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Diffstat (limited to 'world/map/npc/024-1/tinris.txt')
| -rw-r--r-- | world/map/npc/024-1/tinris.txt | 22 |
1 files changed, 11 insertions, 11 deletions
diff --git a/world/map/npc/024-1/tinris.txt b/world/map/npc/024-1/tinris.txt index 88ab1d42..a0313b32 100644 --- a/world/map/npc/024-1/tinris.txt +++ b/world/map/npc/024-1/tinris.txt @@ -75,7 +75,7 @@ L_Annual: // @state == 2 callsub S_Update_Mask; mes "[Tinris]"; mes "\"Oh, thank you! You saved me!"; - mes "Alright, now we can start with the magic fertilizer.\""; + mes "All right, now we can start with the magic fertilizer.\""; next; L_FirstTry: // @state == 3 mes "[Tinris]"; @@ -96,9 +96,9 @@ L_FirstTry: // @state == 3 misceffect sfx_magic_nature; next; mes "[Tinris]"; - mes "\"Ok. This should do it. But I'm not sure. I'm still working on the researches about this topic."; + mes "\"Ok. This should do it. But I'm not sure. I'm still researching this topic."; mes "Here, bring this to Anwar.\""; - mes "He gives you some bottle with the magic fertilizer. You put it away in a seperate pocket, so it doesn't get mixed with your inventory."; + mes "He gives you a bottle with the magic fertilizer. You put it away in a separate pocket, so it doesn't get mixed with your inventory."; goto L_Close; L_FirstTryDone: // @state >= 4 but below 6 @@ -112,7 +112,7 @@ L_FirstTryDone: // @state >= 4 but below 6 callsub S_Update_Mask; L_SecondTry: // @state == 6 mes "[Tinris]"; - mes "\"Oh no! Alright, we need to do another try."; + mes "\"Oh no! All right, we need to do another try."; mes "Bring me " + @slime_amount2 + " Maggot Slimes, " + @bugleg_amount2 + " Bug Legs, " + @stinger_amount2 + " Scorpion Stingers, " + @ash_amount2 + " Piles of Ash and " + @cactusp_amount + " Cactus Potion.\""; menu "Here it is.",-, @@ -129,31 +129,31 @@ L_SecondTry: // @state == 6 mes "Tinris takes the things and starts to mix and mumble again."; misceffect sfx_magic_nature; next; - mes "I takes quite a while."; + mes "It takes quite a while."; next; mes "He looks rather stressed while working on the mixture."; next; mes "He sighs."; mes "[Tinris]"; - mes "\"Mh, I think the mixture itself is good. But I can't get the spells right. Maybe you should ask Professor Eomie to cast it, she's a genius regarding nature magic.\""; + mes "\"Mh, I think the mixture itself is good. But I can't get the spells right. Maybe you should ask Professor Eomie to cast it; she's a genius with nature magic.\""; mes "He gives you the bottle with the magic fertilizer."; goto L_Close; L_Eomie: // @state >= 7 but below 9 mes "[Tinris]"; - mes "\"I did the best I could. But it seems I'm not experienced enough to cast the spells correctly. Better ask Professor Eomie for help.\""; + mes "\"I did the best I could, but it seems I'm not experienced enough to cast the spells correctly. Better ask Professor Eomie for help.\""; goto L_Close; L_FertilizerDone: // @state == 9 mes "[Tinris]"; - mes "\"I heard Eomie casted the spell? I really hope it'll work this time. Bring the magic fertilizer to Anwar now.\""; + mes "\"I heard Eomie cast the spell? I really hope it'll work this time. Bring the magic fertilizer to Anwar now.\""; goto L_Close; L_GiveGift: // @state == 11 mes "[Tinris]"; mes "\"Ah, did Anwar try the new fertilizer?\""; menu - "Yes, it works great and he sent me to give you this selfmade Green V-Neck Sweater.",-, + "Yes, it works great and he asked me to give you this Green V-Neck Sweater he made.",-, "Not yet.",L_Close; if (countitem("GreenVNeckSweater") < 1) goto L_NoItem; @@ -167,8 +167,8 @@ L_GiveGift: // @state == 11 L_Done: // @state >= 12 mes "[Tinris]"; - mes "\"My girlfriend was very happy about the Chocolate Cake and Professor Eomie was happy about my work on the magic fertilizer.\""; - mes "He twinkels."; + mes "\"My girlfriend was delighted with the Chocolate Cake and Professor Eomie was happy with my work on the magic fertilizer.\""; + mes "He twinkles."; mes "[Tinris]"; mes "\"We're a good team.\""; goto L_Close; |