Rossy dialog — fix fix fixes

1 files changed, 8 insertions, 8 deletions

diff --git a/world/map/npc/025-1/rossy.txt b/world/map/npc/025-1/rossy.txt
index 52aa51bb..ff02d72c 100644
--- a/world/map/npc/025-1/rossy.txt
+++ b/world/map/npc/025-1/rossy.txt
@@ -55,7 +55,7 @@ L_Next:
 
 L_SheWorried:
     mes "[Rossy]";
-    mes "\"Really? But she let us play in the woods. There's no reason to be worried – unless ...\"";
+    mes "\"Really? But she let us play in the woods. There's no reason to be worried – unless....\"";
     next;
     mes "Rossy suddenly gets a strange look on her face, mumbling something about Julia.";
     next;
@@ -63,7 +63,7 @@ L_SheWorried:
     mes "\"Could you do me a favor? Please, tell my mother that we're alright. There's ... well ... there's no reason to worry about us.\"";
     next;
     menu
-        "Alright, if you say so.", L_SaySo,
+        "Very well, if you say so....", L_SaySo,
         "Sorry, but I don't time for this.", L_No;
 
 L_SaySo:
@@ -100,14 +100,14 @@ L_HaveSomeCherries:
     mes "[Rossy]";
     set Rossy_Quest, 4;
     getexp @Cherry_EXP, 0;
-    mes "\"I can't believe it, you got them all! Please give them to my mother. Tell her it is a gift from me and Julia and there's no reason to worry about us.\"";
+    mes "\"I can't believe it! You got all the cherries needed! Please give them to my mother. Tell her that it is a gift from me and Julia and that there's no reason to worry about us.\"";
     next;
     mes "Rossy mumbles to herself.";
     mes "[Rossy]";
-    mes "\"I hope ...\"";
+    mes "\"I hope....\"";
     next;
     mes "[Rossy]";
-    mes "\"Oh, after you give the cherries to my mother, please come back here. If you have some free time, of course.\"";
+    mes "\"Oh, and after you give the cherries to my mother, please come back here. Err, if you have some free time, of course.\"";
     close;
 
 L_Cherry_Done:
@@ -190,7 +190,7 @@ L_Donet:
 
 L_DavidPotion:
     mes "[Rossy]";
-    mes "\"Yay! Phew! That was close; I almost forgot about my exam. Please, tell my mother about it. I'm sure she'll be proud of me.\"";
+    mes "\"YPhew! That was close: I almost forgot about my exam. Please, tell my mother about my success for me. I'm sure she'll be pleased.\"";
     close;
 
 L_RG:
@@ -256,7 +256,7 @@ L_Julia:
 
 L_End:
     mes "[Rossy]";
-    mes "\"Oh no! Julia ... why would you go to that scary place? Have you seen her yet?\"";
+    mes "\"Oh no! Julia ... why would you go to that scary place? ... Have you seen her yet?\"";
     menu
         "She'll be back soon, trust me. I saved her.", L_Found,
         "I didn't see her yet, sorry.", L_No;
@@ -267,7 +267,7 @@ L_Found:
         set Rossy_Quest, 18;
     if (Rossy_Quest == 18)
         set Rossy_Quest, 19;
-    mes "\"Oh "+ strcharinfo(0) +", thank you very much! Take this, you deserve it!\"";
+    mes "\"Oh, "+ strcharinfo(0) +", thank you very much! Take this, you deserve it!\"";
     next;
     mes "Rossy hands you a huge bag full of coins.";
     getexp @Finish_EXP, 0;