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1 files changed, 11 insertions, 11 deletions
diff --git a/world/map/npc/055-1/flowerpentagram4.txt b/world/map/npc/055-1/flowerpentagram4.txt
index 364963c1..10bf0539 100644
--- a/world/map/npc/055-1/flowerpentagram4.txt
+++ b/world/map/npc/055-1/flowerpentagram4.txt
@@ -7,11 +7,11 @@
if (OrumQuest > 26) goto L_PlacedFourthFlower;
if (OrumQuest == 26) goto L_FourthFlower;
- message strcharinfo(0), "Something is odd with this place.";
+ message strcharinfo(0), "Something is odd about this place.";
end;
L_FourthFlower:
- mes "This is the spot to place the fourth of Orum's magical flowers.";
+ mes "This is the spot where you have to place the fourth of Orum's magical flowers.";
menu
"Place the flower.", -,
"Leave.", L_Close;
@@ -19,7 +19,7 @@ L_FourthFlower:
if (isin("055-1.gat", 140, 88, 142, 90))
goto L_Place;
- mes "This doesn't work, you're too far away.";
+ mes "This isn't working, you're too far away.";
goto L_Close;
L_Place:
@@ -39,8 +39,8 @@ L_Place:
if (countitem("YellowSummonFlower") < 1)
goto L_NoFlower;
delitem "YellowSummonFlower", 1;
- mes "Worried about what will leak from the astral plane this time, you prepare yourself and put the flower in place.";
- mes "As expected you feel the magical tension building up. They're coming.";
+ mes "Worried about what will shift from the astral plane this time, you prepare yourself and put the flower in place.";
+ mes "As expected, you feel the magical tension building up. They're coming.";
set OrumQuest, 27;
close2;
areamonster "055-1.gat", 133, 87, 144, 99, "", 1105, 1, "#FlowerPentagram4::OnSquirrelDeath";
@@ -98,24 +98,24 @@ OnBScorpionDeath:
L_MonstersAlive:
mes "As you get closer to the place, you feel an unnerving presence.";
- mes "The place has recently been used to summon something! And the beings are still near!";
+ mes "This place has recently been used to summon something! And the beings are still nearby!";
next;
mes "You should get rid of them before attempting the summoning yourself.";
goto L_Close;
L_NoFlower:
mes "You search your belongings for the magical flower. Where is it?";
- mes "If you lost it, you should talk to Orum.";
+ mes "If you lost it, you should talk to Orum again.";
goto L_Close;
L_PlacedFourthFlower:
- mes "Here you put the fourth of Orum's magical flowers.";
- mes "There's a slight glowing of magic power around the place, waiting to be unleashed when you put the last one into place.";
+ mes "You placed the fourth of Orum's magical flowers here.";
+ mes "You can still feel the magical power shimmering around this place, waiting to be unleashed.";
goto L_Close;
L_PlacedFifthFlower:
- mes "This is the place where you put the fourth of Orum's magical flowers.";
- mes "But after the pentagram was finished and the summoning happened, everything is back to normal with this spot.";
+ mes "This is where you placed the fourth of Orum's magical flowers.";
+ mes "However, now that the summoning spell has been cast, everything is back to normal here.";
goto L_Close;
L_Close: