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diff --git a/world/map/npc/xmas/2011/doll.txt b/world/map/npc/xmas/2011/doll.txt
index a436c4bf..ba4f82b5 100644
--- a/world/map/npc/xmas/2011/doll.txt
+++ b/world/map/npc/xmas/2011/doll.txt
@@ -111,7 +111,7 @@ L_Doll:
mes "\"Alright, let's start.\"";
mes "He takes your items and start to many different things.";
mes "He dyes the Cotton Cloths and while waiting for it to dry, he takes out a doll without hair, clothes and face from his workbench.";
- mes "It seems he already prepared that. He rummages in another drawer of his workbench and pulls out a ball of red wool.";
+ mes "It seems he has already prepared that. He rummages in another drawer of his workbench and pulls out a ball of red wool.";
mes "While attaching strings of wool to the dolls head, he talks to you.";
next;
mes "[Raimo]";
@@ -119,12 +119,12 @@ L_Doll:
mes "All kind of material deliveries went wrong, the guys up in the office are all roused up because their paperwork got mixed up and I heard some of the Reinboos are lost!\"";
next;
mes "\"It's kind of odd, isn't it?\"";
- mes "While he was talking, he finished attaching the hair and got to tailor a cute little dress from the dyed Cotton Cloths.";
- mes "He carefully puts on the dressand takes the Hard Spikes you gave him.";
+ mes "While he is talking, he finishes attaching the hair and get to tailor a cute little dress from the dyed Cotton Cloths.";
+ mes "He carefully puts on the dress and takes the Hard Spikes you gave him.";
next;
mes "[Raimo]";
mes "\"These spikes are excellent for making eyes, have a look.\"";
- mes "He takes a sharp knife and starts carving them. After a short while he has managed to bring them in a round shape, with a gap on the backside part. He takes a needle and sewing thread and attches them to the dolls face.";
+ mes "He takes a sharp knife and starts carving them. After a short while he has managed to bring them in a round shape, with a gap on the backside part. He takes a needle and sewing thread and attaches them to the doll's face.";
next;
mes "[Raimo]";
mes "\"Alright, it's done. Could you please bring it to Aaron?\"";