Fixed Grammar/Dialogue issues in the Blue Sage Quest

1 files changed, 9 insertions, 9 deletions

diff --git a/world/map/npc/048-2/helperCleaning2.txt b/world/map/npc/048-2/helperCleaning2.txt
index 6018f4e6..6b768759 100644
--- a/world/map/npc/048-2/helperCleaning2.txt
+++ b/world/map/npc/048-2/helperCleaning2.txt
@@ -13,17 +13,17 @@
     if (@slimes > 0) goto L_Progress;
 
     mes "[Nea]";
-    mes "\"Oh, hello. If I were you I wouldn't go deeper into the library. There are still some of those monsters left. Slipping around between the bookshelves.\"";
+    mes "\"Oh, hello. If I were you I wouldn't go deeper into the library. There are still some of those monsters left. Slipping between the bookshelves.\"";
     mes "She shudders.";
     next;
     mes "[Nea]";
-    mes "\"And they can explode! Nothing in the world could make go there. I'll do my work just right here, clean the floor and tidy up the books, while I keep my eyes open if they get over here.\"";
+    mes "\"And they can explode! Nothing in the world could make go there. I'll just do my work right here, clean the floor and tidy up the books, and I keep my eyes open in case they get over here.\"";
     goto L_Investigate;
 
 L_Progress:
     mes "[Nea]";
-    mes "\"Oh, I'm so glad you're taking care about this scary slimes. You're so brave!";
-    mes "How much of the are still left, what do you think? Will it be secure to go there soon?\"";
+    mes "\"Oh, I'm so glad you're taking care about those scary slimes. You're so brave!";
+    mes "How many of them are still left, do you think? Will it be safe to go there soon?\"";
     goto L_Investigate;
 
 L_Thank:
@@ -44,25 +44,25 @@ L_Ask_Visitor:
 
 L_Ask_Helper:
     menu
-        "What's your impression about Peetu and how he does his work?",L_Helper,
+        "What's your opinion about Peetu and how he does his work?",L_Helper,
         "See you later.",L_Close;
 
 L_Ask_Both:
     menu
         "Can you tell me something about the visitor with the mask?",L_Visitor,
-        "What's your impression about Peetu and how does he do his work?",L_Helper,
+        "What's your opinion about Peetu and how does he do his work?",L_Helper,
         "Bye.",L_Close;
 
 L_Visitor:
     mes "[Nea]";
-    mes "\"With a mask? Mh, I think I know who are you talking about, I remember vaguely that there was someone with a mask... but I can't recall any details, I didn't really pay attention.\"";
+    mes "\"With a mask? Mh, I think I know who are you talking about, I vaguely remember that there was someone with a mask... but I can't recall any details, I wasn't really paying attention.\"";
     goto L_Close;
 
 L_Helper:
     mes "[Nea]";
-    mes "\"Peetu? Yeah, he's that kind of person who always wants to do things perfectly. That makes him a bit wearisome to work with him, since he has as high expectations to everyone else as he has to himself.\"";
+    mes "\"Peetu? Yeah, he's the kind of person who always wants to do things perfectly. That makes it a bit difficult to work with him, since his expectations for others are as high as for himself.\"";
     next;
-    mes "\"I really wonder how that accident with the sealing spell could've happened. I'd have never expected him to mess up something like that.\"";
+    mes "\"I really wonder how that accident with the sealing spell could've happened. I'd had never expected him to mess something up like that.\"";
     if ((@investigate != 5) && (@investigate != 6) && (@investigate != 7))
         goto L_Close;
     set @investigate, @investigate + 3;