Dialogue changes to NPCs

Improved the dialogue of the bookshelf containing "zukminbirf."
Added "croupier" name tag to the Roulette NPC's dialog
Improved grammar and wording
Replaced ". " with ". "
Replaced " -- " with an en dash (" – ").

2 files changed, 11 insertions, 11 deletions

diff --git a/world/map/npc/008-1/diryn.txt b/world/map/npc/008-1/diryn.txt
index 22985393..2755866c 100644
--- a/world/map/npc/008-1/diryn.txt
+++ b/world/map/npc/008-1/diryn.txt
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-// This is a teleportation (warp) NPC.  Its purpose is to offer expensive, fast trips throughout the world.
+// This is a teleportation (warp) NPC. Its purpose is to offer expensive, fast trips throughout the world.
 // Author: Wombat, wushin
 // cost depending on level and adapted to new scripting guidelines: Jenalya
 
diff --git a/world/map/npc/008-1/hinnak.txt b/world/map/npc/008-1/hinnak.txt
index 3d92de07..f3ada878 100644
--- a/world/map/npc/008-1/hinnak.txt
+++ b/world/map/npc/008-1/hinnak.txt
@@ -129,15 +129,15 @@ L_ThanksMenu:
     menu
         "Sure, any time!", L_Next1,
         "Anything else you want me to do?", L_Next1,
-        "You're welcome.  Bye!", L_Bye;
+        "You're welcome. Bye!", L_Bye;
 
 L_Next1:
     mes "[Farmer Hinnak]";
-    mes "\"Actually, it's been a long day.  If it's no trouble, could you get me a beer?\"";
+    mes "\"Actually, it's been a long day. If it's no trouble, could you get me a beer?\"";
     next;
     menu
         "Here you are.", L_GiveBeer,
-        "Sure, I'll go get one.  Bye!", L_Bye,
+        "Sure, I'll go get one. Bye!", L_Bye,
         "You shouldn't drink while working!", L_Next2;
 
 L_Next2:
@@ -159,7 +159,7 @@ L_GiveBeer:
     next;
     mes "[Farmer Hinnak]";
     mes "He takes another sip.";
-    mes "\"Thanks!  You know, I had the strangest thing happen to me.  I had this patch of ground that was really clumpy; lots of clay, you see.\"";
+    mes "\"Thanks!  You know, I had the strangest thing happen to me. I had this patch of ground that was really clumpy; lots of clay, you see.\"";
     next;
     mes "[Farmer Hinnak]";
     mes "\"Right over there.\"";
@@ -167,14 +167,14 @@ L_GiveBeer:
     mes "\"Looks much better now, doesn't it?  But how I got there is kind-a scary...\"";
     next;
     mes "[Farmer Hinnak]";
-    mes "\"I'd been trying to break it up for a while, but that kind of work is a pain.  So my wife said that I should go and see the witch, just in case she knows something.\"";
+    mes "\"I'd been trying to break it up for a while, but that kind of work is a pain. So my wife said that I should go and see the witch, just in case she knows something.\"";
     next;
     mes "[Farmer Hinnak]";
-    mes "\"And sure enough I ask the witch, and she has a look at it.  'Nothing I can do', she says, 'but I can ask a friend'.\"";
+    mes "\"And sure enough I ask the witch, and she has a look at it. 'Nothing I can do', she says, 'but I can ask a friend'.\"";
     next;
     mes "[Farmer Hinnak]";
-    mes "\"So the next day another witch shows up.  Gorgeous woman, but when she looked at me, the scares went scuttling down my spine....\"";
-    mes "\"First thing she asked was if I'm a farmer.  Said her friend had told her that I needed help.\"";
+    mes "\"So the next day another witch shows up. Gorgeous woman, but when she looked at me, the scares went scuttling down my spine....\"";
+    mes "\"First thing she asked was if I'm a farmer. Said her friend had told her that I needed help.\"";
     next;
     mes "[Farmer Hinnak]";
     mes "\"I show her what the problem is, and she tells me to go inside and wait.\"";
@@ -183,7 +183,7 @@ L_GiveBeer:
     mes "\"Hinnak drains his beer in one long sip, then hesitates.";
     next;
     mes "[Farmer Hinnak]";
-    mes "\"So I go inside.  I'm barely in when it starts raining outside, pouring cats and mouboos!\"";
+    mes "\"So I go inside. I'm barely in when it starts raining outside, pouring cats and mouboos!\"";
     next;
     mes "[Farmer Hinnak]";
     mes "\"Not so weird, perhaps, except that it was been bright and sunny just a second before!  So I rush out, my wife telling me to leave the witch alone, and I see her standing there in the middle of the rain...\"";
@@ -208,7 +208,7 @@ L_GiveBeer:
 
 L_Sagatha_hahaha:
     mes "[Farmer Hinnak]";
-    mes "\"Yeah, funny now...  But you should've seen that stare!  Ah, well, never mind.\"";
+    mes "\"Yeah, funny now... But you should've seen that stare!  Ah, well, never mind.\"";
     goto L_Close;
 
 L_Sagatha_scary: