Minor grammar edits to birrod, kimarr, and yerrnk

1 files changed, 13 insertions, 13 deletions

diff --git a/world/map/npc/033-1/birrod.txt b/world/map/npc/033-1/birrod.txt
index c0e159e3..28dd6c56 100644
--- a/world/map/npc/033-1/birrod.txt
+++ b/world/map/npc/033-1/birrod.txt
@@ -31,7 +31,7 @@ L_Kimarr:
     mes "[Birrod]";
     mes "\"Great! Very well done! Welcome to our tribe.\"";
     next;
-    mes "\"But I think, Kimarr has something for you.\"";
+    mes "\"I think Kimarr has something for you.\"";
     goto L_Close;
 
 L_Hunting:
@@ -41,7 +41,7 @@ L_Hunting:
     mes "\"Hello, " + strcharinfo(0) + "! Would you like to prove your hunting skills again?\"";
     next;
     mes "\"I noticed some groups of Wolverns in the forest west of here which are unusually aggressive.";
-    mes "This makes it dangerous for all the small people from the town nearby to go there.\"";
+    mes "This makes it dangerous for all the small people from the nearby town to go there.\"";
     next;
     mes "\"To prove your skills, go to the forest and hunt down " + $@Q_Barbarians_wolvern_amount + " of the very aggressive Wolverns.\"";
     next;
@@ -72,14 +72,14 @@ L_Wolverns_Done:
     getexp @wolvern_exp, 0;
     if (getskilllv(SKILL_POOL) == 0)
         goto L_Not_Ready;
-    mes "\"Your skills are impressing. You are worthy to be called a warrior of the Mangarr, if you accept.\"";
+    mes "\"Your skills are impressive. You are worthy to be called a warrior of the Mangarr, if you accept.\"";
     next;
     goto L_Questions;
 
 L_Questions:
     if (getskilllv(SKILL_POOL) == 0)
         goto L_Not_Ready;
-    mes "Birrod has a very ceremonial look on his face.";
+    mes "Birrod has a very solemn look on his face.";
     mes "[Birrod]";
     mes "\"" + strcharinfo(0) + ", are you ready to become a full-fledged member of our tribe, the Mangarr?\"";
     menu
@@ -89,13 +89,13 @@ L_Questions:
     mes "Birrod nods earnestly.";
     mes "[Birrod]";
     mes "\"I will ask you some questions.";
-    mes "Think well and be honest, because it will depend on your answers if you will be considered worthily.\"";
+    mes "Think well and be honest, because your answers will determine whether you are worthy.\"";
     next;
     mes "\"What's the most important thing for a true warrior?\"";
     menu
         "Strength!",L_Fail11,
         "A good weapon.",L_Fail12,
-        "Braveness.",L_Success11;
+        "Bravery.",L_Success11;
 L_Fail11:
     mes "[Birrod]";
     mes "\"Strength is indeed important for a warrior. But before you can show strength, you need to have something else.\"";
@@ -122,7 +122,7 @@ L_Fail21:
     goto L_No_Member;
 L_Fail22:
     mes "[Birrod]";
-    mes "\"Honorably but stupid.\"";
+    mes "\"Honorable, but stupid.\"";
     next;
     goto L_No_Member;
 L_Success21:
@@ -152,8 +152,8 @@ L_Fail31:
 L_Success3:
     mes "\"What is your goal in life?\"";
     menu
-        "Learning new things and see the world.",L_Success41,
-        "Becoming as powerful as I can.",L_Fail41,
+        "Learn new things and see the world.",L_Success41,
+        "Become as powerful as I can.",L_Fail41,
         "Protect the ones I love.",L_Success42;
 L_Success41:
     mes "[Birrod]";
@@ -194,17 +194,17 @@ L_Success5:
     setskill SKILL_WARRIOR_RAGING, 1;
     set @state, 6;
     callsub S_Update_Mask;
-    mes "You feel an exciting vim inside of you.";
+    mes "You feel an exciting energy inside you.";
     mes "[Birrod]";
     mes "\"You are now a warrior of the Mangarr.\"";
     next;
-    mes "\"Therefore you gain the ability to put back your own safety for Raging in battle with a tremendous power.";
-    mes "This power now lies within you, waiting for someone to help you focusing on it.\"";
+    mes "\"As a Mangarr warrior, you gain the ability to put back your own safety for Raging in battle with a tremendous power.";
+    mes "This power now lies within you, waiting for someone to help you focus on it.\"";
     goto L_Close;
 
 L_Impressed:
     mes "[Birrod]";
-    mes "\"I'm very proud of you being a member of the tribe.\"";
+    mes "\"I'm very proud that you're a member of the tribe.\"";
     goto L_Close;
 
 L_Not_Ready: