Revise dialogue of Orum and Waric.

- Replace ".." with either "." or "..." in many places.
- No "next;" before "menu".
- Remove NPC name on some places where it was superfluous.

1 files changed, 9 insertions, 9 deletions

diff --git a/world/map/npc/009-4/barriers.txt b/world/map/npc/009-4/barriers.txt
index ae18bcb4..9bc486d9 100644
--- a/world/map/npc/009-4/barriers.txt
+++ b/world/map/npc/009-4/barriers.txt
@@ -39,7 +39,7 @@ L_Error2:
     if (OrumQuest == 2) goto L_Started;
 
     warp "009-4.gat", 37, 118;
-    mes "As you try to pass, two torches begin to flare and push you back. They seem to form some kind of barrier..";
+    mes "As you try to pass, two torches begin to flare and push you back. They seem to form some kind of barrier.";
     close;
 
 L_Started:
@@ -53,7 +53,7 @@ L_Started:
 
     if (OrumQuest >= 5) close;
 
-    message strcharinfo(0), "Nothing seems to happen as you enter this room.. The barrier must need both of its torches to function properly..";
+    message strcharinfo(0), "Nothing seems to happen as you enter this room. The barrier must need both of its torches to function properly.";
     set OrumQuest, 5;
     close;
 }
@@ -71,10 +71,10 @@ L_Started:
         goto L_Allow_Second_Passage;
 
     warp "009-4.gat", 61, 56;
-    mes "As you try to pass, the torches begin to flare and push you back. Perhaps there's a way to get past it..";
+    mes "As you try to pass, the torches begin to flare and push you back. Perhaps there's a way to get past it.";
     mes "";
     setarray @colors$,"transparent","red","dark orange","orange","light orange","yellow","light green","green","dark green","blue","dark purple","purple","light purple";
-    mes "Looking closely between the two torches you can see the barrier has a " + @colors$[@BarrierColor] + " tint to it..";
+    mes "Looking closely between the two torches you can see the barrier has a " + @colors$[@BarrierColor] + " tint to it.";
     close;
 
 L_Allow_Second_Passage:
@@ -82,7 +82,7 @@ L_Allow_Second_Passage:
     close;
 
 L_Advance_Quest:
-    message strcharinfo(0), "The torches dim as you enter like the first. You must be on the right trail..";
+    message strcharinfo(0), "The torches dim as you enter like the first. You must be on the right trail.";
     set OrumQuest, 9;
     close;
 }
@@ -116,10 +116,10 @@ L_Advance_Quest:
         goto L_Allow_Third_Passage;
 
     warp "009-4.gat", 24, 64;
-    mes "As you try to pass, the torches begin to flare and push you back. Perhaps there is a way to get past it..";
+    mes "As you try to pass, the torches begin to flare and push you back. Perhaps there is a way to get past it.";
     mes "";
     setarray @colors$,"transparent","red","dark orange","orange","light orange","yellow","light green","green","dark green","blue","dark purple","purple","light purple";
-    mes "Looking closely between the two torches you can see the barrier has a " + @colors$[@BarrierColor] + " tint to it..";
+    mes "Looking closely between the two torches you can see the barrier has a " + @colors$[@BarrierColor] + " tint to it.";
     close;
 
 L_Allow_Third_Passage:
@@ -229,10 +229,10 @@ L_Advance_Quest:
 
 L_Deny_Final_Passage:
     warp "009-4.gat", 48, 36;
-    mes "As you try to pass, the torches begin to flare and push you back. Perhaps there is a way to get past it..";
+    mes "As you try to pass, the torches begin to flare and push you back. Perhaps there is a way to get past it.";
     mes "";
     setarray @colors$,"transparent","red","dark orange","orange","light orange","yellow","light green","green","dark green","blue","dark purple","purple","light purple";
-    mes "Looking closely between the two torches you can see the barrier has a " + @colors$[@BarrierColor] + " tint to it..";
+    mes "Looking closely between the two torches you can see the barrier has a " + @colors$[@BarrierColor] + " tint to it.";
     close;
 
 L_Allow_Final_Passage: