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-##9 Latest client version:  ##6ManaPlus 1.2.3.4
-##0 Actual Release:##1 Beta1
+##9 Latest client version: ##6ManaPlus 1.2.5.12
+##0 Actual Release: ##1 Beta1
 ##0 Welcome in ##BEvol Online##b!
-##0 You can find every ##1rules##0 of ##BEvol Online##b 
-##0 at ##1http://www.evolonline.org/guide_rules.html
- 
+##0 You can find every ##0of ##BEvol Online##b ##1rules here:
+##1 http://www.evolonline.org/guide_rules.html
+
 ##7 ##BThe adventure begins!##b
 
-##7 Evolving Beta.
- 
-##0 Good news, most of the needed works for the Beta #2 has been
+
+##7 Evolving Beta
+
+##0 Good news, most of the work needed for the Beta #2 has been
 ##0 done! However, there are still some language tasks left, and
-##0 we need your help for this!
-##0 You can got more information on this topic on the URL below.
- 
-##0 The Game Rules were added on the Beta #2, the no-law world is
+##0 we would need your help for this!
+
+##0 The Game Rules were added on this new Beta. The no-law world has
 ##0 ended! You can review a copy of these rules on our site.
- 
-##0 A Development interlude will be made between the Beta Session
-##0 and the Aurora Release. This break will be to regroup most of
-##0 our futur guidelines.
 
-##0 We will prevent you of the release date on the next news. It
-##0 should technically be one week before the release itself.
- 
-##9-- Cheers, Reid.
-##9 May 2012
- 
- 
-##7 Guidelines for the futur releases has been sat!
+##0 A Development interlude will be made between the Beta session
+##0 and the Aurora release. This payse will be made to organise most
+##0 of our future guidelines.
+
+##0 We will notify you for the release date on the next news. It
+##0 should normally be one week before the Beta #2 release itself.
+
+##9 -- Cheers, Reid
+##9 April 2012
+
+
+##7 Guidelines for the next releases
 
 ##0 As you may know, ##BEvol Online##b has seen multiple development
-##0 stage on the last years, it's now the time to look forward and
-##0 to program what will be our futur development roadmaps.
+##0 stages during the last years. It is now time to look forward and
+##0 to program what will be our future development roadmaps.
 
-##0 At the end of the third and last Beta Release, we will switch
-##0 to a new style of development. It will be formed of two type
-##0 of release.
+##0 At the end of the third and last Beta release, we will switch to
+##0 a new style of development. It will be composed of two different
+##0 paths.
 
-##0 The first, called ##BAurora##b, will continue the selected story and
-##0 will be the main quest line. ##BSkylandia##b will be the second type.
-##0 it will build some side-quests from the Aurora-Releases, as
+##0 The first, called ##BAurora##b, will continue the selected story
+##0 and will be the main story. ##BSkylandia##b will be the second
+##0 one and will build some side-quests from the Aurora Releases, as
 ##0 well as showing some secrets from the ##BAemil##b world.
 
 ##0 A last development release has been prepared, the ##BMercurian##b-
-##0 Releases. This type is currently hidden and nothing will be
+##0 releases. This one is currently hidden and nothing of it will be
 ##0 spoiled as it will end the game story.
-##0 So be patient. ;D
- 
-##9-- Cheers, Reid.
+##0 So be patient!
+
+##9 -- Cheers, Reid
 ##9 April 2012
- 
+
 
 ##7 Land Ahoy!
 
 ##0 Almost two months have passed since we began redesigning our
-##0 content and concept base. One of the change is made to the 
+##0 content and concept bases. One of the changes was made to the 
 ##0 mascot, the Pious, which will now be called Piou.
 
-##0 We still need some weeks before to done the graphic part. But
-##0 we started to concept the Level Design (Including new quests,
-##0 dialogues, maps). Most of this should be done in May, so be
-##0 ready to the next episode on this month!
+##0 We still need few weeks of work before being done with the
+##0 graphical part. However, we started to work on the Leve Design
+##0 concept, including new quests, dialogues, maps, etc... Most of
+##0 this should be done in May, so be ready for the next episode
+##0 this month!
 
-##0 I let you some important links, if you wish to take part in
-##0 the development or if you just wish to talk with us.
+##0 Here are some important links if you wish to take part in the
+##0 development or if you just wish to talk with us.
 
-Contributor list: http://wiki.evolonline.org/contributors
-Translation tuto: http://wiki.evolonline.org/translation
-Beta2 roadmap:    http://wiki.evolonline.org/beta2
-News section:     http://evolonline.org/news.html
-Art Development:  http://evolonline.deviantart.com
-IRC webchat:      http://evolonline.org/chat 
+Contributor List:     http://wiki.evolonline.org/contributors
+Translation Tutorial: http://wiki.evolonline.org/translation
+Beta #2 Roadmap:      http://wiki.evolonline.org/beta2
+News Section:         http://evolonline.org/news.html
+Art Development:      http://evolonline.deviantart.com
+IRC Webchat:          http://evolonline.org/chat 
 
-##9-- Cheers, Reid.
+##9 -- Cheers, Reid
 ##9 March 2012
  
 
 ##7 On the way for the Beta2!
 
-##0 The Evol Developers and Contributors team, woud like to thank
-##0 the numerous beta-tester who played Evol over the last three
-##0 weeks. So far the number of testers is ##B450##b.
+##0 The Evol Online developers and contributors would like to thank
+##0 the numerous Beta testers who played the game over the last
+##0 three weeks. So far, the number of testers is ##B450##b.
 
-##0 As you have been all waiting for, some news about the Beta#2!
-##0 The door to the outside will be unlocked, there will be new
-##0 monsters, items, quests and a brand new map!
-##0 The second Beta Release will focus in establishing the futur
+##0 As you have been all waiting for  some news about the Beta #2!
+##0 The door opening outwards will be unlocked. There will be new
+##0 monsters, new items, new quests and a brand new map!
+##0 The second Beta release will focus on establishing the future
 ##0 style of our gameplay.
 
-##9-- Cheers, Reid.
+##9 -- Cheers, Reid
 ##9 February 2012
 
- 
-##7 Season 1, Episode 1!
- 
-##0 After a mysterious past, you find yourself adrift on the
-##0 waves in the middle of Oceania. A noble-minded crew, sailing
-##0 near your body, decides to rescue and take care of you. 
- 
+
+##7 Season 1, Episode 1
+
+##0 After a mysterious past, you find yourself adrift on the waves
+##0 in the middle of Oceania. A noble-minded crew, sailing near your
+##0 body, decides to rescue and take care of you.
+
 ##0 You now wake up about seven days later in their wooden ship.
 ##0 Take some time to know the crew who saved you and try to
 ##0 discover what happened to you before this terrible event!
- 
-##9-- Cheers, Reid.
+
+##9 -- Cheers, Reid
 ##9 January 2012
- 
- 
-##7 Evol Online Beta Releases.
- 
-##0 After months of work, the world of ##BEvol Online##b is finally
-##0 opened to everyone for its first Beta release!
- 
-#0 This Beta release will be the first among two other ones which
+
+
+##7 Evol Online Beta Release #1
+
+##0 After several months of work, the world of ##BEvol Online##b
+##0 finally opens its doors to everyone for its Beta #1!
+
+##0 This Beta release will be the first among two other ones which
 ##0 will  help  the  developers  finding  out  the  qualities and
 ##0 problems of the chosen gameplay.
- 
-##0 We welcome you to give us your thoughts on this, but we also
-##0  hope you will have fun being part of this amazing adventure.
- 
+
+##0 We welcome you to give us your thoughts about this, but we also
+##0 hope you will have fun being part of this amazing adventure.
+
 ##0 We also need to warn you that at the end of the third release,
-##0 all characters will be wiped as we are trying to have a
+##0 Beta #3, all characters will be wiped as we are trying to have a
 ##0 perfect balance for this game and start it over with it.
 ##0 We kindly ask you to accept this.
- 
-##9-- Cheers, Reid.
+
+##9 -- Cheers, Reid
 ##9 January 2012
- 
- 
+
+
 ##7 Merry Christmas!
- 
-##0 On this Christmas morning, the Evol Online team is here to
-##0 wish you all a merry Christmas, and to announce you that the
-##0 beta release of ##BEvol Online##b will be soon available!
- 
-##0 No, this is not a dream! After more than one year of work and
-##0 through good and bad times, the team have finally decided to
-##0 release the first beta release.
- 
-##0 Over one year has passed, we've been working on the in-game
-##0 design and in new technology for our server and client, the
-##0 time came to show it to public!
- 
-##0 We, the ##BEvol Online##b developers team, hope to get as many beta
-##0 testers as we can in order to get as many different views as
+
+##0 On this Christmas morning, the Evol Online team is here to wish
+##0 you all a Merry Christmas and to inform you that the beta
+##0 release of ##BEvol Online##b will be soon available!
+
+##0 No, this is not a joke! After more than a year of work and
+##0 through good and bad times, the team finally decided to release
+##0 the Beta #1.
+
+##0 Over one year has passed during which we have been working on
+##0 the in-game design and in the new arrangement of our server and
+##0 client. The time came to show it publicly!
+
+##0 We, ##BEvol Online##b developers, hope to get as many beta
+##0 testers as we can in order to get as many point of views as
 ##0 possible.
- 
-##0 We sincerely thank you for your patience and for sharing the
-##0 same dream than we do.
- 
-##9-- Cheers, Reid.
+
+##0 We thank you for your patience and also for sharing this dream
+##0 with us.
+
+##9 -- Cheers, Reid
 ##9 December 2011