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diff --git a/world/map/npc/xmas/2011/plushMouboo.txt b/world/map/npc/xmas/2011/plushMouboo.txt
index 0cc21d49..48719549 100644
--- a/world/map/npc/xmas/2011/plushMouboo.txt
+++ b/world/map/npc/xmas/2011/plushMouboo.txt
@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@
L_Helping:
mes "[Rikhard]";
- mes "\"Ah! You just came in the right moment! I need someone to deliver this Christmas-present-toy-ordering-form to Launo.";
+ mes "\"Ah! You came in at just the right moment! I need someone to deliver this Christmas-present-toy-ordering-form to Launo.";
mes "Here, take this.\"";
mes "He puts some piece of paper in your hand.";
next;
@@ -40,8 +40,8 @@ L_Helping:
"Wait a sec, what do you want me to do with that?",-;
mes "Rikhard mumbles something about hiring nonskilled workers.";
mes "[Rikhard]";
- mes "\"Ok, listen - we're organizing the Christmas business here. We're keeping track about who was a good or bad kid this year and what was written on the wish lists.";
- mes "And the good children get what they wished, remember? So, this is a Christmas-present-toy-ordering-form to order a Plush Mouboo for some very well-behaved cute little girl.\"";
+ mes "\"Ok, listen - we're organizing the Christmas business here. We're keeping track of who was a good or bad kid this year and what was written on the wish lists.";
+ mes "And the good children get what they wished for, remember? So, this is a Christmas-present-toy-ordering-form to order a Plush Mouboo for some very well-behaved cute little girl.\"";
next;
mes "\"Launo is very skilled at creating plush toys, so you need to bring him this form.\"";
mes "He waves at you with his hand and then digs into the papers again.";
@@ -102,7 +102,7 @@ L_Helping:
mes "He sighs.";
next;
mes "\"But since we're short in material, we got the order to only create toys that are requested.";
- mes "And now I sit here and wait to get such an order. But the guys up in the office seems to have some problems to get their paperwork done.";
+ mes "And now I sit here and wait to get such an order. But the guys up in the office seem to have some problems getting their paperwork done.";
mes "Maybe you can go up there and ask if there's a plush toy to make?\"";
goto L_Close;
@@ -141,33 +141,33 @@ L_PlushMouboo:
mes "[Launo]";
mes "\"Excellent! I'll start right away.\"";
next;
- mes "He takes puts the items you gave him into some pot with brown dye and takes it out after short while, putting it to dry on the desk.";
- mes "In the meanwhile he rummages in his workbench and gets out some tools and wood template.";
+ mes "He puts the items you gave him into a pot with brown dye and takes them out again after short while, putting them to dry on the desk.";
+ mes "In the meanwhile he rummages in his workbench and gets out some tools and a wood template.";
next;
- mes "The workbench seems to have a heating mechanism or someting since the cloth and fur is already dry.";
+ mes "The workbench seems to have a heating mechanism or something since the cloth and fur is already dry.";
mes "He takes the wood template, puts it on the cloth and draws very tiny lines on it. Then he cuts it out with very quick but confident movements.";
next;
mes "After that he takes the different parts and starts to sew them together.";
mes "He stops before it's finished, leaving a hole where he puts in some stuffing.";
next;
mes "He's kneading it a bit to arrange the stuffing properly in the toy and finally stitches up the hole.";
- mes "Finally he adds some knob for the eyes and presents you the Plush Mouboo.";
+ mes "Finally he adds some knobs for the eyes and presents you the Plush Mouboo.";
next;
mes "[Launo]";
mes "\"Here you go! Isn't it delightful?\"";
menu
"Wow, that was quick!",-;
mes "[Launo]";
- mes "\"Well yeah, I'm used to work quickly. Usually we produce many more toys.\"";
- mes "However, now it needs to be put in a present box and then that box have to be wrapped.\"";
+ mes "\"Well yeah, I'm used to working quickly. Usually we produce many more toys.\"";
+ mes "However, now it needs to be put in a present box and then that box has to be wrapped.\"";
next;
- mes "\"Could you take care about that? Urmas should have some boxes for you and Reino takes care about the wrapping paper.";
+ mes "\"Could you take care of that? Urmas should have some boxes for you and Reino takes care of the wrapping paper.";
mes "The place to wrap the presents is at Aaron's desk.\"";
goto L_Close;
L_PlushMoubooDone:
mes "[Launo]";
- mes "\"I feel much better now after I got some work done. Please take care about packing, wrapping, and giving it to Aaron.\"";
+ mes "\"I feel much better now after I got some work done. Please take care of packing, wrapping, and giving it to Aaron.\"";
goto L_Close;
L_NoEvent: