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Diffstat (limited to 'npc/021-2_Tulimshar/bakery.txt')
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1 files changed, 12 insertions, 12 deletions
diff --git a/npc/021-2_Tulimshar/bakery.txt b/npc/021-2_Tulimshar/bakery.txt index 2fb5d110..18219a82 100644 --- a/npc/021-2_Tulimshar/bakery.txt +++ b/npc/021-2_Tulimshar/bakery.txt @@ -18,19 +18,19 @@ L_lace_chococake: menu "Thanks! Let me have a look around...", L_end, - "Can you put this potion into a chocolate cake?", -, + "Can you put this potion into a [Chocolate Cake]?", -, "Goodbye!", L_end; mes "[Riskim]"; - mes "As you show him the potion, Riskim leans back, away from it."; + mes "As you show Riskim the potion, he leans back, away from it."; mes "\"Ooooh, I remember that smell...\""; mes "\"Elanore's Mopox potion, right? She made me drink that, too...\""; mes "He chuckles."; - mes "\"Yes, well, you do want to hide that.\""; + mes "\"Yes, well, you do want to hide that somehow.\""; next; mes "[Riskim]"; - mes "\"We'll need extra chocolate for that one. If you can give me ten pieces of chocolate and that potion, plus 400 GP, I will bake you a special chocolate cake that hides the taste.\""; + mes "\"We'll need extra chocolate for that one. If you can give me ten pieces of chocolate and that potion, plus 400 GP, I will bake you a special [Chocolate Cake] that hides the taste.\""; next; menu @@ -50,9 +50,9 @@ L_lace_chococake: set zeny, zeny - 400; mes "[Riskim]"; - mes "\"Please have a seat.\""; - mes "You watch at Riskim melts the chocolate and stirs in the potion, then glazes a cake with it."; - mes "\"It's a bit more chocolaty than your average chocolate cake, of course...\""; + mes "\"Please have a seat!\""; + mes "You watch at Riskim melts the chocolate and stirs in the potion, then glazes a cake with the mixture."; + mes "\"It's a bit more chocolatey than your average chocolate cake, of course...\""; next; mes "[Riskim]"; @@ -67,7 +67,7 @@ L_lacking_zeny: L_lacking_ingredients: mes "[Riskim]"; - mes "\"Sorry, but I need ten chocolate bars AND your cure potion for this. Please come back later when you have everything.\""; + mes "\"Sorry, but I need ten [Chocolate Bar]s AND your cure potion for this. Please come back later when you have everything.\""; close; L_lace_cupcake: @@ -75,11 +75,11 @@ L_lace_cupcake: menu "Thanks! Let me have a look around...", L_end, - "Can you put this potion into an orange cupcake?", -, + "Can you put this potion into an [Orange Cupcake]?", -, "Goodbye!", L_end; mes "[Riskim]"; - mes "\"Orange cupcakes? Oh dear... I'm sorry, but I have a very bad orange allergy.\""; + mes "\"[Orange Cupcake]s? Oh dear... I'm sorry, but I have a very bad orange allergy.\""; next; mes "[Riskim]"; mes "\"Perhaps the Chef at Dimond's Cove can help you? We get all our cupcakes from him.\""; @@ -110,12 +110,12 @@ L_end: // An old couple eating at the bakery 021-2.gat,71,22,0 script Rynoh 159,{ mes "[Rynoh]"; - mes "\"It may be expensive, but it sure is good.\""; + mes "\"The cakes may be expensive, but they sure are delicious!\""; close; } 021-2.gat,73,22,0 script Ontas 154,{ mes "[Ontas]"; - mes "\"We come here every week. They have some of the best bread I've ever eaten.\""; + mes "\"We come here every week. This place has some of the best bread I've ever eaten!\""; close; } |