1 files changed, 7 insertions, 5 deletions
diff --git a/npc/025-4/clauquer.txt b/npc/025-4/clauquer.txt
index 8796c1d7..1acba11d 100644
--- a/npc/025-4/clauquer.txt
+++ b/npc/025-4/clauquer.txt
@@ -20,13 +20,15 @@ L_Help:
     "Of course not.", -;
   next;
   mes "[Clauquer]";
-  mes "\"I can see that you really want to save the little girl. First of all, you should know that these little caves contain horrible blood thirsty earth monsters. They come from nowhere and you can't escape while they are still alive. And if you take too much time, you will die due to the foul air in the caves and the monsters will move your body outside, to the entrance of the cave. So you better be quick.\"";
+  mes "\"I can see that you really want to save the little girl. She is trapped in a place inside one of these caves, protected by a magic barrier created by a fey spirit. To save her, you have to annulate the energy sources of this barrier. They are located in 10 different spots, each one in a different cave.\"";
   next;
-  mes "\"The girl is trapped in a place inside one of these caves, protected by a door with 9 different locks. You have to find the key for each one of these locks in the different caves around here. They are inside some chests. The problem is, once you try to open the chest, the monsters I told you about will surround you.\"";
+  mes "\"To do this, you have to place a root on the exact center of the energy source. Once you do this, its entire power will transmute into some terrible earth monsters. If you defeat them, this source of energy will be close to nothing and the barrier will be weaker.\"";
   next;
-  mes "\"In these caves, either you die, or they die. This is the only rule. When you kill all the monsters in a cave, make sure you get out immediatelly, because of the air. Don't worry, They only appear when you open the chests.\"";
+  mes "\"If my observations are correct, the girl is trapped in a cave protected by a barrier fed by 9 different power sources. And inside this cave, there is another barrier, fed by a single, but very strong, power source. The girl is inside that cave, protected by that strong barrier.\"";
   next;
-  mes "\"When you enter the cave in which the girl is locked, you'll be in front of numerous monsters. But watch out, the last one is more dangerous than the other ones. When you see it you will be frightened to death. Don't worry, I can give you some advices.\"";
+  mes "\"Be prepared before you enter one of those caves, because once you put the root in the power source, you won't be able to get out. Also, remember that you can't stay in those caves for a long time, because of the foul air.\"";
+  next;
+  mes "\"Now I should tell you more about how that little girl got into that cave and warn you about what you are going to face there...\"";
   next;
   menu
     "Please go on.", -;
@@ -36,7 +38,7 @@ L_Advice:
   next;
   mes "\"The old tales of hurnscald say this spirit always change his offspring with beautiful and smart human childs, to use them as servants. And his offspring usually forgets about its own origin, growing up in a human family. But they are usually 'people' with really bad temper, the kind of people who does terrible things in this world...\"";
   next;
-  mes "However, the girl you are looking for is mentally too strong, and the spirit is having problems to create a changeling identical to her. So it locked her in one of those terrible caves, trying to scare the poor girl and make his task easier. As you can see, scary story.\"";
+  mes "However, the girl you are looking for is mentally too strong, and the spirit is having problems to create a changeling identical to her. So it locked her in one of those terrible caves, trying to scare the poor girl and make his task easier.\"";
   next;
   mes "\"Oh, and if you really plan to rescue the girl in the cave, I advise you to use potions for every single battle, I'm thinking of Concentration and Iron Potions. You might want to take some food with you, you might be hungry in battle. I would personally take some water, I'm always thirsty. Don't be afraid to take too much of each, the battles take time to end.\"";
   next;