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-rw-r--r--world/map/npc/048-2/helperAccused.txt40
-rw-r--r--world/map/npc/048-2/helperBookpages1.txt18
-rw-r--r--world/map/npc/048-2/helperBookpages2.txt10
-rw-r--r--world/map/npc/048-2/helperBookpages3.txt10
-rw-r--r--world/map/npc/048-2/helperChief.txt28
-rw-r--r--world/map/npc/048-2/helperCleaning1.txt12
-rw-r--r--world/map/npc/048-2/helperCleaning2.txt16
-rw-r--r--world/map/npc/048-2/helperCleaning3.txt22
-rw-r--r--world/map/npc/048-2/helperCleaning4.txt10
-rw-r--r--world/map/npc/048-2/helperCleaning5.txt12
-rw-r--r--world/map/npc/048-2/helperJanitor.txt16
-rw-r--r--world/map/npc/048-2/helperMInk.txt14
-rw-r--r--world/map/npc/048-2/helperMReed.txt14
-rw-r--r--world/map/npc/048-2/helperMSilk.txt12
-rw-r--r--world/map/npc/048-2/helperMYetiClaw.txt16
-rw-r--r--world/map/npc/048-2/helperResting1.txt12
-rw-r--r--world/map/npc/048-2/helperResting2.txt8
-rw-r--r--world/map/npc/048-2/sageNikolai.txt12
-rw-r--r--world/map/npc/048-2/slimes.txt14
-rw-r--r--world/map/npc/048-2/visitors.txt6
20 files changed, 151 insertions, 151 deletions
diff --git a/world/map/npc/048-2/helperAccused.txt b/world/map/npc/048-2/helperAccused.txt
index c02b6ff3..dd5a454e 100644
--- a/world/map/npc/048-2/helperAccused.txt
+++ b/world/map/npc/048-2/helperAccused.txt
@@ -17,7 +17,7 @@
if (BaseLevel < $@Q_BlueSageMinimumLevel)
goto L_Close;
mes "[Peetu]";
- mes "\"How could this have happened? I don't understand it... I'm sure I did the sealing correctly, maybe the ingredients... but that doesn't make sense, they're checked regularly and...\"";
+ mes "\"How could this have happened? I don't understand it... I'm sure I did the sealing correctly. Maybe the ingredients... but that doesn't make sense. They're checked regularly and...\"";
next;
mes "He startles as he notices you.";
mes "[Peetu]";
@@ -31,16 +31,16 @@
mes "He looks close to tears.";
next;
mes "[Peetu]";
- mes "\"It's all my fault! It was my job to seal the slimes away for the night, but I somehow messed it up! How could this have happened? And now I'm going to lose my job and I'll have to leave here and no other sage would give me a new appointment and I don't know what else to do, I mean, I spent my whole life on this so far, I don't even know anything else to do.\"";
+ mes "\"It's all my fault! It was my job to seal the slimes away for the night, but I somehow messed it up! How could this have happened? And now I'm going to lose my job and I'll have to leave here and no other sage would give me a new appointment and I don't know what else to do! I mean, I spent my whole life on this so far, I don't even know anything else I could do.\"";
next;
- mes "He seems to have a nervous breakdown, he latches onto you and starts sobbing on your shoulder.";
+ mes "He seems to be having a nervous breakdown, as he latches onto you and starts sobbing on your shoulder.";
menu
- "(Try to solace him)",-,
+ "(Try to console him)",-,
"(Shake him and tell him to pull himself together)",-,
"(Push him away from you and leave.)",L_Close;
mes "He calms down a bit.";
mes "[Peetu]";
- mes "\"Uh. You're probably right. I'm very sorry. I'm just... You know, I wanted to become a scholar of the sages, studying and... Oh, how could I messed that up? Did you see the library? It caused so much damage! What else should they do than kicking me out?\"";
+ mes "\"Uh. You're probably right. I'm very sorry. I'm just... You know, I wanted to become a scholar of the sages, studying and... Oh, how could I mess that up? Did you see the library? It caused so much damage! What else should they do other than kick me out?\"";
menu
"Maybe you should talk to your chief about that?",-,
"It doesn't make much sense to draw overhasty conclusions.",-,
@@ -64,38 +64,38 @@ L_Query:
menu
"Yes, and he doesn't plan to fire you.",-,
"Not yet.",L_Close;
- mes "You tell Peetu that Chief Oskari has a good opinion on him and explains about your task to find out what exactly happened.";
+ mes "You tell Peetu that Chief Oskari has a good opinion of him and explain your task to find out what exactly happened.";
next;
mes "[Peetu]";
- mes "\"Alright, I understand. You see, I'm very confused too, because I usually pay a lot of attention on my work. Especially when doing something as delicate as sealing away the slimes for the night.\"";
+ mes "\"Alright, I understand. You see, I'm very confused too, because I usually pay a lot of attention to my work. Especially when doing something as delicate as sealing away the slimes for the night.\"";
menu
- "Can you describe me what exactly you did?",-;
+ "Can you describe to me what exactly you did?",-;
mes "[Peetu]";
- mes "\"Well, ok, sure. So, as you know we're doing some researches on the nature of slimes, their connection to minerals and gemstones, their breeding behaviour, and, well, ahm, doing some magical experiments to analyze their reactions on different kinds of magic.";
- mes "This experiments caused some ... mutations, and the Blue and White Slimes developed some behaviour different from the slimes usual behavior, making them more dangerous.\"";
+ mes "\"Well, ok, sure. So, as you know we're doing some research on the nature of slimes, their connection to minerals and gemstones, their breeding behaviour, and, well, ahm, doing some magical experiments to analyze their reactions to different kinds of magic.";
+ mes "These experiments caused some ... mutations, and the Blue and White Slimes developed some behaviour different from the slimes of other colors, making them more dangerous.\"";
next;
- mes "\"This is the reason why they have to be magically sealed away for the night, since we didn't want them to get out in the wilderness... Oh, if I imagine what damage they do to the environment!\"";
+ mes "\"This is the reason they have to be magically sealed away for the night, since we didn't want them to get out in the wilderness... Oh, I can only imagine what damage they do to the environment!\"";
mes "He sighs.";
next;
- mes "\"However, the sealing involves several steps. I usually start to prepare it while the helpers are still working on their researches and experiments. So when they're done, they can just come and place the slimes under the seal.";
+ mes "\"However, the sealing involves several steps. I usually start to prepare it while the helpers are still working on their research and experiments. That way, when they're done, they can just come and place the slimes under the seal.";
mes "I take the ingredients for the spell from the shelves, mix them together and cast the spell shortly before the other helpers finish their daily work.\"";
next;
- mes "\"You can imagine the seal as something like a magical cage. This is a simplified explanation of course, it's rather advanced magic, a modified version of a shield spell, rather focused on the components that reduce the targets ability to move and... Oh, I seem to confuse you. Nevermind.";
- mes "However, I create and open the 'cage', then I wait for all the helpers to drop in the slimes and close it when all are in. When it is closed, I additionally cast a guarding spell to prevent unauthorized access.\"";
+ mes "\"You can think of the seal as something like a magical cage. This is a simplified explanation, of course. It's rather advanced magic, a modified version of a shield spell, rather focused on the components that reduce the targets ability to move and... Oh, I seem to be losing you. Nevermind.";
+ mes "Anyway, I create and open the 'cage', then I wait for all the helpers to drop in the slimes and close it when all are in. When it is closed, I additionally cast a guarding spell to prevent unauthorized access.\"";
next;
- mes "\"That night when the slimes escaped, I did all of this as usual. Everything seemed alright after I cast the guarding spell, so I went to bed. But I woke up in the middle of the night because I felt the spells... oh, it's hard to describe... it seems the spell which defines the magical cage started to... inflate itself, causing the guarding spells to vanish, since they're intended against threads from the outside, not the inside.";
- mes "While expanding, the cage went thinner and thinner until it just... faded.\"";
+ mes "\"That night when the slimes escaped, I did all of this as usual. Everything seemed alright after I cast the guarding spell, so I went to bed. But I woke up in the middle of the night because I felt the spells... oh, it's hard to describe... it seems the spell which defines the magical cage started to... inflate itself. That caused the guarding spells to vanish, since they're intended to protect against threats from the outside, not the inside.";
+ mes "While expanding, the cage went thinner and thinner until it just... faded out of existence!\"";
next;
mes "\"This left all the slimes free in the workshop, right next to the library. Of course I hurried there as fast as I could, yelling to wake up everyone, but that caused so much confusion that we fell over each other in the corridor and when we finally reached the librabry, the slimes were already spread all over the room, eating the books and dripping out of the windows.\"";
next;
mes "\"We tried to block the windows to prevent them escaping, but as most of the helpers aren't experienced in fighting and only some of us have a higher magical education, the slimes are rather dangerous for most of them.";
mes "We weren't able to get the situation under control until most of the slimes had escaped.\"";
next;
- mes "\"Since it was my responsibility to seal them away, I was preliminarily suspended and sent to my room. Since then I've been thinking over and over again about the happenings and how I cast the spell, trying to find the mistake I did.";
- mes "But now that I described you the spells, I'm sure I casted it correctly. Thinking again about the effect of the sealing inflating, I suppose it might have to do with the ingredients I used for the spell.\"";
+ mes "\"Since it was my responsibility to seal them away, I was preliminarily suspended and sent to my room. Since then I've been thinking over and over again about the happenings and how I cast the spell, trying to find the mistake I made.";
+ mes "But now that I've described the spells to you, I'm sure I cast them correctly. Thinking again about the effect of the seal inflating, I suppose it might have to do with the ingredients I used for the spell.\"";
next;
mes "\"I never tried it, because it makes no sense to do that, but theoretically adding some Silk Cocoons could have such an effect. That's pretty basic nature magic.";
- mes "But... how should that have gotten into the ingredients?\"";
+ mes "But... how would that have gotten into the ingredients?\"";
set @investigate, @investigate + 3;
callfunc "updateBlueSageInvestigate";
goto L_Close;
@@ -114,7 +114,7 @@ L_Investigate:
mes "You explain your gained insights to Peetu and what conclusions Chief Oskari drew.";
mes "[Peetu]";
mes "\"Oh, I'm so relieved!";
- mes "I mean, this are alarming news, but I'm so glad that this isn't my fault and that I deserve keep my job.\"";
+ mes "I mean, this is alarming news, but I'm so glad that this isn't my fault and that he feels I deserve to keep my job.\"";
next;
mes "\"It isn't much, but please take these Silk Gloves. We use those when we have to protect our hands, but still need to perform magic.\"";
getitem "SilkGloves", 1;
diff --git a/world/map/npc/048-2/helperBookpages1.txt b/world/map/npc/048-2/helperBookpages1.txt
index 43dbff5b..f2e2b668 100644
--- a/world/map/npc/048-2/helperBookpages1.txt
+++ b/world/map/npc/048-2/helperBookpages1.txt
@@ -24,7 +24,7 @@
"Can I help somehow?",-;
mes "[Ensio]";
mes "\"Oh, would you? That'd be great! You see, the slimes ate most of the books and it is difficult to retrieve the bookpages.";
- mes "If you feel capable of this task, you could go out to hunt the Blue and White Slimes to get back the bookpages from them.\"";
+ mes "If you feel capable of this task, you could go out to hunt the Blue and White Slimes to get the bookpages back from them.\"";
L_Progress:
mes "[Ensio]";
mes "\"Did you get some bookpage from the slimes?\"";
@@ -43,7 +43,7 @@ L_Progress:
callfunc "updateBlueSageBookPages";
getexp @new_bookpage_exp, 0;
mes "[Ensio]";
- mes "\"Ah, wonderful! This is a page we haven't find yet!\"";
+ mes "\"Ah, wonderful! This is a page we haven't found yet!\"";
if (@bookpages < 31)
goto L_Progress;
next;
@@ -74,26 +74,26 @@ L_Investigate:
L_Ask_Visitor:
menu
- "Can you tell me something about the visitor with the mask?",L_Visitor,
+ "Can you tell me anything about the visitor with the mask?",L_Visitor,
"I need to leave.",L_Close;
L_Ask_Helper:
menu
- "What's your opinion about Peetu and how he does his work?",L_Helper,
+ "What's your opinion of Peetu and how he does his work?",L_Helper,
"See you later.",L_Close;
L_Ask_Both:
menu
- "Can you tell me something about the visitor with the mask?",L_Visitor,
- "What's your opinion about Peetu and how does he do his work?",L_Helper,
+ "Can you tell me anything about the visitor with the mask?",L_Visitor,
+ "What's your opinion of Peetu and how he does his work?",L_Helper,
"Bye.",L_Close;
L_Visitor:
mes "[Ensio]";
mes "\"Visitor with a mask? Ah, I think I know who are you talking about. Black clothes and a golden mask. Rather strange guy.\"";
next;
- mes "\"He was looking around in the library a while, and then came to ask about our researches. He seemed to be particularly interested in our experiments with the slimes.";
- mes "Heh, I wonder what he've had said if he'd have visited us a little bit later. Mh, now that I think about it, the accidenet with the slimes happened just the night after he was here.\"";
+ mes "\"He was looking around in the library a while, and then came to ask about our research. He seemed to be particularly interested in our experiments with the slimes.";
+ mes "Heh, I wonder what he would've said if he'd have visited us a little bit later. Mh, now that I think about it, the accident with the slimes happened just the night after he was here.\"";
if ((@investigate != 3) && (@investigate != 6) && (@investigate != 9))
goto L_Close;
set @investigate, @investigate + 1;
@@ -102,7 +102,7 @@ L_Visitor:
L_Helper:
mes "[Ensio]";
- mes "\"Oh, I can't really tell. I'm mostly working in the library, while he's very involved in the researches. \"";
+ mes "\"Oh, I can't really tell. I'm mostly working in the library, while he's very involved in the research.\"";
goto L_Close;
L_Close:
diff --git a/world/map/npc/048-2/helperBookpages2.txt b/world/map/npc/048-2/helperBookpages2.txt
index c25b90d2..172227a8 100644
--- a/world/map/npc/048-2/helperBookpages2.txt
+++ b/world/map/npc/048-2/helperBookpages2.txt
@@ -54,23 +54,23 @@ L_Investigate:
L_Ask_Visitor:
menu
- "Can you tell me something about the visitor with the mask?",L_Visitor,
+ "Can you tell me anything about the visitor with the mask?",L_Visitor,
"I need to leave.",L_Close;
L_Ask_Helper:
menu
- "What's your opinion about Peetu and how he does his work?",L_Helper,
+ "What's your opinion of Peetu and how he does his work?",L_Helper,
"See you later.",L_Close;
L_Ask_Both:
menu
- "Can you tell me something about the visitor with the mask?",L_Visitor,
- "What's your opinion about Peetu and how does he do his work?",L_Helper,
+ "Can you tell me anything about the visitor with the mask?",L_Visitor,
+ "What's your opinion of Peetu and how he does his work?",L_Helper,
"Bye.",L_Close;
L_Visitor:
mes "[Henriikka]";
- mes "\"With a mask? I don't really remember... We have so many visitors. Though I suppose someone wearing a mask would be noticeable... But I'm so worn out from the past days that I'm even glad that I can recall my own name, sorry.\"";
+ mes "\"With a mask? I don't really remember... We have so many visitors. Though I suppose someone wearing a mask would be noticeable... But I'm so worn out from the past few days that I'm just glad I can even recall my own name! Sorry.\"";
goto L_Close;
L_Helper:
diff --git a/world/map/npc/048-2/helperBookpages3.txt b/world/map/npc/048-2/helperBookpages3.txt
index b261c3bd..e0c356fc 100644
--- a/world/map/npc/048-2/helperBookpages3.txt
+++ b/world/map/npc/048-2/helperBookpages3.txt
@@ -35,18 +35,18 @@ L_Investigate:
L_Ask_Visitor:
menu
- "Can you tell me something about the visitor with the mask?",L_Visitor,
+ "Can you tell me anything about the visitor with the mask?",L_Visitor,
"I need to leave.",L_Close;
L_Ask_Helper:
menu
- "What's your opinion about Peetu and how he does his work?",L_Helper,
+ "What's your opinion of Peetu and how he does his work?",L_Helper,
"See you later.",L_Close;
L_Ask_Both:
menu
- "Can you tell me something about the visitor with the mask?",L_Visitor,
- "What's your opinion about Peetu and how does he do his work?",L_Helper,
+ "Can you tell me anything about the visitor with the mask?",L_Visitor,
+ "What's your opinion of Peetu and how he does his work?",L_Helper,
"Bye.",L_Close;
L_Visitor:
@@ -57,7 +57,7 @@ L_Visitor:
L_Helper:
mes "[Teuvo]";
mes "\"Peetu? He's one of those magic wielders who think they can do anything. Heh, you see the result here.";
- mes "But to be fair, from what I've seen Peetu always was very attentive and dutiful.\"";
+ mes "But to be fair, from what I've seen Peetu was always very attentive and dutiful.\"";
if ((@investigate != 5) && (@investigate != 6) && (@investigate != 7))
goto L_Close;
set @investigate, @investigate + 3;
diff --git a/world/map/npc/048-2/helperChief.txt b/world/map/npc/048-2/helperChief.txt
index c5d0ab12..727d3d21 100644
--- a/world/map/npc/048-2/helperChief.txt
+++ b/world/map/npc/048-2/helperChief.txt
@@ -22,7 +22,7 @@
mes "You tell him about your conversation with Peetu, how he's blaming himself and his worries about losing his job.";
next;
- mes "Oskari keeps silent a moment after you end, pondering. Then he talks to you.";
+ mes "Oskari keeps silent for a moment after you finish, pondering. Then he talks to you.";
mes "[Oskari]";
mes "\"You know, Peetu is one of my most experienced and reliable employees. This whole situation is very disquieting, not to say suspicious.\"";
next;
@@ -32,10 +32,10 @@
next;
mes "\"As someone who's not a member of our team you might be able to get a more unbiased view of the situation, besides the fact that all of us are very busy with getting the situation under control again.\"";
next;
- mes "\"I suggest to start by talking to Peetu again to get a precise idea of his workflow and what he thinks that happened.";
- mes "Oh, and please tell him that I'm not considering firing him in the current situation. That might be needed to calm him down to get meaningful information.\"";
+ mes "\"I suggest to start by talking to Peetu again to get a precise idea of his workflow and what he thinks happened.";
+ mes "Oh, and please tell him that I'm not considering firing him in the current situation. You might need that to calm him down and get meaningful information.\"";
next;
- mes "\"You should find out if someone observed something unusual during the time before the accident happened.\"";
+ mes "\"You should find out if someone observed anything unusual during the time before the accident happened.\"";
set @investigate, 2;
callfunc "updateBlueSageInvestigate";
goto L_Close;
@@ -47,16 +47,16 @@ L_Investigate:
menu
"I'm still collecting information.",L_Close;
next;
- mes "You explain who you talked to, the helpers positive opinion about Peetu and what you found out about the suspicious visitor.";
+ mes "You explain who you talked to, the helpers positive opinions of Peetu and what you found out about the suspicious visitor.";
mes "[Oskari]";
mes "\"With a mask you say? This reminds me... wait a moment.\"";
mes "He turns to his desk and searches through some papers.";
next;
mes "[Oskari]";
mes "\"Mh... yes. It fits together.";
- mes "Listen, this is a letter from Chief Warrick from Santa's team. It seems they encountered some sabotaging during their preparations for the Christmas time, the letter mentions a masked person as well.\"";
+ mes "Listen, this is a letter from Chief Warrick on Santa's team. It seems they encountered some sabotaging during their preparations for the Christmas time... the letter mentions a masked person as well.\"";
next;
- mes "\"And there are some reports about cases of unusal behaviour of native animals in various places of Kaizei that came to the Sages notice.\"";
+ mes "\"And there are some reports about cases of unusal behaviour from native animals in various places of Kaizei that came to the Sages notice.\"";
next;
mes "\"And now this accident in our house, also a person with a mask... and given the context of the recent frictions within the Sages...\"";
mes "Oskari seems rather excited.";
@@ -72,9 +72,9 @@ L_Investigate:
next;
mes "\"However, taking all these different events into account, I came to the suspicion that there might be a connection. Of course we don't have evidence yet, so I don't want to be too sure. Well, I'll bring this to the Sages' notice.\"";
next;
- mes "\"You were a great help! I'll inform Nikolai about your involvement in clarifing this matter.\"";
+ mes "\"You were a great help! I'll inform Nikolai about your involvement in clarifying this matter.\"";
next;
- mes "\"And you should also talk with Peetu, I'm sure he'll be relieved to hear about the clarification of this matter.\"";
+ mes "\"And you should also talk with Peetu, I'm sure he'll be relieved to hear about the clarification of this matter too.\"";
set @investigate, 11;
callfunc "updateBlueSageInvestigate";
goto L_Close;
@@ -87,7 +87,7 @@ L_GoodJob:
"Can you tell me something about the Sages?",-;
mes "[Oskari]";
- mes "\"Oh, sure. I'm a bit busy right now, but you were a great help, so I think I can take some minutes for you. What do you want to know?\"";
+ mes "\"Oh, sure. I'm a bit busy right now, but you were a great help, so I think I can take a few minutes for you. What do you want to know?\"";
menu
"What exactly are the Sages and what do they do?",L_Sages,
"What was that conflict you were talking about?",L_Conflict,
@@ -99,9 +99,9 @@ L_Sages:
mes "He sighs.";
next;
mes "[Oskari]";
- mes "\"However, they live in different places all over Kaizei, but they meet sometimes to discuss differents matters. They work hard for the prosperity of this continent, trying to improve the living conditions by both political work and magical researches, with the aid of their helpers.\"";
+ mes "\"However, they live in different places all over Kaizei, but they meet sometimes to discuss different matters. They work hard for the prosperity of this continent, trying to improve the living conditions by both political work and magical research, with the aid of their helpers.\"";
next;
- mes "\"The politics on Kaizei are rather complicated, the Sages have great influence, but there are also other organziations and groups. Due to the harsh climate on this continent, villages or towns can be cut off the rest of the world for several weeks sometimes, so most of them tend to be rather independent.\"";
+ mes "\"The politics on Kaizei are rather complicated. The Sages have great influence, but there are also other organizations and groups. Due to the harsh climate on this continent, villages or towns can be cut off from the rest of the world for several weeks sometimes, so most of them tend to be rather independent.\"";
next;
mes "\"Also there's the Order of Ice, an organization which represents the national interests of Kaizei in a rather narrow-minded way compared to the Sages.\"";
goto L_Close;
@@ -112,9 +112,9 @@ L_Conflict:
next;
mes "\"Basically there was a disagreement between the Sages. Usually those things can be solved by discussion, but this time... things got rather personal and one of the members accused Santa of valuing his own interests over the general good.\"";
next;
- mes "\"This of course is nonsense, Santa would never do that, and it's more that the person accusing him has been suspected to act this way. The other Sages were on Santa's side and I fear this harsh rejection caused a lot of painful feelings.\"";
+ mes "\"This, of course, is nonsense. Santa would never do that, and it's more that the person accusing him has been suspected to act this way. The other Sages were on Santa's side and I fear this harsh rejection caused a lot of painful feelings.\"";
next;
- mes "\"Personally I think that he was jealous about Santa's influence and high position for quite a while. However, he took this as a reason to leave the Sages and based on our insights, so it seems he decided to work against the Sages.";
+ mes "\"Personally I think that he has been jealous of Santa's influence and high position for quite a while. However, he took this as a reason to leave the Sages and based on our insights, it seems he decided to work against the Sages.";
mes "It really is a shame.\"";
goto L_Close;
diff --git a/world/map/npc/048-2/helperCleaning1.txt b/world/map/npc/048-2/helperCleaning1.txt
index cd0eef2d..22138d86 100644
--- a/world/map/npc/048-2/helperCleaning1.txt
+++ b/world/map/npc/048-2/helperCleaning1.txt
@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@
mes "\"That... I didn't think about this possibility. But it'd be a great help!";
mes "Ok, there are some slimes around in the deeper parts of the library. They... erm, developed some very fast breeding behaviour, both the Blue Slimes and the White Slimes, but in a slightly different fashion.\"";
next;
- mes "\"The Blue ones are able to generate smaller slimes which show a self-destructive behaviour to protect their... parent slime if you want to call it that. You have to kill the big one, but be careful about the smaller ones while trying that.\"";
+ mes "\"The Blue ones are able to generate smaller slimes which show a self-destructive behaviour to protect their... parent slime if you want to call it that. You have to kill the big one, but be careful of the smaller ones while trying that.\"";
next;
mes "\"The White Slimes appear in groups and when you attack one of them, they also show some self-destructive behaviour to protect their group as a whole. You have to defeat the entire group, otherwise the remaining slimes will breed new slimes to replace their lost.\"";
set QUEST_BlueSage, QUEST_BlueSage | $@Q_BlueSageSlimesStart;
@@ -49,23 +49,23 @@ L_Investigate:
L_Ask_Visitor:
menu
- "Can you tell me something about the visitor with the mask?",L_Visitor,
+ "Can you tell me anything about the visitor with the mask?",L_Visitor,
"I need to leave.",L_Close;
L_Ask_Helper:
menu
- "What's your opinion about Peetu and how he does his work?",L_Helper,
+ "What's your opinion of Peetu and how he does his work?",L_Helper,
"See you later.",L_Close;
L_Ask_Both:
menu
- "Can you tell me something about the visitor with the mask?",L_Visitor,
- "What's your opinion about Peetu and how does he do his work?",L_Helper,
+ "Can you tell me anything about the visitor with the mask?",L_Visitor,
+ "What's your opinion of Peetu and how he does his work?",L_Helper,
"Bye.",L_Close;
L_Visitor:
mes "[Pyry]";
- mes "\"Mh, yes. I remember him, he was very interested in the library and the researches we do here. He had an unusual behaviour and appearance. But well, this isn't a reason to refuse someone, right?\"";
+ mes "\"Mh, yes. I remember him. He was very interested in the library and the research we do here. He had an unusual behaviour and appearance. But, well, that isn't a reason to refuse someone, right?\"";
goto L_Close;
L_Helper:
diff --git a/world/map/npc/048-2/helperCleaning2.txt b/world/map/npc/048-2/helperCleaning2.txt
index 6b768759..15fede97 100644
--- a/world/map/npc/048-2/helperCleaning2.txt
+++ b/world/map/npc/048-2/helperCleaning2.txt
@@ -17,12 +17,12 @@
mes "She shudders.";
next;
mes "[Nea]";
- mes "\"And they can explode! Nothing in the world could make go there. I'll just do my work right here, clean the floor and tidy up the books, and I keep my eyes open in case they get over here.\"";
+ mes "\"And they can explode! Nothing in the world could make me go in there. I'll just do my work right here, clean the floor and tidy up the books, and I'm keeping my eyes open in case they get over here.\"";
goto L_Investigate;
L_Progress:
mes "[Nea]";
- mes "\"Oh, I'm so glad you're taking care about those scary slimes. You're so brave!";
+ mes "\"Oh, I'm so glad you're taking care of those scary slimes. You're so brave!";
mes "How many of them are still left, do you think? Will it be safe to go there soon?\"";
goto L_Investigate;
@@ -39,30 +39,30 @@ L_Investigate:
L_Ask_Visitor:
menu
- "Can you tell me something about the visitor with the mask?",L_Visitor,
+ "Can you tell me anything about the visitor with the mask?",L_Visitor,
"I need to leave.",L_Close;
L_Ask_Helper:
menu
- "What's your opinion about Peetu and how he does his work?",L_Helper,
+ "What's your opinion of Peetu and how he does his work?",L_Helper,
"See you later.",L_Close;
L_Ask_Both:
menu
- "Can you tell me something about the visitor with the mask?",L_Visitor,
- "What's your opinion about Peetu and how does he do his work?",L_Helper,
+ "Can you tell me anything about the visitor with the mask?",L_Visitor,
+ "What's your opinion of Peetu and how he does his work?",L_Helper,
"Bye.",L_Close;
L_Visitor:
mes "[Nea]";
- mes "\"With a mask? Mh, I think I know who are you talking about, I vaguely remember that there was someone with a mask... but I can't recall any details, I wasn't really paying attention.\"";
+ mes "\"With a mask? Mh, I think I know who are you talking about. I vaguely remember that there was someone with a mask... but I can't recall any details, I wasn't really paying attention.\"";
goto L_Close;
L_Helper:
mes "[Nea]";
mes "\"Peetu? Yeah, he's the kind of person who always wants to do things perfectly. That makes it a bit difficult to work with him, since his expectations for others are as high as for himself.\"";
next;
- mes "\"I really wonder how that accident with the sealing spell could've happened. I'd had never expected him to mess something up like that.\"";
+ mes "\"I really wonder how that accident with the sealing spell could've happened. I'd have never expected him to mess something up like that.\"";
if ((@investigate != 5) && (@investigate != 6) && (@investigate != 7))
goto L_Close;
set @investigate, @investigate + 3;
diff --git a/world/map/npc/048-2/helperCleaning3.txt b/world/map/npc/048-2/helperCleaning3.txt
index e422f96a..37f6aaf1 100644
--- a/world/map/npc/048-2/helperCleaning3.txt
+++ b/world/map/npc/048-2/helperCleaning3.txt
@@ -25,12 +25,12 @@ L_Progress:
L_Thank:
mes "[Arvo]";
mes "\"Good work with the slimes. This will make our task much easier.\"";
- mes "He sighs and has a careful look around.";
+ mes "He sighs and takes a careful look around.";
next;
mes "[Arvo]";
- mes "\"But it shows that Nikolai's position isn't what it used to be. There's disturbance in the great circle of our Sages and things have changed. About one year ago, Nikolai's helpers wouldn't have needed help of a mere adventurer - no offense.\"";
+ mes "\"But it shows that Nikolai's position isn't what it used to be. There's disturbance in the great circle of our Sages and things have changed. About one year ago, Nikolai's helpers wouldn't have needed the help of a mere adventurer - no offense.\"";
next;
- mes "\"But it seems we were focusing too much on researches and this lead to neglect of other duties of a Sage's household. This is dangerous in times of changes. I'm worried about the future.\"";
+ mes "\"But it appears we were focusing too much on research and this lead to neglect of other duties of a Sage's household. This is dangerous in times of changes. I'm worried about the future.\"";
goto L_Investigate;
L_Investigate:
@@ -41,27 +41,27 @@ L_Investigate:
L_Ask_Visitor:
menu
- "Can you tell me something about the visitor with the mask?",L_Visitor,
+ "Can you tell me anything about the visitor with the mask?",L_Visitor,
"I need to leave.",L_Close;
L_Ask_Helper:
menu
- "What's your opinion about Peetu and how he does his work?",L_Helper,
+ "What's your opinion of Peetu and how he does his work?",L_Helper,
"See you later.",L_Close;
L_Ask_Both:
menu
- "Can you tell me something about the visitor with the mask?",L_Visitor,
- "What's your opinion about Peetu and how does he do his work?",L_Helper,
+ "Can you tell me anything about the visitor with the mask?",L_Visitor,
+ "What's your opinion of Peetu and how he does his work?",L_Helper,
"Bye.",L_Close;
L_Visitor:
mes "[Arvo]";
- mes "\"Yes, I remember that one! I welcomed him in the libary and showed him around. But I didn't have the impression he was really listening to what I was selling, though that's hard to tell with the mask.\"";
+ mes "\"Yes, I remember that one! I welcomed him in the libary and showed him around. But I didn't have the impression he was really listening to what I was saying, though that's hard to tell with the mask.\"";
next;
- mes "\"But when I left him to look at the books on his own, he sneaked over to the workshop area. Visitors are allowed to have a look there, but only if they don't interfere with any researches and experiments. But it seems he was rather disturbing, they sent them back to the library part.\"";
+ mes "\"But when I left him to look at the books on his own, he sneaked over to the workshop area. Visitors are allowed to have a look there, but only if they don't interfere with any research and experiments. But it seems he was being rather disturbing, since they sent them back to the library part.\"";
next;
- mes "\"I tried to have a look at him after that, but when I got distracted by some newly arriving visitor he went over to the workshop again! Usually I enjoy my job, because I like talking to people, but this guy... was a pain, really.\"";
+ mes "\"I tried to keep an eye on him after that, but when I got distracted by some newly arriving visitor he went over to the workshop again! Usually I enjoy my job, because I like talking to people, but this guy... was a pain, really.\"";
if ((@investigate != 3) && (@investigate != 6) && (@investigate != 9))
goto L_Close;
set @investigate, @investigate + 1;
@@ -70,7 +70,7 @@ L_Visitor:
L_Helper:
mes "[Arvo]";
- mes "\"Peetu? That's one of the high rank helpers, as far as I know he's very talented with magic and takes part in some important researches. But I don't really know about those things.\"";
+ mes "\"Peetu? That's one of the high rank helpers. As far as I know, he's very talented with magic and takes part in some important research. But I don't really know about those things.\"";
goto L_Close;
L_Close:
diff --git a/world/map/npc/048-2/helperCleaning4.txt b/world/map/npc/048-2/helperCleaning4.txt
index 6c0dd19b..407ac5d2 100644
--- a/world/map/npc/048-2/helperCleaning4.txt
+++ b/world/map/npc/048-2/helperCleaning4.txt
@@ -13,7 +13,7 @@
if (@slimes > 0) goto L_Progress;
mes "[Kristian]";
- mes "\"Welcome. Please don't go deeper into the library, there are still some slimes left. But besides that we have made quite a bit of progress. You should have seen the mess just after most of the slimes escaped!\"";
+ mes "\"Welcome. Please don't go deeper into the library, there are still some slimes left. But in spite of that we have made quite a bit of progress. You should have seen the mess just after most of the slimes escaped!\"";
goto L_Investigate;
L_Progress:
@@ -34,18 +34,18 @@ L_Investigate:
L_Ask_Visitor:
menu
- "Can you tell me something about the visitor with the mask?",L_Visitor,
+ "Can you tell me anything about the visitor with the mask?",L_Visitor,
"I need to leave.",L_Close;
L_Ask_Helper:
menu
- "What's your opinion about Peetu and how he does his work?",L_Helper,
+ "What's your opinion of Peetu and how he does his work?",L_Helper,
"See you later.",L_Close;
L_Ask_Both:
menu
- "Can you tell me something about the visitor with the mask?",L_Visitor,
- "What's your opinion about Peetu and how does he do his work?",L_Helper,
+ "Can you tell me anything about the visitor with the mask?",L_Visitor,
+ "What's your opinion of Peetu and how he does his work?",L_Helper,
"Bye.",L_Close;
L_Visitor:
diff --git a/world/map/npc/048-2/helperCleaning5.txt b/world/map/npc/048-2/helperCleaning5.txt
index 9c9e8e02..fcea13fe 100644
--- a/world/map/npc/048-2/helperCleaning5.txt
+++ b/world/map/npc/048-2/helperCleaning5.txt
@@ -34,25 +34,25 @@ L_Investigate:
L_Ask_Visitor:
menu
- "Can you tell me something about the visitor with the mask?",L_Visitor,
+ "Can you tell me anything about the visitor with the mask?",L_Visitor,
"I need to leave.",L_Close;
L_Ask_Helper:
menu
- "What's your opinion about Peetu and how he does his work?",L_Helper,
+ "What's your opinion of Peetu and how he does his work?",L_Helper,
"See you later.",L_Close;
L_Ask_Both:
menu
- "Can you tell me something about the visitor with the mask?",L_Visitor,
- "What's your opinion about Peetu and how does he do his work?",L_Helper,
+ "Can you tell me anything about the visitor with the mask?",L_Visitor,
+ "What's your opinion of Peetu and how he does his work?",L_Helper,
"Bye.",L_Close;
L_Visitor:
mes "[Mirjami]";
- mes "\"Ohh, I think I know who you mean. That was a strange guy. He always came over here in the workshop, said he's very interested in the researches. I suppose that's ok, but he didn't keep his hands to himself, and touched some experiments and I caught him on some storage rack.\"";
+ mes "\"Ohh, I think I know who you mean. That was a strange guy. He always came over here in the workshop, said he's very interested in the research. I suppose that's ok, but he didn't keep his hands to himself, and touched some experiments and I caught him near some storage racks.\"";
next;
- mes "\"Visitors should keep away from that!\"";
+ mes "\"Visitors should keep away from those!\"";
if ((@investigate != 3) && (@investigate != 6) && (@investigate != 9))
goto L_Close;
set @investigate, @investigate + 1;
diff --git a/world/map/npc/048-2/helperJanitor.txt b/world/map/npc/048-2/helperJanitor.txt
index d1666966..fb678af4 100644
--- a/world/map/npc/048-2/helperJanitor.txt
+++ b/world/map/npc/048-2/helperJanitor.txt
@@ -14,17 +14,17 @@
if (QUEST_BlueSage > 0) goto L_ShortHello;
mes "[Elias]";
- mes "\"Welcome in the residence of Nikolai, member of the Sages of Kaizei.\"";
+ mes "\"Welcome to the residence of Nikolai, member of the Sages of Kaizei.\"";
next;
mes "\"Our house is famous for its extraordinary and well equipped library.";
mes "Ahm, usually well equipped.\"";
next;
- mes "\"We had an accident with some magic experiment, that caused some slimes get out of control. They ate most of the books in the library.\"";
+ mes "\"We had an accident with some magic experiments, that caused some slimes to get out of control. They ate most of the books in the library.\"";
mes "He sighs with a regretful look on his face.";
next;
mes "[Elias]";
mes "\"So, if you came because of the library, I'll have to disappoint you, because there isn't much left.";
- mes "Though you look like a skilled adventurer. If you'd like to offer your help that'd be highly appreciated.\"";
+ mes "Though you look like a skilled adventurer. If you'd like to offer your help that'd be greatly appreciated.\"";
next;
mes "\"The library is on the third floor.\"";
goto L_Close;
@@ -44,7 +44,7 @@ L_ShortHello:
next;
mes "Elias gets a bit excited now.";
mes "[Elias]";
- mes "\"Do you think he may have had something to do with the accident? We're a very hospitable house, so I didn't see a reason to deny him the entrance. I mean, his mask might have been a bit unusual, but hey, there could've been many reasons why someone would wear a mask, don't you think so?\"";
+ mes "\"Do you think he may have had something to do with the accident? We're a very hospitable house, so I didn't see a reason to deny him the entrance. I mean, his mask might have been a bit unusual, but hey, there could've been many reasons why someone would wear a mask, don't you think?\"";
set @investigate, @investigate + 1;
callfunc "updateBlueSageInvestigate";
@@ -55,8 +55,8 @@ L_ShortHello:
L_Worry:
mes "[Elias]";
- mes "\"After your questions I'm really getting worried about this guy with the mask. In the afterthought it really seems suspicous.";
- mes "It might be a good idea to ask around if someone else observed something odd connected to this person.\"";
+ mes "\"After your questions I'm really getting worried about this guy with the mask. In retrospect it really seems suspicous.";
+ mes "It might be a good idea to ask around if anyone else observed something odd connected to this person.\"";
goto L_Close;
L_Confirmed:
@@ -68,9 +68,9 @@ L_Confirmed:
L_Thank:
mes "[Elias]";
- mes "\"Now that Chief Oskari knows about the backgrounds, the Sages will take care of it. It's really a shame how malicious people can be.\"";
+ mes "\"Now that Chief Oskari knows about the sequence of events, the Sages will take care of it. It's really a shame how malicious people can be.\"";
next;
- mes "\"Thanks a lot for your help with revealing the truth.\"";
+ mes "\"Thanks a lot for your help revealing the truth.\"";
goto L_Close;
L_Close:
diff --git a/world/map/npc/048-2/helperMInk.txt b/world/map/npc/048-2/helperMInk.txt
index 05141ad3..75a1a5cc 100644
--- a/world/map/npc/048-2/helperMInk.txt
+++ b/world/map/npc/048-2/helperMInk.txt
@@ -17,7 +17,7 @@
if (QUEST_BlueSage & $@Q_BlueSageMaterialInk) goto L_Done;
mes "[Eevert]";
- mes "\"Mh. I wonder how I'm expected to do my task with this meager equipment. The new books will look pathetic.\"";
+ mes "\"Mh. I wonder how I'm expected to perform my task with this meager equipment. The new books will look pathetic.\"";
mes "He sighs.";
if (BaseLevel < $@Q_BlueSageMinimumLevel)
goto L_Close;
@@ -64,18 +64,18 @@ L_Investigate:
L_Ask_Visitor:
menu
- "Can you tell me something about the visitor with the mask?",L_Visitor,
+ "Can you tell me anything about the visitor with the mask?",L_Visitor,
"I need to leave.",L_Close;
L_Ask_Helper:
menu
- "What's your opinion about Peetu and how he does his work?",L_Helper,
+ "What's your opinion of Peetu and how he does his work?",L_Helper,
"See you later.",L_Close;
L_Ask_Both:
menu
- "Can you tell me something about the visitor with the mask?",L_Visitor,
- "What's your opinion about Peetu and how does he do his work?",L_Helper,
+ "Can you tell me anything about the visitor with the mask?",L_Visitor,
+ "What's your opinion of Peetu and how he does his work?",L_Helper,
"Bye.",L_Close;
L_Visitor:
@@ -85,9 +85,9 @@ L_Visitor:
L_Helper:
mes "[Eevert]";
- mes "\"Ah, Peetu. I really appreciate his sense for high quality work. The requirements to become a helper of a sage are already high, but Peetu is outstanding. He has a talent for magic and combined with his diligence it's quite remarkable.\"";
+ mes "\"Ah, Peetu. I really appreciate his sense for high quality work. The requirements to become a helper of a sage are already high, but Peetu is outstanding. He has a talent for magic and combined with his diligence, it's quite remarkable.\"";
next;
- mes "\"That's why I'm really confused about this situation, since he was performing the sealing of the slimes. I wonder what went wrong.\"";
+ mes "\"That's why I'm really confused about this situation, since he was the one performing the sealing of the slimes. I wonder what went wrong.\"";
if ((@investigate != 5) && (@investigate != 6) && (@investigate != 7))
goto L_Close;
set @investigate, @investigate + 3;
diff --git a/world/map/npc/048-2/helperMReed.txt b/world/map/npc/048-2/helperMReed.txt
index 288a8c02..12d6ea20 100644
--- a/world/map/npc/048-2/helperMReed.txt
+++ b/world/map/npc/048-2/helperMReed.txt
@@ -51,23 +51,23 @@ L_Investigate:
L_Ask_Visitor:
menu
- "Can you tell me something about the visitor with the mask?",L_Visitor,
+ "Can you tell me anything about the visitor with the mask?",L_Visitor,
"I need to leave.",L_Close;
L_Ask_Helper:
menu
- "What's your opinion about Peetu and how he does his work?",L_Helper,
+ "What's your opinion of Peetu and how he does his work?",L_Helper,
"See you later.",L_Close;
L_Ask_Both:
menu
- "Can you tell me something about the visitor with the mask?",L_Visitor,
- "What's your opinion about Peetu and how does he do his work?",L_Helper,
+ "Can you tell me anything about the visitor with the mask?",L_Visitor,
+ "What's your opinion of Peetu and how he does his work?",L_Helper,
"Bye.",L_Close;
L_Visitor:
mes "[Kullervo]";
- mes "\"Oh, yes. There was such a guy, shortly before the accident I think. He sneaked into the workshop several times, sticking his nose into stuff that shouldn't be his business. We had to sent him back to the library part at least three times.\"";
+ mes "\"Oh, yes. There was such a guy, shortly before the accident I think. He sneaked into the workshop several times, sticking his nose into stuff that shouldn't be his business. We had to send him back to the library area at least three times.\"";
next;
mes "\"Maybe he was confused, not sure. He talked very strangely.\"";
if ((@investigate != 3) && (@investigate != 6) && (@investigate != 9))
@@ -78,10 +78,10 @@ L_Visitor:
L_Helper:
mes "[Kullervo]";
- mes "\"Are you asking because people say it's his fault? Listen, I've known many years now, we started our service here about the same time. We share our room and are really close friends.";
+ mes "\"Are you asking because people say it's his fault? Listen, I've known him for many years now. We started our service here about the same time. We share our room and are really close friends.";
mes "And in all these years, I've never seen him messing up anything important. He's a perfectionist. He isn't satisfied with anything less than the best possible result when doing his work.\"";
next;
- mes "\"I don't understand what went wrong with that spell, it just has to have another cause than Peetu. I'm worried about him, he must feel very miserable. But I can't leave my duty here.\"";
+ mes "\"I don't understand what went wrong with that spell, but it just has to have another cause than Peetu. I'm worried about him. He must feel very miserable. But I can't leave my duty here.\"";
if ((@investigate != 5) && (@investigate != 6) && (@investigate != 7))
goto L_Close;
set @investigate, @investigate + 3;
diff --git a/world/map/npc/048-2/helperMSilk.txt b/world/map/npc/048-2/helperMSilk.txt
index 5ac182c7..8ab0bb42 100644
--- a/world/map/npc/048-2/helperMSilk.txt
+++ b/world/map/npc/048-2/helperMSilk.txt
@@ -52,26 +52,26 @@ L_Investigate:
L_Ask_Visitor:
menu
- "Can you tell me something about the visitor with the mask?",L_Visitor,
+ "Can you tell me anything about the visitor with the mask?",L_Visitor,
"I need to leave.",L_Close;
L_Ask_Helper:
menu
- "What's your opinion about Peetu and how he does his work?",L_Helper,
+ "What's your opinion of Peetu and how he does his work?",L_Helper,
"See you later.",L_Close;
L_Ask_Both:
menu
- "Can you tell me something about the visitor with the mask?",L_Visitor,
- "What's your opinion about Peetu and how does he do his work?",L_Helper,
+ "Can you tell me anything about the visitor with the mask?",L_Visitor,
+ "What's your opinion of Peetu and how he does his work?",L_Helper,
"Bye.",L_Close;
L_Visitor:
mes "[Janika]";
- mes "\"Oh, I know who you mean! That impertinent person came over in the workshop area and fiddled about all kind of things here! Such a rude person! Didn't he understand that we had delicate things going on here? We had to send him back to the library area several times.\"";
+ mes "\"Oh, I know who you mean! That impertinent person came over in the workshop area and fiddled about with all kinds of things here! Such a rude person! Didn't he understand that we had delicate things going on here? We had to send him back to the library area several times.\"";
next;
mes "She shakes her head.";
- mes "\"Sometimes I think it'd be better not to allow visitors here. But the sages set a high value on keeping contact to the population. Politics.\"";
+ mes "\"Sometimes I think it'd be better not to allow visitors here. But the sages set a high value on keeping contact with the population. Politics.\"";
if ((@investigate != 3) && (@investigate != 6) && (@investigate != 9))
goto L_Close;
set @investigate, @investigate + 1;
diff --git a/world/map/npc/048-2/helperMYetiClaw.txt b/world/map/npc/048-2/helperMYetiClaw.txt
index 8ded86ff..4881661e 100644
--- a/world/map/npc/048-2/helperMYetiClaw.txt
+++ b/world/map/npc/048-2/helperMYetiClaw.txt
@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@ L_Quest:
"How can I help?",-,
"I'm not interested.",L_Close;
mes "[Santeri]";
- mes "\"You see, we're working on repairing all of the damaged books and creating new ones for those that are lost.";
+ mes "\"You see, we're working on repairing all of the damaged books and creating new ones for those that were lost.";
mes "Therefore we need a lot of glue, but our supplies are nearly used up. I need " + @claw_amount + " Yeti Claws as ingredient to make new glue. Do you have that?\"";
menu
"Yes, here you go.",-,
@@ -58,30 +58,30 @@ L_Investigate:
L_Ask_Visitor:
menu
- "Can you tell me something about the visitor with the mask?",L_Visitor,
+ "Can you tell me anything about the visitor with the mask?",L_Visitor,
"I need to leave.",L_Close;
L_Ask_Helper:
menu
- "What's your opinion about Peetu and how he does his work?",L_Helper,
+ "What's your opinion of Peetu and how he does his work?",L_Helper,
"See you later.",L_Close;
L_Ask_Both:
menu
- "Can you tell me something about the visitor with the mask?",L_Visitor,
- "What's your opinion about Peetu and how does he do his work?",L_Helper,
+ "Can you tell me anything about the visitor with the mask?",L_Visitor,
+ "What's your opinion of Peetu and how he does his work?",L_Helper,
"Bye.",L_Close;
L_Visitor:
mes "[Santeri]";
- mes "\"There was a visitor with a mask? I didn't notice. You see, I spent most of my time in the workshop, and concentrate on my work. There are other helpers who attend to the visitors. And hopefully keep them from disturbing my concentration.\"";
+ mes "\"There was a visitor with a mask? I didn't notice. You see, I spend most of my time in the workshop, and concentrate on my work. There are other helpers who attend to the visitors. And hopefully keep them from disturbing my concentration.\"";
goto L_Close;
L_Helper:
mes "[Santeri]";
- mes "\"Oh, that's an interesting question. I was really surpised when I heard that he was responsible for the sealing spell. I've worked together with him before, and I have to say, it really was a pleasure. He's very accurate and diligent, but also polite and helpful.\"";
+ mes "\"Oh, that's an interesting question. I was really surprised when I heard that he was responsible for the sealing spell. I've worked together with him before, and I have to say, it really was a pleasure. He's very accurate and diligent, but also polite and helpful.\"";
next;
- mes "\"I really wonder what went wrong with that sealing spell, I can't imagine Peetu messing up something so important.\"";
+ mes "\"I really wonder what went wrong with that sealing spell. I can't imagine Peetu messing up something so important.\"";
if ((@investigate != 5) && (@investigate != 6) && (@investigate != 7))
goto L_Close;
set @investigate, @investigate + 3;
diff --git a/world/map/npc/048-2/helperResting1.txt b/world/map/npc/048-2/helperResting1.txt
index a1140f33..864285e0 100644
--- a/world/map/npc/048-2/helperResting1.txt
+++ b/world/map/npc/048-2/helperResting1.txt
@@ -21,7 +21,7 @@
L_Progress:
mes "[Lenita]";
- mes "\"Teuvo said you're helping to collect some of the missing bookpages to repair the books. That's very kind of you! It's so much work to do, so every help is welcome.\"";
+ mes "\"Teuvo said you're helping to collect some of the missing bookpages to repair the books. That's very kind of you! It's so much work to do, so every bit of help is welcome.\"";
goto L_Investigate;
L_Thank:
@@ -37,23 +37,23 @@ L_Investigate:
L_Ask_Visitor:
menu
- "Can you tell me something about the visitor with the mask?",L_Visitor,
+ "Can you tell me anything about the visitor with the mask?",L_Visitor,
"I need to leave.",L_Close;
L_Ask_Helper:
menu
- "What's your opinion about Peetu and how he does his work?",L_Helper,
+ "What's your opinion of Peetu and how he does his work?",L_Helper,
"See you later.",L_Close;
L_Ask_Both:
menu
- "Can you tell me something about the visitor with the mask?",L_Visitor,
- "What's your opinion about Peetu and how does he do his work?",L_Helper,
+ "Can you tell me anything about the visitor with the mask?",L_Visitor,
+ "What's your opinion of Peetu and how he does his work?",L_Helper,
"Bye.",L_Close;
L_Visitor:
mes "[Lenita]";
- mes "\"With a mask? Yeah, I remember. That was a strange guy. He came to visit the library, but he lurked around at the workshop area and they had so sent him back to the books.\"";
+ mes "\"With a mask? Yeah, I remember. That was a strange guy. He came to visit the library, but he lurked around at the workshop area and they had to send him back to the books.\"";
if ((@investigate != 3) && (@investigate != 6) && (@investigate != 9))
goto L_Close;
set @investigate, @investigate + 1;
diff --git a/world/map/npc/048-2/helperResting2.txt b/world/map/npc/048-2/helperResting2.txt
index f4b9e118..d5265d64 100644
--- a/world/map/npc/048-2/helperResting2.txt
+++ b/world/map/npc/048-2/helperResting2.txt
@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@ L_Progress:
L_Thank:
mes "[Miro]";
- mes "\"Wow, how you took care of the slimes in the library! Amazing! This makes our job there much easier... and safer. Thank you so much!\"";
+ mes "\"Wow, the way you took care of the slimes in the library! Amazing! This makes our job there much easier... and safer. Thank you so much!\"";
goto L_Investigate;
L_Investigate:
@@ -41,13 +41,13 @@ L_Ask_Visitor:
L_Ask_Helper:
menu
- "What's your opinion about Peetu and how he does his work?",L_Helper,
+ "What's your opinion of Peetu and how he does his work?",L_Helper,
"Bye.",L_Close;
L_Ask_Both:
menu
"Do you know anything about the visitor with the mask?",L_Visitor,
- "What's your opinion about Peetu and how does he do his work?",L_Helper,
+ "What's your opinion of Peetu and how he does his work?",L_Helper,
"I need to leave.",L_Close;
L_Visitor:
@@ -59,7 +59,7 @@ L_Helper:
mes "[Miro]";
mes "\"Peetu? It was his job to seal away the slimes before the night, right? I have to say I'm really surprised about what happened, because he's a very cautious person. I'd have never guessed that he'd mess up something as important as this.\"";
next;
- mes "\"If Nikolai's helpers weren't that carefully chosen I'd think this was some kind of a bad joke from someone.\"";
+ mes "\"If Nikolai's helpers weren't so carefully chosen, I'd think this was some kind of a bad joke from someone.\"";
if ((@investigate != 5) && (@investigate != 6) && (@investigate != 7))
goto L_Close;
set @investigate, @investigate + 3;
diff --git a/world/map/npc/048-2/sageNikolai.txt b/world/map/npc/048-2/sageNikolai.txt
index 4b794a7d..620e66f0 100644
--- a/world/map/npc/048-2/sageNikolai.txt
+++ b/world/map/npc/048-2/sageNikolai.txt
@@ -30,12 +30,12 @@
mes "You see a very reputable looking man who is going through some papers. He looks up as you approach.";
mes "[Nikolai]";
mes "\"Welcome to my mansion. I am Nikolai, member of the Sages of Kaizei.";
- mes "I assume you came to see our famous library? As you can see, it isn't in a good shape due to some... misfortunes. I'm very sorry.\"";
+ mes "I assume you came to see our famous library? As you can see, it isn't in very good shape due to some... misfortunes. I'm very sorry.\"";
if (BaseLevel < $@Q_BlueSageMinimumLevel)
goto L_Close;
next;
mes "\"You seem to be quite an experienced adventurer. I usually wouldn't ask for this, but since my dear friend Santa mentioned his good experiences with hiring additional helpers in times of pressure, I reconsidered.";
- mes "If you don't mind, every help with our current situation would be appreciated.\"";
+ mes "If you don't mind, every bit of help with our current situation would be appreciated.\"";
next;
mes "\"There are many things to take care of at the moment, so if you'd like to aid us, the helpers will be able to tell you what they need.\"";
goto L_Close;
@@ -201,13 +201,13 @@ L_StartSlimesAdvice:
L_SlimesAdvice:
// I'm hunting the remaining slimes in the library.
mes "[Nikolai]";
- mes "\"You're a great help! All helpers who would be capable to deal with the slimes are occupied with other tasks.\"";
+ mes "\"You're a great help! All helpers who would be capable of dealing with the slimes are occupied with other tasks.\"";
goto L_Close;
L_StartInvestigateAdvice:
// How did this all happen?
mes "[Nikolai]";
- mes "\"We're not sure yet. The helper who was responsible for sealing away the slimes has been sent to his room until they situation calms down and we can start an investigation.\"";
+ mes "\"We're not sure yet. The helper who was responsible for sealing away the slimes has been sent to his room until the situation calms down and we can start an investigation.\"";
goto L_Close;
L_InvestigateAdvice:
@@ -228,7 +228,7 @@ L_InvestigateAdvice2:
L_GrimoireReward:
mes "[Nikolai]";
- mes "\"Ah, " + strcharinfo(0) + "! We're doing excellent progress with our attempts to recover the important and valuable of the destroyed books, all thanks to you.\"";
+ mes "\"Ah, " + strcharinfo(0) + "! We're making excellent progress with our attempts to recover the important and valuable of the destroyed books, all thanks to you.\"";
next;
mes "\"I'd like you to have this as a reward for your help.\"";
getinventorylist;
@@ -243,7 +243,7 @@ L_GrimoireReward:
L_SlimesReward:
mes "[Nikolai]";
- mes "\"Ah, I heard you took care about the remaining slimes in the library!\"";
+ mes "\"Ah, I heard you took care of the remaining slimes in the library!\"";
next;
mes "\"While looking through some old artifacts that we found during the cleaning, we found this sword. We don't really have a use for it.\"";
getinventorylist;
diff --git a/world/map/npc/048-2/slimes.txt b/world/map/npc/048-2/slimes.txt
index a88b28c5..db696ad9 100644
--- a/world/map/npc/048-2/slimes.txt
+++ b/world/map/npc/048-2/slimes.txt
@@ -74,7 +74,7 @@ L_Count:
L_SlimesEscaped:
set @spawnSlime0, 0;
- message strcharinfo(0), "You don't see any slime of that nest anymore. But did you really get all of them?";
+ message strcharinfo(0), "You don't see any slimes from that nest anymore. But did you really get all of them?";
goto L_Clean;
L_ClearedPoint:
@@ -155,7 +155,7 @@ L_Count:
L_SlimesEscaped:
set @spawnSlime1, 0;
- message strcharinfo(0), "You don't see any slime of that nest anymore. But did you really get all of them?";
+ message strcharinfo(0), "You don't see any slimes from that nest anymore. But did you really get all of them?";
goto L_Clean;
L_ClearedPoint:
@@ -236,7 +236,7 @@ L_Count:
L_SlimesEscaped:
set @spawnSlime2, 0;
- message strcharinfo(0), "You don't see any slime of that nest anymore. But did you really get all of them?";
+ message strcharinfo(0), "You don't see any slimes from that nest anymore. But did you really get all of them?";
goto L_Clean;
L_ClearedPoint:
@@ -317,7 +317,7 @@ L_Count:
L_SlimesEscaped:
set @spawnSlime3, 0;
- message strcharinfo(0), "You don't see any slime of that nest anymore. But did you really get all of them?";
+ message strcharinfo(0), "You don't see any slimes from that nest anymore. But did you really get all of them?";
goto L_Clean;
L_ClearedPoint:
@@ -398,7 +398,7 @@ L_Count:
L_SlimesEscaped:
set @spawnSlime4, 0;
- message strcharinfo(0), "You don't see any slime of that nest anymore. But did you really get all of them?";
+ message strcharinfo(0), "You don't see any slimes from that nest anymore. But did you really get all of them?";
goto L_Clean;
L_ClearedPoint:
@@ -479,7 +479,7 @@ L_Count:
L_SlimesEscaped:
set @spawnSlime5, 0;
- message strcharinfo(0), "You don't see any slime of that nest anymore. But did you really get all of them?";
+ message strcharinfo(0), "You don't see any slimes from that nest anymore. But did you really get all of them?";
goto L_Clean;
L_ClearedPoint:
@@ -560,7 +560,7 @@ L_Count:
L_SlimesEscaped:
set @spawnSlime6, 0;
- message strcharinfo(0), "You don't see any slime of that nest anymore. But did you really get all of them?";
+ message strcharinfo(0), "You don't see any slimes from that nest anymore. But did you really get all of them?";
goto L_Clean;
L_ClearedPoint:
diff --git a/world/map/npc/048-2/visitors.txt b/world/map/npc/048-2/visitors.txt
index 1071ed14..4ab9bbe0 100644
--- a/world/map/npc/048-2/visitors.txt
+++ b/world/map/npc/048-2/visitors.txt
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
048-2.gat,46,44,0|script|Connor|150,{
mes "[Connor]";
- mes "\"Oh, hello. There was a big accident in the library! Most of the books were damaged or destroyed!\"";
+ mes "\"Oh, hello. There was a big accident in the library! Most of the books were damaged or destroyed!\"";
next;
mes "\"As far as I understand it had to do with those weird slimes. They're white and blue! I've never seen slimes of that color.\"";
next;
@@ -24,7 +24,7 @@ L_Close:
"Yes!",-;
mes "[Parcival]";
mes "\"That's very commendable. But you'll be disappointed, there is a huge problem and the library is all upside down.";
- mes "This is very annoying! I was planning this trip months ago and now this!\"";
+ mes "This is very annoying! I was planning this trip for months and now this!\"";
mes "He sighs.";
next;
mes "[Parcival]";
@@ -32,7 +32,7 @@ L_Close:
next;
mes "\"I wonder what they did... I can still feel some distortion in the magic pattern within this mansion. I mean, it's twisted anyway, because the Sages have their houses in a shifted dimension - that's why it is so much larger in the inside than from the outside.\"";
next;
- mes "\"But there's something else... Well, I've heard about the researches being done here. Seems there's some very advanced magic involved.\"";
+ mes "\"But there's something else... Well, I've heard about the research being done here. Seems there's some very advanced magic involved.\"";
goto L_Close;
L_Close:
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