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authorFrost <networktoy@cox.net>2012-01-23 12:27:30 -0800
committerJessica Tölke <jtoelke@mail.upb.de>2012-01-24 13:35:02 +0100
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Minor grammar edits to birrod, kimarr, and yerrnk
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1 files changed, 13 insertions, 13 deletions
diff --git a/world/map/npc/033-1/birrod.txt b/world/map/npc/033-1/birrod.txt
index c0e159e3..28dd6c56 100644
--- a/world/map/npc/033-1/birrod.txt
+++ b/world/map/npc/033-1/birrod.txt
@@ -31,7 +31,7 @@ L_Kimarr:
mes "[Birrod]";
mes "\"Great! Very well done! Welcome to our tribe.\"";
next;
- mes "\"But I think, Kimarr has something for you.\"";
+ mes "\"I think Kimarr has something for you.\"";
goto L_Close;
L_Hunting:
@@ -41,7 +41,7 @@ L_Hunting:
mes "\"Hello, " + strcharinfo(0) + "! Would you like to prove your hunting skills again?\"";
next;
mes "\"I noticed some groups of Wolverns in the forest west of here which are unusually aggressive.";
- mes "This makes it dangerous for all the small people from the town nearby to go there.\"";
+ mes "This makes it dangerous for all the small people from the nearby town to go there.\"";
next;
mes "\"To prove your skills, go to the forest and hunt down " + $@Q_Barbarians_wolvern_amount + " of the very aggressive Wolverns.\"";
next;
@@ -72,14 +72,14 @@ L_Wolverns_Done:
getexp @wolvern_exp, 0;
if (getskilllv(SKILL_POOL) == 0)
goto L_Not_Ready;
- mes "\"Your skills are impressing. You are worthy to be called a warrior of the Mangarr, if you accept.\"";
+ mes "\"Your skills are impressive. You are worthy to be called a warrior of the Mangarr, if you accept.\"";
next;
goto L_Questions;
L_Questions:
if (getskilllv(SKILL_POOL) == 0)
goto L_Not_Ready;
- mes "Birrod has a very ceremonial look on his face.";
+ mes "Birrod has a very solemn look on his face.";
mes "[Birrod]";
mes "\"" + strcharinfo(0) + ", are you ready to become a full-fledged member of our tribe, the Mangarr?\"";
menu
@@ -89,13 +89,13 @@ L_Questions:
mes "Birrod nods earnestly.";
mes "[Birrod]";
mes "\"I will ask you some questions.";
- mes "Think well and be honest, because it will depend on your answers if you will be considered worthily.\"";
+ mes "Think well and be honest, because your answers will determine whether you are worthy.\"";
next;
mes "\"What's the most important thing for a true warrior?\"";
menu
"Strength!",L_Fail11,
"A good weapon.",L_Fail12,
- "Braveness.",L_Success11;
+ "Bravery.",L_Success11;
L_Fail11:
mes "[Birrod]";
mes "\"Strength is indeed important for a warrior. But before you can show strength, you need to have something else.\"";
@@ -122,7 +122,7 @@ L_Fail21:
goto L_No_Member;
L_Fail22:
mes "[Birrod]";
- mes "\"Honorably but stupid.\"";
+ mes "\"Honorable, but stupid.\"";
next;
goto L_No_Member;
L_Success21:
@@ -152,8 +152,8 @@ L_Fail31:
L_Success3:
mes "\"What is your goal in life?\"";
menu
- "Learning new things and see the world.",L_Success41,
- "Becoming as powerful as I can.",L_Fail41,
+ "Learn new things and see the world.",L_Success41,
+ "Become as powerful as I can.",L_Fail41,
"Protect the ones I love.",L_Success42;
L_Success41:
mes "[Birrod]";
@@ -194,17 +194,17 @@ L_Success5:
setskill SKILL_WARRIOR_RAGING, 1;
set @state, 6;
callsub S_Update_Mask;
- mes "You feel an exciting vim inside of you.";
+ mes "You feel an exciting energy inside you.";
mes "[Birrod]";
mes "\"You are now a warrior of the Mangarr.\"";
next;
- mes "\"Therefore you gain the ability to put back your own safety for Raging in battle with a tremendous power.";
- mes "This power now lies within you, waiting for someone to help you focusing on it.\"";
+ mes "\"As a Mangarr warrior, you gain the ability to put back your own safety for Raging in battle with a tremendous power.";
+ mes "This power now lies within you, waiting for someone to help you focus on it.\"";
goto L_Close;
L_Impressed:
mes "[Birrod]";
- mes "\"I'm very proud of you being a member of the tribe.\"";
+ mes "\"I'm very proud that you're a member of the tribe.\"";
goto L_Close;
L_Not_Ready: