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diff --git a/npc/042-2/tanisha.txt b/npc/042-2/tanisha.txt index 5e040da3..3ed5c6bc 100644 --- a/npc/042-2/tanisha.txt +++ b/npc/042-2/tanisha.txt @@ -23,12 +23,12 @@ "Yes, thank you.",-, "Yeah, but all my stuff is gone.",-; mes "[Tanisha]"; - mes "\"I see. It was really bad luck what happened to you."; + mes "\"I'm glad you're feeling better. It was really bad luck what happened to you."; mes "Hey, I have an idea.\""; next; L_Maggots: set tanisha, 1; - mes "\"There are some maggots eating the goods and I shall get rid of them."; + mes "\"There are some maggots eating the goods and I'm supposed to get rid of them."; mes "But they're so yucky!\""; next; mes "\"If you kill them, I'll give you my knife."; @@ -51,11 +51,11 @@ L_Fight_Again: mes "\"Press A to focus on a monster. With X you can focus and start attacking the same time."; mes "But it also works to click on the monster with your mouse.\""; next; - mes "\"If you press Shift, you can abort your attack.\""; + mes "\"If you press the left Shift button, you can abort your attack.\""; next; - mes "\"Maggots aren't aggressive, so they won't harm you until you attacked them first. Take them out one by one.\""; + mes "\"Maggots aren't aggressive, so they won't harm you until you attack them first. Take them out one by one.\""; next; - mes "\"Sometimes dead monsters leave some useful things. You can pick them up with pressing Z or clicking with your mouse.\""; + mes "\"Sometimes dead monsters leave some useful things. You can pick them up by pressing Z or clicking on the items with your mouse.\""; set tanisha, 2; set @maggot, 0; set @time, 0; @@ -74,7 +74,7 @@ L_Stats: mes "\"And it seems you became stronger and more experienced."; mes "That means you got some status points which you can use to increase your abilities.\""; next; - mes "\"Press F2 to see your status window. There you can distribute your points on six different properties.\""; + mes "\"Press F2 or click the Status button in the bar at the upper right to see your status window. There you can distribute your points on six different properties.\""; next; L_StatsRe: mes "\"Strength makes you hit harder and you can carry more weight.\""; @@ -85,17 +85,17 @@ L_StatsRe: next; mes "\"Intelligence is useful for magic attack and defense.\""; next; - mes "\"Dexterity is needed to hit a monster. It's also very important for the damage if you use a ranged weapon.\""; + mes "\"Dexterity is needed to hit monsters. It's also very important for the damage if you use a ranged weapon.\""; next; mes "\"Luck gives you the chance to do critical hits and lowers the chance to receive a critical hit from your opponent.\""; next; - mes "\"Think about how you want to play before putting the points.\""; + mes "\"Think about how you want to play before assigning the points.\""; next; - mes "Also I heard rumors about a strange guy lurking around in the desert south of Tulimshar who can help you to forget your abilites!\""; + mes "Also I heard rumors about a strange guy lurking around in the desert south of Tulimshar who can help you to forget your abilities!\""; mes "Tanisha looks at you with wide opened eyes."; next; mes "[Tanisha]"; - mes "\"But I don't think he'd do that without a service in return.\""; + mes "\"But I doubt he'd do that without a service in return.\""; if (tanisha == 3) goto L_Advice; close; @@ -103,7 +103,7 @@ L_StatsRe: L_Advice: next; mes "[Tanisha]"; - mes "\"When you go to main Tulimshar, you could see Bernard. He can make a delicious soup!"; + mes "\"When you go to Tulimshar, you should see Bernard. He can make a delicious soup!"; mes "Good luck!\""; emotion 3; if (tanisha == 3) @@ -116,7 +116,7 @@ L_Again: next; if (hasan) menu - "A guy named Hasan doesn't let me enter main Tulimshar.",L_Hasan, + "A guy named Hasan won't let me enter Tulimshar.",L_Hasan, "Yes, could you explain again about...",L_Explain, "No, thanks.",L_Close; menu @@ -129,7 +129,7 @@ L_Explain: "... how to fight?",L_Fight, "... monsters?",L_Mob, "... status points?",L_StatsRe, - "... what to do in main Tulimshar?",L_Advice, + "... what to do in Tulimshar?",L_Advice, "... nevermind.",L_Close; L_Fight: @@ -137,21 +137,21 @@ L_Fight: mes "\"Press A to focus on a monster. With X you can focus and attack."; mes "But it also works to click on the monster with your mouse.\""; next; - mes "\"If you press Shift, you can abort your attack.\""; + mes "\"If you press the left Shift button, you can abort your attack.\""; next; - mes "\"Sometimes dead monsters leave some useful things. You can pick them up with pressing Z or clicking with your mouse.\""; + mes "\"Sometimes dead monsters leave some useful things. You can pick them up with pressing Z or clicking on the items with your mouse.\""; next; - mes "\"If you feel exhausted from battle you can sit down with pressing S to recover faster.\""; + mes "\"If you feel exhausted from battle you can sit down by pressing S to recover faster.\""; close; L_Mob: mes "[Tanisha]"; mes "\"I don't know much about monsters, I'm just a little girl. But I know a few things."; - mes "There a several types of monsters, Aggressive, Neutral, and Assistants.\""; + mes "There are several types of monsters...Aggressive, Neutral, and Assistants.\""; next; mes "\"Aggressive monsters will attack you as soon as they see you.\""; next; - mes "\"Neutral monsters are peacefully until they get attacked.\""; + mes "\"Neutral monsters are peaceful until they get attacked.\""; next; mes "\"Assistants are monsters who help each other.\""; close; @@ -169,7 +169,7 @@ L_Hasan: L_Tut_Done: mes "[Tanisha]"; - mes "\"This yucky maggots! They're eating our goods!"; + mes "\"These yucky maggots! They're eating our goods!"; mes "No matter how many of them you kill, they always come back.\""; mes "She sighs."; next; @@ -183,7 +183,7 @@ L_Tut_Done: L_Crowded: mes "[Tanisha]"; mes "\"That's great! But..."; - mes "it seems it's crowded in there.\""; + mes "it seems a little crowded in there.\""; next; mes "\"Let's wait a short while.\""; close; @@ -203,13 +203,13 @@ L_Sleep: close; L_Fail: - mes "Tanisha seems to try hard to supress laughter."; + mes "Tanisha seems to be trying hard to supress laughter."; mes "[Tanisha]"; mes "\"The maggots defeated you.\""; next; mes "She bursts out with laughter."; mes "[Tanisha]"; - mes "\"Oups, I'm sorry. It's just too funny."; + mes "\"Oops, I'm sorry. It's just too funny."; mes "Do you want to try it again?\""; next; menu |