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diff --git a/npc/021-2_Tulimshar/bakery.txt b/npc/021-2_Tulimshar/bakery.txt
index 2fb5d110..18219a82 100644
--- a/npc/021-2_Tulimshar/bakery.txt
+++ b/npc/021-2_Tulimshar/bakery.txt
@@ -18,19 +18,19 @@ L_lace_chococake:
menu
"Thanks! Let me have a look around...", L_end,
- "Can you put this potion into a chocolate cake?", -,
+ "Can you put this potion into a [Chocolate Cake]?", -,
"Goodbye!", L_end;
mes "[Riskim]";
- mes "As you show him the potion, Riskim leans back, away from it.";
+ mes "As you show Riskim the potion, he leans back, away from it.";
mes "\"Ooooh, I remember that smell...\"";
mes "\"Elanore's Mopox potion, right? She made me drink that, too...\"";
mes "He chuckles.";
- mes "\"Yes, well, you do want to hide that.\"";
+ mes "\"Yes, well, you do want to hide that somehow.\"";
next;
mes "[Riskim]";
- mes "\"We'll need extra chocolate for that one. If you can give me ten pieces of chocolate and that potion, plus 400 GP, I will bake you a special chocolate cake that hides the taste.\"";
+ mes "\"We'll need extra chocolate for that one. If you can give me ten pieces of chocolate and that potion, plus 400 GP, I will bake you a special [Chocolate Cake] that hides the taste.\"";
next;
menu
@@ -50,9 +50,9 @@ L_lace_chococake:
set zeny, zeny - 400;
mes "[Riskim]";
- mes "\"Please have a seat.\"";
- mes "You watch at Riskim melts the chocolate and stirs in the potion, then glazes a cake with it.";
- mes "\"It's a bit more chocolaty than your average chocolate cake, of course...\"";
+ mes "\"Please have a seat!\"";
+ mes "You watch at Riskim melts the chocolate and stirs in the potion, then glazes a cake with the mixture.";
+ mes "\"It's a bit more chocolatey than your average chocolate cake, of course...\"";
next;
mes "[Riskim]";
@@ -67,7 +67,7 @@ L_lacking_zeny:
L_lacking_ingredients:
mes "[Riskim]";
- mes "\"Sorry, but I need ten chocolate bars AND your cure potion for this. Please come back later when you have everything.\"";
+ mes "\"Sorry, but I need ten [Chocolate Bar]s AND your cure potion for this. Please come back later when you have everything.\"";
close;
L_lace_cupcake:
@@ -75,11 +75,11 @@ L_lace_cupcake:
menu
"Thanks! Let me have a look around...", L_end,
- "Can you put this potion into an orange cupcake?", -,
+ "Can you put this potion into an [Orange Cupcake]?", -,
"Goodbye!", L_end;
mes "[Riskim]";
- mes "\"Orange cupcakes? Oh dear... I'm sorry, but I have a very bad orange allergy.\"";
+ mes "\"[Orange Cupcake]s? Oh dear... I'm sorry, but I have a very bad orange allergy.\"";
next;
mes "[Riskim]";
mes "\"Perhaps the Chef at Dimond's Cove can help you? We get all our cupcakes from him.\"";
@@ -110,12 +110,12 @@ L_end:
// An old couple eating at the bakery
021-2.gat,71,22,0 script Rynoh 159,{
mes "[Rynoh]";
- mes "\"It may be expensive, but it sure is good.\"";
+ mes "\"The cakes may be expensive, but they sure are delicious!\"";
close;
}
021-2.gat,73,22,0 script Ontas 154,{
mes "[Ontas]";
- mes "\"We come here every week. They have some of the best bread I've ever eaten.\"";
+ mes "\"We come here every week. This place has some of the best bread I've ever eaten!\"";
close;
}