Spelling and grammar corrections in Tulim and Hurn NPCs...dialog only.

1 files changed, 12 insertions, 12 deletions

diff --git a/npc/009-2_Hurnscald/nurse.txt b/npc/009-2_Hurnscald/nurse.txt
index 7212597f..a47fdf95 100644
--- a/npc/009-2_Hurnscald/nurse.txt
+++ b/npc/009-2_Hurnscald/nurse.txt
@@ -91,7 +91,7 @@ L_NoHeal:
 
 L_NohMask:
     mes "[Nurse]";
-    mes "\"I'm to busy here to observe the town.\"";
+    mes "\"I'm too busy here to observe the town.\"";
     close;
 
 state0:
@@ -106,7 +106,7 @@ state0:
     next;
     menu
         "I will do what I can. What do you need?", L_firstquest,
-        "I'm really sorry, but I don't think, I can help you.", -;
+        "I'm really sorry, but I don't think I can help you.", -;
 
     mes "\"That is disagreeable to hear. Maybe I can find another person to take this task.\"";
     next;
@@ -150,13 +150,13 @@ L_ExplainAgain2:
     close;
 
 state2:
-    mes "You look at the nurse, who seems to be really tired with shadows under her eyes. When she recognizes you, she smiles.";
+    mes "You look at the nurse, who seems to be really tired, with shadows under her eyes. When she recognizes you, she smiles.";
     mes "[Nurse]";
-    mes "\"I managed to extract the poisonous components. We should be able to create an antidote, if you have anything else we need.\"";
+    mes "\"I managed to extract the poisonous components. We should be able to create an antidote, if you have everything else we need.\"";
     next;
     menu
         "Actually, I have another question.", L_Usual,
-        "I have a bad memory. Can you tell me again, what we need?", L_ExplainAgain2,
+        "I have a bad memory. Can you tell me again what we need?", L_ExplainAgain2,
         "I managed to get everything we need.", -,
         "I will go and get it.", quit;
 
@@ -175,7 +175,7 @@ L_Chemistry:
     callsub L_Shuffle_Need;
     mes "The nurse takes the ingredients you brought and starts to squeeze the fruits and to crush the acorns. Then she put the fruit juices in some complicated looking chemical device.";
     next;
-    mes "After some minutes, it is blubbering and steaming and a liquid is dropping in a pot under the device.";
+    mes "After some minutes, it is blubbering and steaming and a liquid is dripping in a pot under the device.";
     next;
     mes "Then she takes the acorn flour and the liquid and goes to a place back in the room, where she does something you don't see.";
     next;
@@ -311,9 +311,9 @@ L_choosePut:
 m_hl_m_vn:
     //poison for 3 minutes
     sc_start sc_poison, 1, 20;
-    mes "You began to feel really dizzy. And you feel so light - you can't help yourself and burst out with laughter. What a strange feeling!";
+    mes "You begin to feel really dizzy. And you feel so light - you can't help yourself and burst out with laughter. What a strange feeling!";
     next;
-    mes "The nurse looks at you with a really worried look in her face. As you open your mouth to tell her that you feel allright, the content of your stomach finds its way out through your throat and on the floor.";
+    mes "The nurse looks at you with a really worried look on her face. As you open your mouth to tell her that you feel alright, the content of your stomach finds its way out through your throat and on the floor.";
     next;
     mes "The feeling of happiness disappears, but you seem to be still poisoned.";
     goto check_st;
@@ -327,9 +327,9 @@ m_hl_l_vn:
     next;
     mes "Anyway, what are you doing here? Actually, where are you?";
     next;
-    mes "You don't care, you feel so great. You start to giggle and laugh uncontrollable. What a wonderful feeling. ";
+    mes "You don't care, you feel so great. You start to giggle and laugh uncontrollably. What a wonderful feeling. ";
     next;
-    mes "Suddenly, the world has some really strange colors. As you watch this women in front of you changing her color from dark green to a light purple, you become really tired.";
+    mes "Suddenly, the world has some really strange colors. As you watch this woman in front of you changing her color from dark green to a light purple, you become really tired.";
     next;
     mes "You lay down on the floor and fall asleep.";
     next;
@@ -386,7 +386,7 @@ allcorrect:
     mes "You feel totally normal again.";
     next;
     mes "[Nurse]";
-    mes "\"Wonderfull! You made it! Now I will be able to help all the people who get poisoned in the mines!\"";
+    mes "\"Wonderful! You made it! Now I will be able to help all the people who get poisoned in the mines!\"";
     next;
     mes "\"Thank you so much! Oh, and it seems as if you have gained the skill to resist poison someway. This is great.\"";
     next;
@@ -432,7 +432,7 @@ state5:
      next;
      mes "\"But if we succeed we will be heroes! I will be able to help a lot of people.\"";
      next;
-     mes "\"Next time you might remember me to label the distillates correctly. I am sorry that it is screwed up again.\"";
+     mes "\"Next time you might remind me to label the distillates correctly. I am sorry that it is screwed up again.\"";
      next;
      mes "\"There is enough stuff left for one last try.\"";
      next;