Barbarians quests: dialogue polishing.

1 files changed, 12 insertions, 15 deletions

diff --git a/world/map/npc/033-1/birrod.txt b/world/map/npc/033-1/birrod.txt
index 791d2c4d..c0e159e3 100644
--- a/world/map/npc/033-1/birrod.txt
+++ b/world/map/npc/033-1/birrod.txt
@@ -15,16 +15,15 @@
     if (@state == 1) goto L_Fluffy;
 
     mes "[Barbarian]";
-    mes "\"Welcome. My name is Birrod, warrior of the Mangarr.\"";
-    next;
-    mes "\"We usually live high up in the snowy mountains, but we need to solve a problem, so we came down here.\"";
+    mes "\"Welcome. My name is Birrod, warrior of the Mangarr.";
+    mes "We usually live high up in the snowy mountains, but we need to solve a problem, so we came down here.\"";
     next;
     mes "\"But this shouldn't concern you.\"";
     goto L_Close;
 
 L_Fluffy:
     mes "[Birrod]";
-    mes "\"Kimarr asked you to perform the fluffy hunting? I'm curious how you're going to do it.\"";
+    mes "\"Kimarr asked you to perform the Fluffy hunting? I'm curious how you're going to do it.\"";
     mes "He grins.";
     goto L_Close;
 
@@ -41,12 +40,12 @@ L_Hunting:
     mes "[Birrod]";
     mes "\"Hello, " + strcharinfo(0) + "! Would you like to prove your hunting skills again?\"";
     next;
-    mes "\"I noticed some groups of wolverns in the forest west of here which are unusually aggressive.";
+    mes "\"I noticed some groups of Wolverns in the forest west of here which are unusually aggressive.";
     mes "This makes it dangerous for all the small people from the town nearby to go there.\"";
     next;
-    mes "\"To prove your skills, go to the forest and hunt down " + $@Q_Barbarians_wolvern_amount + " of the very aggressive wolverns.\"";
+    mes "\"To prove your skills, go to the forest and hunt down " + $@Q_Barbarians_wolvern_amount + " of the very aggressive Wolverns.\"";
     next;
-    mes "\"There are also some wolverns that behave normally and attack you only when you come too close to them.";
+    mes "\"There are also some Wolverns that behave normally and attack you only when you come too close to them.";
     mes "Those are not the ones I mean, but those that seek the battle themselves.\"";
     set @state, 4;
     callsub S_Update_Mask;
@@ -68,16 +67,18 @@ L_Wolverns_Done:
     set wolvern_count, 0;
     mes "[Birrod]";
     mes "\"" + strcharinfo(0) + "!";
-    mes "Good work. Now this area is much safer.\"";
+    mes "Good work. This area is much safer now.\"";
     next;
     getexp @wolvern_exp, 0;
-    if (getskilllv(SKILL_POOL) == 0) goto L_Not_Ready;
+    if (getskilllv(SKILL_POOL) == 0)
+        goto L_Not_Ready;
     mes "\"Your skills are impressing. You are worthy to be called a warrior of the Mangarr, if you accept.\"";
     next;
     goto L_Questions;
 
 L_Questions:
-    if (getskilllv(SKILL_POOL) == 0) goto L_Not_Ready;
+    if (getskilllv(SKILL_POOL) == 0)
+        goto L_Not_Ready;
     mes "Birrod has a very ceremonial look on his face.";
     mes "[Birrod]";
     mes "\"" + strcharinfo(0) + ", are you ready to become a full-fledged member of our tribe, the Mangarr?\"";
@@ -206,13 +207,9 @@ L_Impressed:
     mes "\"I'm very proud of you being a member of the tribe.\"";
     goto L_Close;
 
-L_No_Items:
-    mes "\"" + strcharinfo(0) + ", remember that a member of our tribe is candid and honest.\"";
-    goto L_Close;
-
 L_Not_Ready:
     mes "[Birrod]";
-    mes "\"" + strcharinfo(0) + ", you've shown that you have great hunting skills and are an enrichment to our tribe.";
+    mes "\"" + strcharinfo(0) + ", you've shown great hunting skills and are an enrichment to our tribe.";
     mes "But you still lack the needed mental skills to become a full member of our tribe.\"";
     next;
     mes "\"Roam this world to find more experienced persons than yourself to learn new things.";