Dialogue changes to NPCs

Improved the dialogue of the bookshelf containing "zukminbirf."
Added "croupier" name tag to the Roulette NPC's dialog
Improved grammar and wording
Replaced ". " with ". "
Replaced " -- " with an en dash (" – ").

4 files changed, 18 insertions, 18 deletions

diff --git a/world/map/npc/002-4/mine_triggerone.txt b/world/map/npc/002-4/mine_triggerone.txt
index 86d9a501..4dcf7996 100644
--- a/world/map/npc/002-4/mine_triggerone.txt
+++ b/world/map/npc/002-4/mine_triggerone.txt
@@ -12,11 +12,11 @@
     if (@state == 23) goto L_Trigger_Wrong_1;
     if (@state == 22) goto L_Trigger_1;
 
-    mes "There is a large button on the ground.  A key hole appears on the button.";
+    mes "There is a large button on the ground. A key hole appears on the button.";
     goto L_Close;
 
 L_Trigger_Wrong_1:
-    mes "There is a large button on the ground.  A key hole appears on the button.";
+    mes "There is a large button on the ground. A key hole appears on the button.";
     menu
         "Put the key in, turn right.", L_Right_Wrong_1,
         "Put the key in, turn left.", L_Left_Wrong_1,
@@ -35,7 +35,7 @@ L_Left_Wrong_1:
     goto L_Close;
 
 L_Trigger_1:
-    mes "There is a large button on the ground.  A key hole appears on the button.";
+    mes "There is a large button on the ground. A key hole appears on the button.";
     menu
         "Put the key in, turn right.", L_Right_1,
         "Put the key in, turn left.", L_Left_1,
@@ -44,7 +44,7 @@ L_Trigger_1:
 L_Right_1:
     set @state, 23;
     callsub S_Update_Var;
-    mes "You turn the key right.  A clicking sound echoes throughout the mine.";
+    mes "You turn the key right. A clicking sound echoes throughout the mine.";
     goto L_Close;
 
 L_Left_1:
diff --git a/world/map/npc/002-4/mine_triggerthree.txt b/world/map/npc/002-4/mine_triggerthree.txt
index 76ea8e9e..dfbb717b 100644
--- a/world/map/npc/002-4/mine_triggerthree.txt
+++ b/world/map/npc/002-4/mine_triggerthree.txt
@@ -12,11 +12,11 @@
     if (@state == 23) goto L_Trigger_3;
     if (@state == 22) goto L_Trigger_Wrong_3;
 
-    mes "There is a large button on the ground.  A key hole appears on the button.";
+    mes "There is a large button on the ground. A key hole appears on the button.";
     goto L_Close;
 
 L_Trigger_Wrong_3:
-    mes "There is a large button on the ground.  A key hole appears on the button.";
+    mes "There is a large button on the ground. A key hole appears on the button.";
     menu
         "Put the key in, turn right.", L_Right_Wrong_3,
         "Put the key in, turn left.", L_Left_Wrong_3,
@@ -35,7 +35,7 @@ L_Left_Wrong_3:
     goto L_Close;
 
 L_Trigger_3:
-    mes "There is a large button on the ground.  A key hole appears on the button.";
+    mes "There is a large button on the ground. A key hole appears on the button.";
     menu
         "Put the key in, turn right.", L_Right_3,
         "Put the key in, turn left.", L_Left_3,
diff --git a/world/map/npc/002-4/mine_triggertwo.txt b/world/map/npc/002-4/mine_triggertwo.txt
index f51a85e3..67bd1194 100644
--- a/world/map/npc/002-4/mine_triggertwo.txt
+++ b/world/map/npc/002-4/mine_triggertwo.txt
@@ -14,11 +14,11 @@
     if (@state == 23) goto L_Trigger_Wrong_2;
     if (@state == 22) goto L_Trigger_Wrong_2;
 
-    mes "There is a large button on the ground.  A key hole appears on the button.";
+    mes "There is a large button on the ground. A key hole appears on the button.";
     goto L_Close;
 
 L_Trigger_Wrong_2:
-    mes "There is a large button on the ground.  A key hole appears on the button.";
+    mes "There is a large button on the ground. A key hole appears on the button.";
     menu
         "Put the key in, turn right.", L_Right_Wrong_2,
         "Put the key in, turn left.", L_Left_Wrong_2,
@@ -37,7 +37,7 @@ L_Left_Wrong_2:
     goto L_Close;
 
 L_Trigger_2:
-    mes "There is a large button on the ground.  A key hole appears on the button.";
+    mes "There is a large button on the ground. A key hole appears on the button.";
     menu
         "Put the key in, turn right.", L_Right_2,
         "Put the key in, turn left.", L_Left_2,
diff --git a/world/map/npc/002-4/naem.txt b/world/map/npc/002-4/naem.txt
index 1d3b1d2c..d8afcfcc 100644
--- a/world/map/npc/002-4/naem.txt
+++ b/world/map/npc/002-4/naem.txt
@@ -26,26 +26,26 @@
     if (@state == 9) goto L_Naem_Okay;
 
     mes "[Naem]";
-    mes "\"I'm just mining away here.  Lots of work to do.\"";
+    mes "\"I'm just mining away here. Lots of work to do.\"";
     goto L_Close;
 
 L_Naem_Okay:
     set @state, 10;
     callsub S_Update_Var;
     mes "[Naem]";
-    mes "\"Oh, hello there.  Nickos wanted you to check on me? Yeah, you can tell him I'm okay.\"";
+    mes "\"Oh, hello there. Nickos wanted you to check on me? Yeah, you can tell him I'm okay.\"";
     goto L_Close;
 
 L_Naem_Cool:
     mes "[Naem]";
-    mes "\"Yeah, I'm cool.  Just mining away here.\"";
+    mes "\"Yeah, I'm cool. Just mining away here.\"";
     goto L_Close;
 
 L_Naem_Help_1:
     set @state, 13;
     callsub S_Update_Var;
     mes "[Naem]";
-    mes "\"Oh, you are here to help move my bags?  Cool, I've got a few ready to go.  Go ahead and take this one!\"";
+    mes "\"Oh, you are here to help move my bags?  Cool, I've got a few ready to go. Go ahead and take this one!\"";
     next;
     mes "Naem hands you a bag of ore.";
     next;
@@ -83,7 +83,7 @@ L_Naem_Help_3:
 
 L_Naem_Waits_3:
     mes "[Naem]";
-    mes "\"You got my last sack already.  Just give it to Nathan and we'll have caught up.\"";
+    mes "\"You got my last sack already. Just give it to Nathan and we'll have caught up.\"";
     goto L_Close;
 
 L_Naem_Great:
@@ -95,7 +95,7 @@ L_Naem_Memory:
     mes "You see Naem grimacing in pain as you approach.";
     next;
     mes "[Naem]";
-    mes "\"Oh, my head!  Some rocks fell on me and bonked me pretty good.  I'm still a little sore.\"";
+    mes "\"Oh, my head!  Some rocks fell on me and bonked me pretty good. I'm still a little sore.\"";
     menu
         "Don't you have a key so I can go to the underground palace?", L_Naem_Palace_No,
         "You should be more careful.", L_Naem_Duh;
@@ -114,12 +114,12 @@ L_Naem_Palace_No:
 
 L_Naem_Lt:
     mes "[Naem]";
-    mes "\"I hurt my head pretty bad.  I also lost my key.  If you want to get into the underground palace, you'll have to talk to Lieutenant Dausen about getting the spare.\"";
+    mes "\"I hurt my head pretty bad. I also lost my key. If you want to get into the underground palace, you'll have to talk to Lieutenant Dausen about getting the spare.\"";
     goto L_Close;
 
 L_Naem_Code:
     mes "[Naem]";
-    mes "\"Oh, you got the key.  That is good!  But my head still hurts...  All I remember about the code is you have to put the key into the key hole buttons around the mine in a certain order and turn them in a certain order and it will unlock the underground palace.  Sorry, that's all I have for you.  Good luck!\"";
+    mes "\"Oh, you got the key. That is good!  But my head still hurts... All I remember about the code is you have to put the key into the key hole buttons around the mine in a certain order and turn them in a certain order and it will unlock the underground palace. Sorry, that's all I have for you. Good luck!\"";
     goto L_Close;
 
 L_Naem_Gloves: