Fixed some english mistakes and the cotton dye entry in quests.xml.

1 files changed, 12 insertions, 12 deletions

diff --git a/quests.xml b/quests.xml
index 18bef98c..38aad2d4 100644
--- a/quests.xml
+++ b/quests.xml
@@ -32,7 +32,7 @@ Copyright (C) 2012-2013 Evol Online -->
             <name>Warm Smelly Clothes</name>
             <text>Magic Arpan is waiting for you. Go speak to him.</text>
             <text></text>
-            <text>To speak to an NPC, click on it with your mouse or select him using the N key and then chat using the T key.</text>
+            <text>To speak to an NPC, click on it with your mouse or select it using the N key and then chat using the T key.</text>
             <text></text>
             <text>Quest giver: Magic Arpan.</text>
             <text>Coordinates: La Johanne, Second Deck. (39,33)</text>
@@ -54,7 +54,7 @@ Copyright (C) 2012-2013 Evol Online -->
             <text></text>
             <text>When your inventory is open, you can equip an item by selecting it and clicking 'Equip'. You can do the same to remove an item by clicking on 'Unequip'.</text>
             <text></text>
-            <text>Items have different effects. Some will heal you, some can be used as weapons or armor, and some can be sold for gold.</text>
+            <text>Items have different effects. Some will heal you, some can be used as weapons or armor and some can be sold for gold.</text>
             <text></text>
             <text>Quest giver: Magic Arpan.</text>
             <text>Coordinates: La Johanne, Second Deck. (39,33)</text>
@@ -86,7 +86,7 @@ Copyright (C) 2012-2013 Evol Online -->
         </quest>
         <quest name="Piberries Lover" group="Ship" incomplete="2">
             <name>Piberries Lover</name>
-            <text>Alige, the mysterious traveller, is requesting your help to find him some food.</text>
+            <text>Alige, the mysterious traveller, is asking for your help to find him some food.</text>
             <text></text>
             <text>In fact, he hides in a hole in the main hallway. It leads to the ship's storage room where he can reach for some barrels full of [Piberries].</text>
             <text></text>
@@ -649,7 +649,7 @@ Copyright (C) 2012-2013 Evol Online -->
         </quest>
         <quest name="Newby Quest" group="Artis" incomplete="6">
             <name>Newby Quest</name>
-            <text>Resa gave you a [%Color% Artis Tank Top, Blue Gray Cotton Dye].</text>
+            <text>Resa gave you a cute [%Color% Artis Tank Top, Camel Cotton Dye].</text>
             <text>This task is done, you can now return it to Enora.</text>
             <text></text>
             <text>Quest Giver: Enora.</text>
@@ -658,8 +658,8 @@ Copyright (C) 2012-2013 Evol Online -->
         </quest>
         <quest name="Newby Quest" group="Artis" incomplete="7">
             <name>Newby Quest</name>
-            <text>You are charged to visit Q'Pid and to bring back Enora's package.</text>
-            <text>Q'Pid is reachable at the Market Place, on the South-West of Artis (61,116).</text>
+            <text>You are charged to visit Q'Pid and bring back Enora's package.</text>
+            <text>Q'Pid is reachable at the Market Place, in the South-West area of Artis (61,116).</text>
             <text></text>
             <text>Quest Giver: Enora.</text>
             <text>Coordinates: Artis, Dock (176,113)</text>
@@ -710,7 +710,7 @@ Copyright (C) 2012-2013 Evol Online -->
         <effect map="001-1.tmx" npc="108" value="2" effect="13"/>
         <quest name="Fexil's Free Pass" group="Artis" incomplete="1">
             <name>Fexil's Free Pass</name>
-            <text>Lloyd gave you a pass that Fexil forget when he registered himself in the Merchant Guild.</text>
+            <text>Lloyd gave you a pass that Fexil forgot when he registered himself in the Merchant Guild.</text>
             <text></text>
             <text>Quest Giver: Lloyd.</text>
             <text>Coordinates: Artis, Merchant Guild (101,37)</text>
@@ -718,8 +718,8 @@ Copyright (C) 2012-2013 Evol Online -->
         </quest>
         <quest name="Fexil's Free Pass" group="Artis" incomplete="2">
             <name>Fexil's Free Pass</name>
-            <text>Fexil want to open a buisness of [Fluffy Fur]'s clothes.</text>
-            <text>He will reward you for each fur that you bring him back.</text>
+            <text>Fexil wants to open a business of [Fluffy Fur]'s clothes.</text>
+            <text>He will reward you for each fur you bring him.</text>
             <text></text>
             <text>Quest Giver: Fexil.</text>
             <text>Coordinates: Artis, Market Place (48,134)</text>
@@ -727,8 +727,8 @@ Copyright (C) 2012-2013 Evol Online -->
         </quest>
         <quest name="Fexil's Free Pass" group="Artis" complete="3">
             <name>Fexil's Free Pass</name>
-            <text>Fexil want to open a buisness of [Fluffy Fur]'s clothes.</text>
-            <text>He rewards you for each fur that you bring him back.</text>
+            <text>Fexil wants to open a business of [Fluffy Fur]'s clothes.</text>
+            <text>He rewards you for each fur you bring him.</text>
             <text></text>
             <text>Quest Giver: Fexil.</text>
             <text>Coordinates: Artis, Market Place (48,134)</text>
@@ -740,7 +740,7 @@ Copyright (C) 2012-2013 Evol Online -->
         <quest name="Worship Of Money" group="Artis" complete="1">
             <name>Worship Of Money</name>
             <text>You are now registered in the Merchant Guild.</text>
-            <text>This Guild offer some storage and bank service.</text>
+            <text>This Guild offers storage and bank services.</text>
             <text></text>
             <text>Quest Giver: Lloyd.</text>
             <text>Coordinates: Artis, Merchant Guild (101,37)</text>