
-		mes "Well, do you want to hear the rules";
-		mes "again or,";
-		mes "just get back to it...";
+		mes "Well, do you want to hear the rules again or, just get back to it...";
 		next;
 		goto MainMenu2;
 	}
 	
 		Rules:
 			mes "[Halloween Magician]";
-			mes "This village is like a virtual";
-			mes "Payon. There are zombies and ghouls";
-			mes "roaming around";
-			mes "and three southern exits, but only";
-			mes "one works.";
+			mes "This village is like a virtual Payon.";
+			mes "There are zombies and ghouls roaming around and three southern exits, but only one works.";
 			mes "That's up to you to find out.";
 			next;
 			mes "[Halloween Magician]";
-			mes "You can't use any skills";
-			mes "to kill the ghouls or zombies.";
+			mes "You can't use any skills to kill the ghouls or zombies.";
 			mes "And one more thing...";
 			mes "you shouldn't forget...";
 			next;
 			mes "[Halloween Magician]";
-			mes "All participants";
-			mes "should be wearing nothing.";
-			mes "Put all belongings in your storage";
-			mes "and come back here when your weight";
-			mes "is '0'.";
+			mes "All participants should be wearing nothing.";
+			mes "Put all belongings in your storage and come back here when your weight is '0'.";
 			next;
 			mes "[Halloween Magician]";
 			mes "Oh and one more thing!";
-			mes "You can't be riding a PecoPeco or";
-			mes "have a Cart.";
-			mes "If you are, then I will remove them";
-			mes "before you enter.";
+			mes "You can't be riding a PecoPeco or have a Cart.";
+			mes "If you are, then I will remove them before you enter.";
 			mes "Got it?";
 			next;
 			mes "[Halloween Magician]";
-			mes "Remember, there are three exits but";
-			mes "only one works randomly,";
-			mes "the zombies and ghouls roaming";
-			mes "around there can't be killed";
-			mes "and you can't be wearing anything.";
+			mes "Remember, there are three exits but only one works randomly, the zombies and ghouls roaming around there can't be killed and you can't be wearing anything.";
 			next;
 			if (Hallow08 > 0) {
 				mes "[Halloween Magician]";
@@ -128,26 +110,21 @@ payon,162,176,4	script	Halloween Magician#iRO08	704,{
 			if (Weight > 0) {
 				mes "[Halloween Magician]";
 				mes "Gosh!";
-				mes "There's always a black sheep";
-				mes "anywhere.";
+				mes "There's always a black sheep anywhere.";
 				next;
 				mes "[Halloween Magician]";
-				mes "You think I wouldn't notice that";
-				mes "your weight is above '0'?";
+				mes "You think I wouldn't notice that your weight is above '0'?";
 				mes "You're overweight...";
 				close;
 			}else{
 				mes "[Halloween Magician]";
-				mes "You seem good to go,";
-				mes "and your weight is just right.";
+				mes "You seem good to go, and your weight is just right.";
 				next;
 				mes "[Halloween Magician]";
-				mes "I was quite swamped with my work,";
-				mes "so I'm exhausted.";
+				mes "I was quite swamped with my work, so I'm exhausted.";
 				next;
 				mes "[Halloween Magician]";
-				mes "I sometimes forget to send you";
-				mes "there...";
+				mes "I sometimes forget to send you there...";
 				next;
 				mes "[Halloween Magician]";
 				mes "I hope you come back well.";
@@ -166,13 +143,11 @@ payon,162,176,4	script	Halloween Magician#iRO08	704,{
 			
 		TicketExchange:
 			mes "[Halloween Magician]";
-			mes "You want to exchange tickets for";
-			mes "prizes?";
+			mes "You want to exchange tickets for prizes?";
 			mes "Good job! Kkkkkk!";
 			next;
 			mes "[Halloween Magician]";
-			mes "Lemme tell you what items you can";
-			mes "exchange for.";
+			mes "Lemme tell you what items you can exchange for.";
 			next;
 			mes "[Halloween Magician]";
 			mes "5 tickets for Pumpkin Pie.";
@@ -182,8 +157,7 @@ payon,162,176,4	script	Halloween Magician#iRO08	704,{
 			mes "200 tickets for Old Card Album.";
 			next;
 			mes "[Halloween Magician]";
-			mes "What would you like to exchange";
-			mes "for?";
+			mes "What would you like to exchange for?";
 			next;
 			switch(select("Pumpkin Pie:Pumpkin-Head:Old Blue Box:Old Purple Box:Old Card Album")) {
 				case 1:
@@ -248,8 +222,7 @@ payon,162,176,4	script	Halloween Magician#iRO08	704,{
 		mes "[Halloween Magician]";
 		mes "You don't have enough tickets!";
 		mes "Can't you even count?";
-		mes "Please come here with the right";
-		mes "number of tickets.";
+		mes "Please come here with the right number of tickets.";
 		close;
 
 	Enough:
diff --git a/npc/events/valentinesday_2009.txt b/npc/events/valentinesday_2009.txt
index 24eb24e01..a9db606aa 100644
--- a/npc/events/valentinesday_2009.txt
+++ b/npc/events/valentinesday_2009.txt
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
 //===== By: ==================================================
 //= Kisuka
 //===== Current Version: =====================================
-//= 1.2
+//= 1.3
 //===== Compatible With: =====================================
 //= eAthena SVN
 //===== Description: =========================================
@@ -20,6 +20,7 @@
 //===== Additional Comments: =================================
 //= 1.0 First version. [Kisuka]
 //= 1.1-1.2 Fixed exploits with unlimited rings and non deleting choco [Lupus]
+//= 1.3 Some Changes. [Kisuka]
 //============================================================
 
 // Marco Bassinio (Chocolate/Chocolate Box maker)
@@ -37,17 +38,12 @@ prontera,164,174,4	script	Trader#Val09	58,{
 		case 1:
 			mes "[Marco Bassinio]";
 			mes "Ahaha, my dear.";
-			mes "This chocolate is";
-			mes "nothing like others.";
-			mes "Every piece bears the";
-			mes "devotion of the person";
-			mes "who made it!";
+			mes "This chocolate is nothing like others.";
+			mes "Every piece bears the devotion of the person who made it!";
 			next;
 			mes "[Marco Bassinio]";
-			mes "So, that's why I can't sell";
-			mes "more than 5 of them at a time.";
-			mes "If you really really want more,";
-			mes "then talk to me again.";
+			mes "So, that's why I can't sell more than 5 of them at a time.";
+			mes "If you really really want more, then talk to me again.";
 			mes "How many do you want anyway?";
 			next;
 			while(.@input <= 0 || .@input > 5) {
@@ -55,29 +51,22 @@ prontera,164,174,4	script	Trader#Val09	58,{
 				if (.@input < 1) {
 					mes "[Marco Bassinio]";
 					mes "Oh, it's such a shame!";
-					mes "I'm sure you'll miss";
-					mes "this opportunity and";
-					mes "regret you didn't buy it.";
+					mes "I'm sure you'll miss this opportunity and regret you didn't buy it.";
 					next;
 					mes "[Marco Bassinio]";
-					mes "Remember, you can never";
-					mes "find this anywhere else!";
-					mes "Come back anytime,";
-					mes "when you change your mind.";
+					mes "Remember, you can never find this anywhere else!";
+					mes "Come back anytime, when you change your mind.";
 					close;
 				}
 				if (.@input > 5) {
 					mes "[Marco Bassinio]";
 					mes "Ugh.. Didn't I tell you?";
 					mes "5 is the maximum!";
-					mes "I can't sell more than";
-					mes "that to the same person.";
+					mes "I can't sell more than that to the same person.";
 					next;
 					mes "[Marco Bassinio]";
-					mes "And you know it's not";
-					mes "like an everyday meal.";
-					mes "Eating too much is not";
-					mes "really good for you.";
+					mes "And you know it's not like an everyday meal.";
+					mes "Eating too much is not really good for you.";
 					next;
 				}
 			}
@@ -90,60 +79,40 @@ prontera,164,174,4	script	Trader#Val09	58,{
 			set .@price, .@input * 5000;
 			if (Zeny < .@price) {
 				mes "[Marco Bassinio]";
-				mes "Looks like you don't have";
-				mes "enough zeny with ya.";
-				mes "Maybe you should borrow";
-				mes "some zeny from a friend.";
-				mes "Cuz, I'm not gonna";
-				mes "be here everyday.";
+				mes "Looks like you don't have enough zeny with ya.";
+				mes "Maybe you should borrow some zeny from a friend.";
+				mes "Cuz, I'm not gonna be here everyday.";
 				close;
 			}else{
 				mes "[Marco Bassinio]";
 				mes "Good for you!";
 				mes "It's also perfect as a gift!";
-				mes "You know you can't get this";
-				mes "kind of chocolate normally.";
+				mes "You know you can't get this kind of chocolate normally.";
 				next;
 				mes "[Marco Bassinio]";
-				mes "If you want more,";
-				mes "you should come back.";
-				mes "Might be a good idea to";
-				mes "buy some more while";
-				mes "you have a chance...!";
+				mes "If you want more, you should come back.";
+				mes "Might be a good idea to buy some more while you have a chance...!";
 				set Zeny,Zeny - .@price;
 				getitem 558,.@input;
 				close;
 			}
 		case 2:
 			mes "[Marco Bassinio]";
-			mes "If you want to gift-wrap";
-			mes "the chocolate, of course,";
-			mes "you need chocolate,";
-			mes "plus, wrapping paper,";
-			mes "wrapping strap and a box.";
+			mes "If you want to gift-wrap the chocolate, of course, you need chocolate, plus, wrapping paper, wrapping strap and a box.";
 			next;
 			mes "[Marco Bassinio]";
-			mes "You also need to pay";
-			mes "500 zeny to carve your";
-			mes "name on the box.";
+			mes "You also need to pay 500 zeny to carve your name on the box.";
 			mes "Are you all prepared...?";
 			next;
 			if(countitem(7175) < 1 || countitem(7174) < 1 || countitem(7948) < 1 || Zeny < 500) {
 				mes "[Marco Bassinio]";
-				mes "Hmm.. Looks like you don't";
-				mes "have enough materials to";
-				mes "decorate the gift box..";
-				mes "You can't just put your gift";
-				mes "into some plain looking box..";
+				mes "Hmm.. Looks like you don't have enough materials to decorate the gift box..";
+				mes "You can't just put your gift into some plain looking box..";
 				mes "Don't you think?";
 				next;
 				mes "[Marco Bassinio]";
-				mes "You need to bring some";
-				mes "wrapping paper,";
-				mes "wrapping strap, and a box.";
-				mes "Oh, also bring 500 zeny,";
-				mes "and don't forget to bring your";
-				mes "true loving heart with you!!";
+				mes "You need to bring some wrapping paper, wrapping strap, and a box.";
+				mes "Oh, also bring 500 zeny, and don't forget to bring your true loving heart with you!!";
 				close;
 			}
 			if(countitem(558) < 1) {
@@ -153,10 +122,7 @@ prontera,164,174,4	script	Trader#Val09	58,{
 				mes "You know I'm not an alchemist or anything.";
 				next;
 				mes "[Marco Bassinio]";
-				mes "You're not saying that you";
-				mes "want an empty chocolate box";
-				mes "without any chocolate in it,";
-				mes "am I right?";
+				mes "You're not saying that you want an empty chocolate box without any chocolate in it, am I right?";
 				close;				
 			}
 			if (!checkweight(12744,1)) {
@@ -167,11 +133,9 @@ prontera,164,174,4	script	Trader#Val09	58,{
 			}
 			mes "[Marco Bassinio]";
 			mes "Here, look!";
-			mes "It's your chocolate box";
-			mes "with your name on it.";
+			mes "It's your chocolate box with your name on it.";
 			mes "Isn't it fabulous?";
-			mes "See, your name looks";
-			mes "great on the box!";
+			mes "See, your name looks great on the box!";
 			next;
 			delitem 558,1;
 			delitem 7175,1;
@@ -186,15 +150,11 @@ prontera,164,174,4	script	Trader#Val09	58,{
 		case 3:
 			mes "[Marco Bassinio]";
 			mes "Oh, it's such a shame!";
-			mes "I'm sure you'll miss";
-			mes "this opportunity and";
-			mes "regret you didn't buy it.";
+			mes "I'm sure you'll miss this opportunity and regret you didn't buy it.";
 			next;
 			mes "[Marco Bassinio]";
-			mes "Remember, you can never";
-			mes "find this anywhere else!";
-			mes "Come back anytime,";
-			mes "when you change your mind.";
+			mes "Remember, you can never find this anywhere else!";
+			mes "Come back anytime, when you change your mind.";
 			close;
 	}
 }
@@ -203,9 +163,7 @@ prontera,164,174,4	script	Trader#Val09	58,{
 prontera,147,171,5	script	Packs Trader#Val09	58,{
 	mes "[Packs Trader]";
 	mes "Hello.";
-	mes "I am a Packs Trader,";
-	mes "I sell paper boxes and";
-	mes "supplies for packing presents.";
+	mes "I am a Packs Trader, I sell paper boxes and supplies for packing presents.";
 	next;
 	while(1) {
 		mes "[Packs Trader]";
@@ -214,18 +172,15 @@ prontera,147,171,5	script	Packs Trader#Val09	58,{
 		switch(select("Packing Paper:Packing Ribbon:Box:Cancel.")) {
 			case 1:
 				mes "[Packs Trader]";
-				mes "It's 200 zeny for";
-				mes "1 Packing Paper.";
+				mes "It's 200 zeny for 1 Packing Paper.";
 				mes "How many do you want?";
-				mes "You can't buy more";
-				mes "than 10 items at once.";
+				mes "You can't buy more than 10 items at once.";
 				next;
 				input .@input;
 				if (.@input <= 0) {
 					mes "[Packs Trader]";
 					mes "Nothing to buy.";
-					mes "Come back when";
-					mes "you need something.";
+					mes "Come back when you need something.";
 					close;
 				}
 				if (.@input > 10) {
@@ -250,9 +205,7 @@ prontera,147,171,5	script	Packs Trader#Val09	58,{
 				}else{
 					mes "[Packs Trader]";
 					mes "Here they are.";
-					mes "Hope it makes your";
-					mes "Valentine's Day";
-					mes "more pleasing!";
+					mes "Hope it makes your Valentine's Day more pleasing!";
 					set Zeny,Zeny-.@price;
 					getitem 7175,.@input;
 					next;
@@ -260,18 +213,15 @@ prontera,147,171,5	script	Packs Trader#Val09	58,{
 				}
 			case 2:
 				mes "[Packs Trader]";
-				mes "It's 200 zeny for";
-				mes "1 Packing Ribbon.";
+				mes "It's 200 zeny for 1 Packing Ribbon.";
 				mes "How many do you want?";
-				mes "You can't buy more";
-				mes "than 10 items at once.";
+				mes "You can't buy more than 10 items at once.";
 				next;
 				input .@input;
 				if (.@input <= 0) {
 					mes "[Packs Trader]";
 					mes "Nothing to buy.";
-					mes "Come back when";
-					mes "you need something.";
+					mes "Come back when you need something.";
 					close;
 				}
 				if (.@input > 10) {
@@ -296,9 +246,7 @@ prontera,147,171,5	script	Packs Trader#Val09	58,{
 				}else{
 					mes "[Packs Trader]";
 					mes "Here they are.";
-					mes "Hope it makes your";
-					mes "Valentine's Day";
-					mes "more pleasing!";
+					mes "Hope it makes your Valentine's Day more pleasing!";
 					set Zeny,Zeny-.@price;
 					getitem 7174,.@input;
 					next;
@@ -306,18 +254,15 @@ prontera,147,171,5	script	Packs Trader#Val09	58,{
 				}
 			case 3:
 				mes "[Packs Trader]";
-				mes "It's 600 zeny for";
-				mes "1 Box.";
+				mes "It's 600 zeny for 1 Box.";
 				mes "How many do you want?";
-				mes "You can't buy more";
-				mes "than 10 items at once.";
+				mes "You can't buy more than 10 items at once.";
 				next;
 				input .@input;
 				if (.@input <= 0) {
 					mes "[Packs Trader]";
 					mes "Nothing to buy.";
-					mes "Come back when";
-					mes "you need something.";
+					mes "Come back when you need something.";
 					close;
 				}
 				if (.@input > 10) {
@@ -342,9 +287,7 @@ prontera,147,171,5	script	Packs Trader#Val09	58,{
 				}else{
 					mes "[Packs Trader]";
 					mes "Here they are.";
-					mes "Hope it makes your";
-					mes "Valentine's Day";
-					mes "more pleasing!";
+					mes "Hope it makes your Valentine's Day more pleasing!";
 					set Zeny,Zeny-.@price;
 					getitem 7948,.@input;
 					next;
@@ -353,8 +296,7 @@ prontera,147,171,5	script	Packs Trader#Val09	58,{
 			case 4:
 				mes "[Packs Trader]";
 				mes "Goodbye!";
-				mes "And enjoy your";
-				mes "Valentine's Day.";
+				mes "And enjoy your Valentine's Day.";
 				close;
 		}
 	}
@@ -364,102 +306,66 @@ prontera,147,171,5	script	Packs Trader#Val09	58,{
 prontera,154,185,5	script	Event Ring Maker#Val09	721,{
 	if (BaseLevel < 75) {
 		mes "[Event Ring Maker]";
-		mes "Hello, I only make the";
-		mes "Valentine rings to those";
-		mes "experienced adventurers";
-		mes "Level 75 or above.";
+		mes "Hello, I only make the Valentine rings to those experienced adventurer Level 75 or above.";
 		next;
 		mes "[Event Ring Maker]";
-		mes "You're not fully";
-		mes "experienced yet.";
-		mes "Come back when you're";
-		mes "experienced enough to";
-		mes "handle the quests.";
+		mes "You're not fully experienced yet.";
+		mes "Come back when you're experienced enough to handle the quests.";
 		close;
 	}
 	
 	if (iROval09ring >= 1) {
 		mes "[Event Ring Maker]";
-		mes "The box with the ring,";
-		mes "carved with your name,";
-		mes "is for the one you love.";
+		mes "The box with the ring, carved with your name, is for the one you love.";
 		next;
 		mes "[Event Ring Maker]";
-		mes "As for the rings that you";
-		mes "receive from others, they";
-		mes "should all be registered";
-		mes "with the Vote Manager.";
-		mes "She is standing near";
-		mes "the Prontera Fountain.";
+		mes "As for the rings that you receive from others, they should all be registered with the Vote Manager.";
+		mes "She is standing near the Prontera Fountain.";
 		next;
 		mes "[Event Ring Maker]";
-		mes "Only the most popular";
-		mes "male and female are";
-		mes "subjected to getting rewards.";
-		mes "Be aware, and always";
-		mes "try to stay popular!";
+		mes "Only the most popular male and female are subjected to getting rewards.";
+		mes "Be aware, and always try to stay popular!";
 		close;
 	}
 	
 	mes "[Event Ring Maker]";
 	mes "Hi, there, how are ya?";
-	mes "Come to me if you're";
-	mes "interested in the event,";
-	mes "'Who's Valentine's Hottest?'";
+	mes "Come to me if you're interested in the event, 'Who's Valentine's Hottest?'";
 	next;
 	mes "[Event Ring Maker]";
-	mes "I make the most precious";
-	mes "rings that you can give";
-	mes "to your sweethearts.";
-	mes "Those rings are very special";
-	mes "because I carve";
-	mes "your names on them!";
+	mes "I make the most precious rings that you can give to your sweethearts.";
+	mes "Those rings are very special because I carve your names on them!";
 	next;
 	mes "[Event Ring Maker]";
 	mes "Isn't it exciting?";
 	mes "Isn't it such a brilliant idea?";
-	mes "Give these special rings";
-	mes "to your sweethearts!";
+	mes "Give these special rings to your sweethearts!";
 	next;
 	mes "[Event Ring Maker]";
-	mes "You should hurry 'cuz";
-	mes "this event will only";
-	mes "last for two weeks.";
-	mes "Give that special someone";
-	mes "a gift of a Valentine's ring.";
+	mes "You should hurry 'cuz this event will only last for two weeks.";
+	mes "Give that special someone a gift of a Valentine's ring.";
 	next;
 	mes "[Event Ring Maker]";
-	mes "Remember, you can only";
-	mes "generate the ring once.";
-	mes "You also need Wrapping Paper,";
-	mes "Wrapping Strap and a Box";
-	mes "to make the ring.";
+	mes "Remember, you can only generate the ring once.";
+	mes "You also need Wrapping Paper, Wrapping Strap and a Box to make the ring.";
 	next;
 	mes "[Event Ring Maker]";
-	mes "So you better be sure";
-	mes "of who you give this to.";
-	mes "By the way,";
-	mes "It costs 1,000 zeny.";
+	mes "So you better be sure of who you give this to.";
+	mes "By the way, It costs 1,000 zeny.";
 	mes "Would you like to make one?";
 	next;
 	if(select("Hmm.. I gotta give it a second thought...:Sure.") == 1) {
 		mes "[Event Ring Maker]";
 		mes "Alrighty!";
-		mes "You can't put a rush";
-		mes "on such a thing like this.";
-		mes "Think about what";
-		mes "you truly want.";
+		mes "You can't put a rush on such a thing like this.";
+		mes "Think about what you truly want.";
 		mes "Just follow your heart!";
 		close;
 	}
 	if(countitem(7175) < 1 || countitem(7174) < 1 || countitem(7948) < 1 || Zeny < 1000) {
 		mes "[Event Ring Maker]";
-		mes "Well, you don't have";
-		mes "enough materials";
-		mes "to make a gift box.";
-		mes "Check what you have,";
-		mes "and come back later";
-		mes "with all the materials.";
+		mes "Well, you don't have enough materials to make a gift box.";
+		mes "Check what you have, and come back later with all the materials.";
 		close;
 	}
 	mes "[Event Ring Maker]";
@@ -477,51 +383,33 @@ prontera,154,185,5	script	Event Ring Maker#Val09	721,{
 		getnameditem 12743,strcharinfo(0);
 	}
 	mes "[Event Ring Maker]";
-	mes "Here, the most precious";
-	mes "ring in the world!";
-	mes "Don't forget, you can never";
-	mes "make this ring again.";
+	mes "Here, the most precious ring in the world!";
+	mes "Don't forget, you can never make this ring again.";
 	next;
 	mes "[Event Ring Maker]";
-	mes "You must pick out the one";
-	mes "that you really really love,";
-	mes "and give this ring";
-	mes "to that person.";
+	mes "You must pick out the one that you really really love, and give this ring to that person.";
 	next;
 	mes "[Event Ring Maker]";
-	mes "Of course, you've got to";
-	mes "get rings from others,";
-	mes "that's the way you can";
-	mes "participate in the voting, right?";
-	mes "Challenge yourself to become";
-	mes "Valentine's Hottest!";
+	mes "Of course, you've got to get rings from others, that's the way you can participate in the voting, right?";
+	mes "Challenge yourself to become Valentine's Hottest!";
 	close;	
 }
 
 // Valentine Vote Manager (Registers votes)
 prontera,157,185,4	script	Valentine Vote Manager#v	113,{
 	mes "[Valentine Vote Manager]";
-	mes "Hello, I'm the Valentine's";
-	mes "Vote Manager.";
-	mes "I'm in charge of collecting";
-	mes "rings for this event!";
+	mes "Hello, I'm the Valentine's Vote Manager.";
+	mes "I'm in charge of collecting rings for this event!";
 	next;
 	mes "[Valentine Vote Manager]";
-	mes "I register the rings";
-	mes "you get from others";
-	mes "and I calculate the";
-	mes "total number of rings.";
+	mes "I register the rings you get from others and I calculate the total number of rings.";
 	next;
 	mes "[Valentine Vote Manager]";
-	mes "You know what I do besides";
-	mes "just counting those rings?";
-	mes "I can tell you the adventurer's";
-	mes "name who's got the";
-	mes "most number of votes.";
+	mes "You know what I do besides just counting those rings?";
+	mes "I can tell you the adventurer's name who's got the most number of votes.";
 	next;
 	mes "[Valentine Vote Manager]";
-	mes "Plus, you can also find out how";
-	mes "many votes he/she got.";
+	mes "Plus, you can also find out how many votes he/she got.";
 	next;
 	while (1) {
 		mes "[Valentine Vote Manager]";
@@ -530,15 +418,10 @@ prontera,157,185,4	script	Valentine Vote Manager#v	113,{
 		switch(select("Please register my rings.:Please count my votes.:Nothing, for now.")) {
 			case 1:
 				mes "[Valentine Vote Manager]";
-				mes "Please tell me how many";
-				mes "rings you want to register.";
+				mes "Please tell me how many rings you want to register.";
 				next;
 				mes "[Valentine Vote Manager]";
-				mes "When you write the";
-				mes "number of the rings,";
-				mes "the number shouldn't be";
-				mes "larger than the number of";
-				mes "rings you actually have.";
+				mes "When you write the number of the rings, the number shouldn't be larger than the number of rings you actually have.";
 				mes "'0', cancels everything.";
 				next;
 				input .@input;
@@ -569,8 +452,7 @@ prontera,157,185,4	script	Valentine Vote Manager#v	113,{
 					}
 					
 					mes "[Valentine Vote Manager]";
-					mes "I'll take those silver rings,";
-					mes "and count the votes for you.";
+					mes "I'll take those silver rings, and count the votes for you.";
 					mes "Thank you for participating.";
 					delitem 7947,.@input;
 					set Val09Rings,Val09Rings+.@input;
@@ -598,8 +480,7 @@ prontera,157,185,4	script	Valentine Vote Manager#v	113,{
 					}
 					
 					mes "[Valentine Vote Manager]";
-					mes "I'll take those gold rings,";
-					mes "and count the votes for you.";
+					mes "I'll take those gold rings, and count the votes for you.";
 					mes "Thank you for participating.";
 					delitem 7946,.@input;
 					set Val09Rings,Val09Rings+.@input;
@@ -613,8 +494,7 @@ prontera,157,185,4	script	Valentine Vote Manager#v	113,{
 			case 2:
 				mes "[Valentine Vote Manager]";
 				mes "Let's see...";
-				mes "You have registered..";
-				mes ".."+Val09Rings+" rings so far.";
+				mes "You have registered...."+Val09Rings+" rings so far.";
 				mes "and...";
 				next;
 				mes "[Valentine Vote Manager]";
@@ -629,8 +509,7 @@ prontera,157,185,4	script	Valentine Vote Manager#v	113,{
 				mes "[Valentine Vote Manager]";
 				mes "Hey, you can be popular too!";
 				mes "Anyone can... really!";
-				mes "Though you have to try a lot";
-				mes "harder, but still~ Hahaha!";
+				mes "Though you have to try a lot harder, but still~ Hahaha!";
 				close;
 		}
 	}
@@ -640,16 +519,12 @@ prontera,157,185,4	script	Valentine Vote Manager#v	113,{
 prt_castle,42,35,3	script	Dessert Manager#Val09	47,{
 	if (Sex) {
 		mes "[Charles Orleans]";
-		mes "Monsieur~! What brings";
-		mes "you to my beautiful atelier?";
+		mes "Monsieur~! What brings you to my beautiful atelier?";
 		mes "What is it that you want?";
-		mes "Well, my sparkling eyes";
-		mes "get dried and lose their shine";
-		mes "if not for the pretty little lady.";
+		mes "Well, my sparkling eyes get dried and lose their shine if not for the pretty little lady.";
 		next;
 		mes "[Charles Orleans]";
-		mes "Please leave me alone unless";
-		mes "you have business with me.";
+		mes "Please leave me alone unless you have business with me.";
 		mes "Haaaa~ I'm a busy person.";
 		mes "Don't bother me....";
 		mes "Annoying, annoying, annoying~~!";
@@ -658,11 +533,8 @@ prt_castle,42,35,3	script	Dessert Manager#Val09	47,{
 	
 	mes "[Charles Orleans]";
 	mes "Oh, Mademoiselle!";
-	mes "This little trifling space";
-	mes "felt like heaven the";
-	mes "minute you walked in!";
-	mes "Can I help you with";
-	mes "anything, if it's alright?";
+	mes "This little trifling space felt like heaven the minute you walked in!";
+	mes "Can I help you with anything, if it's alright?";
 	next;
 	if(select("Please, make me some chocolate.:Don't bother. I'm just passing by.") == 2) {
 		mes "[Charles Orleans]";
@@ -680,51 +552,36 @@ prt_castle,42,35,3	script	Dessert Manager#Val09	47,{
 	if(countitem(558) < 3) {
 		mes "[Charles Orleans]";
 		mes "Ahhh, Mademoiselle.";
-		mes "I'm not an alchemist,";
-		mes "or a magician.";
-		mes "I don't just make chocolate";
-		mes "out of anything.";
+		mes "I'm not an alchemist, or a magician.";
+		mes "I don't just make chocolate out of anything.";
 		next;
 		mes "[Charles Orleans]";
-		mes "I always think of making";
-		mes "chocolate as artistic work.";
+		mes "I always think of making chocolate as artistic work.";
 		mes "You see, I'm no ordinary cook...";
 		mes "I make chocolate with feelings..";
 		mes "messages of loving hearts..";
 		next;
 		mes "[Charles Orleans]";
 		mes "I make masterpieces.";
-		mes "No one can imitate";
-		mes "the looks and the taste.";
-		mes "Yes, it's nothing like";
-		mes "ordinary chocolate!";
+		mes "No one can imitate the looks and the taste.";
+		mes "Yes, it's nothing like ordinary chocolate!";
 		next;
 		mes "[Charles Orleans]";
-		mes "I'm afraid I can't make it";
-		mes "and prove it to you now.";
+		mes "I'm afraid I can't make it and prove it to you now.";
 		mes "This is really a shame!";
 		next;
 		mes "[Charles Orleans]";
-		mes "I really want to thank";
-		mes "you for visiting me";
-		mes "and if you only bring";
-		mes "^3152ff3 Chocolates^000000,";
-		mes "I'll make you chocolate";
-		mes "like you've never seen...";
+		mes "I really want to thank you for visiting me and if you only bring ^3152ff3 Chocolates^000000, I'll make you chocolate like you've never seen...";
 		next;
 		mes "[Charles Orleans]";
 		mes "never tasted before...";
-		mes "Mademoiselle, with your spirit,";
-		mes "I'm sure you can bring";
-		mes "3 pieces of chocolate.";
+		mes "Mademoiselle, with your spirit, I'm sure you can bring 3 pieces of chocolate.";
 		mes "I have no doubt at all.";
 		next;
 		mes "[Charles Orleans]";
 		mes "So... what do you think?";
 		mes "Can you bring ^3152ff3 Chocolates^000000?";
-		mes "I could get them myself,";
-		mes "but I'm tied up with so much";
-		mes "work as you see right now.";
+		mes "I could get them myself, but I'm tied up with so much work as you see right now.";
 		next;
 		mes "[Charles Orleans]";
 		mes "Adios, Mademoiselle.....";
@@ -739,28 +596,20 @@ prt_castle,42,35,3	script	Dessert Manager#Val09	47,{
 		}
 		mes "[Charles Orleans]";
 		mes "Oh, Mademoiselle!";
-		mes "I'll make the best chocolate";
-		mes "with the pieces you've brought.";
-		mes "I'm going to put the light of";
-		mes "your eyes into this chocolate";
-		mes "that no one can resist.";
+		mes "I'll make the best chocolate with the pieces you've brought.";
+		mes "I'm going to put the light of your eyes into this chocolate that no one can resist.";
 		next;
 		mes "[Charles Orleans]";
-		mes "It'll be stronger than a";
-		mes "sweet sweet love potion.....";
+		mes "It'll be stronger than a sweet sweet love potion.....";
 		next;
 		mes "[Charles Orleans]";
 		mes "Un, Deux, Trois, Quatre.....";
-		mes "Just like the ugly duckling that";
-		mes "turned to a beautiful swan-";
-		mes "Ordinary chocolate pieces are";
-		mes "becoming a piece of art!";
+		mes "Just like the ugly duckling that turned to a beautiful swan-";
+		mes "Ordinary chocolate pieces are becoming a piece of art!";
 		next;
 		mes "[Charles Orleans]";
 		mes "They're changing!";
-		mes "They're getting warm,";
-		mes "softly changing the shape,";
-		mes "getting stronger again!";
+		mes "They're getting warm, softly changing the shape, getting stronger again!";
 		mes "Oh, is it a master piece or";
 		mes "what...!!";
 		next;
@@ -774,10 +623,7 @@ prt_castle,42,35,3	script	Dessert Manager#Val09	47,{
 		next;
 		mes "[Charles Orleans]";
 		mes "Alright. Mademoiselle,";
-		mes "I hope this is just";
-		mes "what you wanted,";
-		mes "for it bears your";
-		mes "beautiful heart inside.";
+		mes "I hope this is just what you wanted, for it bears your beautiful heart inside.";
 		close;
 	}